Rise of Darknessby ArtemisArt-AlicornChaptersThe DreamThe Everfree ForestThe Hospital???The DreamLuna was dreaming peacefully until a dark presence entered her mind saying; "LUNA!!!!LUNA!!!! I hope you no longer see me as one of your minions? No? Really? Then listen long and well. Just because you cursed me into a bat pony does not mean I am yours! I am not just a winged guard and slave that succumbs to your every whimsy! I am an alicorn and am my own self, not yours!!! Darkness is coming Luna and soon. You should just give up NOW!!!" "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!" screamed Luna. "Ugh, what is it this time?" Celestia muttered. "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!" Luna answered. "Ugh, now i have to get up and walk the long walk.... to the other side of the bed." Celestia groaned. "I'll just deal with it from here." Celestia then used her magic to place a piece of rainbow colored duck tape upon her sisters screaming mouth. "Ahhhhhhhhhh-!" Luna then proceeds to fall back on to her pillow and pass out. "Ahh, all done." Celestia sighs and then nods off to sleep herself. Back in ponyville.... Fluttershy was being haunted in her dreams by a horrible monster. "NOOOOO!" screams Fluttershy. "OBEY ME SLAVE!!!" shouts a muffled disembodied voice. ` Fluttershy, as a final resort of panic uses the magic in her element of harmony to fight back the horrible monst-creature, she couldn't resort to it's level calling it a monster without getting to know it first. Her element causes a new magical surge within her as she spouts a brand new horn.In her new found amazement, she lets go of her concentration and allows the creature to take hold of her and transform her into somepony unlike herself. Suddenly Fluttershy shudders and jerks up. She must repent from her resistance against the Master. She grabs a pair of scissors in her magic aura and snips off part of her back hair piece and her tail. She then uses a razor to give her front piece a buzz into a Mohawk. "A new look for a new career." Fluttershy confidently says. Later that day.... Twilight was studying a new spell whose purpose is to show ponies their true self and then turn them into their true self. Just incase somepony, or some Draconequus were to alter a pony's personality, it would revert them back to normal. "Atheros Mentheos Zenthos!!!" Twilight chants and then proceeds to blast the magic bolt when... BAM!!! The door swings open and Twilight fires the magic bolt in the same direction. "Twilight you are such a dwee-!!!" Fluttershy spoke but then was engulfed by the blue magic bolt surrounding her. A holographic image then rolls showing a kind, timid, and shy pony. The holograph then glitches and shows a stubborn, selfish, and cruel pony. The image then folds back and is sucked inside of Fluttershy creating a pale green necklace on her chest. "Fluttershy are you ok-!" Twilight is cut short by Fluttershy's appearance. Fluttershy was now dressed in black clothing and was wearing a pale green hoodie. "Whatcha lookin at Egghead!?!" Fluttershy glares at Twilight. Twilight deeply offended realized what she has done. " This is all my fault!" Twilight frets. " What have I done!!! I must fix this!" Twilight then proceeds to look up a spell. Something shines in the corner of Twilight's eye. The window! Twilight then looks at the window and is blinded by a bright white light. Still fazed she keeps looking and lands upon a spell. Still blinded, she looks at the age regression spell thinking it is a mood regression spell. Her horn lights up and turns from magenta to a bright white, her wings flare out, then she turns towards Fluttershy as Rarity enters the library. "What the hay is going on in here!?!" Rarity asks as she and Fluttershy are engulfed in the white light. Fluttershy absorbs 90% of the spell while 10% hits Rarity. After the light subsides there is a happy and content butter colored Alicorn foal, with all her hair, playing with a tiny thing in her hooves and a slightly ticked off fashionable ivory teenage unicorn. " What have I done?!?!?" utters Twilight before fainting into unconsciousness. And disappearing from her library home in a flash of sparkling magenta magic generated from her horn. Author's Note This is just the beginning. comment share like review and please refrain from cursing in the comments this is my first fan fic after all. thanks P.S. for my first comic i am using bing pictures. Don't judge signing off ArtemisArt-Alicorn. also what should happen next? should twilight awaken in the hospital or should she awaken in the everfree forest? you will decide. Good Luck u guys deciding my fate makes me go cross eyed just thinking about it! The Everfree ForestAuthor's Note sorry for not letting you be able to choose the next chapter location but my chapter didn't have enough words to submit my story but you can choose this time! like share review comment CHOOSE YOUR LOCATION!!!: at the end of this chapter!!!:P The Everfree Forest Twilight awoke to see nothing but stripes. moving stripes. "Oh so now the pony is awake, she can taste my yummy bakes." a voice out of nowhere said " Zecora?" asked twilight "Yes and now you can see, my house and all its gleam." The striped zebra said. Twilight now considered the first sentence. " you have food?" she asked " Food yes drink no, for what you seek the river you must go." Zecora answered. Twilight started to get up then promptly fell back onto her flank. "Oops it seems I have forgot, you need to drink this flay borgot." Zecora announced " Flay borgot?" Twilight questioned. "Flay borgot does contain, what you cannot retain." Zecora calmly answered. " What?!? ugh never mind fill me up!" Twilight gave in. Zecora then filled a glass of the flay borgot and twilight downed it in 10 seconds flat. "Twilight please do take heed, only take what you need." Zecora warned. Twilight ignored the warning and downed two more flay borgots. Twilight then got up to leave heading to the door. "Twilight you stumble along the way, please sit down and eat some herbal hay!" Zecora pleaded with Twilight. " I'm fine Zecorsa!" Twilight slurred. "You are not fine you slur your words take my heed, and eat some of my herbal weeds!" Zecora pleaded sensibly. Twilight rose to her hooves,"I am fine you accursed zebra I will give you your worst nightmare if it'll shut your door!!!" Twilight then blasted Zecora's herbs with a magic bolt and turned them into oranges. A second later pinkie burst through the door " Awwww! I'm too late" and walked tail and mane drooping out the door. "AAACK!!! These cursed things I can not rhyme with this fruit , they leave me feeling very mute!!!" Zecora exclaimed. " Good luck with your fuits Zecorsa!!!"Twilight cackled as she went out the door leaving a very silent Zecora behind. Twilight started walking and searching for the river. Because of the overdose of flay borgot, Twilight's vision was blurred and what she thought was a river was a patch of poison joke. She stepped in the patch and ate a petal before she realized her mistake. "Aww! ponyfeathers!!" Twilight said as she spat out the poison joke petal. Twilight was now fed up with ground searching and decided to fly. The poison joke caused her to become twilight wobble and also experience dizziness so bad that she shot into the air and crashed into Zecora's still silent hut. After taking a bath in the poison joke remedy, Twilight sighed."UGH!! I don't get it any more! I don't even know why i'm here I was just in my room with flutt-OH NOOOOO!!!" Twilight wailed. Just then zecora finally spoke, " To find the answers you seek, you must explore your magic to it's peek. Zecora advised. Twilight finally took heed to Zecora's words." I guess I should start to listen to you more often." Then Twilight was suddenly taken in a bright flash of light leaving Zecora's feeble hut. Zecora looked around her messy hut and grit her teeth,"Curse that pony and her mess, she has left me very distressed!!" Zecora then proceeds to clean her home wondering where the Alicorn had gone. Twilight awoke outside a large building. As she got up to see where she was, she immediately fell back down becoming unconscious. Location::: where should twilight end up next? the hospital or scootaloo's house in cloud dale? or should we return to the royal sisters? You decide I write see you soon!:D Noooo! Please don't abandon me I would rather be in a hospital than be abandoned!!! "sniff" "sniff" Please don't abandon me! The Hospital???Twilight woke up to see dark shapes swarming in front of her. Startled she tried to sit up, but found she could not move at all or use her magic. Twilight started to panic trying to make herself move. She felt her hoof come up in front of her face. Then shocked murmurings came from the dark shapes as a mask with a funny smell to it was attached to her face. Soon the dark shapes began to blur becoming one big mass as she fell unconscious again. Doctor Hoofington was having a long day. She had to deal with a unconscious lavender Alicorn who kept having magical outbursts. One of them had turned all the medical supplies into balloon animals. Now this Alicorn was showing signs of waking up through the gas that had kept a full grown bulky colt named snowflake asleep for two whole days!!! They enhanced it with five different sleeping spores from rare asleep plants enchanted by their own spores! Doctor Hoofington could only hope it would work. As the Alicorn stopped flinching Doctor Hoofington started the New surgery. RainbowDash was napping on a cloud when a foal version of Fluttershy came flying to her cloud snuggling something with her front hooves. Then as she neared, the thing teleported out of sight. She was about to question FlutterFoal when a baby Discord teleported on top of her. RainbowDash simply flipped over and bucked Discowd off her and her cloud. FlutterFoal raced to catch him and glared defiantly at RainbowDash. Discowd then snapped his wittle fingers and turned RainbowDash into WittleDashie. WittleDashie having lost all maturity, gathered some cloud and started a cloud war throwing a puff of cloud at Discowd. Discowd had just been assaulted with cloud and in turn snapped his wittle fingers and a wave of cloud over FlutterFoal and WittleDashie. And then the war advanced into the cloud war of the century. Teen Rarity, not really that changed, decided to go find her friend RainbowDash and talk about her... her circumstance. Rarity her magic now stronger than ever, since she had absorbed some of alicorn Twilight's magic, was able to give her permanent white pegasus wings. Of course she could always get rid of them, but why bother? She was too lazy to try to find a wing eliminating spell, and thought her wings were too awesome anyway. And she set off for RD's favorite cloud and upon arrival was turned, by Discowd, into Wawity, who joined in the cloud war. Applejack and Pinkie Pie having also gotten wings and horns, just to go to the alicorns only party someone had invited them to, flew to RainbowDash's house saw the filly war and were sneaking away when Discowd spotted them turning them into AppleTini and TwinkiePie. Completing their foal minimum for their cloud war. Twilight was waking up again in the room with the dark shapes. But this time her vision focused and she saw nurses and doctors of all types." what happened to me doctor ......" she realized that she didn't know his name. "The name is Doctor Hoofington and you had a very low magical aura when Mr. Biker found you. You are very lucky he did. It made the surgery a lot easier. " "Surgery?" she mumbled to herself as she promptly fainted for the fifth time this evening. Doctor Hoofington groaned. Very loud was that groan. And it's because it would be another evening full of endless spell casting. Author's Note Hey guys so i updated my other chapters and made them better hope you enjoy this one! Now we will travel to.......... the palace where we will meet flash sentry and spike. i'll also be shipping rd and soarin, applejack and Changeling (Zapple),Twilight and book pony(Archive), fluttershy and discord,rarity and spike,pinkie pie and Cheese Sandwich, Flash sentry and Celestia. also Trixie and Big Macintosh. i hope you like how i've changed my story!!!
The DreamLuna was dreaming peacefully until a dark presence entered her mind saying; "LUNA!!!!LUNA!!!! I hope you no longer see me as one of your minions? No? Really? Then listen long and well. Just because you cursed me into a bat pony does not mean I am yours! I am not just a winged guard and slave that succumbs to your every whimsy! I am an alicorn and am my own self, not yours!!! Darkness is coming Luna and soon. You should just give up NOW!!!" "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!" screamed Luna. "Ugh, what is it this time?" Celestia muttered. "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!" Luna answered. "Ugh, now i have to get up and walk the long walk.... to the other side of the bed." Celestia groaned. "I'll just deal with it from here." Celestia then used her magic to place a piece of rainbow colored duck tape upon her sisters screaming mouth. "Ahhhhhhhhhh-!" Luna then proceeds to fall back on to her pillow and pass out. "Ahh, all done." Celestia sighs and then nods off to sleep herself. Back in ponyville.... Fluttershy was being haunted in her dreams by a horrible monster. "NOOOOO!" screams Fluttershy. "OBEY ME SLAVE!!!" shouts a muffled disembodied voice. ` Fluttershy, as a final resort of panic uses the magic in her element of harmony to fight back the horrible monst-creature, she couldn't resort to it's level calling it a monster without getting to know it first. Her element causes a new magical surge within her as she spouts a brand new horn.In her new found amazement, she lets go of her concentration and allows the creature to take hold of her and transform her into somepony unlike herself. Suddenly Fluttershy shudders and jerks up. She must repent from her resistance against the Master. She grabs a pair of scissors in her magic aura and snips off part of her back hair piece and her tail. She then uses a razor to give her front piece a buzz into a Mohawk. "A new look for a new career." Fluttershy confidently says. Later that day.... Twilight was studying a new spell whose purpose is to show ponies their true self and then turn them into their true self. Just incase somepony, or some Draconequus were to alter a pony's personality, it would revert them back to normal. "Atheros Mentheos Zenthos!!!" Twilight chants and then proceeds to blast the magic bolt when... BAM!!! The door swings open and Twilight fires the magic bolt in the same direction. "Twilight you are such a dwee-!!!" Fluttershy spoke but then was engulfed by the blue magic bolt surrounding her. A holographic image then rolls showing a kind, timid, and shy pony. The holograph then glitches and shows a stubborn, selfish, and cruel pony. The image then folds back and is sucked inside of Fluttershy creating a pale green necklace on her chest. "Fluttershy are you ok-!" Twilight is cut short by Fluttershy's appearance. Fluttershy was now dressed in black clothing and was wearing a pale green hoodie. "Whatcha lookin at Egghead!?!" Fluttershy glares at Twilight. Twilight deeply offended realized what she has done. " This is all my fault!" Twilight frets. " What have I done!!! I must fix this!" Twilight then proceeds to look up a spell. Something shines in the corner of Twilight's eye. The window! Twilight then looks at the window and is blinded by a bright white light. Still fazed she keeps looking and lands upon a spell. Still blinded, she looks at the age regression spell thinking it is a mood regression spell. Her horn lights up and turns from magenta to a bright white, her wings flare out, then she turns towards Fluttershy as Rarity enters the library. "What the hay is going on in here!?!" Rarity asks as she and Fluttershy are engulfed in the white light. Fluttershy absorbs 90% of the spell while 10% hits Rarity. After the light subsides there is a happy and content butter colored Alicorn foal, with all her hair, playing with a tiny thing in her hooves and a slightly ticked off fashionable ivory teenage unicorn. " What have I done?!?!?" utters Twilight before fainting into unconsciousness. And disappearing from her library home in a flash of sparkling magenta magic generated from her horn. Author's Note This is just the beginning. comment share like review and please refrain from cursing in the comments this is my first fan fic after all. thanks P.S. for my first comic i am using bing pictures. Don't judge signing off ArtemisArt-Alicorn. also what should happen next? should twilight awaken in the hospital or should she awaken in the everfree forest? you will decide. Good Luck u guys deciding my fate makes me go cross eyed just thinking about it!
The Everfree ForestAuthor's Note sorry for not letting you be able to choose the next chapter location but my chapter didn't have enough words to submit my story but you can choose this time! like share review comment CHOOSE YOUR LOCATION!!!: at the end of this chapter!!!:P The Everfree Forest Twilight awoke to see nothing but stripes. moving stripes. "Oh so now the pony is awake, she can taste my yummy bakes." a voice out of nowhere said " Zecora?" asked twilight "Yes and now you can see, my house and all its gleam." The striped zebra said. Twilight now considered the first sentence. " you have food?" she asked " Food yes drink no, for what you seek the river you must go." Zecora answered. Twilight started to get up then promptly fell back onto her flank. "Oops it seems I have forgot, you need to drink this flay borgot." Zecora announced " Flay borgot?" Twilight questioned. "Flay borgot does contain, what you cannot retain." Zecora calmly answered. " What?!? ugh never mind fill me up!" Twilight gave in. Zecora then filled a glass of the flay borgot and twilight downed it in 10 seconds flat. "Twilight please do take heed, only take what you need." Zecora warned. Twilight ignored the warning and downed two more flay borgots. Twilight then got up to leave heading to the door. "Twilight you stumble along the way, please sit down and eat some herbal hay!" Zecora pleaded with Twilight. " I'm fine Zecorsa!" Twilight slurred. "You are not fine you slur your words take my heed, and eat some of my herbal weeds!" Zecora pleaded sensibly. Twilight rose to her hooves,"I am fine you accursed zebra I will give you your worst nightmare if it'll shut your door!!!" Twilight then blasted Zecora's herbs with a magic bolt and turned them into oranges. A second later pinkie burst through the door " Awwww! I'm too late" and walked tail and mane drooping out the door. "AAACK!!! These cursed things I can not rhyme with this fruit , they leave me feeling very mute!!!" Zecora exclaimed. " Good luck with your fuits Zecorsa!!!"Twilight cackled as she went out the door leaving a very silent Zecora behind. Twilight started walking and searching for the river. Because of the overdose of flay borgot, Twilight's vision was blurred and what she thought was a river was a patch of poison joke. She stepped in the patch and ate a petal before she realized her mistake. "Aww! ponyfeathers!!" Twilight said as she spat out the poison joke petal. Twilight was now fed up with ground searching and decided to fly. The poison joke caused her to become twilight wobble and also experience dizziness so bad that she shot into the air and crashed into Zecora's still silent hut. After taking a bath in the poison joke remedy, Twilight sighed."UGH!! I don't get it any more! I don't even know why i'm here I was just in my room with flutt-OH NOOOOO!!!" Twilight wailed. Just then zecora finally spoke, " To find the answers you seek, you must explore your magic to it's peek. Zecora advised. Twilight finally took heed to Zecora's words." I guess I should start to listen to you more often." Then Twilight was suddenly taken in a bright flash of light leaving Zecora's feeble hut. Zecora looked around her messy hut and grit her teeth,"Curse that pony and her mess, she has left me very distressed!!" Zecora then proceeds to clean her home wondering where the Alicorn had gone. Twilight awoke outside a large building. As she got up to see where she was, she immediately fell back down becoming unconscious. Location::: where should twilight end up next? the hospital or scootaloo's house in cloud dale? or should we return to the royal sisters? You decide I write see you soon!:D Noooo! Please don't abandon me I would rather be in a hospital than be abandoned!!! "sniff" "sniff" Please don't abandon me!
The Hospital???Twilight woke up to see dark shapes swarming in front of her. Startled she tried to sit up, but found she could not move at all or use her magic. Twilight started to panic trying to make herself move. She felt her hoof come up in front of her face. Then shocked murmurings came from the dark shapes as a mask with a funny smell to it was attached to her face. Soon the dark shapes began to blur becoming one big mass as she fell unconscious again. Doctor Hoofington was having a long day. She had to deal with a unconscious lavender Alicorn who kept having magical outbursts. One of them had turned all the medical supplies into balloon animals. Now this Alicorn was showing signs of waking up through the gas that had kept a full grown bulky colt named snowflake asleep for two whole days!!! They enhanced it with five different sleeping spores from rare asleep plants enchanted by their own spores! Doctor Hoofington could only hope it would work. As the Alicorn stopped flinching Doctor Hoofington started the New surgery. RainbowDash was napping on a cloud when a foal version of Fluttershy came flying to her cloud snuggling something with her front hooves. Then as she neared, the thing teleported out of sight. She was about to question FlutterFoal when a baby Discord teleported on top of her. RainbowDash simply flipped over and bucked Discowd off her and her cloud. FlutterFoal raced to catch him and glared defiantly at RainbowDash. Discowd then snapped his wittle fingers and turned RainbowDash into WittleDashie. WittleDashie having lost all maturity, gathered some cloud and started a cloud war throwing a puff of cloud at Discowd. Discowd had just been assaulted with cloud and in turn snapped his wittle fingers and a wave of cloud over FlutterFoal and WittleDashie. And then the war advanced into the cloud war of the century. Teen Rarity, not really that changed, decided to go find her friend RainbowDash and talk about her... her circumstance. Rarity her magic now stronger than ever, since she had absorbed some of alicorn Twilight's magic, was able to give her permanent white pegasus wings. Of course she could always get rid of them, but why bother? She was too lazy to try to find a wing eliminating spell, and thought her wings were too awesome anyway. And she set off for RD's favorite cloud and upon arrival was turned, by Discowd, into Wawity, who joined in the cloud war. Applejack and Pinkie Pie having also gotten wings and horns, just to go to the alicorns only party someone had invited them to, flew to RainbowDash's house saw the filly war and were sneaking away when Discowd spotted them turning them into AppleTini and TwinkiePie. Completing their foal minimum for their cloud war. Twilight was waking up again in the room with the dark shapes. But this time her vision focused and she saw nurses and doctors of all types." what happened to me doctor ......" she realized that she didn't know his name. "The name is Doctor Hoofington and you had a very low magical aura when Mr. Biker found you. You are very lucky he did. It made the surgery a lot easier. " "Surgery?" she mumbled to herself as she promptly fainted for the fifth time this evening. Doctor Hoofington groaned. Very loud was that groan. And it's because it would be another evening full of endless spell casting. Author's Note Hey guys so i updated my other chapters and made them better hope you enjoy this one! Now we will travel to.......... the palace where we will meet flash sentry and spike. i'll also be shipping rd and soarin, applejack and Changeling (Zapple),Twilight and book pony(Archive), fluttershy and discord,rarity and spike,pinkie pie and Cheese Sandwich, Flash sentry and Celestia. also Trixie and Big Macintosh. i hope you like how i've changed my story!!!
