Rumble's Checkup

by MetalBrony823

Rating: mature
Tags: Anthro, Romance, Flitter and Cloudchaser, Comedy, Rumble, Sex, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Human
Length: 3394

A human tale aboutRumble, the younger brother of Thunderlane, wakes up in the morning to see Cloudchaser and Flitter as nurses, right in front of his bed.

Cloudchaser and Flitter have a special surprise for Rumble, while dressing up like nurses. Will Rumble like it, or will he hate it. (Warning: contains fluffiness, baby talking, and lots of semen.) By the way, Rumble is not a human, he is a pony because of the rules on this website, so please don't spew out hateful comments, and please don't hurt my feelings. Just to be sure, Cloudchaser and Flitter are 20 years old in this tale

Disclaimer: I don't own the cover art. Rights for this art go to Love Tomorrow Love on Tumblr.com

Published 2014-08-03 04:20:04 UTC
Last updated 2014-08-03 04:20:04 UTC

Ready for your checkup, Rumble?

Ponyville was just the same as ever on this fine morning. Rumble, the younger brother of Thunderlane, woke at Eight in the morning, and gave out an adorable yawn. He wasn't wearing anything but his boxer underwear. He rubbed his eyes with his hands so that he can see clearly. His heart jumped when he saw Cloudchaser and Flitter, the two foal-sitters of Rumble, who weirldy, just became humans for some reason. They were wearing nurse costumes, and both of them wearing long, black leggings. Cloudchaser's nurse dress was pale persian blue. Flitter's nurse dress was also pale persian blue, but a little lighter in color than Cloudchasers'. The pegasus colts' manhood became hardened at the sight.

"Oh, look who's awake, Flitter." said Cloudchaser. "Dd you sleep well, Rumble?"

"uhhh....." Rumble was lost for words, as he was staring at his beautiful foal-sitters. He was also confused on why they just turned from ponies to humans

Cloudchaser giggled and said "That's okay."

"Today's your checkup, Rumble." said Flitter."

Rumble then got a look of fear in his eyes, and hid himself under the covers. "Oh no." he said, and began to shake with fear.

"Aww. Don't be scared, buddy." said Cloudchaser, who sat down next to him, and placed her hand on his back. "It's nothing painful." she said in a comforting voice.

"I have a question." said Rumble

"Yeah?" said Cloudchaser and Flitter in unison.

"What the heck happened to you?" asked Rumble in major confusion.

"Oh, well. We wanted to look more beautiful, so we went to Zecora's place to mix up a potion that will make us more beautiful for you. Also we wanted to use these utensils more easily, so we have hands to help us." said Cloudchaser

"You still think we're beautiful, don't you?" asked Flitter a little worried. Cloudchaser had the same worrid expression on her face

"Oh no, no." said Rumble, trying to keep his nurses happy, and not hurt their feelings. "You're still pretty."

"Your checkup will be a very painless one, and it will make you feel very good." said Flitter.

Cloudchaser looked at Flitter with an idea on her face. She looked back to Rumble, and said "Tell you what, kiddo: If you pass the checkup, me and Flitter will give you a very awesome present."

"Two awesome presents to be exact." Flitter added

Rumble eased his shaking and slowly lifted the covers over himself. "What kind of present?" he asked curiously.

Cloudchaser then had a seductive smile on her face, and aroused her hand on his small cheek. "You'll see." she said seductively.

"It will make you feel very good." said Flitter

Rumble felt his manhood becoming hard again, feeling Cloudchaser's warm hand on his cheek. "They...they won't hurt?" he asked

"Of course not little buddy." said Cloudchaser. She slowly moved her head on Rumble's cheek, making him blush. "In fact, some of it may tickle you a little." She sat up from Rumble's bed, and pulled out a stethoscope. Flitter pulled the covers off of Rumble, and Cloudchaser held the end of her stethoscope in her hand. "Hold on a second, Flitter." said Cloudchaser

"What is it?" said Flitter.

"First thing's first." Cloudchaser replied. She then slowly tried to remove Rumble's underwear, but Rumble stopped her hand from continuing.

"What-what are you doing?" said Rumble, shocked to see what Cloudchaser was doing to him. He covered his privates with his hooves

Cloudchaser and Flitter giggled at his reaction.

"It's okay, Rumble." said Cloudchaser. "We won't laugh at you."

"I- I- I-" Rumble was too embarrassed to even say anything.

"Flitter, can you please help me get it off?" said Cloudchaser

"Sure thing, Cloud." said Flitter. She gently pinned Rumble down while Cloudchaser gently took off his underwear. "It's okay, Rumble." said Flitter.

Rumble heard Cloudchaser giggle softly, and felt his underwear being stripped off from his feet, leaving him bare naked.

"Wow. That's very impressive for a cute little boy at this age." Cloudchaser thought, referring to Rumble's manhood. She said to Rumble. "You see." she said reasurringly. "We're not laughing at you."

"Yeah, have we ever laughed at you before?" asked Flitter

"N- no." Rumble admitted.

"You see? You have nothin' to worry about." said Cloudchaser.

"Now, could you let us do this for you, Rumble?" asked Flitter.

Cloudchaser held the end of her stethoscope, and pointed it towards Rumble.

Rumble looked nervous, but, reluctantly he said "Okay. Go ahead."

Cloudchaser and Flitter looked at Rumble with excited looks on their faces. Cloudchaser then crawled onto the bed seductively, and placed the stethascope not on his chest, but on his testicles. Rumble could feel the chestpiece gently pressing on his testicles, it was actually cold, and surprisingly liked the feeling of it being pressed.

"Oooh. Sounds healthy." said Cloudchaser.

"How does it feel, Rumble?" asked Flitter

"It feels....cold." was all that Rumble could answer

"Don't worry, Rumble." said Cloudchaser.

"It's supposed to be cold." added Flitter

Rumble felt the chest piece unattach from his testicles. Cloudchaser got herself off the bed, and took the eartips from her stethoscope out of her ears, and sat it down on the nightstand.

"Ready for the next part of your checkup, Rumble?" said Flitter

The pegasus colt got a nervous look on his face, and said in his usual innocent voice "I... I guess so."

"Good. Now we just need to... take your temperature." said Flitter, pulling out a thermometer. "Alright, Rumble. Say 'Ah'."

"Aaaaaahhhhhhh." Rumble opened his mouth as Flitter slowly let placed the thermometer in his mouth.

After a long ten seconds, Flitter took the thermometer out of Rumble's mouth, and looked at the scale. "Hmm, ninety degrees, perfectly healthy." said Flitter

"Is there anything else to do?" asked Rumble softly

"Well...." Cloudchaser said, trying to think of anything else for Rumble's Checkup. Suddenly, she thought of an idea, and a devious yet cute smile formed on her face. "Actually yes, I need to check your pee pee to see if it's healthy." she said

Rumble exclaimed a loud "What?!" and he covered his manhood up, and tried to run out of the room while holding his boxers, but Flitter stopped him.

"Don't worry, Rumble." said Flitter softly. "It's nothing bad. It's just normal for a checkup."

Rumble was unconvinced, but he realized he can't win and very reluctantly, he said "Alright."

Flitter smiled, and said "Good. And if you don't want me to look, then that's fine." She let Rumble go, and turned the other way, so she couldn't see Cloudchaser checking Rumble's manhood. "Okay, Cloudchaser. Go ahead." she said

"Thanks, sis." Cloudchaser said back to her. She bent down on her knees, and began to softly rub Rumble's manhood with her hands. Of course, she did notice his manhood was still hard. "Don't worry, Rumble. We'll do some playtime after the checkup is over." she thought in her head.

Rumble couldn't help but noticed Cloudchaser's beautiful round breasts, just right below his manhood. His mouth slightly opened at the sight. "Wow." he said in his head. "those round things looks so beautiful. My big brother must be so lucky to have pretty girls such as Cloudchaser and Flitter."

"It feels great." said Cloudchaser, who just stopped checking on his manhood, and placed her fingers off of it. "Feels very healthy. Good job, squirt." She stood up and gently rubbed Rumble's hair.

Rumble gave a shy smile and said "Y- you're welcome."

"See? that wasn't so bad, was it?" said Flitter

"No. It didn't." admitted Rumble.

"Well...Looks like you passed your checkup." said Cloudchaser

"I did?" said Rumble

"Yep. Looks like you get to have the presents we told you about." said Flitter

Rumble gave out an excited gasp, and said "What are the presents?"

Cloudchaser and Flitter giggled seductively.

"Could you have a seat on the bed first?" said Cloudchaser

"Okay." said Rumble, as he sat down on his bed, still naked. "What are the presents, a lollipop?" He asked with curiosity

Cloudchaser and Flitter giggled again.

"No." said Flitter.

"Something better." added Cloudchaser. At this, Cloudchaser and Flitter took off their nurse hats, and slowly unbutton their nurse uniforms. After the uniforms buttons' were all unattached, the dressed slwoly fell to the floor. Rumble looked at Cloudchaser and Flitter with awe. They were both wearing jet black brassieres, almost leaving their titties exposed. Cloudchaser's breasts were a little larger than Flitters, and her body was a little more slender. They also wore jet black panties. Their slender, beautiful bodies were an amazing sight for Rumble.

"Do you like what you see?" said Cloudchaser seductively.

"Well...I... I..." Rumble didnt't even know what to say at the moment. His cheeks were blushing tomato red.

"Aww. Someone's getting vewy excited by all of this." Cloudchaser baby-talked teasingly.

"Oh yes. Vewy, vewy excited." Flitter added. The twin sisters slowly crawled onto the bed, and Cloudchaser sat her chest on Rumble's pony face with her human face very close to his face. Her nose was almost touching his. She just looked at him seductively, with her chin on her own arms. "You did a very great job with the checkup, Rumble." she said.

"T- thanks." said Rumble, in a very shy voice.

Cloudchaser giggled at his reaction and said seductively "Oh, you're very very welcome, baby." She sat up on her knees, with Flitter next to her. She motioned her first finger at Rumble. "Come here." she said softly yet seductively. Rumble did what she told her, and slowly crawled her way to one of his beautiful foal-sitters. When he was close enough, Cloudchaser slowly pulled his arm towards her beautiful body for a very caring hug, with Rumble's chin on her shoulder. She gave out a sigh as her arms wrapped around Rumble's small body. Rumble felt Cloudchaser's breasts pressing down gently on his chest. All of a sudden, he felt Flitter hugging him as well. At this, Rumble felt sandwiched in between the most beautiful girls he had ever seen. Flitters breasts were pressing on his back. Rumble began to close his eyes in relaxation as Cloudchaser began to softly stroke his back.

"Do you feel comfortable, Rumble?" asked Flitter softly, putting a hand on Rumble's back after Cloudchaser was done stroking it.

"Yeah." said Rumble.

"You look so cute when you are like this, you know?" said Cloudchaer

Rumble however didn't reply. All he said was "Um....no."

"Well, you are, without a doubt, adorable." said Flitter.

Cloudchaser felt Rumble's hard manhood on her soft warm skin. "The poor baby must be dying for us to make him happy." She thought in her head.

"Thunderlane definitely has the most adorable little brother around Ponyville than any-pony else." Flitter thought to herself

"Hey Rumble?" Said Cloudchaser.

"Yeah?" Said Rumble softly

"Would you like me to do something for you?"

"I- I guess so." Was all Rumble could say.

Flitter sat back so that Cloudchaser could let Rumble go from her tender hug.

"Hey Flitter, can you help me?" Said Cloudchaser

"Sure thing." Flitter replied. Flitter gently picked up Rumble and placed his butt on her lap, and she crossed her legs. "Now, watch this, Rumble. Cloudchaser is gong to do something that will make you feel awesome. Have a seat." Said Flitter

"Um... Okay." Said Rumble a little nervous

Cloudchaser placed her hands on Rumble's manhood again, and began rubbing his shaft, very slowly.

Rumble jumped a little and said "Please, don't do that."

"Shhhhhh. It's okay, Rumble. You will love this." Flitter whispered in his ear. She placed her hands on Rumble's arms so he would calm down.

Cloudchaser continued to rub Rumble's shaft. She also softly squeezed it a couple of times. Rumble began to gasp, and quietly moan in pleasure while relaxing his head on Flitter's chest. Cloudchaser giggled in a sexy way and said seductively "Are you enjoying this, kiddo?"

"I- ugh- I- oh-" Rumble was too lost in his ecstasy of pleasure to even say anything

"Sounded like a yes to me." said Flitter

Cloudchaser smiled at Flitter. "That's what I thought." she said. Now, she began tickling Rumble's shaft with her fingers, but slowly and not in a fast way, like how they would usually tickle him when they are foal-sitting him.

"Oh!" Rumble gasped, and twitched "That tickles."

Cloudchaser tickled his hardened testicles, making him twitch a few more times. "Now watch this." said Cloudchaser. She licked her lips seductively, and placed almost his entire shaft into her mouth, gently sucking it. She made small, muffled sighs as she was sucking.

"W-wait!" said Rumble in ecstasy. "I- I- I can't hold it." He gasped as he twitched.

"Don't worry, Rumble, just let it all out." Flitter whispered. "I- I-" he couldn't finish his sentence as felt like he peed in Cloudchaser's mouth. Rumble made gasps and sighs of pleasure as he released a fountain of cum into Cloudchaser. He felt Flitter slowly rubbing his arms.

Cloudchaser let his shaft out of her mouth and now began to slowly lick the head of his manhood, licking the cum off of it. Rumble just continued to gasp and moan with pleasure, as he felt the warm sensation of Cloudchaser's tongue licking his manhood. "It.... it feels so.... ticklish." Rumble thought to himself. "Did- did I just- pee in you- Cloudchaser?" he asked

Cloudchaser stopped licking his manhood for a second. She licked a few spots of cum on her face, and said "Don't worry, little buddy. It's not pee. It's semen, or also know as Cum. It happens when a stallion really, really likes a mare, and when they play with their penis for a long time."

"Are you sure?" asked Rumble, with his leg kind of twitching.

"Positive." said Flitter. "It's perfectly safe to drink."

"Oh. I see." Said Rumble.

"Now here is something else that you will like." Said Cloudchaser. She sat up from her belly and reached her hands towards her back. She undid her black bra, and it slid down to the bed. Her breasts were now, purely exposed. They looked so beautiful and so round. "Sis, could you give us some space?" Cloudchaser asked Flitter

Flitter smiled and said "Sure thing, Cloud." She stood up from the bed, with her hand on her waist.

Cloudchaser now crawled towards Rumble very slowly, am went on top of him. rumble felt his manhood squeezing itself in between Cloudchaser's breasts. She licked Rumble's manhood again, and hearts Rumble gasping and sighing as she felt his cum oozing down his shaft, and the side of her breasts. Cloudchaser was making a few gasps of ecstasy as well. "Oh, Rumble." She said.

"I- hope- you didn't- choke." Said Rumble

"Don't worry, Rumble, I didn't."" Said Cloudchaser softly. She felt Rumble rubbing her breasts with his small hooves, and moaned in pleasure from it.

"You don't mind me doing this, do you?" Asked Rumble in a nervous voice.

Oh no. Of course not. I love this feeling." Said Cloudchaser.

"Good." Said Rumble. "Your boobies look so beautiful."

Cloudchaser giggled and said "that's sweet." She gave Rumble a loving, tender kiss on the forehead. "And u have a beautiful pee pee." She said.

Rumble blushed again and said "thanks." And gave a nervous smile

Flitter then said "Cloudchaser, Can I have a turn with him?"

"Sure thing, sis." Cloudchaser replied. She got up from the bed and Flitter took her place. "Looks like it's Litter's turn to suck and lick your privates." She said to Rumble. Rumble was now on Cloudchaser's lap now, and felt her hands on his arms. Flitter began to rub Rumble's little pony shaft shaft

"You're privates are so smooth, and so... Soft." Said Flitter

"T- thank you." Said Rumble

"Oh you are so very welcome." Said Flitter. She tickled Rumble's shaft, and then his tentacles. "tickle tickle tickle." she said in a teasing voice. however, like Cloudchaser, she only tickled slowly.

"oh not again." said Rumble with a few gasps of pleasure. He rested his head on Cloudchaser's chest this time.

She stopped tickling his manhood and shelicked her lips seductively, just like Cloudchaser did, and put his entire shaft into her mouth this time. She was sucking it for a few long minutes, and heard Rumble gasp and sigh in pleasure as a fountain of cum sprayed into her mouth. She let his shaft out of her mouth and said "You taste so good, kid."

"Thanks." Said Rumble trying to catch his breath.

Cloudchaser said "how would you like us to show you something else exciting?"

"What's- that?" Asked Rumble

Flitter's older sister giggled softly and said "Flitter, would you like to help me show him what I'm talking about?"

"Of course, Cloudchaser." Said Flitter cheerfully. Cloudchaser slowly lifted Rumble off of her lap, and she, along with Flitter stood up from the bed. They turned around in sexy poses while raising their hands over their heads, letting Rumble see their beautiful asses.

Rumble was now starting to drool a little, and felt a drop of slobber go down his mouth. He saw the back of the sisters' legs, and they both looked very beautiful, and the black leggngs matched them perfectly. The sisters looked back, and saw Rumble lost for words, making them giggled at his reaction

"I see that you like what you see." Said Flitter sductively

"Yeah, rumble." Said Cloudchaser. "I think you are vewy happy to see what you are seeing." She baby-talked

"I...I love what I see." Rumble admitted.

The girls giggled in a sexy laugh again hearing what he just said.

"I'm glad." Said Flitter

"Can... Can you too please...." Rumble gulped and said "s- snuggle with me?" He waited for an answer, and saw Cloudchaser and Flitter walking towards him seductively.

"Of course we can snuggle with you." Said Cloudchaser in a sisterly voice. "Come here." She said seductively.

Rumble crawled himself in between Cloudchaser and Flitter as they laid on the bed, with both of them in a sexy pose. Rumble felt e each one of Cloudchaser and Flitters hands wrap him. Rumble nudged his head to Cloudchasers chest and Cloudchaser began to rub his back, very softly. She even kissed him a few times on his face, and his cheeks.

"Can I hold him, Sis?" Said Flitter

"Sure thing, Flitter." Cloudchaser replied. Rumble now had the same kind of treatment that Cloudchaser had given him from Flitter now. Like Cloudchaser, Flitter rubbed his back as he started nudging his head to her chest.

Rumble gave out a yawn and the sister giggled at it.

"Awwwww. Someone needs his nap wittle time." Said Cloudchaser in a sing-song voice

"I agree. Wets put this wittle baby to rest." Flitter added.

"What.... St- stay with me." Rumble pleaded.

The sisters smiled and both in unison they said "okay, Rumble." Cloudchaser and Flitter then laid Down next to him, placing their hands on him as he started to sleep. "Sweet dreams, Rumble." They whispered In unison, and then they gave him a good night kiss, as they watched him as he was adorably asleep. The sisters then got up and looked at each-other, with smiles on their faces.

"So are we going to turn back to ponies?" asked Flitter

"Don't worry, sis." said Cloudchaser "The effects of the potion aren't permanent, that's what Zecora said. We will turn back into ponies in six hours."

"Oh, good." said Flitter with relief. "What do you want to do now?"

"Well.... We could take a nap with Rumble for a little while." Cloudchaser suggested.

"Good Idea." said Flitter.

They laid back down on the bed, both facing Rumble with their body sideways, and they placed their hands on Rumble's back. Cloudchaser pulled him close to her, like a teddy bear, and Flitter scooted herself closer to her older sister.

"We love you, Rumble." they whispered tenderly in unison, and slowly fell asleep with him, thirty minutes later.

Author's Note

Please don't hate me if Rumble's not a human. I just didn't know about the rules on this website saying that underage humans, or anthros are not allowed to e involved in sexual actions, please forgive me. Please don't say hateful comments, or say that this tale is pure bull****, because I am a sensitive person.