
A Mourning Heart
A new pony comes to Ponyville and everypony is excited to meet him. The problem is, he's not interested in making friends. Why is such a nice pony so against having friends? The answer: he's in pain. Will the girl's help take the pain
Tacitus has just moved to Ponyville and is trying to go on with his life. All he wants is to go on without being hurt anymore than he already has. But things change when he meets the residents of Ponyville, who see his sadness and are determined to help him. He doesn't want their help, but they won't give up easily. It's time Tacitus learned what real friendship was.
This is my first story, and it's the first part of a series I'm planning. Any and all suggestions and criticisms are welcome. Also, as a side note, Tacitus's cutie mark is the Eye of Horus, which I call the Eye of Horsus so that it fits in with the pony world. Anyway, I've rambled enough. Enjoy the story!
Sequel is here



22098 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read
5 Chapters:
- Welcome To Ponyville 2014-07-31 20:48:59 UTC7592
- Six Strikes 2014-08-03 20:45:38 UTC5786
- The Everfree Forest 2014-08-05 21:41:27 UTC3010
- The Past Revealed 2014-08-08 18:57:50 UTC4228
- Epilogue 2014-08-14 17:17:42 UTC1482