The Blind Leading The Blind
A short story about a blind filly eavesdropping on the gossip of some of the town mares featuring only dialogue. When a member of the town dies in the middle of his house with an empty bit bank, what conclusions will the mares draw?
"Oh hush, Mellie can hear you."
"From this distance?"
"That's why she holds her wings like that. She cups 'em around her ears to hear better."
"Does that work?"
"All I know is, that filly hears more of my conversations than the ponies I'm talking to do."
An experimental story with only dialogue. I'm not entirely sure how I should have tagged this. Comments of any kind are encouraged. I hope you enjoy!
1094 words: Estimated 5 minutes to read
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- The Eavesdropper 2014-07-20 03:14:12 UTC1094