Invasion of the Machines (Comment Driven Story)

by The One and only One

Rating: teen
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Other, Comedy, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Random, Adventure, Crossover, Human, Main 6
Length: 3236

My comment driven adventures as Mechagodzilla (1975) and my companion Mechagodzilla (1974) in Equestria

(INTERACTIVE STORY)
Some pony's might think that this is a typical LoHAV story, well it is not, a LoHAV story usually starts with the main character getting sucked through a portal while dressed up as a villain at a convention and then arriving at Equestria as that villain. No, my story has me getting sucked into a portal in my own home, living in a hellish limbo for who knows how long. Then coming to Equestria as a villain with another villain from the same franchise as the form you have taken assisting you in anything. These are our adventures.

Please comment even if you don't like the story in order to drive the story in the right direction.

Art by Me.

Published 2014-07-29 21:50:05 UTC
Last updated 2014-07-31 17:30:13 UTC

Prologue: The Void

Author's Note

Beginning part is just to explain how I got to Equestria, if you want to read the after part and hear Applejack speak, go the end of this chapter.

Prologue: The Void

Most people say that the day that changed their lives forever would usually be the cliche...the day I met my soul-mate, the day I got married, the day I have kids, the day I graduated from high school or college, any of those. But not for me, I was only seventeen when that faithful day happened. It was some day after I found out that family was going to go through another divorce. First it was my biological dad and mother, since my biological mom was an irresponsible jerk that did nothing with her life, but now it's because my step-mom is too much of a stress creator for my dad. My dad is okay, he can be a little pushy in the afternoon after having too many drinks.

Oh, how rude of me, I forgot to introduce myself. Hi I'm Emilio, I'm in high school, average build, black hair, etc.

Back to what i was saying, it was just like any other day for me, waking up in the best room in the house since I had the largest (40 inch) and only flat-screen TV/computer in the house and only one in the house with retro devices like a laserdisc player, cassette deck, 8-track deck, and a VHS player...with surround sound. Yes I also had the basic DVD and Blu-ray players, but back to the story.

Got up, played on my computer, going to Fimfiction, Deviantart, Youtube, etc. Then did the morning chores as usual, took shower, blah, blah, blah. So it was around four o' clock in the afternoon when I noticed my TV was acting funny, it had spirals flying about the screen, I looked at it some more before tripping over a sock, my hand hitting the TV screen. I expected my hand to crack the screen, but instead the screen turned into a bright white light that absorbed my hand.

The only thing I said was, "What the fuck," before the light started to suck me into the TV, I attempted to stop it, but it was no use, so grabbed the largest thing i could grab, which was my Ipod and started to whack the frame of the TV in hopes of breaking the TV and ending this madness.

Whack! "Come on."

Whack! "Come on break it already!"

Whack! "JUST BREAK ALREADY DAMN IT!!!"

Crack! Whack!

As the frame started to break the screen turned off and it spit me out, "Thank god," I looked over and looked at the TV, "at least the TV looks like it will still work, what was that anyway?" I got up and grabbed my Ipod, which fell out my hand when I was thrown at the bed, I was glad to see that little to no damage was done to the Ipod. I looked back at the TV suspiciously before slowly waking towards my bedroom door in hopes that this weird experience was over, but nooo! I try to open the door, but it wouldn't budge. Next thing I know my room gets all dark with the only light being a reddish hue coming from behind. I turn around to see that the red hue was coming from the TV, which now had glowing tendrils sticking out of it, each one latched onto everything electrical in my room.

"What the..." I see one free tendril quickly fly around and wrapped itself around me and my Ipod.

"...Fuck Me"

The thing yanks me, causing me to fall onto the floor, the tendril dragging me to what appears to be my doom, as I look around I see all my electrical devices disappear around me, leaving anything that was not powered by some form of electricity. then I realized the one thing i forgot to do...yell for help.

"HELP HELP MY TV IS EATING ME ALIVE HELP!!!" But it was useless since my room was sound proof...should have that ahead about that.

As I was now slowly being consumed by the thing, spinning in fast circles, which was making me sick, I said the best words for the situation.

"IN MY LAST BREATH, I CURSE ZOIDBERG!!!"

The everything went black...not like out cold black, I was sure that I was still awake. It was pure darkness, absolutely pure. I no longer felt the tendril around me as I continued to float within the darkness. I still felt my Ipod in my hand and turned on the flashlight in hopes of being able to see more of what was within the darkness. All I could see though was all of my stuff orbiting around me.

"Mmm...looks like I'm the largest thing here then, bigger question is what here is?" I looked around some more before looking down at my Ipod, "Well...since I'm here I should play something that goes good with my situation."

So I scrolled through all my songs while I continued to float within the darkness. You may be wondering why I'm so calm about this whole thing, well that's because one of my philosophies in life was that you must always be optimistic, another one is that one must both embrace both the good and evil within one 's self in order to bring true happiness.

Okay...so back to the story, I'm floating in a weightless abyss of darkness with loads of technology orbiting around me as I listened to fitting music. I don't know how long I was in there, but I'm sure it was more than a day. Why? Because for some reason this place had so sense of any law of the universe because my Ipod continued to run even after the battery bar had hit zero and that my Ipod's internal calender said so.

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It had been already twenty-two days since I came to this void and I think I was starting to get lonely...and a little loopy.

"Thank goodness for all the music I have on this little guy, ain't that right bluey!" I turned to face the floating Blu-ray player passing by.

"..." The Blu-ray did not respond, but I didn't care.

"I know right...you know what I just realized everyone?" I said happily as I stared at the Ipod's screen.

"..."

"It's that I should be dead since I haven't eaten or drank anything that I would need to sustain myself. Oh and that I also haven't taken my medication in forever. Isn't that just hilarious!" The giddily laughed as I continued to float in the world of the impossible.

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"Emilio's log date April 20, 2015, it's now been one year since i came to this world and you know what...it sucks. There is no one to talk to, heck it has gotten to the point that I am talking to myself and the objects. At first it was just for fun, but now it's just getting creepy. I swear upon my life that I'm not the only living thing in here, since there are times that I hear something breathing down my neck, but when I turn around there is nothing there. In fact I'm starting to freak out cause of it. End Log"

Yes I started typing down logs onto my Ipod and reading them out loud to all my electrical devices/friends and whoever else was out there. I also wonder if my friends and family miss me...not sure, by now I have probably been presumed dead or something like that and it seems as though there is no way out of this god forsaken place.

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"Emilio's log date September 22, 2017, it has been over three years since I have been trapped inside this void of darkness. Everything is going well, I figured out that everything is able to be turned on and used without any external power source. With that I was able to play around on my computer (no internet) and play some Halo and other games. Isn't that fantastic, but I fear that this solitude is slowly peeling away at my sanity since I thought I saw a light yesterday not too far away from here. Also I had that strange feeling again, but i shrugged it off. Happy Place...Happy Place. End log."

I swear I had lost it by now, I did find that this world was getting smaller or was I just getting bigger...oh well the reason was because I was able to find and touch all the borders of the once endless void within a couple of minutes now. What I also wondered was the fate of my favorite TV shows, like MLP FIM and Doctor Who, but I digress. There are more important things to worry about, like how am I going to continue to exist since this place is getting smaller every day.

Out of nowhere a flash of light appears before my eyes, blinding me for a short moment due to my adjustment to the darkness, but when my eyes open, I saw the most beautiful thing a lonely person like me has seen in forever, a swirling circle of colors that were so inviting.

"So pretty..." I said in a daze as I slowly shifted myself in order to get closer to it. The next thing I did in my state of stupidity was touch it, not poke it, not punch it, just a slight peck with my finger. The swirling stopped as the circle rippled around my finger, but then BOOM! The rainbow exploded around me, all my stuff struggled to keep orbit around me as I was thrown around the swirling room of rainbow death.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!" I yelled out as I could feel my clothes and flesh rip away from me. Blood gushing from my body as I screamed. The pain was greater than the force of a thousand suns. I could feel my entire being slip away as my muscles started turning into dust, along with the rest of my pitiful body. Organs flew out of my body, as though they were trying to escape, my heart exploded into a billion peaces while my eyes began to bulge out of mt face. My stuff, the things that followed me on my journey to madness, which were now melting in front of my fucked up eyes, rammed onto my disintegrating body, attempting to fuse themselves as I continued to scream in agonizing pain. I started to smell the scent of burning flesh and plastic in my other hand as I realized that my Ipod had melted into it.

I yelled out, "FUCK...YOU...RAINBOWWWWWWwwwwwwww" before my head burst open, brain matter and blood spewing out as I took my last breathes.

"Rainbow of do-om...to the last...I gr-apple with thee...from he-ll's heart...I stab a-t thee..." I coughed up some blood before it too turned into dust, "F-or...hate's sa-ke...I...I...I...s-pit...my last-breath...at thee."

Then I died as the rest of my body, scared by the evils of the rainbow, turned to dust, and that dust turned to atoms, and then those atoms compressed together and dissipated in a flash of light.

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I fell, metal clanging and tree branches snapping as I plummeted through a forest canopy, to land flat on my back, my vision flickering incessantly like a bad video connection. I struggled to my feet, stumbling as my legs sent feedback to my brain that felt like my lower limbs had gained some weight. I looked around to see that I was in a large apple orchard of some sort, but the view looked a bit cartoonish to be real.

"Chrrrrrrrr!"

I turn around to see...MECHAGODZILLA (1974). I start going all fanboy on his ass by running over to him and looking him over, unaware that he was also overlooking me.

I tried to say "COOL!" but the only thing that came out was also a "CHRRRRR!"

I realize that something was really wrong as I look at my hands to find that I was looking at Mechagodzilla's (1975) hands, as for anyone who knows about MG and MG II I was unable to move my fingers at all. I was about to freak out before we both heard someone yell at us.

"What in tarnation!"

Be both turn to see...Applejack?! She was looking at us with fear in her eyes before she turned and ran.I look back at MG as he looks back at me.

What should we do?

Could you guys please leave a comment?

...Meanwhile at the Castle of Friendship...

She couldn't stop.

No matter how loudly her brain shouted and cursed for her to do so, Twilight Sparkle just could stop reading.

She'd tried of course. From the very first book, she already read some of them before. At first she promptly slammed them face-first onto her desk, and walked away. Of course, pacing around them, picking one up, and reading it every ten minutes didn't help.

“Twilight…” she heard Spike mutter behind her. “You need to stop.”

Twilight lifted her sore cheeks off her hooves and rubbed her dry eyes. “Oh, hush, Spike. I've said it once, and I'll say it again: I can stop anytime I want,” she said.

It wasn't too long ago since Twilight became a princess. Since then, she was mystified about her future, and her place in Equestria. Thanks to her friends, and a very unlikely draconequus, she has now known her true destiny: to spread the magic of friendship throughout Equestria, keeping peace and tranquility in her homeland.

The reason she continued to read was because if she wasn't, she would sometimes think to herself. She would think about her new role, how that might affect the world she lives in. How others see her, how her friends see her, how the princesses see her, Twilight would spend hours on these assumptions until her mind drifted off into slumber. She was really glad Spike was with her from now on whenever she sat on that lone grassy knoll, thinking of the future, even if she didn't show it.

Twilight stood up from her seated position and looked back. “Spike, do you mind cleaning the-“

No need. Her number one assistant had already cleaned the entire library section of the castle. Spike stood proudly with a broom in his arm and the dustpan in the other. Twilight smiled, though it vanished when she noticed that Spike was trying his hardest to conceal a yawn.

“Come on, Spike,” Twilight said and slowly made her way over to him. She softly rubbed his scales while he willingly letting out a yawn, said to him, “You need to get some sleep. You can ride on my back on the way to your room.”

Before he could reply they both heard the echo of somepony beating on the castle doors.

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...Earlier...

Considering her occupation, Fluttershy should have been used to it.

It wasn't often her cottage was filled to the ceiling with pairs of every woodland creature in existence, but Fluttershy was nothing if not tolerant. And she was very tolerant. She'd always take every frenzied squeak, chirp, and roar in with a smile that could make any criminal turn himself in, and she'd soothe them with that voice that sang without singing.

Today, she panicked with them. Justified, of course. She was just informed by Applejack that she saw two giant metal dragons at the orchard.

There was a loud knock at the door, "Come on Fluttershy, we need to get going to Twilight's before we head back to the orchard!" Rainbow Dash yelled.

Fluttershy curled up into the corner of her cottage before she heard the sound of her door slamming open. With an agitated Rainbow Dash flying in.

“Fluttershy?!” Rainbow Dash shouted, gesturing to the blackened horizon. “Do you understand what we are saying?! We have to get going now!”

Applejack shoved the furious pegasus aside with a huff. “Sugarcube, what Rainbow is trying to say is that we have to get going in hopes of stopping those...things before anything bad happens,” she said.

“Indeed,” Rarity added. “ And judging what I've heard…”

Fluttershy blanched. “Oh, no! I-I’m so sorry. I didn’t mean to…”

Applejack shrugged and said, “S’okay, ‘Shy. Ah understand how ya feel.”

Fluttershy turned back to Applejack. “But where’s Pinkie Pie?”

"Pinkie ran off ahead to get Twilight to save time. So lets get going." said Rainbow Dash before flying out of the cottage, with everypony else following.

Author's Note

Look...another chapter...but this one was made with no comments...why is that...because no one is writing comments...could you gentlemen/ladies please write down a comment on what should happen next?

The Adventure Begins

I stare into the orange eyes of my...friend and then back towards the direction Applejack just ran from.

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I turn back again to see that Mechagodzilla is wandering around aimlessly in the orchard. Then the cold reality of the situation hits me. I decided it was a good time to freak out, and allowed my body to fall to the ground, shuddered, convulsing, and rattling in fear.

ChurrwrwrwrwrwChuwrwrwrwrwChshuuuuuChurrwrwrwrw

I continued to spaz out on the ground, reliving my nightmare in the void, but outside the void, trying to figure out how my life came to being stuck inside a machine of mass destruction with another machine of equal destruction wandering behind me. I continue to do this for who knows how long before something kicked me in the back of my head.

Chrrrrrrrrrrr!

I look up to see my companion staring down at me, as if he was looking deep into my soul, if I still have one. In some strange way I could understand why he kicked me. As if he knows that scrambling in the dirt isn't going to fix my problems. I slowly get up with the help of MG1 due to my limited articulation.

Chrwrwrwrrrrrr!

Chrrrrrrrr!

Once I was up I was able to focus better on the situation. First thing is that we had to get out of the orchard since Applejack probably ran off to get the rest of the main six. The second thing would be to figure out how we got here in the first place. And third was to try and enjoy what we have without causing any trouble.
ChrwrewrwrwrwuuurrrChuChuChrrrrrrChwrwr

I do my best to tell MG1 what the plan was with random sounds and hand gestures. He seemed to understand as he begins to follow me in the opposite direction that Applejack ran and hope that mt episode didn't wasn't too much time.

Unbeknownst to either of us was that a set of red and yellow eyes were watching us from a distance.

"This will definitely be interesting...and chaotic..."

What will happen next!

Author's Note

Ok second chapter is in, also since this is my first comment driven story, expect the chapters to be from 400 to 1000 words long in the beginning.