The Beginings of SolarFlash

by SolarFlash

Rating: teen
Tags: Comedy, Romance, Tragedy, Pinkie Pie, Slice of Life, Spitfire, Twilight Sparkle, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Rainbow Dash
Length: 1337

SolarFlash is a timid pony mostly scared of other ponys. He left the big city to get away from prying eyes though things get worse when he takes interest in a rainbow maned pony.

SolarFlash is a timid pony mostly scared of other pony's. He left the big city to get away from prying eyes because of his history with his split personality.Though things get worse when a rainbow maned pony doesn't leave him alone.

And after putting his friend to near death.

Will he keep the other half from getting loose or will he hurt the pony's around him?

Don't bother reading in need of serious fixing.

Published 2014-07-18 16:00:02 UTC
Last updated 2014-07-18 16:00:02 UTC

HIS FEAR

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The other side

There something's in life pony's regret for SolarFlash this is everything.

Dear Sister where are you?
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SolarFlash's POV
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SolarFlash has appeared in a dark and most deepest part of his mind there's nothing around the only sound being a deep laughter coming from nowhere.

"Get away, Get out" He shouted "Get out of my head"

"Is that anyway to talk to yourself" says a calm deep voice "You should be welcoming me"

"For what ruining my life"

"I believe, I've made your life.....more fun"

"Killing other's is not fun "

"I'm not sure your actions show that"
an image started to appear in the air "T..That.....That wasn't me" a tear had rolled down Solar face as he looked at the image.
The words" In flames they burn" had started to echo before a deep laughter accompanied them.
"How do you feel" the voice said sarcastically.
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Everypony else's POV
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The friends were panicking trying to come up with a idea that could save them.

"Metal Knock him out quickly" DeathWish said rushing to hold down Solar

"Hurry up Metal" Infinite says holding back the crowd of pony's

"But" Heavy Metal being hesitant

"Just do it" they shouted

"I'm sorry Solar" but just before hitting him a rainbow manned Pegasus had knocked him out.

"You don't just hit him what sort of friends are you" she complained.
"friends that are trying to save your flank" Infinite shouted
At that moment DeathWish was flung against the wall knocking him out.
Infinite being the only one left that could help was then punched square in the face by a red hooved causing him to fall on the floor being trampled by everyone rushing past.

The rainbow Pegasus started to walk towards him.Stopping when she heard him say "You should be welcoming me"
confused. She got closer to him reaching her hoof out to see if he was all right. Just then he had combusted the fire covering his body.

From inside he was talking. She only managed to hear some words of what he had said "I believe" and " more fun"
after those words he had come out the fire a completely different colour. now being orange skinned, his mane more spiked and coloured like fire, His neck had a ring of fire around it, His wings completely covered with fire, His hooves on fire as well.

Twilight immediately moved the Pegasus away from him as he swung his hoof missing her by a centimetre.
"What was that for" the Pegasus shouted
he responded by trying to hit her again.
"I will hurt you if you if you keep doing that"
he responded again by trying to hit her.
"You asked for it" She hit him across his face he didn't flinch at all
"I'm not sure your actions show that"
He then swung again but stopping right before her face.
"T...That.....That wasn't me" a timid voice said, a tear rolling down his face.
He then fell on the floor passed out muttering "in flames they burn" over and over.

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3 Days later
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"He's waking up" is all he heard.
"Give him space Dash" a kind voice said.
"How do you feel" Another voice said sarcastically this was immediately followed by what sounded like a slapping noise.
"Infinite don't make jokes straight away" a heavy voice said "give him time at least"
"pinkie why'd you slap me" Infinite said slightly annoyed
SolarFlash had finally opened his eyes to see what was happening. Standing in the room were 8 pony's talking to each other.
Infinite talking to Pinkie, Heavy Metal talking to Twilight, three pony's in the corner talking, one being a unicorn with white skin and indigo mane and tail the other being a earth pony with orange skin and blonde mane and tail and the last being a Pegasus with yellow skin and a long pink mane and tail.
"Because Dashie told me to silly" bouncing as she said them.
looking to his right he saw the rainbow Pegasus looking at him not knowing who she was since his vision was a bit blurry.
"CalmBreeze" he whispered
Infinite and Heavy Metal reacted this and both said "Sorry, it's not her Solar" with remorse in their voice's
Right then his vision cleared to reveal who it was. He at that moment panicked and tried his hardest to hide.
Not being able to hide he eventually decided to hide behind his hooves to get away from it.
"Who's CalmBreeze" the pony's asked looking at Infinite and Heavy Metal.
Heavy Metal sighed "It's his sister"
"Solar acc" Infinite stop because of the hoof in his mouth.
"Infinite, Solar will tell them when he's ready" Heavy Metal said annoyed by his friend.
"but why Metal" Infinite asked
"Because it's up to Solar whether he tells them or not" Heavy Metal Implied
Solar getting out from his position asked "Where's DeathWish"

The room fall silent.
"He's in the next room" the Pegasus beside him whispered
"Why" he asked generally concerned
"He took a nasty hit" twilight said sadly
"I did it again didn't I" he said as started to understand the situation till
"Um..Sugarcube, there's no easy way to say this. But the doctor's reckon he might not wake up" the orange earth pony said lowering the Stetson on her head.
As the information sunk in Solar started to shift of the bed he was on, headed to the window next to the rainbow Pegasus opened it and disappeared before anyone could say anything.
"Well he's gone" Infinite said slightly depressed then he got slapped.
"What was that for" more annoyed then he was before. Pinkie replied with "because its fun" she started trying different ways to hit him
"um... where's rainbow" A shy voice said.

They all looked at the window
"she better not question him" said Heavy Metal

I still see there face's

there

face's

of

pain.....

prologue meet the group

Author's Note

First try at a story criticism appreciated

prologue meet the group

"So where is this place DeathWish" Infinite asking impatiently.
Infinite a eccentric Pegasus pony with spiked mess of a mane and tail that are completely black in the middle with purple lining on the outside, his skin colour is orange, his eye colour being bright red, he wears a bright white bandana. His cutie mark being a sword encased in black and red flames.

"Just up the road, shouldn't be to far now" says DeathWish confidently.
DeathWish is a small Pegasus pony with dark blue skin, a mane and tail black with a purple stripe going down the middle at the tip of each hair having orange, his eye colour is cyan. He has chains across his chest to hold a special family sword his cutie mark being a skull with wings.

" why you so impatient" Heavy Metal asks curiously.
Heavy Metal is a alicorn with ocean blue skin, purple mane and tail with the black showing in the middle and creeping out, his eye colour being a golden colour.He is constantly carrying a electric guitar shaped as flames surrounded by his black magical aura. His cutie mark is a electric guitar behind it is a book that reads "The book of heavy metal"

"Come on Metal you got to be a little bit excited, just imagine all the pony's to throw parties for." Infinite slowly getting happier with each word.
"Yeah I'm happy but I don't think Solar is" Heavy Metal says turning to look at SolarFlash hiding behind him.
Before Heavy Metal could say anything DeathWish interrupted "Right there is are destination Ponyville"
"Finally" moaned Infinite as those words where said he was gone in a instance.
"well he's gone" SolarFlash said hoping he was as well,
DeathWish sighed "Well we might as well get something to eat there's a bakery that sells amazing cupcakes"
Heavy Metal laughed "Knowing him he's all ready there"
SolarFlash muttered " I hope there's no welcoming committee to greet us"