nick and jhai in equestria

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"WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE" I shouted as i was falling from the sky.

'Well hello everypony this is a story of how I and my friend came to Equestria and our ventures in it another one of my friends come along later but well get to that when it comes around. Now a few a few things you should know is that my friend Jhai can somewhat use the magic of willpower and he has been researching worm holes and how they are created.’

‘Another thing is that I can’t really die I can get extremely hurt, the only real way I can die is by decapitation unless Jhai fixes me up and heals the flesh back together. I have had a spell put on me after I got hit by a train (don’t ask how, just don’t) by Jhai. The spell makes me heal farley fast so if I break my arm it heals although it will be and trust me on this. Although he can’t do that spell himself although he is very powerful and can pretty much crush things with his mind.'

'Now Jhai is a very powerful (as I call him) ‘wizard’ he can pretty much do anything he puts his mind to (get it ‘mind’ ha ha…. Don’t worry). He first started using this power after I got hit by that train (fine I’ll tell you why, I was talking with Jhai about it and he told me a teleportation spell unfortunally it went wrong and I got hit by a train) when he put that life spell on me. I’m still kind of learning different things with willpower but I got a spell that makes me toasted cheese samiches (mmm samich). Any back to Jhai, he has teleportation and healing spells down pat but he can’t cast the life spell on himself.’

‘Jhai and I are both bronies and enjoy MLP:FIM (you should all know what this means). Well any way back to the story.

It was a nice clear day outside as I jumped from 3000ft in the air you see I loved skydiving base jumping you name falling out of the sky I like it. Now you see I usually land on my apartments roof for it is long and I have covered it with sand so it’s a softer landing and Jhai of which is my roommate alone with my other friend Lachlan so they know when I get back from the noise on the roof (we have the top apartment). Now lucky for me I can’t die right?

So after jumping out of the plane and I went to pull my parachute but it wasn’t working so I tried again and still no success. So after a minute or so of trying to open my parachute and it not working I finally slammed into my roof going straight through it and into the floor.

“WHAT THE FUCK” shouted Jhai as he started burning me from the though of it being something that would attack him and being shocked from me falling through the roof ruining the living room in the process.
Oh did I forget to mention Jhai can control flames and water I can control the earth and air? Oh well we can.

“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH FFFFFFFFFUUUUCCCKKKKK THAT HURT LIKE A STUPID FUCKING DICK FUCK ANIS RAPE FFFFFUUUUCCCCKKKK AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH” I said plainly as I layed there while my bones and mussle started to move around inside my body.

“OH thank GOD its only you!” said Jhai

“Ofcorce it’s me who else do you think it would be!!!!!! and where’s Lauchlan!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?”

“Well he’s working still Duh”

“Oh yeah” i said the pain starting to subside

“…………..”

“………….. Well what are we gonna do today?”

“Want to go to another world?”

“Uhh YEAH!!”

“Ok where to”

“I don’t know”

“Want to try Equestria?”

“Hmmmmmmm… Shure why the hell not, although we probly should leave him a note telling him where we’re going”

“yeah.. nah”

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“Well we have everything, doorframe, rose quarts, rat poison, you ready fo—wait, rat poison? Why do we need rat poison?!?!?” I said questionably.

“We don’t” said Jhai.

“Well where did it come from?”

“How am I suppose to know you the one who got all the stuff!”

“Yeah ok, well lets do this!”

“YEAH”

“YEAH”

“YEAH”

“Are you gonna do it or not?”

“Oh right” the Jhai chanted “Realm ad ver” three times.

The door frame started to glow purple and light started to strech across the doorframe from the rose quartsand when it was finished moving about the doorframe there was a bright flash of light and a slight breeze started to blow towards the portal as it started to wave with a red tint.

“Wow. Thats quite Impressive.” I said impressed.

“Well what did you expect I did do it” Jhai boasted.

“Yeah yeah well did anybody leave Lauchlan a note?”

“I thought you did that!”

“What made you think that?!”

“WELL YOU DID BRING THE IDEA UP!!” I was starting to shout over the wind that was starting to blow really heavy starting to suck stuff into the portal”

Jhai then slipped and started sliding towards the portal.

I jumped in quickly and grabbed his hand and held onto another door frame trying to calm the air but nothing was happening because it was Jhai who made the air. The door the slammed into my fingers and made me let go of the door frame.

“AHHH FUCK!!!” I screamed in pain.

“NOOOOO WHAT ARE YOU DOING DON’T LET GO!!!!” Jhai screamed over the noise of the wind which was starting to make us float in the air.

“FUCK YOU WIND!!!” was all I was able to say as we got pulled through the portal and got knocked out I don’t know for how long but we dreamed of what might be to come.

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