Slow Learner

by jhukgbr

Rating: teen
Tags: Sex, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Main 6, Other, Romance, Rainbow Dash
Length: 9245

Rainbow Dash doesn't take too kindly to the ponies that left her in the hooves of a random stranger to try to teach her obedience and discipline, but revenge is the least of her problems

Rainbow Dash is given to a strange stallion for his 'special classes', but she has no idea who did this or why.

Published 2014-07-23 23:20:08 UTC
Last updated 2014-07-28 13:37:17 UTC

Chapter 1

Starcrasher, a smaller than average earthpony looked down at what his latest client had brought him: A cyan Pegasus with rainbow hair was tied to a rough looking wooden chair with rope, her two rear hooves tied to the front legs of the chair, her front hooves tied behind her. Her face was also covered by a very baggy hood, but she sat there motionless, the effects of the drug that had been given to her still holding strong "RAINBOW DASH?" He shouted "I CAN'T TRAIN HER, SHE'LL KILL ME!"

Rainbow stirred, slowly waking from the effects of the drugs. "I don't care what you have to do, just get it done" the client said, placing a large bag of bits in Starcrashers hoof.

He looked from the bag of bits to the bound pony, back to the client. "Can I ask why you, of all ponies, want me to do this to her?" he nodded to Dash.

"Her usual cockiness has got too much for me to cope with... And I'm interested in how your... Methods... Work"

The Pegasus slowly lifted her head, finally awake. "Someone had better tell me what the BUCK is going on here!" She shouted, muffled slightly by the hood. She started struggling against the binds, causing the chair to rock furiously

"I-I'd stop that if I were you" Starcrasher warned, worried by the aggression Dash had already shown. "OR WHAT?" Rainbow screamed. At that moment the rocking caused the chair to tip too far, then fell forwards, causing dash to headbutt the floor. "AARRGH!"

"I'll get out of your mane" the client said to Starcrasher, slamming the door behind them.

"Looks like it's just you and me..." He lifted the chair back upright, then removed Rainbows hood. She glared at him causing him to look away for a moment "I will kill you" she calmly said, never breaking eye contact.

"I-if you cooperate this can be easy..." Starcrasher stuttered, obviously scared of dash. She just laughed "you're scared of me, even though I'm tied to this chair?" She pulled roughly on her binds, but to no avail.

"Well you're a scary pony, especially when you're angry..." He said quietly, still staring at the ground.

Rainbow looked around the room, gasping at the array of riding crops, gags and other equipment hanging from the wall, as well as the variety of 'workstations' around the room. "What is this? What do you mean cooperate?" She asked, too calmly for Starcrasher

"I have been requested to... Correct you, and this is my method of doing so" he pointed to the equipment

"What part of me needs correcting? I'm perfectly awesome as I am!" Her usual cockiness still strong, even in her current predicament

Starcrasher laughed " that" he said slowly twirling a crop between his hooves. "What?" She asked.

"Your over confidence. The Pri... The client is not too pleased with your boasting" he rested the crop on rainbows cheek and smiled

"What are you gunna do? Whip me until I comply? Because I won't" she glared at him as a hard smile broke on her face

He sighed.... "If I have to..." He removed the crop from her face and lowered his head

Rainbow laughed and leaned as far forward as she could "you don't have the balls!" She leaned back, a cocky grin on her face
Without thinking Starcrasher hit rainbow as hard as he could across the face with the crop, causing the chair to fall backwards. He gasped and ran over "I'm sorry!" He shouted shaking with fear

Rainbow groaned and looked up "you're not very good at this" she said, glaring at Starcrasher

"W-what?" Starcrasher questioned, looking at Rainbow curiously as he righted the chair again

Rainbow rested her hair on the back of the chair, groaning again "not that I have a large knowledge of torturing ponies, but I don't think it's routine to apologise after hitting them..."

"I don't want this anymore than you do, you know..." He inspected the growing redness on Rainbows face, stopping himself from massaging it

"Well then let's switch positions" she said through gritted teeth

Starcrasher chuckled "The client gave me a job to do, so I'll do it..."

Rainbow couldn't believe she was getting involved with her torturers life... "Why don't you want to do this" she sighed, "are you one of the ponies I haven't been cocky to?"

Starcrasher blushed and looked at the ground "I like you just the way you are"

"Great" Rainbow thought "this creeps in love with me". She sighed. " you know you don't have to right? Untie me and we can talk this over" she said.

"I... I um... Can't" he said, running the crop up Rainbows leg

"OH COME ON! ...please?" She tried to move her leg away, the contact irritating her

"I can't trust you! I mean, look hoe strong you are! And I've seen you fly before, you're so quick!"

Rainbow laughed "yeah I am awesome... Look, untie me and I promise I won't touch you" she tried to look as helpless as possible, which wasn't too hard, as she wasn't able to move

"But you'll still be cocky, and the client will be unhappy... And so will I" he sighed

"FOR GODS SAKE I WILL RIP YOU APART!" Rainbow composed herself "I'm sorry... Look I'll do anything, just let me go"

"Anything?" Starcrasher grinned. He rested his hooves on where one of rainbow legs was bound

Rainbow slowly nodded, looking seductively at him

Starcrasher could hardly contain himself, he quickly ripped off Rainbows binds and stood back to admire her

Rainbow stood up and slowly stretched her legs and wings, adjusting to being out of the chair. She looked up at Starcrasher and laughed "you're an idiot aren't you?"

Starcrashers heart skipped a beat. What had he done? She was now free, and was most likely very angry at him, and for all good reasons "n-no.. You promised!..." He slowly backed away

Rainbow walked over to Starcrasher, who was standing against the wall, terrified. She slowly ran a hoof through his mane and moved in close

Starcrasher trembled in fear, anticipating the worst, but was surprised at Rainbows actions "p-please don't hurt me... you promised..."

"I lied"

Starcrasher felt a hoof hit him in the back of the head, causing everything to go black

Author's Note

First off, thanks for reading!
This is my first fic, but I plan to write many more chapters. If you have any criticism or suggestions please tell me, or talk to me on twitter! (@jhukgbr)

Chapter 2

Starcrasher woke with a start, but quickly laid back down as his head was in some serious pain. He glanced around the room he was in, noticing he hadn't moved from the place he'd been knocked out. He started to shake in fear, trying to spot Rainbow Dash, but couldn't see her anywhere.

Starcrasher got slowly to his feet and glanced over to the open door, sensing a trap but wanting freedom. He knew if Rainbow was anywhere near here, then here was the wrong place to be. As he cautiously tiptoed towards the door he heard soft breathing coming from behind him. "Oh god she's right behind me" he thought to himself. Slowly, he turned, sheer panic flowing through his body. He stopped and looked at where the breathing was coming from. There, as he suspected, was Rainbow Dash, however she was taking a casual nap on a large table with leather straps in every corner, designed to restrain someone.

Starcrasher knew this was his chance, and he was going to take it. He turned and quickly, but quietly, ran for the door. As he was about halfway to the door from the table, he turned to grin at the lazy, sleeping Pegasus, to mock her for her stupidity. He stopped suddenly and stared at the now sitting pony, smiling at him and gesturing at the door "I'll give you 3 seconds" she grinned.

Starcrashers heart stopped "w-what do you mean?"

Rainbows cocky grin got wider and wider "if you get to that door before I can, you're free to go... If you run and I catch up... Well, we'll see if you choose that option. I'm giving you a head start"

He assessed his options. Could he beat her to the door? It wasn't too far away. He scratched his mane "what if I don't run? What happens to me then?"

Rainbow shrugged her shoulders, losing interest in the standoff.

"We both know who's going to get to that door first" Starcrasher said, admitting defeat

Rainbow examined her hoof "well then, what's your decision?"

He glanced at the door, silently bidding farewell to his freedom, turned his back on it, then slowly walked back towards Rainbow "you win"

"Aww! No fun!" Rainbow smiled. She patted a space on the table next to her, inviting him to sit

Starcrasher glared at her "I'm fine here, thanks." He said coldly and staring at his captor

"It wasn't an offer"

He sighed, then pulled himself onto the cold table next to Rainbow. "Are you going to hurt me?"

She laughed to herself "well that all depends on one thing..."

Starcrasher sighed again "and that is?" He asked, already knowing the answer

"Your cooperation. Now lay down" Rainbow jumped off the table and flew over to the door, shutting and locking it as Starcrasher reluctantly laid down, surrendering to Dash

"Now" she said, standing above her prisoner "how cooperative are you going to be?" She asked, tightening the leather straps around Starcrashers legs

He groaned "what do you want from me?" He laid back, letting himself relax

"Not too much, just a bit of information" she stood over him, fore hooves either side of his head

"What kind of information" He glanced over Rainbows underside, admiring it

She banged her hoof as powerfully as she could next to his head, causing him to jump. "CONCENTRATE YOU PERV!" She shouted "stop checking me out for one minute!"

"S-sorry!" He winced "p-please don't hurt me!"

"Pathetic" she tutted. "Now, for the fun part" she placed a candle next to Starcrashers head. "Who is it that asked you to correct me? What's the clients name?"

"I can't tell you! If they found out that I'd told you..." He tried squirming out of his bonds, but to no avail

Rainbow sighed and picked up the candle. "3....2...." She slowly started tipping it, threatening to pour hot wax on Starcrashers chest

"P-please! You have to understand!" He tried to move away from the candle, but getting nowhere

"All I have to do is this..." She grinned as she poured the melted wax onto Starcrashers chest, causing him to writhe and whimper in pain, much to Rainbows pleasure

"Now, let's try this again. Who is the client?" Rainbow asked, smiling down at Starcrasher

"I-I don't know!"

"You're a slow learner aren't you?" She poured more melted wax onto Starcrasher, this time onto his stomach

He screamed in agony, the wax burning his skin. He began to sob, shaking his head and begging for it to stop

"Ah, come on it's just a game!" Rainbow smiled down at him, stroking his mane. "How can I make it up to you?"

"It's not a very fun one!"

Rainbow slowly slid her hoof down Starcrashers body, leaning in closer. "How does this feel?" She asked, nibbling on his ear

Starcrasher groaned with pleasure, closing his eyes and enjoying it, forgetting all the pain "s-so good"

Rainbow glanced down at Starcrashers groin, smiling as his penis extended out of its sheath. "There it is" she muttered, an evil smile spreading across her face. "So, who's the client?" Rainbow asked, stroking his inner thigh

"I can't tell you..." He groaned with pleasure "we can just forget about everything before though..."

Rainbow laughed and stood over Starcrasher again "no." She picked the candle up again and put the flame dangerously close to his penis

"Oh god no... Please no! I'll tell you! Just get that away from there!" He begged

Rainbow smiled "so...?"

"THE CLIENT IS TWILIGHT SPARKLE! TWILIGHT ASKED ME TO DO THIS! Now please...!"

Rainbow choked. Her own friend asked him to do this? "You're lying"

"No I promise! Please! You have to believe me"

She ran her hoof up Starcrashers cock, causing him to groan "thanks for your help..." She picked the candle back up and smiled down at him

"No no no no no! Please! I'll do anything!"

"I don't need you for anything." She poured the melted wax onto the tip of his cock, causing him to scream in pain as it ran down the sides, slowly solidifying. "Actually now that I think of it... You could be some help..."

After Starcrasher stopped screaming, which was a while, he looked up at Rainbow "get away form me you bitch! YOU'RE CRAZY!"

She laughed, stroking his cheek "now now, that's no way to talk to a lady" she smiled down at him "I need you to pretend to be someone you're not for me, and there will be a reward for you if you play your part well"

"What could you possibly have that I want? You're a witch"

"You're joking right?" She gestured to her body and flicked her tail

"Y-you're lying"

She smiled "are you going to take that risk? What if I'm not?" She turned around and moved her tail, fully exposing her marehood "would you really wager this?"

He sighed, it was worth the risk. "Who do I need to be and what are we doing?"

She smiled "you're my master, and we're going to visit a friend"

Author's Note

Again, a huge thank you to all those that read the first chapter! I hope you're enjoying it so far, and as always, suggestions are welcome!

Chapter 2.2

Starcrasher massaged his sore hooves after being tied down for so long. He didn't even want to touch the wax on fear of hurting himself even more, so he just left it matted in his fur.

"Change of plan" Rainbow said, turning to face Starcrasher "you're going to go get Twilight and bring her here. You think you can do that?"

Starcrasher tutted "make your mind up will you?"

Rainbow glared at him "you want me to strap you back onto that table and get the candle out again?" She walked up to him and shoved her face in his "I own you" she whispered into his ear, then turned and walked over to the chair she was tied to. "Now, I'm going to trust you. Can I do that?"

Starcrasher slowly followed her "sure.." He said half-heartedly "what do you want me to do?"

She gestured to the chair "tie me to this" she sat down in the position she was originally in, then looked over to Starcrasher expectantly

"W-what? Why do you want that?"

"Because Twilights not an idiot! If she sees me telling you what to do, and you complying like the little bitch you are she'll suspect something's up!"

"O-ok" he began tying one of Rainbows rear hooves to the chair leg

"You do exactly as I say ok? You've got to be rough and assertive, just I dunno, remember the pain I caused you" she winced as he secured a hoof tightly to the chair

"Don't you worry, I don't need to play act when I'll be hitting you" he hissed, pushing her chest roughly against the back of the chair

"I'm not worried, because I know that you know I'll hurt you more than you can imagine if this doesn't go perfectly" she hissed back "and anyway, I know you'll do anything for your reward" she said, leaning in close to Starcrasher

He placed a hoof on Rainbows lips after securing all four hooves. "Shhh" he said "good little girls don't talk... In fact..." He turned and swaggered over to the rear wall and picked out a pink ball gag "this'll suit you just fine"

"Don't you dare..." Rainbow said

"It'll help the act" he said "now open up"

Rainbow reluctantly opened her mouth and gasped as Starcrasher forcefully rammed it into her open muzzle, then tightly secured the lock at the back

"You hear that?" Starcrasher asked, looking around the room

Rainbow shook her head and followed his gaze

"It's the sound of silence. It's hard to hear over your constant talking" he mocked. Rainbow shouted something into the gag, but Starcrasher just laughed and tutted "Rainbow Dash! How un-ladylike" he stood back and admired his work. Rainbow was tied to the chair in the same position she had been when she woke up, but this time she had the pink gag pacifying her

"Aren't you just wonderful?" He asked

Rainbow rolled her eyes and relaxed in the chair

Starcrasher walked over to the door, but stopped and turned back "almost forgot" he said. He planted a kiss on the top of Rainbows muzzle then pulled the black hood over her head and walked out

Rainbow heard the door slam, then rested her head on the chair and squirmed to get comfortable. 'I might as well use the time she had on her own' she thought, then closed her eyes and fell asleep

Author's Note

As always, Thanks for the support!
This is just a short chapter before we get into the real stuff, sort of a chapter 2.2 if you will

Chapter 3

The door to the dungeon swung open and Starcrasher trotted in, flanked by Twilight. "Hey Dashie!" He shouted "look who came to visit you!"

Rainbow Dash lifted her head from where she had been resting it, but the hood stopped her seeing anything

"Oh right" Starcrasher laughed, removing the hood. He ran his hoof over Rainbows mane "you alright?" he asked

She nodded then glanced towards Twilight

"Remove the gag, I want to speak with her" Twilight demanded

Starcrasher leaned into Rainbow and struggled with the fastening for a bit, but eventually got it off. "You're welcome" he said sarcastically to Twilight

Twilight glared at him, but turned her attention to Rainbow. "Are you done with her?"

Rainbow sat in silence, looking from Twilight and Starcrasher

"Umm... Not fully, but she's definitely improved, as has her behaviour" he walked over to Dash and started undoing her bonds

"Is that the best idea?" Twilight asked, a little shakily, taking a step back

"Trust me" he said. Starcrasher finished untying her then took a few steps back "Dashie, Twilight doubts my training. Are you going to be a good girl for me?"

She nodded, then laid down next to Starcrasher. "You see? She's not all bad" he started stroking her mane

"I'm impressed" Twilight said. "She seems very obedient. What did you do to her?" She slowly approached, staring curiously at Rainbow.

"Things...." He laughed

"Did you hit her? How much resistance did she put up?"

"Only once. Perhaps if you talked to her without being condescending you might have got through to her as well. Not everything can be resolved with the crack of a whip"

"How dare you!" She shouted, stepping towards him with a lot of aggression

Rainbow sat up and glared at her, daring her to take another step. Starcrasher laughed to himself "now now Dashie, that's not how we treat our guests"

"Rainbow Dash, come with me. We're leaving. We're done here."

She laughed "no"

"What did you say?" Twilight grabbed her mane and forced her head up, staring into her eyes

"I wouldn't if I were you, Twilight" Starcrasher warned

"What's you're little pet gunna do?" She spat "time to test her strength" she dragged her by her mane over to a wooden box and threw her over it. "Cuff her hooves" she demanded

Starcrasher walked up to Rainbows head "should I?" He whispered. She slowly nodded.

He secured her hooves to the box

Twilight levitated a thin bamboo cane with her magic, and twirled it in front of her. She stepped closer to Rainbow and rested it on her exposed flanks.

Starcrasher stepped between the two mares "I really wouldn't recommend this" he warned

"Move or I'll hit you too"

Starcrasher walked to Rainbows front and rested his hoof on her muzzle, then slowly ran it over her mane.

"Don't let this go too far" she whispered to him. She gritted her teeth and braced herself

Without warning, Twilight brought the can down as hard as she could across Rainbows arse, instantly making it turn bright red. She ruthlessly brought hit her over and over again, causing Rainbow to scream out in pain

Rainbow made sure she counted every hit, each addition fuelling her rage

Starcrasher winced as he saw the pain Rainbkw was in, then glanced across to Twilight, who was obviously enjoying it. "That's enough!" He shouted after a minute "you'll reverse her training! You think this'll help her?"

Twilight sighed and dropped the cane "I was done anyway. I've got things to do." She turned for the door

"Wait!" He shouted after her "I'm sure Dashie will want to apologise to you! Just give her a moment!" He looked over to where Rainbow Dash was laying, her rear covered in cuts. The sight caused Starcrasher to gasp, he quickly ran over and undid the cuffs "are you ok?"

Rainbow was breathing heavily, but looked up at Starcrasher "what do you think?" She asked, the movement causing a jolt of pain to fly through her body

He went over to a draw and pulled out a small vial. "Here" he said pouring the liquid over her cuts and massaging it in gently

The liquid caused Rainbow to scream out, but she could already feel the pain getting less

Starcrasher turned to Twilight and walked over to her "What the HELL is wrong with you?"

She put a hoof under his muzzle "what was that you were saying?"

"I think you heard" he shouted back, slapping her hoof away. "You think that'll cure her? Did you think that you're going to be the best of friends again after that? You're a delusional psychopath bitch"

She gasped, lost for words for a moment " DO YOU KNOW WHO I AM?" She screamed

"YOU TELL EVERYONE IN EQUESTRIA WHO YOU ARE EVERY 5 MINUTES! YOU'RE THE ONE THAT NEEDS CORRECTING!"

"You'll regret saying that!"

"She is actually a very nice-" he turned to point at Rainbow, but realised she want there. He started laughing. "Uh-oh" he said "the princess is in trouble" he teased

Twilight eyes darted around the room, trying to spot Rainbow. "S-she won't do anything to me... Y-you trained her! She's just your pet"

"And you just threatened her owner" he smiled"save yourself some pain and do as I say, hmmm?" He mocked

"R-Rainbow Dash, this isn't funny" she trembled

Starcrasher walked over to the same draw he got the vial from, and pulled out a magic nullification ring. He tossed it to Twilight "put this on for me, would you?"

Twilight looked down at it and gulped. "Dashie I'm sorry! I was trying to help you!" She gasped as she felt the ring being pushed onto her horn

"What kind of help would that be then, Twi?" Rainbow asked "And don't call me Dashie"

She slowly turned to see Rainbow hovering just above her. She looked up into her eyes "Y-you have to understand..."

"If I were you, and I'm glad I'm not, I would go over there with Starcrasher. He's a lot nicer than me"

"How's your arse?" Starcrasher asked Rainbow "And what do you want me to do with her?" He asked, pointing to a trembling Twilight

"I've had worse" she joked. She landed next to him. "You did good, well done." She pointed to where Twilight had beaten her "over there's just fine"

Starcrasher dragged Twilight over to the box and cuffed her to it. "T-thanks... It was nothing really" he blushed

"Just take the compliment" she sighed "then I can give you your reward for today, but it's a little different because I need to go see somepony. Is that ok? I'll be back later"

"Ok, I guess" he said, obviously disappointed. "Where is it?" He asked

She smirked "Right... There" she pointed to Twilight "she's yours. But I will be speaking with her so do try to not kill her before I get back"

He grinned from ear-to-ear. "Any rules?" He asked

"No" she smiled back, patted him on the head, then took off out the door.

Author's Note

Thanks for reading :D
There'll be a load more where this came from!

Chapter 4 (Rainbow Dash)

Rainbow Dash flew slowly towards Sweet Apple Acres, getting used to flying again after spending the last two days in that god awful dungeon. She scanned the orchard for Applejack, but getting no luck, so decided to head to the barn. She winced as pain jolted through her body after a not-so-routine landing. "APPLEJACK!" She shouted as loud as she could, hoping she'd hear. "Where is she?" Rainbow asked herself

Applejack leaned her head put of the barn, then smiled as when she saw Dash " Hey Dashie, what can I do for you?"

"I... Um... Need your help with something" Rainbow said, digging at the ground "You see" she laughed nervously "there's been a problem"

"Your classes not going too well?" She asked

Rainbows jaw dropped "She told you?!" She shouted

*SMACK*

Rainbow yelped then looked at the newest red mark on her flank, then to Applejack "Why did you-"

*SMACK*

"STOP-"

*SMACK*

Rainbow bit her lip to stop another outburst, then looked at AJ "Are you done?"

"Sorry sugarcube, we were told to do that if you raised your voice. It's supposed to help you or something"

"How do you know about these 'lessons'?" Rainbow asked, as calmly as she could, despite the rage building up inside her

"Ah helped pay for them" she smiled "We all got together and thought this was the best way to help you"

Rainbow felt as if she could explode with anger, but contained it "We? Who's we?"

"You know, the usual lot: Twilight, Pinkie, Rarity and Fluttershy. How are they going?"

"The lessons?" Rainbow asked through gritted teeth

"Yep"

"Just swimmingly... Perhaps you would like to join Starcrasher and Twilight, they're in the dungeon that you sent me to"

"Who's Starcrasher? And whys he with Twi?"

"Starcrasher? He's the stallion you payed TO TORTURE ME" she screamed

*SMACK*

"AAARGH!" Rainbow shouted. She took flight, avoiding Applejacks swing for her. She took a deep breath, then landed. "I'm sorry" she said "I didn't mean to raise my voice"

"See, it's working! That's the first time I've heard you apologise" she smiled "and you're controlling your anger very well"

Rainbow clenched her teeth again "perhaps you'd like to join Starcrasher and I"

"For a demonstration"

"You could call it that" she grinned "do you know where his dungeon is? Or don't you care about that either?"

"Ah, come on Rainbow, don't be like that, it can't be too bad"

"You'll see for yourself later, won't you?"

"I'll bring everyone else too!" Applejack smiled

"N-no! Just you!"

"Ah ok then. What's wrong between you and Twilight then?"

"Don't worry your earthpony brain with it, you've got more important things to worry about" she flew quickly off, back to the dungeon, and burst in.

"We've got a very special guest coming" she announced

Author's Note

This is Rainbows half of the chapter, Starcrashers should be out shortly

Thanks for the read :D

Chapter 4 (Starcrasher)

Starcrasher watched Rainbow Dash leave, then turned to his prize. "Looks like it's just you and me princess" he bowed, then started laughing

"W-why are you helping her?" Twilight asked, quivering in fear

"We have our... Agreements" he said

"She's lying to you! How can you not see that? Get me out of here and I will protect you! I promise!"

"I don't need your protection, I trust Rainbow. She needs me"

Twilight laughed "Rainbow only thinks about herself. She'll do what she can to make herself better, not caring who she has to use. Rainbow doesn't need anypony"

"Shut up! Just shut up! If she didn't care about me, why would she give me you?"

"Pets need to have their toys" she spat

I'm not her pet!" He shouted. He put his hoof under her muzzle and forced her head up "I own you"

"Did Rainbow tell you that, or did you decide for yourself?" She mocked

"I do what Rainbow asks, because then maybe, just maybe she'll think I'm worthy, ok!"

Twilight uncontrollably laughed for a while "you love Rainbow Dash? You can't even fly!"

"SHUT UP!" He shouted

Twilight continued laughing "She's not the kind of pony to fall in love anyway, she's too in love with herself"

"I'm going to enjoy hurting you" he said. "Don't you dare mock Rainbow"

"You must feel so brave, hurting a bound, defenceless mare. Rainbow will just love that courage"

"Intolerable little bitch" he spat. Starcrasher picked up the gag rainbow had on and rammed it into Twilights mouth

Twilight started laughing again, but was mostly blocked by the gag

Starcrasher sighed, then pulled the gag out "what's so funny?" He asked

"I've got more of Rainbows saliva in my mouth than you will in your entire lifetime" she laughed

Starcrasher looked down at the gag, covered in saliva then slowly ran his tongue up it, blushing slightly

"Did you seriously just do that?" Twilight asked, too shocked to laugh. She stared disbelievingly at him

"Just... Don't" he sighed

"I... I don't know what to say" she said "you really do care for her, don't you?"

"Please don't tell her... I can't let you go, but I can try to make her go easy in you..."

She nodded "what can you do to stop her? She's going to wreck me..."

"I'll tell her you're more useful to me unharmed or something..." He undid her cuffs and pointed to a corner "over there is probably more comfortable"

She nodded in appreciation. She lifted a hoof towards her horn, getting close to the ring

"NO! Don't touch that. Sit down over there"

She bowed her head and sat down. She looked around the room and noticed the corner was out of the way of most of the workstations, which suited her fine.

Starcrasher lifted her hooves above her head and locked them into a pair of shackles "just try to stay quiet? Maybe them Rainbow will leave you for longer"

She nodded her thanks, but was still annoyed at her current predicament

Starcrasher started rearranging his equipment, but Rainbow burst through the door

"We've got a very special guest coming" she announced

Author's Note

Thanks for reading!

This isn't how I originally planned it, but I thought this added an interesting element to the story

Chapter 5

Starcrasher smiled at Rainbow Dash "hey Dashie"

She smiled back "You're in a good mood" she looked from Starcrasher to Twilight, then back to Starcrasher. She laughed. "Oh ho ho! Naughty boy!"

"What? I didn't do what you're thinking" Starcrasher spluttered

"It's ok, she's yours. I don't care what you do with her"

"I didn't do anything. All we did was talk"

"Has she turned you against me yet? Let me guess I can't be trusted"

He laughed "no! Of course not... But there is one problem..."

"Hmmm?"

"I-I'm not your... Um.. Pet, am I?"

She laughed, but stopped when she saw the serious look on his face. She raised an eyebrow "wait, you're serious?"

He blushed and looked at the ground, then slowly nodded

She walked over to him and warped a hoof round his neck "do you want to be?"

"Um... No"

Rainbow cast an accusing hoof towards Twilight "did she tell you that?"

He slowly nodded, resting his muzzle on Rainbow

"Oh come on! Tell her already!" Twilight shouted

"Tell me what" Rainbow asked, pushing Starcrasher off and looking expectantly at him

"Excuse me for a moment" he smiled at Rainbow, then walked over to Twilight "shut up!" He whispered aggressively at her, making sure Rainbow couldn't hear

"Are you scared of her?"

"No!" He shouted

"That's not what you said earlier" Rainbow said, causing Starcrasher to jump several feet into the air, then collapse onto his side

"DONT SNEAK UP ON ME LIKE THAT!" He screamed

Rainbow collapsed to the ground, laughing uncontrollably "I- I'm Soooo not sorry" she rolled around on the floor in hysterics

"Hey, Dashie, wanna hear something even funnier?" Twilight sneered

"What?" She asked

"Don't" Starcrasher demanded "you promised"

"Starcrasher loves y-" she started

Starcrasher rammed his hoof into her mouth, causing her head to hit the wall behind her

"What?! What did she say?!" Rainbow shouted, deadly serious

Starcrasher pushed his face into Twilights, who was still recovering from the blow "you're going to be punished for this" he said. He turned his attention to Dash "umm.. It doesn't matter" he blushed

"I... Um" Rainbow was lost for words. She wrapped a hoof around Starcrasher and pulled him in close "what's wrong with that?" She asked

"You're not angry?" He asked

She laughed, but not mockingly. "You're not too bad yourself" she said

Twilight was stunned "WHAT!" She shouted

Starcrasher and Rainbow turned in unison to look at Twilight

"Oh no" she said under her breath as she started pulling on the shackles, terrified

"Oh no indeed" Starcrasher said, but turned to Rainbow "she's all yours" he said. "Have some fun with my pet"

Rainbow grinned at Starcrasher, then turned slowly to Twilight

"Starcrasher, please, I'm sorry! Don't let her hurt me!"

Rainbow looked at Starcrasher, waiting for instructions "well?" She asked

"Y-you're asking my permission?" he said, startled

She nodded

"Perhaps we should leave her for now, you said something about a special guest?"

Rainbow looked disappointed, but stepped back from Twilight "hmm, yes. Applejack" she said

"You're bringing Applejack here?" Twilight questioned

Srarcrasher took a deep breath "SHUT UP" he screamed in Twilights face "Or I'll let Dashie loose on you"

Rainbow laughed "I have to do your dirty work now?" She asked

"No, you're just better at causing pain in more imaginable ways" he looked at the candle and winced

"You're just so perfect together" Twilight mocked "The weak earthpony stallion and the over-confident Pegasus mare"

Dash shuffled uncomfortably

"If you don't shut up, you'll be praying it was only Rainbow dash and not me"

"Ooh scary" she laughed. "I can see why Rainbow likes you as her pet"

Starcrasher burned with fury and took a step towards her

Rainbow put a hoof across his chest, stopping him "don't, we'll deal with her later, Applejack will be here soon. Just gag her or something." She waved a hoof dismissively towards Twilight

He nodded "yes Dashie."

"Your pets very obedient, Dashie" she looked towards Starcrasher "good boy"

"Don't listen to her Star, you're not my pet..." She sighed

"Yeah, sure..." He said, then rammed the gag into Twilights muzzle, causing her to headbutt the wall again

Author's Note

As always, thanks for reading :D

Special thanks to the two readers that consistently give me their opinion on each chapter, you're comments have been truly motivating. (You know who you are :D)

Thanks again

Chapter 6

Starcrasher collapsed onto a pile of cushions, exhausted. Rainbow trotted over, towering above him. "What are you doing? Get up!"

He yawned. "I'm relaxing. Last time I laid down you were pouring hot wax on me, and that was way too long ago. I'm tired, let me rest" he rolled over, turning his back on Rainbow

She laughed "If you don't get up I'll do it again" she teased, gently shaking him

He rolled over, admiring Rainbows body "uh-huh. Sure."

"You getting a good enough view?" She asked sarcastically

He thought for a moment "it'd be better if you turned around" he joked

She ran her hoof over his chest "you're getting cheeky"

He shrugged then pulled Rainbow down, so she was laying on top of him. he smiled in her face "hi there"

She laid there for a moment, not sure what to do

The door swung open and Applejack walked in, then smiled down at Rainbow "ah'm not interrupting, am I?"

Rainbow got quickly to her feet and composed herself, then walked over to AJ "No, Star and I were just talking"

Starcrasher groaned, got to his feet then walked to Rainbows side. He held out a hoof to AJ "I'm Starcrasher" he smiled

AJ nodded her head at him, the accepted his hoof "Applejack" she smiled. "Are you Dashies teacher?"

He nodded, then gestured to the dungeon "welcome to my classroom"

AJ looked around the room, but gasped when she saw Twilight

"Is that Twilight?" She asked, making herself look bigger

Rainbow nodded "I tried to tell you about our little predicament, but you were too busy to listen"

AJ stepped closer to Rainbow and Starcrasher "You gotta let her go" she snarled

Starcrasher took a few steps back, but Rainbow stood her ground. "We're not done with her" she snarled back

"Rainbow, I'm warning you"

Rainbow laughed and turned her head to face Starcrasher.

As soon as Rainbow looked away, AJ tackled her to the ground. She sat on Rainbows stomach and pinned her front hooves to the ground

Rainbow struggled for a bit, but then started to grin "AJ! At least take me out on a date first!" She sniggered

Starcrasher took a step towards the two mares

"It's ok Star, I got this" Rainbow said. Starcrasher took a step back.

"Stop with the jokes, Rainbow. This isn't funny"

Rainbow laughed again "Look out Star, you've got competition"

He blushed and laughed half-heartedly

"STOP!" AJ shouted, pressing down harder on Rainbows hooves, but causing her chest to move closer to Rainbows

Rainbow closed her eyes, then stuck out her lips pretending to kiss AJ

AJ slapped Rainbow "What is wrong with you?"

"That's right AJ, I've been a bad girl" she teased "punish me" she bit the air I front of AJ

Starcrasher blushed and shifted uncomfortably

AJ blushed and weakened her grasp on Rainbow

Rainbow took the opportunity and rolled over. Now she was on top, pinning AJ the same way AJ had been pinning her "I prefer being on top anyway" she laughed, then glanced over at Starcrasher "Take notes, Star, this could be useful one day"

Starcrasher went even redder "I... Uh... Really?" He stuttered

Rainbow laughed "Leave us, would you?" She asked, blowing a kiss towards him

He nodded, then stumbled off, busy daydreaming. He went to the back room and started running a bath "might as well" he said to himself. He heard strange noises coming from the other side of the door, as well as the two mares voices. He shrugged, then hummed to himself as the bath slowly filled.

After a while, Starcrasher stopped the flow of water, the bath full. He walked back into the dungeon. What he saw made his jaw hit the ground.

Applejack lay on her back on the pile of pillows, gently groaning to herself and had a hoof wrapped around Rainbows mane. Rainbow lay with her fore hooves bound behind her back, wearing AJs hat, eyes closed as she slowly ran her tongue along the orange earthponys marehood

"Wha...?"

"Oh, hi there...." She groaned rainbows name "what's up... Sugarcube?"

"H-how?"

AJ gently pulled on Rainbows mane, forcing her head out of AJs crotch. She rested it on her stomach. "Dashie may put on a hard front, but she's a big softy deep down" she said, stroking Rainbows mane

"But... How?" He asked

AJ laughed, then patted Rainbows flank. "Up you get Dashie, I've got trees to buck"

Rainbow struggled for a bit "A little help?" She asked

AJ chuckled, then undid the rope. "Ah'm gunna need this back too" she said, grabbing her hat. She walked towards the door "Bye Starcrasher"

"B-bye..." He stuttered. He turned to Rainbow "I didn't know you swung that way"

She shrugged "not usually"

"Well, if you'll excuse me" he said, walking to the back room and getting into the bath, moaning as he felt the warmth on his fur. He lay there with his eyes closed for a few minutes, but opened them when he heard hoofsteps

Rainbow climbed into the bath, relaxing at the other end

"Sure Dashie" he laughed "jump right in"

She smiled at him, then rested her head on the rim of the bath "it's not like you're going to protest"

Starcrasher smiled, then began furiously scrubbing at the wax matted in his hair, but to no avail, so he tossed the brush aside

"Here, let me" Rainbow said. She moved along the bath and began nibbling at the wax in his chest

"O-oh" Starcrasher gasped "that feels so good"

She smiled up at him, then moved to the wax on his stomach. After she finished, they made eye contact, then Starcrasher looked down at his crotch, then back to Rainbow

"Maybe later" she laughed. She relaxed her head, resting it on Starcrashers chest "I can't figure you out" she said

"Hmmm?"

"Earlier you said you were going to enjoy beating me, but now you love me?"

"I could say the same thing about you" he sighed "first thing you said to me was that you were going to kill me, but look at us now"

She smiled "look at us now" she echoed

Author's Note

As always, thanks for reading :D

This one took a little longer than I thought it would, as I ended up accidentally deleting half of it :/ Genius.

Chapter 7

Starcrasher looked around his surroundings. He didn't know where here was, but here wasn't where he wanted to be. He was terrified, but started to walk slowly through the darkness, shivering from the cold. He heard quiet sobbing, but couldn't see where it was coming from. He picked up the pace. He really didn't want to be here. He spotted a light, a ran for what seemed to be forever towards it, without hesitation. As he approached, he could see a figure tied to a chair. His heart sank as he saw the unmistakable rainbow mane and tail, instantly knowing who it was. "Dashie? DASHIE?" He shouted as he ran as quickly as he could towards her.

He stopped infront of the sobbing mare, and recoiled at the sight. Rainbow was in exactly the same position as she had been the first time they had met, except her body was covered in bruises, scars and cuts. "What h-happened? Dashie, are you ok?"

"I-I'm sorry master... I know you hate it when I cry" her voice sounded defeated, broken. "P-please don't hit me... Again"

Starcrasher fell to his knees before her and rested his hoof on her cheek "I'd never hurt you Dashie! What happened here?"

She recoiled in fear, still sobbing. "M-master...?"

Starcrasher stared blankly at her. 'What the hell is going on?' he thought 'whys she calling me master?'

"I'm so sorry that I'm not good enough to be corrected..." She broke down completely, crying uncontrollably

Starcrasher backed off slowly "NO! What is this?!" he shouted at no one in particular. He couldn't control himself, as he felt his hoof rise, then fall with a crack across Rainbows face. She screamed out in pain.

Starcrasher woke, sitting bolt upright, covered in sweat "NO DASHIE! I'M SORRY" he shouted.

He looked around, tears in his eyes, and realised he was in his bed. "Stupid nightmare..." He told himself. He sat there for a moment, breathing heavily. He looked next to him, where Dash now sat upright, looking angrily at him. "You pissed the bed!" She shouted, hurling herself out of the wet bed. He ran a hoof over her stomach fur, feeling the wetness and retching

"I'm sorry Dashie... It was horrible... You were..." He cut himself short and pulled her into a hug

Rainbow squirmed around, recoiling from his stench, but somehow unable to break free "get off! You stink and you're covered in piss!" She shouted into his fur

"I'm sorry" he said "I'll be downstairs, if you need me"

Rainbow doubted that as she watched him leave, then looked across at the urine stained bed. "Pathetic" she sighed

Starcrasher went down into the dungeon, then collapsed on the pile of cushions, sobbing to himself. He heard a moan come from the corner. He looked up, remembering about their prisoner. He dried his tears, then slumped down next to Twilight, and undid her gag

She breathed in heavily, the looked at Starcrasher "Did Rainbow ditch you?" She asked, rather hostile

He shook his head. "I had a horrible nightmare..." He said, then explained it to her "I-I think it's what i could have done to her..."

Twilight used a rear hoof to stroke his leg "there there" she said, almost sympathetically

"I'm sorry about... All this" he said. He undid her cuffs "You can't leave, but it'll be good to stretch your legs" he slid back down the wall

Twilight groaned at the feeling of having movement again, then massaged her hooves. "You don't seem like the kind of guy that would own a place like... this" she gestured to the dungeon

He shook his head "I could never bring myself to hurt her. You can't just change a pony, not that way"

She shrugged "you dint know her like I do"

Starcrasher filled with sudden anger "How could you? You don't know her at all! Sure, she's not perfect, no pony is. She gave you a chance to come down here and welcome her back, and all you did was beat her" he jumped up, glaring at her

"Wha..? What?"

"She didn't want to leave you chained up down here. I'm sure you've guessed by now that I haven't been training her."

"She attacked me!"

"After you caned her arse however many times!"

"She deserved it" Twilight hissed

Starcrasher laughed "You don't get it, do you? She is everything to me now, but she doesn't care about me. All she wants is to have her friends back, the same friends that paid for her to be abused!"

Twilight took a second to register what had just happened. She broke down in tears "what have I done?" She shouted

"It's too late, Twilight. She can't forgive you, not now, not after you personally beat her. And now she doesn't want the others either, because of what you did. She won't admit it, but she's scared they'll react the same too"

"She does care about you..." Twilight whispered

"How could you know that?" He shouted

"I've never seen her act so... Happy... Around another pony"

He scoffed "she seemed pretty happy with Applejack yesterday"

Twilight sighed "You need to properly talk to her, instead of shying away"

"What you said the other day... I'm nothing compared to her. She's just using me to get to you"

"She ate wax off your chest!" Twilight shouted "why would she do that?"

"I don't know.... Another trick?"

"You NEED to talk to her"

"What would you know? You've never been with anyone, only books!"

"Fine then!" She shouted "I presume you'll want to chain me back to this wall now?"

Starcrasher didn't grace her with a response. He locked her hooves back in place, then walked to the door "night, twilight"

Rainbow Dash heard hoovesteps getting closer to the door, so she quickly flew off. She had heard everything...

Chapter 8

Rainbow Dash flew as quickly as she could to the bedroom, flipped the mattress over and threw herself on. She turned her back to the door and closed her eyes, pretending to be asleep. She didn't know how to feel about what she'd heard, but she knew she really didn't want to talk about it tonight.

Starcrasher walked in a few minutes later, head held low. He sat next to Dash and ran his hoof over her body. "What am I going to do?" He asked himself. "You don't care..." He sighed, looking down at Dash

She wanted to say something, comfort him at least, but she didn't know how to. She slowly rolled over and opened her eyes "what time is it?" She asked

He looked down at her "Sorry, I didn't mean to wake you..." He stopped stroking her and got up to leave

"No!" She shouted, then composed herself. "Don't go"

He turned and raised an eyebrow "what's wrong?" He asked

She panicked, she hadn't expected him to ask her why, she had thought he'd join her without question. "You haven't cleaned the bed" she hated herself for that, she wanted to tell him that she wanted them to spend the night...

He hung his head in shame, and disappointment. "Oh... Sorry" he muttered. He collected a pile of cushions and laid them across the floor, wrapped Rainbow in a blanket, then placed her gently on the pile. He then started changing the sheets

Rainbow blushed, his touch was soft and delicate. She could see pain in his eyes, mixed with embarrassment. She knew she was torturing him. "Star, stop..." She said

He turned half-heatedly and looked down at her, putting no effort into his movements "yes...?" He whispered

"Come here" she smiled, patting the cushions next to her. "I need to talk to you"

He did as she commanded, but with no happiness. He was expecting her to tell him to leave, or that she was leaving, or... He found himself gently sobbing into the pillows, expecting the worst

She was shocked, but wrapped a hoof around him and pulled him in, so they were only inches from each other. "I heard everything"

He buried his face into the pillows, wishing a hole would open up beneath him and take him anywhere but here. "I'm sorry" he cried, "I shouldn't have said anything"

"Ah, come on" she joked "good pets don't cry". She instantly knew that was the worst thing she could of said.

Starcrashers face dropped, he couldn't be here anymore. Anywhere would be better. "I knew you didn't care about me! My life is just a joke to you, isn't it! You've been playing me a fool all this time!" He screamed at her

"Star, I..."

"Save it for fucking Applejack" he shouted in her face, then stormed out. He'd stopped crying, the sorrow replaced with fury

Rainbow looked at the door as he stormed out. It was her turn to cry.

Rainbow woke, and pushed her hoof out next to her, expecting to feel Stars warm body, but only grasped at air. She looked over, remembering what she'd done last night. She repeatedly head butted the pillow, screaming "stupid idiot" at herself over and over again. Finally, she got up and looked around Starcrashers house. He was nowhere to be seen, so she went down into the basement and looked around. Twilight was where she'd been left, looking expectantly at her, but she didn't have time for that bitch, there was only one pony on her mind. Seeing the dungeon was empty, she took flight and flew straight to Sweet Apple Acres, landed, the ran up to Applejack. "Have you seen Star?" She gasped, out of breath

"Sorry sugarcube, I haven't. What's wrong?"

"He... He left last night... I think he's annoyed with me"

"Why do you care? I thought he was just your pet?"

"He's not my pet!" She shouted in AJs face. "Why does everyone think that?"

AJ shook her head. "You seriously don't know?"

"What?"

"You treat him like a pet... You give him demands, he follows them. He does everything for you and you don't even thank him for it"

"I don't treat him like a pet! I haven't put a collar on him or anything!"

Applejack scoffed, turned around and walked off

"FINE!" She shouted "you walk off like the coward you are!"

AJ shook her head, not going to take the bait

Rainbow groaned to herself, then took flight. She flew back to the dungeon "Have you seen him?" Rainbow asked Twilight

"Who?" She sighed

"Who do you think!" She shouted

Twilight smirked "I know exactly where he is"

"Where!?"

"Prove to me you deserve him" Twilight said

Rainbow sighed "how?"

Twilights smile grew wider and wider "submit yourself to me" she whispered

"Wha...?"

"You heard... You will become my pet, so you know how it feels"

"No! You creep! Tell me or I'll beat it out of you!"

Twilight a smile grew further "That's not how you address your owner"

"Your not my owner!" She screamed "Just tell me! I need him back!"

"Why do you need him back? Can you not be bothered to find a new pet?"

"HE'S NOT MY FUCKING PET" she screamed

Twilight stopped smiling "then what is he? What does he mean to you?"

"I... I... I don't know..." She sighed

"He loves you!" She shouted "when will you accept that? Either tell him you love him back or that you don't, don't leave him clinging onto you like this!"

"Where is he? I need to talk to him!"

"Do you love him?"

"Tell me where he is!"

"Not until you give me an answer. Do you love Starcrasher"

"I don't know!"

"That's not an answer. Do you love him?"

"I... YES!" She shouted "are you happy now?"

"Do you mean it?"

"Yes"

"Then say it"

"I just did!"

"Say that you love him!"

"FINE! I LOVE STARCRASHER" she shouted

Twilights smile returned

"Now where is he?"

Twilight just stared up at her, smiling

"Tell me! Where is he?"

"Right behind you" she laughed

Rainbow slowly turned, to see him standing behind her

Starcrasher stared at her smiling "Rainbow dash loves me... Rainbow Dash loves ME!" He shouted with glee

She rolled her eyes, then pulled him into an intimate kiss

Twilight laughed "Great catch, Dashie"

Without breaking the kiss, Rainbow bucked as hard as she could into Twilights face, knocking her out.

Starcrasher broke the kiss, then stood back. "Did you mean it?"

She smiled "I never gave you your reward... But I'm sure you don't mind waiting" she said, brushing her tail over his face

"You didn't answer my question..."

She shrugged. "What is love?" She asked

"Dashie... Don't play with me..."

She hugged him, brushing his mane "You were naughty to run away"

"What?"

"I have feelings for you, that one day I wish to pursue. However, I dint want you running away from me"

"I wouldn't dream of running away" he stuttered.

"No, you won't" Dash said. " I love you, but you need to learn"

"What do you mean?" He asked

"I know you're going to enjoy this"

"Enjoy what? Dashie, you're kind of scaring me..."

"Be good and you'll be rewarded with free use of my body, but if you're naughty again..."

"I... What?"

"Please don't hate me..." She said

Starcrasher gasped as Rainbow attached a collar around his neck

Author's Note

So close to a happy ending...

Thanks for reading! :D

I've already started planning a new fic, then after that I'll start the sequel to this, so look out for it :D