I walk Into the familiar bar and I see a Pegasus mare at the bar gripping Hard ciders shirt "Where the hell is she?" She demanded.

"W-who are you talking about Rainbow Dash?"he stammered.

"Hmm it seems that rainbow dash doesn't know,I guess news doesn't always travel fast." I think.

I clear my throat and walked up behind Rainbow Dash and begin to speak to miss Rainbow Dash "I'm guessing your looking for Candy String?"

She turns around, Looking rather shocked "w-who are you and how do you know her"she yelled.

I continue "Ms dash,I'm with the P.V.P.D,and I want to talk to you for a second,if that's alright"

She looked at me rather concerned.

"O-ok" she stammered as her and I stepped outside to get some privacy.Once outside I fill her in on the murder.

She said "she's dead?" She said in a shaky voice.

I look up "I'm afraid so Miss Rainbow Dash."I sadly told her.

"Do you have any leads" she asked.

"I'm Afraid I can't disclose that miss dash"I said.

She looks down "yeah...I figured,anyway.I knew her well," her paused and after a few seconds of silence.

"We were a bit of a couple" she said rather quietly like a Philly in a school yard.

"Really?so you know who she talked to rather often?or who didn't like her?"I questioned.

"Yeah,she often would...work?i guess you could say,with sly before he met his girlfriend,she also talked with that creep Jack rather often.other than that though she kept to herself"she told me.

"How exactly did Jack act around her?" I inquired.

"I don't know she would often go in,get some sausages,and leave.I think he had a thing for her,every time candy was at the Knife and apple he would be watching her."

I paused for thought and begins to ponder "how he could have a motive,But I mean Jack Ripper that's to obvious of a name that The Author....I mean fate would have chosen"

"Anything else you could tell me about him?"I asked.

She looks down and puts her hoof on to her chin,"hmm,well one night I came to pic her up and gave her a peck on the cheek,I saw him just sitting across the bar,just glaring at us"

"When was that"I quickly asked.

She shrugged "I dunno,maybe two nights ago?"

I Jolt down a few notes as she continued "I don't know he's always acted a little odd.Have you thought to ask him a few questions?"

"I have" I said while my mind wondered off to think about returning and seeing if I can look around,I shutter at the thought.

I spoke as I closed my notepad,"Thank you for your information miss dash,I'm going to have to get back to the office,you have a good evening"

She spoke and said with a small voice "You too,please catch the pony who took my Sweetheart away."

I nod and say I will,as I walk back to the police office.

I walk Into the police station ready for something to eat "Hello there,you come her often"I say to a plate of doughnuts.

While reaching for one of the Delicious glazed ring of dough Dusty prints rushes in and announces "Keen!perfect timing,I just got a call about another victim!"

I sigh "Give me details Dusty" I say while grabbing a doughnut.

"The Hay-Z in motel,Just off of Mane Street,a hooker was found dead I'm her room she checked into with a client"

I take a bite of my doughnut "lets check it out."I say muffled as my mouth was full.

And all I can now say is the scene I saw was the most horrifying and gruesome scene I could imagine,I saw in the room was a bloody pulp on the bed,this poor mare was disemboweled halfway,to where her intestines her half hanging out,he throat also slit eat to ear,her arms and face were skinned to where you could see the muscle tissue and dried out eyes staring into blank space,as well as her left hoof was severed and missing.

"Oh dear celestia" I said covering my nose and mouth to keep from smelling the blood and viscera.

After examination of the room all that was found was a bloody butchers cleaver,we asked at the front desk for details on who this hooker was with,and she said that the colt she was with was a chubby grey colt...

"Son if a bitch!" I yelled.

Dusty looked and me and asked what's wrong,once I filled him in on my experience with jack he cocked a eyebrow and said in a condescending tone "really?a butcher in ponyville,where everyone is a herbivore,I thought you were one equestrias greatest detectives"

I looked at him and say quickly and flustered "I just say that to sound better ok?!I mean it makes my opening to the story sound better!"

He looked at me confused "story?"

I raise my hoof up to my forehead "that's not the point!anyway start searching for this colt,ill head to to his shop"

Dusty said rathe strictly "You need a search warrant to enter his sh-" I Interrupted him by dashing toward the door.

"Fuck the search warrant!"I yelled while running out into the darkness.

I arrived at his shop and see that the corpses that were hanging were gone,I smashed through the door expecting to see his chubby face scowling at me,then leading into epic showdown as a finale,but no...I entered the shop to see that it was completely empty except for a note it read:

Looking for little ol me?By the time you realize that your logic fell through.what with the kinda big plot hole and everything earlier in the story,I'll be at the ponyville train station -Jack Ripper P.S. You really didn't guess me?i mean what kinda name is Jack Ripper?"

I look up from the paper and mutter to myself "that son of a bitch is mocking me!"

After pausing for a moment I realized that the train hasn't run through yet,

"he may still be at the station"

I run as fast as my hooves can take me to the train station and see him holding a large white sack,that was dripping...

"FREEZE P.V.P.D!" I yelled.

Just then I hear a yell "This is for killing my candy you dick!" And I see a rainbow streak the platform and I see Jack knocked flat to the ground and rainbow dash sitting on top of him

"How exactly did dash know where he was and that it was him...meh all logic kinda went down the drain since chapter two"I thought.

I trot over to the mighty colt and take his bag from him and look inside.I saw the two mares hooves,skin,and other organs.It struck me as he could have been doing this for a while,but got too lazy to hide the most recent body's.

"Your under arrest for the murder of 2 or more mares"I say while handcuffing him.

"Miss dash would you mind helping me get this trash to the police station?" I ask.

"It would be my pleasure" she proudly stated.

-2 weeks later-

Once we got Jack we made sure he got his trail,he was found guilty,sentenced to 2,000 years In the dungeon with princess Celestia extending his life to make sure he pays that time in the dungeon,and all well.All thanks to me Keen obser-

"What are you muttering about"rainbow dash suddenly interrupted

"you really didn't have much of a clue as to what was going on,or even did much"she added

"...Shut up this is my story and there for my ending" I grumble

"Fine." She sighed

Now where was I?oh yeah,so the day was all well and good...until the next case...

Author's Note

Thank you all for reading this story
I had this idea bouncing in my head the last couple months and wanted to write it before I forgot
I am hoping to write more stories (that will be better and more serious for the most part)
Please leave any comments in the story *grins*

~Toxic Charm