Fifty Shades of Mare

by Dragon Feather

Rating: mature
Tags: Sex, Princess Celestia, Dark, Alternate Universe, Granny Smith, Anthro, Romance, Changelings, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 13183

The story of Victoria Smith (Young Granny Smith) as she finds out who she is, experiences true pleasure, and finds a love that transcends the mere flesh to touch the soul.

It had all been for my Master, Noble Storm, or that's what I told myself after I fell in love with my husband, married, and started a family. I had sinned and tasted forbidden fruits long before my husband showed them to me but upon that altar of marriage that was our wedding night. I lied and told him sweet lies so he wouldn't know the truth. It was my Master that gave me this sinful desire and the knowledge to pleasure stallion and mare alike. It was all for the love of my Master I did those things, or so it was the sweet lies that I told myself.

In truth, it was partly for him and partly for me as I wanted to find the truth of my soul, the truth of my flesh. In the beginning, I obeyed out of the lust I felt for him, I desired him as any mare would desire a stallion of Noble Storm's breeding, refinement and status back then. So it was only natural that I would want to be with him and to do that I would have to obey his every command. I became his slave and to that end I found myself, I found the truth of what and who I am. In his hands did he mold me into a powerful, confident, and dominant mare until I stood at his side as an equal. It was then that my feelings for him changed and I truly began my journey into the truth of sex and love. A journey into the shades of a pony's soul that shows the worth of that pony be they stallion or mare or something in between...

This is my story this is the tale of my journey from simple country mare into a Goddess in her own right, this story is the tale of my path to love and the pleasures and hardships felt in that wake of that journey. By reading this I hope you will see the truth in your own soul and find your own path to being who you truly are... This a tale Fifty Shades of Mare...

Warning: This story is a semi-serious parody of Fifty Shades of Grey and may contain several forms of bondage, S&M, fetish play, light humiliation, food play, watersports, and several other sexual themes that many people may find offense. All of these things that will appear in this story are not in any way shape or form the true views of either writer of this work of fiction. If you are offended by anything you read in this work of fiction my co-writer and I apologize for offending you and ask to you kindly stop reading our work and move along.

This story is one of several prequel stories of events or backgrounds to characters and events that happen in several stories connected in the Dragonverse series of stories. This story happens before the events of Filly-foolin: An Applejack story and Chasing Savyna. This story was made to explain about Granny Smith and why she knows some of the things she knows and to explain some of her wilder behavior later in Filly-foolin: An Applejack Story.

A big thank you to my co-writer and proofreader Rose for all of her help as she was the one that made this story possible.

As always please leave a comment and let us know how you feel about our work.

Published 2014-08-04 18:20:01 UTC
Last updated 2014-11-13 02:55:35 UTC

Shade One: My Teacher

Fifty Shades of Mare

Written by Dragon Feather
Co-written by Rose

It was nearly ninety years ago when I first met the stallion that would teach me the ways of sex, lust, and pleasure. The stallion I would call Master for so long only to become an equal alongside him some time later. Yes, my Master was a stallion of noble birth, a stallion of pride and refinement that would take a simple country mare like myself and turn her into a pony of divine sexual pleasure and debauchery. Under his firm commanding hand, I would become a Mistress of kinky acts and sexual lewdness, a mare who lusted to be used and to use ponies in the most sexual and erotic ways possible. I am Victoria Smith, many of you know me as Granny Smith of the Apple Family but I was and still am Victoria Smith, Mistress of Divine Debauchery and this is my tale, the tale of Fifty Shades of Mare...

Shade One: My Teacher

It was during Ponyville's tenth Anniversary that I met my Master Noble Storm, I remember it well because that year I had just turned 18 and was a mare of quiet beauty. Princess Celestia had just arrived in Ponyville to help celebrate the town's ten years of hard work and prosperity since no one had lived in the area for nearly 900 years, around the time Princess Luna had been banished to the moon. The whole town had spent the last week or so decorating and getting ready for the royal visit for the celebration and it had been the Apple Family's job to prepare all of the food for the party. I had been in charge of making up as much Zap apple jam as possible. While it had been hard work, I was happy to have it done with since the Princess was going to be tasting it for the first time, that fact alone made me nervous and excited for the whole event.

Everything had gone well for the Royal arrival and the Princess had even arrived with a host of nobles that had wanted to see our little town now that it was no longer a simple settlement. Someponies had said it was because the nobles in Canterlot wanted to see what so much of the treasury had been spent in the last ten years, others said it was because Celestia was interested in seeing why ponies would settle so close to the Everfree Forest. Still, others thought it had been said that the royal visit had something to do with our town being most earth ponies. As if the ponies of Ponyville were trying to be separatists, like we were trying to go back to the days when the three tribes fought each other. As if we would really do something so stupid, I mean starting and growing Ponyville as a town had been a long and hard process and a lot of bits had been needed to ensure its success. Why would we go through all of that only to break away now? We needed the magic of both unicorns and pegasi to make the town and the weather run right. No, I had to believe that now that our town was finally self-sufficient the Mayor just wanted to show the Royals and Nobles of Canterlot that Ponyville didn't need any more support and was ready to contribute to Equestria like all of it's other cities.

It was just after the Princess' speech about how happy she was to be so warmly welcomed to Ponyville and how grand our town had become in such a short period of time that I noticed him; Noble Storm. He was a tall, handsome stallion of grace and refinement, his coat was gray with black dappling, his mane was long and black in color, pulled back in a ponytail held in place by a blue ribbon. Part of his bangs lay over his right eye shielding the bright purple gem from view, his tail was the same color back but braided up with a blue ribbon on it just like his mane. His wings were the same shade of gray with black dappling expect for the last row of flight feathers which were solid black. He wore a fine black and blue silk suit trimmed in silver and white with his initials monogrammed on the breast pocket of the suit.

Of all the nobles mixing and mingling with the crowd of simple pony folk, he looked the most bored. I had been moving about the crowd passing out small samples of Zap apple jam on a small bit of toast or little cake rounds when I spotted him. Noble Storm seemed so out of place in the crowd. I mean all of the nobles looked out of place even with all of the folks of Ponyville in their finest clothes, but he looked the most out of place with that seemingly bored yet content look upon his face. It was as if he was lost in his thoughts as the ponies move around him. Even the fact that the Princess was mingling only a few steps away from him didn't seem interested the pegasus one bit. I caught myself staring at him and when I thought he saw me staring I quickly blushed and looked away to continue my work. Once the tray I had was empty and I had told several ponies about Sweet Apple Acres and Zap apple jam I tried to find the handsome and bored stallion again.

When I looked back to where he had been standing moments earlier find him again,but to my disappointment, he was gone. I gave a softly defeated sigh, while I knew that a stallion of noble birth like him would have no interesting in a simple country mare like me I still would have like to spoken to him at least once. I tried to look for him again but didn't see him no matter where I looked so as I was about to give up was when I felt the presence of somepony behind me. I stiffened at the feeling of the presence. Behind me was a stallion, a very large and imposing stallion. Soon my vision was filled with his towering shadow, the heavy scent of stallion and expensive cologne that smelled of tree sap leather and aged oak wood filled my nose at that same moment. I took a few short breaths to calm my racing heart before I turned to see who was behind me. When I turned around my eyes were filled with a much closer vision of the once bored stallion from before. His purple eyes were half lidded and still as if he was displeased or uninterested in what was in front of him. he was tall, a good foot taller than me making him about 6'7 in height. His presence was powerful, regal, and commanding all at once but simple, calm, and inviting as well.

“Well hello young miss, I am Noble Storm of House Windgale in Canterlot.” Noble Storm said as he lightly took my left hand in his and kissed the back of it. “Who might you be miss?” He asked me softly, his tone gently like a summer breeze yet still commanding with deep masculine hints and reverberation.

I just stared at him as he held on to my left hand gently while my right hand and arm clutched the round tray, I had from earlier, close to my chest of my blue and white sundress. My lips parted a bit as if to speak but no words come out. My face was flushed red at the fact this handsome noble stallion had called me miss, kissed my hand as if I were a lady from Canterlot, and wanted to know my name. I couldn't breathe or think let alone talk to him to tell him my name. What was my name anyway? Did I just forget my name? What was it anyway, I know it starts with V. Oh horseapples, I had forgotten my name, I was so excited and nervous at the same time I had lost myself and forgotten my manners altogether.

“Well miss what is your name?” Noble Storm asked me seconds later while I just stared at him blushing hard like a foal that had just been caught stealing cookies. I let out a soft giggle as I tried to remember my name to tell it to Noble Storm. I cleared my throat and shook my head a bit “Well Ah pleased ta meet ya Noble Storm mah name is Victoria Smith. Ah'm a member of the Apple Family that runs the apple farm here in Ponyville.” I told Noble Storm with a bit of a quiver in my voice.

“Victoria Smith?” It sounded more like a statement than a question when he said it in that calm but stern tone of his, the sound of his voice made me melt inside. I could feel myself getting excited by just staring at him. I was like a schoolyard filly standing in front of her crush right before the fall dance. I quickly nodded yes to him and he smiles for a brief second before the previous look returned undaunted. “Well, Victoria Smith I noticed you watching me, why is that?” He asked me without taking his eyes off of me.

While he held my hand I had not really looked up at him I just stared at his chest, I don't know why but I found it hard to look at him. It was if I need his permission to look directly at him and to do so without it was like committing a great sin or something to that effect. When he questioned me about staring at him I had to look up to see his eyes reflect an aura of command that made me jumped a little. It was like looking into the eyes of my father when he was angry with me but it was also different too, there was something else there. Something powerful and mysterious lurking behinds that bored stare. I made a soft squeak before I open my mouth to answer him.

“Ah'm sorry Sir Ah didn't mean ta upset ya by startin'. Ah just noticed that ya look somewhat bored with the party and Ah was goin' ta try and cheer ya up.” I told him quickly hope it would make him happy that I answered quickly and truthfully.

“Sir is it now, Victoria?” Noble asked me before he let go my hand I just nodded yes quickly. Seconds after I had pulled it back he had his hand under my chin and lifted my head gently until I was staring him in the eyes, those commanding purple eyes. “You are the first mare I have met in a long time that has willing call me, sir. Tell me how old are you, Victoria?”

The question shocked me and I paused for a long while and I just stared at him. I don't how long I stared at him like a lost puppy but it felt like forever. Soon I become aware, dimly at first, of all of the ponies moving around us. All around us, ponies moved about the many booths and stalls set up for the celebration, many were talking about every from the thing the latest fashions in Manehattan to politics in Canterlot. None of that seemed to matter, no pony seemed to notice us stand next to the grand stage. No pony notice the regal pegasus stallion or the simple earth pony mare he held in the spell cast by his commanding purple eyes.

“How old are you?” Came Noble's voice again, this time, it was bit more commanding and I jump a little at the sound of it. “18 as of a few days ago, Sir. Is mah age a problem fer ya, Sir?” I asked softly not wanting him to reject me because I was 18. I had heard that some nobles in Canterlot like the mares at that almost still a filly age. I silently prayed that Noble Storm wasn't one of those types of nobles.

“No.” He said flatly seconds later.”If you had been any younger I would have told you to forget about me and those thoughts you have of me. You are old enough to choose what I will offer you but that will come later. Right now tell about yourself.” Noble Storm asked me in that same stern authoritative tone. Once again my body shook with pleasure at hearing it. It was like some wonderful drug and every time he gave a command I just vibrated with pleasure.

I got ready to open my mouth to speak when Noble looked around and silenced me with one finger to my lips. “No, not here. Let us go for a walk Victoria Smith and then you will tell me all about yourself.” Noble Storm commanded. I didn't say a word I just nodded and place my tray on one of the open tables and followed behind Noble Storm as we left from in front of the town hall and traveled to the edge of town.

We walked to the very edge of the town close to where the new park was to be built in the next few days when we finally came to a stop. There were very few ponies around as most were still in the center of town or being shown around. I stood next to Noble near a tall willow tree in the shade of its branches as the shadows of night fell on us in the fading light of the setting sun. While we stood there in silence I stole little looks at Noble's face trying to see what he was thinking. He still wore that same uninterested expression as he stared off into the distance. Soon the ponies that had been nearby touring the site of the new park yet to be built retreated to the warmth of the party in front of town hall. This left Noble Storm and me in the near darkness with the glow of Ponyville at our backs.

“You have been staring at me this whole time yet you haven't asked me yet, why?” Noble questioned me without taking his eyes off of the distance point in the meadow he had been watching before us.

“Ah... well Ah really don't have a question fer ya... Ah was... what Ah mean is...” I couldn't make up my mind about if I should ask him why he wanted to be alone with me for us to talk or what he meant by me choosing something he would offer me later.

“You seemed confused about what you want to know so I will make it simple for you,” Noble told me before turning to face me. “You will ask me the two questions that burn within you, the first will be why I have brought you here to speak away from everypony else and the second question will be the most important one. I will not tell you what is, you must find it on your own.” Again I felt that same excited thrill when he commanded me to do something.

I looked at him with a curious look on my soft features, why did I like the feeling of this stallion commanding me? Why did his mere presence make my marehood tingle? I was 18 years old, I had been thru many estrus seasons already, I had even touch myself on several occasions outside of estrus as young filly and well after I became a mare in my own right, but none of that compared to the feeling I got from being in the commanding aura of Noble Storm. It was like I had to obey him, it didn't feel right to not obey his gentle commands.

“Are you still conflicted or have you just lost interest in me already?” Noble asked as he gently steps closer to me. His movements were more out of concern than him being predatory all though if you walked in on the situation as it stood you would have seen it the other way round. I really did look like a fawn being stocked by a wolf but the wolf in front of me would not strike until I allowed him.

Once again my senses were awash in his presence and scent, it made me grow weak in the knees and I had to take a few quick breaths to steady myself before I decided to open my mouth and do as he had told me moments earlier. “No, Sir Ah haven't lost interest in you. Ah, be a right fool ta say somethin' like that. No, Ah am conflicted as ta why you would choose ta talk ta a simple country mare like me. Ah was wonderin' what it was about me that made ya ask ta know me?” I finally asked him.

“It a simple answer Victoria I see it in you. You have a need for, no, you want a stallion like me in your life. I saw it in you when I first laid eyes on you I just need to know if you wanted it. If you understand it, then you will see it was I you craved all alone.” Noble told with a slight rise in the excitement level of his voice. After he spoke a smile graced his face and for a brief moment his eyes showed an intense interest in them before returning to their normal bored state.

Did I have a craving for a stallion as commanding as Noble? Did I truly desire him even though I didn't know him yet? What was this it thing he spoke of? I was confused but one thing was true I did feel a strong attraction to him.

“It's true Ah do feel an attraction ta ya. Ah find mahself drawn ta ya fer some strange reason but Ah don't ...Ah, don't know if Ah should...” I told him blushing bright red as I turn away from him hiding my face.

Moments later I felt his powerful hands on my shoulder, next was the warm of his breath in my ear as he whispered to me. “You need not worry about what the other nobles or the ponies of this town will think. I will handle all of that when the time comes, right now I want to know what you want? Tell what you desire Victoria?” He asked me with low husky tone, the tone a lover would use to bring out his mare's long pent up desires.

“Ah want... Ah, want... ta know what ya have ta offer me?” I asked him in the same low tone, feeling my chest heave a bit. I felt myself begin to become a little weak in knees and fought to keep still, it was just something about Noble's voice that made me seem this way, like a voice in a dream I’ve known all my life, and I found myself excited and a bit frightened at the same time.

“I offer you the chance to find out who you are. I offer you the chance to know the pleasures of the world, the pleasure of your body, the pleasures of others. I offer you the chance to release the Goddess within... You only have to say yes.” Noble Storm whispered, the sound of his voice made me shiver as my breath grew shallow and I give a whimper of delight.

“What if... what if Ah want ta quit later on? Can Ah?” I asked him as I leaned back into his embrace letting out a soft moan. Soon I felt him take hold of me, I felt his lips graze my neck as his hands gently caressed my arm, then they seemly found their way to my breasts without breaking rhythm.

When I felt him touch me intimately, I did not become frighten or try to stop him, I just moaned soft and let myself fall into the feeling of become held and loved by a strong stallion. “If'n Ah w-w-want taa stop will ya letttt … me?” I asked through my soft pants and moans.

“I will be your Teacher, your Guide, your Master, but you will have all of the power. You will be the one to decide how far we will go, how much or little you will do as I show you another world beyond the simple one you know now.” Noble Storm told me softly as he laid kisses along my neck until he made it to my cheek. Seconds later he spun me around and drew me into a long passionate kiss.

As we connected thru the kiss I felt his lips part and his tongue press into my lips softly. I closed my eyes and parted my lips allowing his tongue entry to taste my sweetness. Our kiss deepened as my tongue playfully fought his for control but I dare not win against my Master just yet. It was moments later when we separated for air did I see my Master true face, his true excitement at finding me, his purple eyes were shining with a pleased intent as the started into my soft orange eyes.

“Ha ha ha, It so strange to me that I'm this pleased.” Noble said in a happy almost upbeat tone as he pulled me close to his chest, “you have no idea how much you have surprised me as well as aroused me, my dear Victoria. So tell me my dear do you accept what I offer you or do you wish for this to be like a Midsummer's Night Dream?”

He held me gently to his chest and I could hear the strong thud-thump of his heart, I had the smell of his strong musk and cologne filling my nose with each of my heavy breaths as I tried to think. My mind was so clouded with thoughts of Noble Storm and my body was so aroused that it was hard to put thoughts in the proper order to decided on anything. After trying several times to form words to express my true feelings and failing I pushed myself away from Noble Storm as I tried to clear my head to answer him.

“If'n Ah choose yer offer then will Ah have ta leave mah family and Ponyville?” I asked him as I finally got control of myself to ask clear questions.

“No, you will not have to leave your family or Ponyville permanently but you will have to come to my estate in Canterlot for a few days every once in a while. Other then those time for special training I will just buy a place here in town for us to use during your training.” Noble explained softly.

“If Ah can quit whenever Ah want and Ah don't have ta leave my new home and family Ah want ta know more bout what ya have ta teach me bout the pleasures of mah body and... the bodies of others,” I told Noble Storm with a blush crossing my face.

“Excellent, I knew you were the one I was looking for.” Noble's voice became normal for the first time since I had met him. “In the next few days, I will be buying some land in the area and setting up a house for us to use. Once that's done I will send for you Victoria so tell no pony of our relationship or of what you will be doing. This is the only rule I will not tolerate being broken for many will not understand the things I will show you. If you break this rule it will end our relationship immediately and I will do everything in my power to erase any associations we will share even if that means destroying your family. Do you understand and accept this?”

“Yes, Ah understand. No pony is ta know bout us or what we do. Are there any other rules?” I asked wanting to know everything to safeguard my family and friends while still find out about myself.

“Yes there are more rules but they will come later as you go thru your training. For now just, concentrate on rule one and readying yourself for your training my dear Victoria Smith. In a few days, I will send a box with a few things for you read and learn to use before your first lesson. A few days after you receive your box I will send a carriage for you to bring you to me for your first lesson.”

“Okay Ah understand all that but what now M-m-master?” I asked my Master softly wondering what we would do next.

“In public call me Noble Storm, or Noble, or Sir if you like but in private or at special events you will call me Master and I will call you a slave or some other term referring to you as property. Does this bother you?” Noble asked me as he looked at me with concern in his eyes.

“No, it doesn't if'n it means that ya'll be the one commandin' me. Ah'll be the one ta decide how far Ah want this ta go, right?” I asked Noble as I move closer to him until I was pressed up against his chest again taking in his heavy scent.

He wrapped his arms around me and held me close before he spoke. “Yes you will and at first, you'll find it all so strange but after a while, you will wonder how you lived without such pleasures. That is still some time away, right now I just want to learn everything about you, my sweet Victoria Smith of the Apple Family.” Noble told me in that simple dominant tone of his.

“Well Ah hope ya have all night cause there is a lot to tell about the Apple Family and there is a lot to tell ya bout me, Victoria, yer mare now and forever,” I told him as I looked up and puckered my lips in a kiss just before I closed my eyes. Seconds later I felt his lips on mine confirming that he wanted me as his mare forever.

“Yes I have all night my sweet Victoria, my mare forever. Tell all about you and leave nothing out.” Noble told me as he picked me up and carried me over to the base of the Willow tree we had been standing by before he sat down with me in his lap and covered me with his wings to keep me warm. We spoke long into the night getting to know each other as friends before our student/teacher and master/slave relationship began....

Shade Two: My First Punishment and My Training Begins

Fifty Shades of Mare

Written by Dragon Feather
Co-written by Rose

It was nearly ninety years ago when I first met Noble Storm, my Master, my Teacher, my first Lover, who would teach me the ways of sex, lust, and pleasure. Noble Storm, the stallion I would call Master for so long only to become an equal along side him with my own slaves and pets, the first stallion I have ever loved truly with an honest heart. Yes he was the start of my journey from simple country mare into a pony of divine sexual pleasure and debauchery, oh but the path I would take would be filled with many hard and erotic lessons. I would learn so many things about myself and my body as Noble Storm trained and pleasured me, first as his slave then later as his lover and equal. I would find that being naughty has its price but sometimes it's the only to find what's truly pleasurable. I am Victoria Smith, many of you know me as Granny Smith of the Apple Family but I was and I still am Victoria Smith, Mistress of Divine Debauchery and this is my tale, the tale of Fifty Shades of Mare...

Shade Two: My First Punishment and My Training Begins

Noble Storm and I spoke long into the night as I told him everything about myself and my family. Noble sat there and listen intently as he took in every detail of my life so far. He asked questions when I spoke of something a noble like him would know next to nothing about. Most of his questions were about apples, care and use. I found there wasn't very much he didn't know about hard working pony folk. Noble Storm's family had rather humble beginnings unlike most of the other noble houses. His family's house had only been a part of the nobility of Canterlot for only the last four generations, one of the youngest houses by far but one of the most influential houses in the royal court to date. Weather control will always be big business and the House Windgale was the biggest name in the weather control business back then as it is now.

Noble's family had been weather farmers as they were called in the beginning, Pegasi that seeded, cultivated, and harvested clouds of all types for buildings in Pegasi settlements and towns to all of the different types of weather used all over Equestria. Thunderstorm the Third, a wise but simple living pegasus, saw that he could provide a legacy and security for his family by doing what he did best, making clouds and managing weather systems. After ten long and hard years of rounding up the best fliers and weather ponies in all of Equestria at the time to work for him and the using his head for business and weather management, the Windgale family had become the leading name in weather control in just ten short years after that. Since the Windgale family had gain so much power in such a short period of time fights broke out over who would be allied with them politically and financially. Everypony with bit of power or influence wanted to be close to them, especially the nobles of capital. The fiercest fight over who would gain the favor of the Windgale family happened amongst the largest of the noble families. It was getting to the point of bloodshed so Thunderstorm had to seek aid from the Princess. With the aid of Princess Celestia the Windgale family became the newest noble house in Canterlot. The were under the direct control of the throne just so there wouldn't be another storm of political warring and backstabbing as to who would be allied with the Windgale family. Since then the House Windgale has become a name synonymous with the weather in every way, shape, or form.

“Since I was a little colt I have been trained and educated in the fine arts of weather control and cloud manipulation. As a noble I don't have to work at any of the many weather factories that I and my family owns but my father, Cloud Jumper, wanted me to well versed in the many jobs our factory employees do. He insisted I learn everything there is to running the family business from the ground up so to speak. Lead by example and don't ask any pony to do a job you couldn't do yourself he would tell me before and after every lesson. He also wanted me to be well versed in the occupation of, or as he call it the fine art of, cloud herding. It was one of his favorite pass times to my mother's constant worry and social dismay.” Noble explained to me after I asked him about his parents.

“Why did yer ma not like it fer yer pa was teachin' ya ta cloud herd?” I asked innocently.

“It's rather a long and boring story but in the end my mother was more about appearing like all of the other noble families while my father felt that we should never forget our true wild range Pegasus roots and only be proper when it was called for.” Noble said softly. “I, like my father in many ways, believe the same thing wholeheartedly. One should never forget their roots but should act according to their station or as their social position dictates at the appropriate times.”

“Would that mean Ah have ta act all fancy like at one yer parties or get togethers?” I asked softly wondering if I would have to act all snooty to be around my Master if he wanted me at a party with him.

“Yes and no. At a formal party you would be expect to act as a proper lady of the court, but for special parties and events you must behave like an obedient slave should. If you don't, you not only be me punished by me but by the Host of the party and the offended Masters and Mistresses respectively.” Noble explained to me as he caressed my cheek softly.

“Ah hope that Ah don't mess up to bad ta embarrass ya Master. Ah hope ta be an obedient and well like slave fer ya.” I told him with a quiver in my voice.

“Don't fret my dear I have all confidence in you and your ability to become an excellent slave. Now come here and let me taste you sweetness again.” Noble reassured me before drawing me into a long session of kissing.

It wasn't long before I was rather aroused and my marehood was soaking wet. When my Master drew back to let us both get air I asked him if it was okay if we made love right there out in the open for the first time. I truly want him right then, I wanted him to make a real mare out of me. He was firm with his disapproval of my forward behavior and smacked my ass hard telling me no right there. I would have to wait to feel his cock inside of me, to lose my innocence. I was still unruly and wild and yet to learn what was acceptable behavior befitting a slave.

I lowered my head at his admonishments and told my Master I was sorry for misbehaving. He lightly tilt my chin upward to look him in the eyes before he spoke. “You will learn in time when it is right to ask for rewards like that. Now is the time for you to learn the consequences of misbehaving. Stand up and place hands on the tree and stick out your ass. You are not to make a single sound do you understand me?”

“Y-Yes Master.” I squeaked before getting up and moving so he could as well. Once we were both standing I quickly did as I was told and placed my hand firmly on the tree as I spread my legs a bit and stuck my rear out like he told me.

“Do not turn your head to look at me or what I'm doing, keep facing the tree until I say otherwise. You are not to make a sound unless I tell you to least you want your punishment to be harsher. Do you understand Victoria?” Noble asked with his commanding voice.

“Yes Master.” I said softly while I faced the tree as I trembled under his watchful eyes. As I stood there just being watched by the stallion had my heart racing like a runaway cart in seconds. I could feel my marehood twitching hard with each fast thump of her overexcited heart.

I stared at the tree wondering what my Master was going to do to me when I felt his hand on me. He lift my dress with one hand until it was pooling around my waist while two fingers of the other slowly stroke across the wet surface of my white panties. I felt my stomach flutter and I bit my lip to keep from moaning as he caressed my wet cloth covered marehood making it wetter. My Master did this for several minutes until my panties were completely soaked and my love juices were dripping down my thighs. The whole time I was not allowed to make a sound, not a single sound.

Once I was completely soaked Master removed my panties, which were wetly clinging to my arousal swollen pussy, once they were around my ankles he commanded me to step out of them. I was to remain silent the whole time. I nodded I understood before I did as I was told but the whole time I wondered what he was going to do next, I dare not ask him. I found out when I felt him part the lips of my pussy with twp fingers and my clit was flicked roughly. I inhaled sharply at the electric shock the run up my spine and slammed into my brain full force. I bit my lip harder to keep from moaning as my legs began to tremble.

“This is the start of you punishment for being a naughty mare. I will get you close to cumming but you will not get to finish tonight and you're losing your privilege to wear panties tonight as well.” Noble told me firmly. He knew what my next action were long before the thoughts of them formed and he guided me into getting myself punished more. I should have kept my mouth shut and accepted my punishment but I was still fresh to games Master would play with me. Just like a wild mare I would be disobedient just like he wanted me to be.

“Master ya can't do that! Ah have ta have my panties. If'n mah parents find out Ah'm not wearin' mah panties when Ah get home Ah'll never hear the end of it!” I told him as turn head looked at with shock on my face.

Moments after my outburst I felt his hand hit my ass cheek hard leaving a red hand print that made me whimper loudly. A second smack came to the other cheek seconds after I whimpered. Another loud whimper escape my lips as I felt his hand smack my firm backside again and again. Soon both of my ass cheeks were as red as my face and there was small puddle of mud forming between my spread legs from how wet I was. I felt the warm sting from the spanking and it excited me but it as reminded me that I had been disobedient and I was in the middle of being punished properly for it.

“You have been very naughty, Victoria. I told you not to make a sound or to look back at me. For doing just that you will lose your privilege to wear panties until I send for you. I will know if you have wore any while I'm away in Canterlot. I already have eyes and ears here in Ponyville. You are not to touch yourself either. No matter how much your marehood aches for you to touch it, you will leave it be. If you disobey these commands your punishment will be more severely. Do you hear me?” Noble asked me.

“Y-Yess Master.” I answered lowing my head in submission. I knew it was going hard working the fields without panties on but I could manage that with a little creative thinking. The whole not being able touch myself until I was summoned for my first lessons was going to kill me though. But disobeying my Master again was far worse than having a wet aching pussy for a few days, or that what I told myself at the time.

“Good I expect you to be obedient from this point on. Now to continue your punishment. This time I want you to make noise but remember if you're too loud somepony from town might hear you and come see what's going on. I doubt you want any pony from town to see you like this.” Noble instructed before he slipped two fingers deep into my pussy and slowly stroked them back and forth.

I whimpered and moaned as I faced the tree enjoy myself but I need a bit more. Seconds later I was thrusting my hips back into the two fingers giving me so much teasing pleasure. Those thick fingers felt so good but they just weren't getting deep enough to really scratch my itch. Again I made a mistake that My Master knew I would before I did. I was just getting into rolling my hips when I felt another firm smack to my ass. I stopped moving and give a soft cry from the sting. Another seven more smacks came to my ass in rapid succession before my reddened ass was gently stroked. After all a Master must reaffirm his affections for his pet as well as give them proper discipline.

“Did I tell you, you could move?” Noble asked me with bit of anger in his voice.

“No Master.” I squeaked out a second later.

“Don't do it again Victoria.”

“Yes Master, as ya command. Ah'm sorry Master.” I told him in a low submissive tone.

I remained still as he went backed to slipping his fingers in and out of me. Soon a rising wave of pleasure filled my body and I moaned loudly before biting my lip to quite myself. He was extremely skilled with his finger work, he kept well away from my hymn as he masterfully found my G-spot in seconds. Moments after finding it he was pressing into it rather hard with each in and out stroke. I tried with all my might to keep still but the pleasure his skilled fingers were giving me was far too great to just ignore out right. My desire to get off grew great when he lean in and began to bit nibble on my reddened cheeks. I near screamed.

Soon my legs began to tremble as I whimpered and moaned. My moans were growing louder by the second and if I didn't cover my mouth soon we were going to be caught by somepony. When I reached up to cover my mouth with my hand I felt the sting of another slap to my rump followed bit a firm bite. “No.” Was all I heard in a commanding tone before I nodded and placed my hand against the tree again. To keep myself silent I had to bit my lip, rather hard. I had to be careful too because if I bit down to hard I would tear it open.

For several long minutes I moaned, whimpered, and bit my lip to keep from screaming while trying not to climax. My master would stop every now and again when he thought I would get off only to start up again when my ragged breathing slowed. When I thought I couldn't hold out any longer, that my orgasm would have me screaming at the top of my lungs, my Master pulled his fingers out of me completely. He left me standing there my hand firmly against the tree, my marehood winking hard as it drool more of my sweet honey in the muddy puddle between my legs, with my desire burning hot. I panted heavily as I tried to get a hold of myself. I looked over my shoulder at my Master, eyes begging him to let me cum to fuck me in to submission right there.

“No Victoria. This is your punishment for being a naughty mare. For even thinking of begging me to allowed you to cum is disobedient behavior. A further Punishment is in order. You are not allowed to wear panties until after your first five lessons. You are not allowed to cum until then either. You may touch yourself all you want but you better not get off until I tell you to. Your orgasms are a gift that I have to right to give or deny you. A good slave is allow to cum to her hearts content, a disobedient and wild mare like you is not.” Noble explained to me as he held up my panties for me to see. “Do you understand me?”

“Yes Master Ah understand.” I said softly as I bit my lip. It was going to be hard walking the fields with the rest of family with me smelling like a mare in heat and being so wet all the time. I was really going to have to work hard on being more obedient otherwise I was going to get caught, worse yet keep displeasing my Master farther.

Noble made me stand there with my hand pressed to the tree in the throes of full arousal for several minutes just watching me tremble and shake. I stood there trembling on the verge of cumming do the fact I was out in the open where anypony could see me with my dress up around my waist, my panties removed, marehood wet and ready for good rutting, my thighs slick with my juices, and my Master watching me the whole time. The shame, the humiliation, excitement of being caught, the fact my master had order me to stay like this for several minutes, the sound of my voice as I whimpered and begged for more, all of it combined had me in the throes of pure ecstasy. It was like until that very moment I had been asleep, my eyes closed to the world until Noble Storm opened them and show the true colors of the world around me. I was finally tasting the freedom of life, the freedom of self, the freedom of sex, and it was like some delicious and sinful wine that my Master had given me to drink. I was drunk on that feeling of freedom and I wanted more, no I needed more to truly be free and a true mare in time.

After standing there for what seemed like ages my Master finally touch me again I jumped nearly cumming. Noble Storm stroked my rear as he wipe me up with my panties, what little good that did, before telling he was going to escort me home. I frown at him for wanting to take me home but found out it was close to one o'clock in the morning. I still had long day of hard work with my chores ahead of me and my Master need to get back to Canterlot to attend to business. I nodded my head yes before he took my hand lead the way back to the farm. We took the long way back to the farm and on the way he fingered my plot several times bring me close to climax then stopping to let me suffer a bit more. He made it a point to tell of some of the rewards I could ask for once I learned my place was obedient. I was wet mess with large wet spots on the front and back of my dress.

Once we made back to the farm he kissed me on my forehead, just in case, my family were already home, before taking his leave. I waited by the gate to the farm and watch him walk off into the darkness. Once I knew he was well on his way back to Ponyville I sighed then went in the house. I was lucky my family had gotten home just yet. It was this late and Ma and Pa weren't back that meant we were take tomorrow to rest. The rest of the family would be out all night so I had time go upstairs and play with myself as loud as I wanted for a few minutes. I suffered several more near orgasms before I became too tired and sore to continue. I had a shower and was in bed long before the rest of my family made it home two hours later.

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The next few days were hell as I dealt with waking up with a swollen and wet marehood every morning along with wet sheets. I would wake each morning and finger my swollen mound to the point of losing my mind only to stop moments before I could find any real relief. I hated and loved my Master so much for what he was doing to me, the dull sexual ache of unfulfilled desire was maddening and exciting at the same time. Dealing with my family become a chore as my mother was always asking me why I was so jumpy around everypony. She was also get suspicious about why I was bathing so much in the last few days. My father thought it was me coming to season early or that I final found a stallion that I like and was trying to hide the fact that I was letting him get a little too close with my odd behavior. I was still doing my chores, taking care of the farm and I haven't said anything about being pregnant so what I did in my free time was none of his concern really. My brothers and sister could care less but were getting feed up with hogging the bathroom so much as of late. After a schedule was work out by mother they soon forget it and everything went back to normal for them.

Two days after my punishment started I received a plain wrapped package from Canterlot. The package was address to me but had no return address. I was out in the fields when arrived and my mother signed for it. I was shocked when I came in for lunch to eat and have another edging session to find she had the large brown box and was shaking it. My sister Pacific Rose was stand near watching with a curious look on her face.

“Victoria what is in this here box? It came all the way from Canterlot fer ya. Did ya order somethin'?” My mother asked as she shuck the box again. We both could hear sever items rattling around inside of it.

“Yeah, I did order somethin' its gift from my special somepony. I found out he wanted it so Ah order it special from Canterlot. Please give it here before ya break it Ma.” I quickly said before I realized what I had just said. I saw my sister curious look shift to a wide grin, this was going to be bad.

“Oh mah little filly has a special somepony already. Well he better come 'round a courtin' ya proper like otherwise ya Pa and brothers will have ta go pay him a visit. It don't have ta be soon cause ya need time ta get ta know each other but before ya decide ta let him get look at yer apple orchard.” My mother said giving me a wink as she hand me the box.

“Ma stop it! Not here and not in front of Pacific Rose, ya'll know she still a filly don't need ta here talk like that!” I said as I took the package from her blushing rather hard. “We just started seein' each other and this just a gift ta let him know Ah like him.” I told her before heading to my room since I could see that Rose was about to start teasing about having a coltfriend. The whole time I was leaving my mother just give me a knowing smile.

Once I was alone in my room with the door locked I open the box and found several items and some clothing it along with a with three scrolls. The first scroll was instructions on how to use the magical vibrating egg, and the tail hole trainers. The scroll also had instructions on how I was to clean myself before inserting my trainer. There were three different sized trainers in the box. I was instructed to be able to wear the final trainer comfortably by the time Noble Storm sent for me. The egg I was to insert into my pussy right away and I was only to take it out to clean at night or when I went to the bathroom otherwise it was to be in at all times until my lessons started. Once I insert it I was just say the words 'At your command Master' and the little blue egg would do the rest.

I pulled up my dress and insert the egg, it went in rather easy with how wet I was all the time. I pushed in until it touch my hymen and shivered at the feeling of the cold smooth surface of the egg touched my virginity. I nearly came, after taking a few deep breathes and calming myself I said the command words. No sooner than the last word left my lips did the egg buzz to life vibrating hard in my pussy. I was thrown to the floor as a violent orgasm overtook me. I had to cover my mouth to keep from screaming out my joy as I squirted all over myself. I lay on the floor with my vision full of stars, a large puddle forming between my legs as they trembled, as I whimpered through the sexual torment that was my climax.

It was a while later when I had come down off my climatic high that I notice the little note at the bottom of the first scroll that said the egg would keep track of all my orgasms and I would be punished for each one I had without permission. I groaned in pleasure and anger as I pulled my dress off and lay on the floor play with my swollen clit and nipples. If I was going to get punished for cumming without being told do so I would have some fun while I had the chance. With help of the egg and my own fingers I drove my to three more mind breaking orgasms in a ten minute period before getting up and wiping myself off.

After changing into a clean dress I went back to reading the rest of the scrolls. The second scroll was about my collar and the sexy white lingerie I was to wear under beauty pink and white dress that he had made for me especially for my first lessons. The lingerie consisted of the sheer white stockings, a lacy garter belt with clips for the stocking, lacy crotchless panties, a white corset with pink lacing that would hold my breasts up and out but not cover them, and matching cuffs and anklets. I was instructed to hide the lingerie but not the dress until the day I was sent for.

The last scroll was a love note from my beloved, and hated at the time, Master.

To My Dearest Slave,

I hope this letter finds you happy and being obedient to my commands about your punishment. I hope you are enjoying your gifts. I know you are enjoying your egg and all of the pleasure it will give you, just remember for each orgasm you enjoy you will pay for during your lessons. I count the days until I can make you mine. I miss you so much my dearest Victoria and long for the day that you will be in my arms once again. I long to hear your tender voice and breathe in your sweet earthy scent.

Your Loving Master,

Noble Storm

I smiled at the the letter and rolled up before hiding it and the other two scrolls in my dresser. I hid the lingerie in my closet before place the box of other items under my bed. I took the first of three trainers to the bathroom and cleaned myself before inserting it then completely doing up all of the straps to hold it in place. The train was the smallest of the three so it slipped in real easy but it felt weird having my tailhole stretched a bit but not unpleasant in the least. After getting myself fitted with my trainer and nearly cumming twice while getting it in I went downstairs for lunch.

With the trainer and the egg inside me and both randomly vibrating at different strengths and lengths of time it was hard to do anything with looking awkward or embarrassing. You can imagine with as aroused and wet I was from my punishment simple thing like sitting down, bending over, or even walking had become extremely pleasurable to the point of near climax. Now I was extremely turned-on with two toys torturing me randomly so even those simple and mundane acts were now erotic tortures.

I spent all of lunch jumping and squealing every so often as the two toys randomly started and stopped, teasing me lightly at times and trying to drive me to full blown orgasm at others. My mother become even suspicious of my behavior and my father told me if I was coming to estrus again I could take the week off from the fields. I told him I was fine just a little flustered about a stallion I was talking too. My father then got interested in my odd behavior but when my mother told him to leave it be for now he left me alone for awhile.

The next two weeks were maddening as well as exciting as I counted the days until my first lessons. Every night until I was summoned by my Master I wore my collar as my trainer and egg tortured me in my sleep. It took five days before I was ready for the next trainer, the first trainer was 6 inches long and an inch wide, a good starter for anal play. The second trainer was much bigger, it was 10 inches long and 2 and half inches wide and veined, It was much like a stallion's cock in shape. It took me some time to work in when I was ready for it but once it was in, oh by Celestia's sun did it make me cum hard with it start moving!

I learned to hide arousal from my punishment and training toys on my face and in my body language but I was runny out of strong smelling soap and my favorite natural perfume to hide the smell of my arousal all of the time. Hopefully my Master would send for me early or that's what I prayed for at least. My routine of three baths a day continued, my mother keep watching me closely so I had to take time out from working on getting ready for the next trainer for my tailhole to be seen with a young stallion I was good friends with at the time. Mother thought Apple Tree was the one courting me and father knew him from around Ponyville, Apple Tree's family owned one of the other farms and grew many of the other crops our little town need. With me being seen with Apple Tree my parents saw my odd behavior as a young mare in love and troubled by lust for a stallion. They soon forget about it and life moved on.

By the end of my two week wait for Master to send for me I had made to my last trainer and it was was feeling rather small to me, even though it was 15 inches in length and 4 inches thick cover in little fleshy studs. The egg had recorded at least 15 orgasms that I was going to be punished for but I didn't care. In fact I was looking forward to my punishment because my Master would be the one giving it to me. I just wanted to be mounted by Noble Storm, it was the torment of my dreams at night and the thing that filled my thoughts during the day.

It was a late summer day when the white and gold carriage pulled up to the farm and the regal looking earth pony stallion got out and come to the house. I was inside getting ready for dinner when a knock came to the door and my mother went to answer it. I wasn't to surprised that somepony was stopping by in the late evening since many ponies of the town often did this. It was much easier to get orders for apples and things in the early morning or the late evening since we were so busy during the day with all of the farm work.

My brothers Apple Barrel and Ciderjack were out in the barn putting away the field equipment for the evening while Pacific Rose was upstairs in her room doing her homework. So I was the one left to set the table for dinner. I had just finish setting the table when I heard my mother shocked voice call to me and my father to come quickly. I came out of the kitchen to find my mother standing in front of tall white stallion will a black and silver mane and tail, his mane was cut short but style regally to one side and his tail was braid with red ribbon securing it. He was dressed much like Noble Storm had been the night we met, he even had the Windgale crest on his vest. He was holding to clipboard with paperwork on and wore a confident smile.

“Well I think you must be the student I'm here to pick up, Victoria Smith, right?” The stallion asked as he looked at me, his light red eyes flashing a bit in the dim light of the living room.

“Victoria what is the nice stallion from Canterlot talkin' bout? What does he mean he's here ta pick ya up fer schoolin' of some type?” My mother,Vista Bella, asked her orange eyes full of wonder and curiosity over what was going on.

“Yes Victoria what is goin' on here? Why didn't ya say somethin' bout this before?” My father, Fallawater asked, his voice stern but still calm even though the situation called for a bit more emotion than he was showing.

I was at a lost for words and had expect this to happen so soon, I had hoped my Master would have sent word to me a day or so before he picked me up so I would have something to tell my parents. Little did I know that my Master had already planned for this. Noble Storm had already set up a school for young mares to attend that wanted to gain a bit of refinement in Ponyville. The school was called The Lady Snow Lacy School for the Refinement of Young Mares, which was now my cover story.

“Well Mrs. Apple I think I can explain that.” The young noble said and me smiled softly. “My name is Valiant, I'm a servant to Lord Noble Storm of Canterlot. At the celebration of Ponyville a mere two weeks ago Miss Apple expressed her interest in learning more about etiquette and refined manners to my master. He was rather intrigued by her request and set about creating two schools for the young mares and stallions of Ponyville to fulfill that request. Miss Apple was sent a form that she filled out to see she if she was eligible for entrance to the school. We asked that all applicants keep this quiet until they were told they were accepted or denied entrance. Miss Apple was accepted but her letter of acceptance was misplaced before all of the letters were mailed a few days ago. Because of this oversight I'm here to inform you of her acceptance. I am to take her to get her books and things as well as meet her teachers and fellow students for orientation.”

“Well don't that beat all! Mah little girl is bout ta get her some lady like schoolin'. Ah could be a prouder Papa even if Ah tried.” My father said spinning me around in a rather tight hug before setting me down to shake Valiant's hand. “Yer boss this Noble Storm has made fine choice in acceptin' our daughter ta this her refinement school and such. Ah'm sure Victoria will do us and yer fancy school proud.”

I looked at the situation with increasing embarrassment as my father gushed all over Valiant about me being accepted to a fake school that was the cover story for my parents and friends benefit so I could get my plot plowed hard by my Master several days a week. My mother was even worse than my father, but not by much. She began going about wanting to make me some fancy dresses so I wouldn't look out of place among the other students. She went on wishing she had the time, fabric, and bits to really make me some more proper clothing for my new fancy school. I prayed to Faust that my brothers didn't walk in or Pacific Rose had heard any of this otherwise I was in for the worst teasing of my life. Those three together could even worst than my parents combined.

After my mother mentioned that Pacific Rose would be so jealous of me getting new clothes the reality of what was going on hit both my parents, how were they going to pay for my new fancy schooling? While the farm was making more then enough bits to run it and for us to save some back for new improvements when the time came, sending Pacific Rose to school in Baltimare in a few years and a wedding for me once I found a proper stallion to court me. There wasn't near enough bits in the saving for all of that and for me to go to a fancy school created by a noble of all ponies.

My father was the first asked about the cost of me going to the school. My Mother being the more formally educated one of the two asked what the per month cost would be until graduation, what materials I would need, the cost of all of my books and if I would need any new clothing or special things for school functions and such. Valiant told them that all of my costs for going to the school had been covered and any future costs would be covered by Noble Storm himself. Since I was the one that had given him the idea in the first place he thought it was only fair that I would have my school cost covered if I was accepted.

Hearing all of that my parents were overjoyed but a bit ashamed that they were being given such charity by Noble Storm. Valiant assured them that Noble Storm was a stallion of honor and meant no disrespect to the Apple family by covering my school costs. He had every intention of allowing the Apple family to work alongside the schools by catering several of the events held by the two schools as well as asking for permission to use Apple family land for outdoor social functions and dances. My parents were overjoyed again to learn the could at least help pay for my schooling by, doing what Apples do best, working hard.

With that out of way Valiant sat down with my mother to work out the details of the Apples involvement with schools, my father went to kitchen to get drinks for them, while I went up starts and got dressed for my orientation at my new school. Once I was in my room, with door locked just case Rose come to see what was going on downstairs, I quickly pulled out my special outfit and collar. I took my pink dress out of the closet and hung it up near my bed before rushing the bathroom to clean up. After a quick shower and cleaning of my toys before placing them back inside of myself I went back to my room and to get dressed.

I opened the box that contained the sexy white lingerie, and I slowly pulled the lacy crotchless panties up my legs as I enjoyed the feeling of the material sliding into place. I sat on the edge of my bed as I rolled the sheer white stockings up my legs being care not to tear them or get a run or ladder in them. The feeling of the soft sheer material caressing my legs grew my excitement of the pleasure awaiting in a few minutes. Next was the lacy garter belt which I carefully clipped to my stocking. The white corset with the pink lacing was bit trickier to put on until I figured out the clips and buckles were in front of it. I got in on and fastened tightly. The feeling of the soft silk lining as it hugged and squeezed my torso creating a perfect and sexy hourglass figure, it felt so sinfully good. By Faust I was ready to cum just from getting dressed. The matching cuffs, anklets, and collar were the last bits of outfit left to put on, once they were on and fastened tight I looked at myself in the mirror.

The mare I saw in the mirror look like she was from two different worlds. Her body was that of sexy show mare or pin up with her breasts up and out but not covered, her figure slimmed, her waist held tight but her corset, and her shapely legs and sexy flank on full display. The out of place thing was her face, it was the face of a plain field mare. I had to fix that if I was to be presentable for my Master. I sat down in front of the vanity and took out the miniscule amount of makeup I had been able to buy over several months. I put a bit of the light red rouge on my cheeks, I curled my eyelashes, put on the red lipstick. I took my mane of of it usual twin braids and brushed it out before style my bangs to hang down a bit for more a sophisticated look. I curled the ends of my mane before brushing it a bit more to give a feathered puffy look. I undid the braid on my tail and brushed it out as well before tying a white ribbon to the base of it. I even sprayed on a bit of perfume to accent my natural scent and smell of my arousal. Once my make-up was on and my mane more manageable I looked at myself in the mirror again. Now I looked more like a mare ready to please her Master the proper way.

The last part of my preparation was the dress. I slipped in the pink dress with white detailing that match my lingerie perfectly and buttoned all the up. The high neck on it hide my collar perfectly make it look like a silver choker. The sleeves ended just behind the cuffs making them look like they were part of the dress. The square loops on the cuff had grooves they sat in making them look like silver accents. The ankle cuffs had similar grooves but to keep the from jingling when I walked. The dress was very long so it hid them well even when I picked it up to keep it from dragging the ground. Slipped on pair of pink open hoofed heels I bought just this day and I was ready to go. All in all I had taken about an hour to get ready.

When I came down to the stairs mother had finished up conducting business with Valiant who seemed to be sweating a bit and Mother eyed him with that fierce business mare look on her face. Father was sitting in his favorite chair with a mug of cider just laughing about how tough a business mare his wife was. He also made comment on how she argue him into proposing to her nine months after the started courting each other and he's never been happier since save for the day my siblings and I were born.

Both of my older brother were sitting on the couch smiling up a storm and talking about all of the new mares they could meet once I started school and would have some of schoolmates over for tea parties and fancy get-togethers. I was really going to have do something about those two before long otherwise they were going to get me caught. It seemed that they must have come in while Mother was still talking to Valiant and father told them what was going on. At some point Pacific Rose had come downstairs and heard everything as she was the first to hug me and tell me how beautiful I looked in my school dress. She also made it a point to whisper to me that I better not cheat on my special somepony with one of those fancy noble stallions. I just smiled at her and told her I wouldn't unless he didn't treat me right.

When Valiant spotted me talking with Pacific Rose at the foot of the stairs he had look of relief on his face and drew everyone's attention to me. My Father was the first to make it me, he practically threw his half empty mug of cider on to the coffee table, running over to hug me tightly.

“Well aint ya'll a sight, Victoria. Ah'll bet a 100 bits that ya'll be the purttiest mare there and the smartest ta boot.” My father said after another of his famous swinging hugs.

“Well anit this somethin', Victoria ya'll look just like a noble straight out Canterlot. Is this that dress ya'll said a stallion was sending ta ya?” Mother asked as she stared at me with tears forming in her eyes.

“Yeah, Granny Smith ya'll sure do look like a Belle at the ball.” Apple Barrel and Ciderjack said in unison before laughing at their own joke. The two of them always called me Granny Smith because of my coat color was the same color as a Granny Smith apple and the way I'm always nagging at the to do as they were told, much like a grandmother would.

“This is the dress Ah'm supposed ta wear fer mah first night at school. Ah got it some time ago but it didn'tna have mah letter fer school with it.” I told my parents softly. “Now lay off me Barrel and Jack if'n ya'll ever want ta meet any of mah new pretty schoolmates.” The both stopped laughing right after and just nodded their head. After putting those two in their place I turned to Valiant and smiled.

“Well I'm glad that arrived unlike your acceptance letter. Now that you're ready Miss Smith it almost time for the Opening Ceremonies so we should be going.” Valiant said as he walked over to the door and offered his hand to me.

“Right, now Apple Barrel and Ciderjack stop gawkin' at yer sister and get upstairs to get cleaned up so we can go. Rose go put that purtty yellow and white dress ya use fer school stuff on. Vista Bella we best be gettin' ready too so we can see are lil' Victoria's big day. Hey Valiant do ya think ya could give us a bit ta get freshened up so the whole family can ride over with ya'll?” My father asked quickly while my mother dried her eyes and nodded. My brother were trying to break their necks getting upstairs to get ready. Rose hugged me one last time before going upstairs to change.

“I'm sorry Mr. Apple but friends and family are not permitted to attend the Opening Ceremonies or view the school grounds until a some time next week.” Valiant explained before I could tell my parents I didn't think that was allowed just yet or that's what I was hoping was the case.

“Why not? Why can't we see the school grounds if'm the Apple Family is supposed ta be helpin' out and workin' with school then?” My Mother asked her eyes flashing with anger and my father squared his shoulders and stood up to his full height. He was getting ready to grab my mother encase she got violent like the last time a stallion told she couldn't do something she felt she had more than a right to do.

“Well Mrs. Smith that fact is we want the students to be settled into their new surrounds, meet and get to know the other students, and let the teachers work which students are in their classes. This week worth of time is also to let the Headmaster and Headmistress work out which students will be commuting to and from school and which students will be staying in the dorms on the school grounds.” Valiant explained with a very apologetic tone. “ I'm sorry if this is upsetting but this fact would have been outlined in the acceptance letter. I know this is an inconvenience to you both so I will personally talk with Lord Noble Storm tonight and get you a private tour of the schools in the next day or two if that is acceptable?” Valiant asked softly.

My Mother was getting ready to complain about this little bit of late news and give Valiant a piece of her mind when Father grabbed her and placed his hand over mouth just as she started yelling. “That'll be fine if'n ya can get us a private tour in a day or two. Tell yer Boss we will accept that and we'll be watin' fer word from him on the matter.”

“Of course I will bring back his invitation personally in a day or two from now. I thank you for your patience and understanding in this matter. Victoria we must be going now.” Valiant said as he took my hand led me out the door before turn to my parents again. “Goodnight to you Mr. and Mrs. Smith I promise you your daughter is in good hands, you have my word as gentlecolt on that.”

My father just gave Valiant a curt nod as he held my mother tightly. My mother on the other hand just shouted more muffled obscenities in to my father hand and she tried to wrestle free of his firm grip. My father held fast making sure the angry mare wasn't going anywhere anytime soon. Valiant gave short bowed before he opened the carriage door for then helped me side before climbing in himself. A porter closed the door for him moments later we were off.

Author's Note

Sorry for the long wait for this chapter but I have been having issues with my co-writer. I have have to get another co-writer and just found a really good proofreader so this story should get better with time. Please enjoy and remember to comment.