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My Name is Keen observation a detective for the ponyville police station (P.V.P.D).I may not look it, with my Long rather ratty Black Mane, but I'm one of the best detectives in all of Equestria. I always work alone in my cases. I don't like someone there asking me stupid questions of what's going on at a crime scene. The night of nightmare night was the start of one of the most brutal killings to ever hit Ponyville...

It was a crisp autumn day in Ponyville,The perfect time to see ponies carving colorful gourds into faces for nightmare night,what no one knew was someone was carving a Young mare on Sore Saddle Street That evening...

"Thwack!"the door crashed open and a black colt with a badge enters the room with a small file in his left hoof. A little nervous he says "Hey uh Keen we have a murder victim in the red light district district of Soresaddle Street"
"Really now?" I say fumbling a burger wrapper with my hooves trying to get the tasty treasure inside "well while I get this damn thing open, why don't you give me details on the victim?"

"Uhhh sure thing sir" he says while riffling through the pages of the file "Victims name was Candy String, A stripper from the knife and apple, she was found dead and brutally sliced open in the middle of Sore Saddle Street."
I glance at him once I get my burger unwrapped and scarf it down.

"well ok then.lets get to the crime scene" I say getting up as we head out the door.

We walked to Soresaddle Street as he filled me in on that there were no witness as everyone was enjoying the festivities going on in Town Square.

We walked up and in the middle of the street lays a Black tarp over the mare "well Dusty lets see the body"I say ducking over the crime scene tape.

a brown colt officer named "Dusty prints" that was waiting for us nodded and said "this ones a brutal one"as he lifted the tarp up.

"Holy mother of celestia!"was all I could think, I see laying in front of me a mare, about the age of 18 maybe 19 with her throat slashed from ear to ear, as well as completely naked with her stomach cut open, And her left hoof severed off.

I trot up and begin to inspect the body."The heart, Stomach and liver are all missing, As well as I'm going to say her T.O.D was about 9:00 Last night" I said looking over the body
"Black Market deal you think?" Dusty asked

"I don't think so, judging from the lacerations this was done with something like a Kitchen knife or hunting knife. This job was crudely done, maybe a amateur" I said leaning back from the body.

"possible that this could be some drunk asshole, or a wannabe maniac" I said under a sigh.I start to look around the crime scene and I ask
"Was there a murder weapon found at all? Or hoof prints?" I said looking at the Dusty Prints.

"No keen, this was exactly how everything was when the body was found"Dusty said

"hmm,well I'm not seeing anything else around here, get her to the morgue I suppose,I'm going to ask a few questions at the knife and apple,that's where she worked, right?"I say well getting up from examining the corpse

"yes sir the black colt said while nodding"
you guys finish up,keep searching the area,I said walking towards the knife and apple."uhhh ok keen we got it "said the black colt

I walk in and I'm assaulted by the smell of cigarette smoke, booze, and broken dreams." well I found the right place...time to start questioning" I mutter as I take a seat at the bar and look up to the bartender, "I'm looking for the owner of this Joint"

I announce "you're speaking to 'em,Names Hard Cider. How can I help you?" he said looking me over head to hoof.

I look him in the eye and say" I'm keen observation I'm with the P.V.P.D sure you've heard about your workers death?"

"Candy? yeah sad little story. I don't know who would end such a pretty mares life like that" He said with sorrow in his voice.

"well I wanted to ask, Was she working any shifts here last night? at say 9:00?"

Cider puts his Hoof up to his chin "hmm well she got off her shift at about 8:30 had a drink and left around 8:40"
I look at him and ask "

was she talking to anyone at the time?"

Cider shrugged "not really she just had her drink and left"
"Was there anyone else in the bar?"I inquired

"Well,a couple people from outta town but I really didn't see there faces, rainbow dash, and sly clop. Dash you can usually find in ponyville these days but she will stop by every so often, and sly runs that small uhh..."adult entertainment"shop across the street"

I look at him blankly and say "You mean a porn shop?"

"uhhh...yeah" Said cider rather awkwardly. I get up out of the seat and thank him for the information.

My next stop was a porn shop to ask this "Sly Clop" for information...man I hopefully no one recognizes me going in...

Author's Note

Thank you ever pony for reading chapter one of my first fic,im hoping to add more gore scene in future chapters (and have the chapters be a hair longer)
And I use two names ("Sly Clop" and "Hard Cider") as well as two place names ("the knife and apple" And Soresaddle Street") from the fanfic "Triple X"by ElMikkino
check it out its one of my favorites

Thank you Everypony :)