A Spell Gone Right

by A Rainbow Narwhale

Rating: everyone
Tags: Cutie Mark Crusaders, Rarity, Fluttershy, Random, Adventure, Pinkie Pie, Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe
Length: 3108

Rarity and Fluttershy head to The Castle of the Royal Pony Sisters for some books to perfect a spell Rarity was working on. But, what results of the spell os completely unintentional.

Rarity and Fluttershy head to the Castle of the Royal Pony Sisters to find books to master a spell Rarity was working on. But, what happens next is completely unexpected to the unicorn and pegasus.

In alternate dimension, the same thing happens, but to who...? What adventures will happen to Rarity and Fluttershy when the unexpected happens?

Read the story to find out! I barely know what's
happening next!

Contains genderbent ponies and such.

Published 2014-07-22 15:30:03 UTC
Last updated 2014-07-23 03:56:26 UTC

Chaper 1: I Did A Thing!

Author's Note

This is my FIRST ever fanfic! So, if its bad, that's the reason.

I had to copy and paste this from Google docs, so it might be weird in some places.

I hope you guys enjoy!

Chaper 1: I Did A Thing!

It was an average everyday morning in little ol' Ponyville. The birds were chirping, the pegasi were moving clouds and stuff, Celestia's sun was shining brightly on the small town below and the ponies were doing their everyday routines. One pony in the quaint little town, a white unicorn with a purple curly mane (and might i add, a fabulous mane) and tail with a trio of blue diamonds on her flanks, was hurrying along a dusty old path in a hurry. Let's take a closer look, shall we?

"Oh for goodness sake," Rarity mumbles under her breath, "why can't Mayor Mare replace these dusty old roads with something more presentable?" Rarity was lost in her thoughts when the unthinkable, most awful thing ever happened.

Rarity walked straight into a tree.

"Waahhhh!" Rarity shrieked like Diamond Tiara when she didn't get what she wanted.
'Oh, its a tree...' She thought to herself

But what she didn't realise is that there was, in fact, a birds nest in said tree. It was teetering on the edge of the branch,in said tree, deciding or not if it wanted to stay on the branch or land on the prissy unicorn's head and rile her up, make her scream and annoy anypony close by.

It chose to land on her head.

Rarity saw a shadow falling out of said tree, then looked up to see the bird's nest,from said tree, falling down towards her.Without a moment to think, she quickly made her horn glow a sparkly light blue aura, out of reflex, to catch the little nest in mid air. Then gently placed the nest back in the exact place she thought was best, not where the bird thought was best. Where SHE thought was best.

After 15 minutes of deciding where exactly to place it to HER standards, not the bird's standards but HER standards, she finally started heading towards the woodland cottage of her companion.

~~~~~~~5 minutes of walking later~~~~~

The prissy unicorn finally made it to her friend's cottage. She did her super secret code knock to notify that she has arrived to her friend.

Knock knockknockknockknockknock. Knock. Knock.

Rarity then heard a semi-quiet "Eeep!" And some crashing sounds.
The door then preceded to open very slowly and one blue eye cautiously peeked out of it. The door flung open to reveal a butter yellow pegasus mare with long, light pink mane and tail with a trio of pink butterflies on her flanks.

"Oh, hi Rarity!" The timid pegasus says quietly, "W-what brings you around here?"

"Well, Since you asked," Rarity started with some emphasis on the 'k' in asked, "I was heading over to the castle of The Royal Pony Sisters and I thought I could use some company."

"Oh, that's nice..." The pegasus said shyly, while trying to hide behind her mane a bit.

"Oh come on Fluttershy, you're not still afraid Everfree Forest are you?"

"Of-Of course not!"

"Then come on Fluttershy, dear!"

"Okay..."
~~~~~a trip through The Everfree later~~~

The castle is some old crumbly ruins from somewhat 1000 years ago. It used to be the home of the Alicorn of the sun, Celestia, and the Alicorn of the moon, Luna. The reason its so crumbly is because 1000 years ago, Luna got all jealous like at all the attention Celestia's day was getting, and Luna's night as she thought, wasn't getting any attention. She became Nightmare Moon through an emotional outburst, causing a lunar eclipse and being all jealous like. Celestia defeated her with the Elements of Harmony. The elements are magic, laughter, generosity, kindness, honesty, and loyalty. Rarity represents generosity and Fluttershy represents kindness. Now, back to the story!

"Finally! We made it!" Rarity joyously exclaimed.

"yay" Fluttershy said very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very VERY very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very quietly.

Rarity then started trotting into the old castle ruins with her timid friend trailing a few feet behind her.

"Well, this place hasn't changed much" Rarity thinks out loud.

"Um, Rarity?" Fluttershy starts of, "Why are we here exactly?"

"For research." Rarity replied looking around for the library's entrance.

"Like, Twilight level research?"

"Nope"

"OK, good" Fluttershy sighed with relief.

After a couple minutes of searching in silence, the two mares finally stumble onto the dusty old library.

"Aha!" Rarity exclaimed "we found it!"

"So... Um... What are we researching?" Fluttershy asked her fancy friend.

"You promise to tell nopony?" Rarity said while looking her friend dead in the eyes.

"I promise!" Fluttershy said weakly, backing up a bit from the fashionista's glare.

"Pinkie Promise?"

You may be wondering 'what is a Pinkie Promise?' Well, if you're not, skip this paragraph! A Pinkie Promise is a super duper special promise made up by their good friend, Pinkie Pie, the element of laughter and the most random pony around. Pinkie Promises can't be broken ever, no matter what. Nopony knows what happens when you break a Pinkie Promise. Or nopony has lived to tell the tale.

~~~~~~In Ponyville~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Pinkie Pie dropped a tray of cupcakes she was moving and stared blankly in front of her.

"Is a narrator talking about me...?" Pinkie Pie wondered aloud.

~~~~~~~Back to the dusty old library~~~~

Fluttershy sighed then started reciting the promise encantation that she and her 5 friends share. And remember, no one can break a Pinkie Promise, never no matter what.
"Cross my heart and hope to fly," Fluttershy said while crossing her heart with her hoof, "Stick a cupcake in my eye" She finished by gently placing her hoof over her eye.

"Okay, good." Rarity started. She then leaned in close towards Fluttershy's ear and whispered "Dark Magic."

"DARK MAGIC?!?" Fluttershy shouted as loudly as she could, which wasn't very loud, "Why are you researching that?!?"

Rarity mentally facehoofed.
"I'm only researching a SMALL bit of it to perfect a spell" She explained to her concerned friend.

"What does the spell do?" Flutters asked quizicly.

"Oh, you'll seeeee!" Rarity said in a sing-song voice.

Fluttershy was obviously curious about what her unicorn friend had in store, but she didn't want to ask more. That would be rude!

"Now, help me find some books on dark.magic!" Rarity commanded to Fluttershy

The yellow doormat opened up her yellow wings and started flapping them to gain some altitude. That's fancy for 'flying'. She started searching the higher shelves while Rarity searched the lower shelves.

After 2 hours of searching, they found absolutely nothing.

"Ugh! This is hooooopppeeeelllllleeeesssss!" Complained the prissy marshmallow.

"Um Rarity, why don't you just attempt to try your spell again," Fluttershy suggested, "Or, you could ask Twilight to help, since she is an alicorn now and all..."

"Maybe I will try it again as it is..." Rarity said giving up on the book she found, "But Twilight should NEVER know about this, Understood?!"
Rarity looked Fluttershy dead in the eyes, and made Fluttershy uncomfortable for the second time that day.

"U-u-understood..." The pegasus said softly.

"Good." Said Rarity.

The prissy marshmallow then lit up her horn and went out into full concentration mode. A strong breeze started up, a breeze strong enough to open all the books on the ground and table and make the pages flap wildly. A breeze strong enough to knock breezies off course. A breeze strong enough to knock Fluttershy into a wall. The aura on Rarity's horn expanded and went lighter. Fluttershy started to set up a book fort to protect herself from whatever happens after Rarity finishes casting her spell. Her light blue aura keeps expanding, and expanding and expanding. Then suddenly, a blinding white flash engulfs the ancient library.

"That was... Unexpected..." Rarity mutters, standing in front of the newly opened portal.

Fluttershy was at a loss for words. She didn't understand what was happening. Her brain went into overload.

Fluttershy then passed out.

~~~~Meanwhile in another dimension and like 3 hours beforehand~~~~~~

"Oh come on! It's not that scary!" A white unicorn stallion complained.

"Im-im sorry... But-" Started a yellow pegasus stallion, but was interrupted by his unicorn friend.

"You owe me!" Shouted the Unicorn. "Besides, the Everfree isn't scary considering we've oh, I don't know, been here over 100 times!"

"OK... Fine..." Said the pegasus, "But, if I get even a bit startled, I'm flying out of there."

"Deal, now come on!" Shouted the unicorn as he majestically trotted into the forest with his timid friend not to far behind.

~~~one alternate dimension stroll through the everfree later~~~~

"So, what are we doing at the Castle of the Royal Pony-" started the Pegasus but then got cut off by his friend.

"Research." He replied calmly.

"Like D-" started the pegasus again but got cut off by his friend, once again.

"No, less nerdy."

"OK, good"

~~~one alternate dimension stroll thru the castle later~~~

"Aha! The library!" Exclaimed the unicorn who started levitating books and stuff with a sparkly light blue aura to a table.

"So, um... What are we researching?" Asked the pegasus.

"Dark magic." Replied the unicorn, not giving any bucks.

"DARK MAGIC?!?" exclaimed the pegasus as loud as he could, which wasn't very loud, "But, that's illegal!"

"Oh, it'll be fine, don't get your feathers in a bunch," stated the unicorn, "I only need a bit-" the unicorn was interrupted by a bright white flash the engulfed the ancient library. Once the flash died down, a portal could been seen.

The pegasus fainted.

"Buck..." Said the unicorn.

Chapter 2: Meeting Ourselves and Such

~~~~~~~back to Rarity and Flutters' dimension ~~~~~~~

Rarity was so utterly confused on what happened. She blinked a few times to process what just happened, then she turned her fainted friend Fluttershy. She grabbed a bucket of water that was conveniently placed nearby, probably Pinkie's doing, and dumped it on Fluttershy.

Fluttershy woke up with a jolt and started flailing her forelegs wildly. She stopped for a moment to take in her surroundings, then she remembered where she was and what happened.

"Um, Rarity..." Fluttershy started, "What just happened?"

"I have no idea." Replied Rarity with a bit of concern as she glanced at the newly open portal to whoknowswhere. "But, I can't wait to see where it goes!" Her tone went from concerned to adventurous faster that Rainbow Dash could clear the sky.

"What was the spell supposed to do?" Asked Fluttershy.

"It was supposed to created fabrics and such out of thin air," Rarity explained, "Sweetie Belle drained my extra savings with some CMC stunt."

"Oh, ok. Well, since we don't know what's on the other side, we shouldn't go in it" Fluttershy said backing up from the portal and going back to the original topic.

"What's the fun in that?" Rarity complained, starting up her horn and levitating Fluttershy with her magic, "We're going to just take a peak, then we'll be right back."

"OK... But if I get even a teensy bit scared, I'm leaving."

Rarity then walked straight into the newly made portal with the cowering Fluttershy in her telekinetic grip.

~~~~~Back in the alternate dimension just a few minutes before ~~~~~

"Oh for goodness sake." The unicorn said while dumping a bucket of water on his fainted friend.

The pegasus woke up in a jolt and looked around confused.

"Oh... It wasn't a dream..." Said the pegasus glumly.

"Well obviously it wasn't, you don't faint in dreams." Said the snooty unicorn with a snooty tone, "Now we're going to go get D-"

The unicorn was interrupted by two figures coming through the portal. The unicorn stared blankly at what he was witnessing and the Pegasus hid behind him, trying to hide behind is mane.

"Quick hide." He instructed the pegasus and they both hide behind a table, some chairs, and stacks of books, books and more books.

"Well, it looks absolutely the same as where we came from." Complained Rarity, who came out of the portal.

"Um, maybe it doesn't do anything." Suggested Fluttershy who was being held by the unicorn mare's magic still, "and, can you put me down?"

Rarity placed Fluttershy gently on the ground and cancelled her telekinetic power.

"I doubt it," retorted Rarity, "maybe it sent us back a few hours or-"

Fluttershy stopped paying attention to Rarity and started looking around the library to see if anything was different. She then looked into the direction the stallions were hiding in. Then she looked at her friend and opened her mouth to speak.

"Um... Rarity?" Said the Fluttershy, "there's two stallions over there." She pointed over to the area where the stallions were hiding.

At that moment, Rarity stopped blabbering on and looked over to where her pegasus friend was pointing. And looked straight at the stallions.

"Greetings!" Rarity said waving at the stallions with a hoof, "Come out from your hiding place and introduce yourselves!"

The stallions looked at each other then walked out of their hiding spot.

"Who are you?" Asked the unicorn stallion, "and why do you look like us?"

"Well, why do you look like us?" Replied Rarity.

While the two unicorns argued, the two pegasi were looking at each other quizzically, hiding behind their manes, and moving their hooves in circles like fillies messing with their reflections.

"This is getting us nowhere." complained Rarity.

"Agreed." Said the unicorn stallion.

"Well, I am Rarity," said Rarity, then pointed at Fluttershy, "and that is my friend, Fluttershy."

"Nice to meet you Miss Rarity," said the unicorn stallion smiling, "I am Elusive and that-" Elusive points at the pegasus stallion, "-is Butterscotch."

"Nice to make your acquaintance Sir Elusive." Rarity said smiling at him.

Meanwhile, over where Fluttershy is...

"Um...hi..." Says Fluttershy very quietly.

"Hi..." Says the pegasus colt very quietly.

'Oh wow, he heard me? That never happens on the first meetup' thought Fluttershy.

"I'm... Fluttershy..." Fluttershy said, very very very very quietly.

"I'm Butterscotch..." Said Butterscotch very very very very quietly.

'Very awkward! Am I right narrator?!' Pinkie said to the Author/Narrator...

Pinkie Pie! Get out of here! You're NOT in this scene! Or FanFic for that matter!

'Sorry, gosh!'

Anyway...

"Elusive?! Butterscotch?! You guys here?!" Shouted a voice from down the hall.
I

"Who's that?" Asked Rarity, peering down the hall.

"Oh um, its nopony," Said Elusive blocking the doorway a bit, "But, we might want to get out of here."

"Why?" Rarity started, "Is it a fri-"

Rarity was interrupted by a pink earth pony stallion bouncing into the room and shouting:

"Oh there you are 'Lucy and scotch!"

"I told you not to call me that." Said Elusive through closed teeth, with a stare that could melt ice.

'Hey narrator,' thought the earth pony, 'how come you didn't introduce me yet?'

I'm getting to that! Gosh! And don't start breaking the fourth wall!

'OK, fine. I'll stop. But only for this chapter.'

Deal, now back to the story.

Fluttershy and Butterscotch walked over to the unicorns and earth pony, just so they wouldn't miss any information. It would be rude to ask later.

"Rarity and Fluttershy, this is Bubble Berry." Explained Elusive, "He's a bit hyper."

"Hi there Fluttershy and Rarity!" Said Bubble Berry happily, and while shaking their hooves, "Areyounewtotown?becauseifyou'renewtotownthatmeansidontknowyou,andifidontknowyouthatmeansyoumustnothavefriendsinthistown,andifyoudonthavefriendsthatmustmeanyou'relonely,andifyourlonelythatmeansyouneedtobecheredup!andifyouneedtobecheeredupthatmeansyouneedtohaveapartythrowforyou!" He said in one breath.

"Um, well actually we are kinda new," started Fluttershy, "But, we don't need a party thrown." Fluttershy paused for a moment. "I-if that's okay with you..."

"Don't be silly! Everypony loves parties! And everypony loves a Bubble Berry party! So, I insist!" Said Bubble Berry in a rush.

"Well, if you do insist, you can throw a party for us." Fluttershy said, like the doormat she is.

"Yay! This is gonna be awesome! It might take me a few hours to get everything ready! So you guys can explore, and make more friends here! Well, besides 'Lucy and scotch." Bubble ranted on again, but bouncing up and down, "Anyway, bye bye for now!" Bubble Berry bounced out of the room.

"This might cause a problem..." Said Elusive staring at the doorway.

"How so?" Rarity asked.

"Well, you two are obviously us, from another dimension," started Elusive, "and one of our friends can get a bit paranoid about this stuff."

'Tell me about it' thought Rarity

"We'll cross that bridge when we get to it."

"You sure?"

"Positive"

The two unicorns and two pegasi then started walking out of the old castle and into the Everfree forest, towards Ponyville. But, one thing the mares didn't account for was then portal closing a couple minutes after they left. And neither knew how to open it again.

'Dun Dun Dun!' Said Berry....

Dang it Berry! Stop breaking the fourth wall!

'Aw... But the chapter is over!' Complained the party pony.

Now I got to keep. This chapter going because you made it awkward!

'Sorrrryyyyy'

You should be!

'Hey can I have my own spinoff chapter in the future?!?'

Maybe....

*nudge nudge* *wink wink* *hint hint*

Author's Note

Two Chapters in one day?!
What is the sorcery?!?

The truth is, I had the first chapter sitting somewhere for a couple days, and
This one in the works for about 2days, so here you guys go!

Anyways, I hoped you guys enjoyed this chapter.

Oh and Berry will get a spinoff chapter(s) soon....