StarChaser

by StarChaser01
They say that history is written by the winners. But what if an event so terrible happened that there was no winners to write about it?

They say that history is written by the winners. But what if an event so terrible happened that there was no winners to write about it?

This is the story of a Pegasus named StarChaser, who was born into a world that was tearing itself apart, and woke up into a world very much changed from the one that he left...

As this is my first story, criticism is highly appreciated, so long as it's CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. Saying that it sucks doesn't help improve the story while saying WHY it sucks does. Also down voting without giving a reason why is not very helpful...

If I'm missing any tags or anything like that please let me know and I will do my best to fix that in a timely manner (when I get the chance).

All kinds of thanks to Requiem17 for helping me out on this story! Go check out his stories!

8/18 Just realized that chapter 7 probably warrants the use of the "gore" tag...

Teen
On Hiatus
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Alternate Universe
 
TO

10243 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

9 Chapters:

  1. Prologue 2014-07-28 17:50:52 UTC
    821
  2. Chapter 1: As One Life Ends... 2014-07-28 19:57:46 UTC
    735
  3. Chapter 2: ... Another Begins. 2014-07-30 03:38:39 UTC
    979
  4. Chapter 3: Awakening 2014-07-31 01:04:33 UTC
    995
  5. Chapter 4: Progress 2014-08-08 22:26:24 UTC
    1895
  6. Chapter 5: Realizations 2014-08-10 04:33:30 UTC
    1022
  7. Chapter 6: Take 2 2014-08-10 04:51:02 UTC
    1199
  8. Chapter 7: Improvement 2014-08-14 03:45:55 UTC
    1168
  9. Chapter 8: Minor Complications 2014-09-06 01:36:49 UTC
    1429