Impressing her Parents

by trahzo

Rating: everyone
Tags: Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Comedy, Other, Romance
Length: 2353

Grimm Leaf goes on a date with his marefriend, and tries his best to impress her parents! An OC story!

Grimm Leaf, a Charm Merchant intends to hopefully impress his marefriend's parent. If he can survive her dad and kick the author following them around off of their tail! FYI, I'm the author who's following them! Also, it's an OC Story. Also, A big thank you to the actual Grimm Leaf who helped me put this all together on Omegle!

Published 2014-07-31 20:30:04 UTC
Last updated 2014-07-31 20:30:04 UTC

Chapter 1: A Pegasus vs a Magicless Unicorn and a Masked Writer!

Grimm Leaf, a young Pegasus, with a brown coat, brown mane/tail, cutie mark: a leaf that resembles a bear claw, was just siting at the counter of his charm shop until...Trahzo a human writer who wears a white mask & a jacket colored red and black entered.
"Hi, I'm Grimm Leaf, welcome to my shop."

"I'd like a good luck charm because my stories recently haven't been that good."

"I've got good luck charms. but I've never seen any of your species, I mean yeah I'm near the Everfree forest but still what are you?" Then he studies Trahzo up and down.

"Well, my species are the cousins of monkeys."

"Hmm interesting, what do you call yourselves?"

"We are known as humans!"

"A human, neat! anyway what color of charm would you like?"

"Well, I'd like a...red one, because most super heroes from our world wear it, I know I know, I sound nerdy."

"No it's fine I can get you a red one. It's on the shelf to your right third from the top and fourth item to the left."

"Thank you kind sir, hopefully my next story about Great & Honorable Spike the Brave & Glorious will be a hit seller! Then he accidentally knocks something else over!

"WOAH! watch it there!" Flies up and dives catching the purple bracelet.

"That was close, but thanks for the charm anyways, so what do I owe you?"

"Ten bits or equivalent merchandise."

"Don't worry, I got the bits. Then he pays Grimm for the charm. "Have a good day!" Then a very cute mare walks in to see Grimm! She had a rouge coat, a pudding colored mane, and eyes to match her coat.

"Whoa watch it Trahzo, come back! *to the mare* "Just a moment."

"No, right now Grimm! How could you? You promised we'd go out today, yet we see the open sign!"

"This is clearly a personal matter, I guess I'd better lea..." Then Trahzo was cut off before he could finish writing.

"No, you stay and listen to me chew this "Man" out!"

"Um... might I ask what's going on? Anyway Trahzo you have a Death Note, I can't let you leave with that kind of necromancy.Then he grabs a black note book from Trahzo's back pocket with his wing.

"Grimm, we were suppose to prove to my parents that I do have a coltfriend I could rely on! Now even though they've never met you, they not don't like you! Why is this store so much important to you than me? Have I become insignificant in your life now?

"Dang man, you just f-ed up."

*sighs* "I'm sorry Severe Serenity." Then he walked to open sign and shuts it off.

"There, now it'll take some time for my parents to forgive you, but I'll make sure daddy doesn't jab you with his horn during the date!"

"Okay then let's go. Bye Trahzo and good luck with your writings. Then Grimm walks out with Serenity.

"Heheheh, (I think this date would make a good story, I'll be stalking you buddy for gold!)" Trahzo thought deviously in his head!

"(If you weren't wearing that mask. Don't let me catch you watching us) Shakes death note before putting it in his saddlebag.

A half hour later, Grimm & Serenity meet-up with her parents at the carnival.

"Mommy, daddy, this is my coltfriend Grimm Leaf!"

Serenity's dad looked at him with his good eye, and then shows him the shark tooth on his necklace!

"Now dad, please don't jab him!" She said with a cute voice.

"I'll use all of my will power not to."

"Mr. and Mrs. Serenity, nice to meet you then he bows his head down in respect.

"Well, aren't you just a cutie!" Said Mrs.Serenity.

Meanwhile in the bushes...

"Kukuku, you don't even notice me, you're to distracted from impressing her parents to see me write about your misery! Mwuahahahahahaha!"

Then a guard walks in.

"Excuse me sir, but where is your ticket?

"Uuuuuuuh..."

"If you don't have one I'll have to escort you out."

"Don't you dare, I am Trahzo, I'm currently writing a story about the nice Charm merchant who's having trouble trying to impress his marefriend's parent, and they're tight there!"

"That's stalking!"

"Drat!"

Now we focus on Grimm and Serenity again

Grimm was blushing uuhh...

"What's wrong? Is it because you now know where my little Severe got her looks from?"

"Mooom, I told you to stop using that nickname, I'm not little and it makes me sound mean!"

Her dad begins a faint growl thinking Grimm was after his wife as well!

No I like Severe not your wife, I mean I like you Mrs.Serenity but not like what he thinks. Then Grimm takes a step back from Mr. Serenity.

The faint sound then quiets down. "Good, you're not a creep! Now come-on, let's go check out these rides!"

"Good answer daddy!" Then Serenity leans towards Grimm. "Sorry, he's always been this grumpy. You wanna know a sad secret about dad?"

"Dare I even ask?"

"He can't use magic, if he could, you'd be ran over by the roller coaster right now! The only time he's ever smiled was when I was born, at least that's what mom told me."

"That's very sad, but then again I'm glad I'm not underneath a roller coaster."

"Yeah, since he couldn't use magic he had to bulk-up and become as strong as an Earth Pony!"

"Yeah he definitely looks strong and very intimidating."

"Thanks, all the girls at my school labeled him as dilf!"

Then they stopped at their 1st ride, with Trahzo on their trail!

"(Okay buddy, now that I have a ticket, I can follow you now & write about your doom!)"

"So, what do you think family? A pretty good ride don't you think?"

"It's wonderful honey!"

The Grimm leans toward Serenity and whispers "I'm sorry but I couldn't help but notice that the strange creature from the shop is stalking us."

"Yeah, I saw him run from the guards in the corner of my eye!"

"Should I give him a piece of my mind?"

"No, let him get his punishment from these crazy rides! I might even have daddy let us ride the bumper carts so we can double team him!"

Then Grimm enthusiastically whispers "Sure!"

"Alright the tilt a whirl is ready, let's go in."

Then they all walk in and strap into the wall and as the ride began, then the spinning got faster & faster!

"WEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this was a good idea!" Said Serenity.

"Are you feeling the pain boy? Because I intend to have you break-up with my baby girl before the night is over!"

"Wow, this guy really hates his duaghter's coltfriend doesn't he? Oh Celestia, I can't remove my mask, I'm gonna....blaaaaaaaargh! Aaaah, It's all over my face!"

Grimm looks grimly at Trahzo and points terrifyingly!

"Hahaha, take that writer!" Then the joke got on her as the barf leaked out of the mask's eyes and flew at everyone else!

Then Serenity quickly shouts: "SERENITY SHIELD!" Then she made a magic bubble to protect her, her parents, and Grimm.

"Sorry everyone else!'

"You'll be hearing from my lawyer!" said a midget griffin

"What? it's not my fault that the guy can't hold his lunch."

Then after a while the ride was over and it was on to the next one! A scary ride!

"He's gonna scream like a little filly when the changeling flies at us." Mr.Serenity assured his wife.

Then they all got on with Trahzo still on their trail and a clean change of clothes, with mask included!
Minutes later...

"Listen to him scream like a filly! My Serenity wont be with him for long!"

Nope, it wasn't Grimm who was screaming, it was Trahzo!

Grimm was holding Serenity close.

"It'l be fine, it'l be fine."

"Yep, as long as you're here Grimmy!"
Grimm then smiles and blushed at the new nickname. "Wonder how Trahzo is doing." Meanwhile in the cart behind them

"AHHHHHH!"

The ride was so scary that Trahzo's tan Hawaiian skin turned white like a ghost!

Soon, it was time for the biggest scare!

An appearance of a magic puppet of Queen Chrysalis! The Queen made a loud a frightening screech that even Serenity's father jumped! Then the ride was over.

"Oh Grimmy, that ride was so scary, good thing you were there to protect me!" Then she kisses Grimm's cheek.

"Aww, now honey, why would you want to break-up such a cute couple?"

Then Grimm blushes. "I'll always be there for you Serenity. Sadly no one was there to 'protect' Trahzo."

"Don't worry about that creep! Now, let's follow daddy, I got a feeling that it's time for the Throw-Up Invoker! I heard that it causes non ponies to throw-up 20% faster!"

Then they got on the roller coaster!

"Oh-no, A Roller Coaster...I can't lose their trail, I gotta finish my book!"

"This is my first time on a roller coaster to be honest. I don't know what to expect!" Explained Grimm Leaf.

"When they tell you to keep your front hooves in, don't, it's more fun that way when you're flailing around."

"Um... ok Then the ride began "Oh my!"

Then an automated voice says: "Please keep your front hooves in the cart at all times! Those who have neglected to sign our waver will not be our responsibility for any casualties!"

"Casualties?" Grimm said in a nervous voice.

Trahzo thinks the same thing! "Get me outta here! No! No! Noooooooooooooooooooo!!!"

"Just listen to that wimp! I bet our daughter is now regretting ever dating that loser in the 1st place!"

Again, it's not Grimm, it's Trahzo screaming for his step-mom!

As the ride reaches the top of the biggest hill Grimm reluctantly raises his front hooves. "I trust you Serenity."

"Then hold my Hoof! We'll be fine!"

Grimm grabs Serenity's hoof tightly "As if I was scared!" which he is. He's a big liar!

Then the carts all went down really fast and everyone began screaming with delight and/or fear! Grimm's was a mix of both!

"Hahaha, this is fun Grimmy, I'm so glad I finally got you to leave that shop!"

Meanwhile with Trahzo!

"Geez sir, quit screaming, you're such a baby!" Said a colt.

"A baby? look at you!" Then he continued screaming until suddenly..."Oh-no, I knew I shouldn't have had that burrito before going on this ri..." Then he threw up all over the kid!

"Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!"

"Geez kid, quit crying and grow-up already!"

"Oh great Trahzo threw up again! Hope it didn't get on your parents."

"Don't worry, Mom knows how to cast her own barrier."

Meanwhile with Serenity's parents "What the Tartarus? Isn't that the same guy who threw-up in the tilt-a-whirl?"

"Yeah, you didn't notice he was following us around all day?" Asked Mrs.Serenity.

The roller-coaster finally ends with a halt! "That was amazing and fun! What's next?" Asked Grimm who was feeling great!

"One last ride! (I intend to terminate your relationship boy!) The Bumpercarts!"

"Yay, fun!"

Thrazo then heard what they were going to do! "Yes, I'll separate the Serenity ladies from Grimm, then end the story where I help Mr.Serenity kick his ass in the bumpercarts! It'll be a great seller! Muaahahahahahahaha!"

"Excuse me sir, but are you the guy who vomited on my son?"

"Yeah, and what of it pu..." Then he turns to face Bulk Biceps! "Oh poop!"

*BAM!* *BAM!* *BAM!*

Then Grimm walks up to Trazho. "Black eye? Ouch. Here let's go to the bumper cars, I'll even pay for your ticket!

"Thank you Grimm (I mean thank you, you fool!)"

Apparently Grimm could also read minds. "I'm a fool? you've been vomiting and screaming all afternoon I think the only one who 'fool' can apply to is you. anyway c'mon let's go!" Then Grimm mounts a bumper car.

There were no lines and only 5 carts were functioning! A perfect place for a final showdown! Then the ride began, Trahzo shifted into a high gear and bumped away Mrs.Serenity, then bumped away Serenity!

"Mr.Serenity! Join me, and we can eliminate Grimm!"

All 4 watched as Mr.Serenity made the important life changing decision!

"No!"

"What, but you hate him!"

"He's proven that he can protect my daughter! So that's why..." Then he drove next to Grimm. "...I'm going to beat you!'

"Yeah!" Then all 4 shifts into highest gear and they all charge at Trahzo! Trahzo's cart slammed into a wall, the force was so powerful that he jumped out of the cart and was sent flying! He then crashed right into the Cotton Candy booth! Coincidentally the midget griffin was in the middle of buying cotton candy. "You! you're the one who vomited on the tilt-o-whirl!" Then the midget griffin gives him another black eye!

"Is it just me or is that just bad luck?" Asked Grimm.

Then as everyone was at the exit after a great day at the carnival, Trazho jumped out from the bushes!

"Hey, I want my money back! After all of what I just went through! I just realized that your charms are nothing more but the placebo affect!" Then he hands him the charm.

"Where's the receipt?" Grimm asked.

"Drat!"

"Hey, there's the stalker!" Then the guards all pile on Trahzo, and arrest him!

"Good *giggles* luck!" Then they all burst into laughter
.
"Hahaha, that was sure a wonderful time Grimmy." Then Serenity leaned her head on Grimm's neck.

"I couldn't agree more. So...when will we be expecting you 2 to have our grandkids?"

Then Grimm tensed-up! "Whoa there, I'm only kidding! Still, I like you Grimm Leaf, I welcome you to the family!"

Thank you Mr. and Mrs. Serenity. Then he bows down again.

"No need for that anymore, and also, the name's Shark & Dolphin, but when you marry our daughter, call us mom & dad."

"Thank you I had a wonderful time today. Maybe I should go out more often after all!"

THE END