The Gentle Goddess

by zyr1987

Rating: mature
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Romance, Fluttershy, Sex, Slice of Life, Human, Fleur de Lis
Length: 3783

Upon recieving an invitation form Princess Cadance, Fluttershy travels to the Crystal Empire for a steamy, sexy week with the amazingly beautiful Fleur de Lis.

One day, in the mail, Fluttershy receives a letter from the princess of love and lovemaking, Princess Cadance, offering to allow her and her friends to each spend the week with a high class prostitute of their choice as a reward for all they have done for the Crystal Empire. After some consideration, and a quick look through the listings Cadance provided, she decides to go with the most beautiful woman she's seen in a long time, a mage by the name of Fleur de Lis, who advertises herself as "the Gentle Goddess."

Soon, she travels with her friends to the Crystal Empire, ready to lose her virginity to this "goddess" and hoping to have the best week of her life.

(Written as practice, and to get it out of my head. And no, I have not forgotten that "Fluttershy's First Time" was supposed to be my only clopfic. My imagination just had other ideas. No, I'm not proud, but I hope you enjoy the story anyway)

Published 2014-08-16 11:30:03 UTC
Last updated 2014-08-16 11:30:03 UTC

The Invitation

Early one afternoon, Fluttershy got the mail from her mailbox. As she pulled the mail out and closed the box, she noticed the letter on top had been sent from Princess Cadance. It was an otherwise nondescript letter, so she wondered if Cadance just wanted to be pen pals or something.

When she got inside she opened it to find a letter from the princess of love and lovemaking going thus:

Dear Fluttershy,

I am writing to you with an offer for a reward for all the things you and your friends have done for me and the Crystal Empire. I thought long and hard about how I could make this reward as personal as possible, considering presiding over your weddings, setting up your honeymoons, etc. but none of these struck the right chord somehow. I also remembered how badly my suggestion of helping you find your true loves went with certain ponies so that was off the table as well. Then I came up with the perfect idea.

If you'll recall, I am the princess of love and lovemaking, so I decided to focus on the second half. First the idea was each of you spends a week with me, but my dear Shiny shot that idea down, so I came up with something better: a week in the Crystal Empire, with your choice of high end prostitute, paid for by me.

Now, I know what you're thinking. “But Cadance, I don't know of any high end prostitutes!” Well, that's why in your mail you will find a copy of “Courtesans” and “Rent Boys”, since I don't know or particularly care about your gender preference. If you're up for it, send me back a letter telling me you want to do this and listing your top three choices in order of preference ASAP and then come on Saturday. The fun will start Sunday morning, or at least, that's when I'll start paying your “lover.”

Hope to hear back soon.

Sincerely,

Princess Cadance

Fluttershy considered the letter, unaware that it had been imbued with magic to make her much more receptive to the idea of spending the week with a high class prostitute. After a minute she decided that if she found somepony she really liked, she would go through with it. After all, it might be fun, and she was feeling a bit horny, in spite of, or perhaps because of, her virginity. She sorted through the rest of her mail, which was mostly junk and a few magazines before pulling out the copy of “Courtesans” Cadance had sent and tossing the copy of Rent Boys Cadance had also sent onto her pile of junk mail. Being an out of the closet lesbian, she had no reason to even pretend to consider the listings within it.

Turning to a random page, she found herself staring at the most beautiful woman she had seen in a long time. She looked to be around Fluttershy's age with pale white skin, light pink hair with a white skunk stripe running through it, a long, fluted white horn coming from her head, and striking purple eyes. She wore a slinky white evening gown, and on the opposite page was the same woman in a striking red bikini that left little to the imagination. Above all that, extending across both pages were the words, written in cursive, “Fleur de Lis” and below that, in block text, “The Gentle Goddess”.

She then looked over the rest of the page, which listed things like her age (23), height (5'9”), sexuality (bisexual), what she wasn't willing to do, etc. It also carried a long bio and a ten questions Q&A section. She read through it all, trying to find the reason this Fleur de Lis wouldn't sleep with her since she seemed too good to be true.

In the end, she didn't find anything that said “you're not good enough to sleep with me” or “I have no interest in people like you” within Fleur's ad, but still couldn't help but feel as if she had no chance with this woman. Still, she decided that Fleur would be her number one choice, for her apparent beauty and gentle nature. both of which had awoken a strong interest in her.

She looked through the rest of the catalog, finding two other people she thought she would be happy spending the week with. In her heart, though, she knew she would only truly be satisfied if she could spend the week with Fleur de Lis herself.

A few days later, she received a short letter back from Princess Cadance, saying, “Your first choice, Fleur de Lis, has agreed to spend the week with you. Take the first train to the Empire on Saturday. Bits for the ride are enclosed.”

If Fluttershy was a different sort of pony, she would be whooping and cheering about this. As it was, though, she simply showed a big smile, excited and nervous about what was to come.

Author's Note

I am slightly ashamed of writing this, I admit, since, I hate how Fleur is all too often characterized as a prostitute or gold digger, or something like that, yet here I am writing a story with the central premise being that she's a high class prostitute (and not a deity).

However. I could use practice in writing sex scenes for a more tasteful clopfic I'm writing (with the same couple), and it would be useful to drag this out of my head.

Also, just so you know, those with horns coming out of their heads (Like Fleur) are capable of magic and are called mages. Those that have wings coming out of their back (Like Fluttershy) are capable f flight and are called angels, for lack of a better term. And yes they were born with these structures.

And yes, I did steal the cover image from anther clopfic. However, I blame money issues for that, as I don't have the money to spare for a commission.

The First Taste

Saturday came much too slowly for Fluttershy, who had forced herself to stop masturbating. She was a bit giddy about meeting Fleur, but also increasingly nervous about what would happen when they actually met.

When Saturday finally came, Fluttershy arrived at the station at Seven thirty, and watched as her friends trickled in one by one to board the eight o'clock train, all of them having received the same offer from Cadance. As they waited, Rainbow Dash asked, “so are we supposed to meet our 'lovers' on the train, or when we reach the Crystal City?”

“I dunno, she didn't say. I would expect we're supposed to meet them in the city itself, though, since I doubt Cadance wants to risk causing a scene on the train, if any of our choices are a bit more, uh, friendly. By the way, I didn't expect to see you here, Rarity.”

“Why not? You don't think a lady would ever stoop so low as to having sex with prostitutes?” Rarity asked

“Well, yeah.”

Rarity seemed offended for a moment, then quickly changed tact, saying, “Well, normally you'd be right, but this is an offer from a princess, and lady or no, I could never turn down an offer from royalty, with the exception of Prince Blueblood. Also, now that you mention it, I'm not sure if I should be surprised to see Fluttershy here as well. She doesn't seem like the type to sully herself like this”

Before anyone else had a chance to question her, Fluttershy said, “Um, I found someone I liked, and I thought I would see if I enjoyed it.”

This resulted in a few raised eyebrows but no comments. Not long after, the train arrived, and they boarded, all excited by the prospects of the week ahead.

The train ride was filled with conversation about their plans for the week and talk about their choices about their lovers, as all six had taken to calling them, and it helped the time fly by. Before they knew it, they were in the Crystal Empire, disembarking from the train.

They quickly headed to the Crystal Palace, where Cadance was waiting for them. After she and Twilight did their silly secret handshake, she said, “Before anyone asks, no, your partners haven't arrived yet, though they should be here shortly. In the meantime, the guard will escort you to your suites so you can unpack.”

As the group followed the guard, Fluttershy took in the opulent surroundings, and marveled at the fact that she, and her friends, were allowed to stay here for a week. With high class prostitutes at their beck and call! She wondered have I died and gone to heaven?

After being directed to her suite, number 16, Fluttershy looked around the love nest. She noticed that for some reason, the entrance to the suite was rather narrow, just wide enough for her wings to not brush against the walls while folded against her back. Still the rest of the suite, which was much longer than it was wide, was plenty big, and had all the comforts one would desire, including a big, comfy couch, a large widescreen TV, a king sized bed, and a bathtub that two could comfortably fit in.

Just as she finished unpacking her clothes, she heard a knock on the door. She went back to the living area and opened it up, revealing the woman she had seen in the picture the week before, now in a lovely white sundress. The woman, wearing a very friendly smile, said, “hello Fluttershy.”

Fluttershy only managed to stutter out a “H-hello,” which got a small giggle from her guest.

The woman, who Fluttershy had forgotten the name of after seeing her, then asked, “so, can I come in?”

“Oh, uh yes, sorry,” Fluttershy said, stepping gout of the way.

The woman, who Fluttershy now remembered the name of, just smiled and walked in, carrying a number of bags with her. She looked around and said, “Wow, Princess Cadance really knows how to treat her guests, doesn't she?”

“She does,” Fluttershy said, thinking, Sweet Celestia, she's even more beautiful in person!

“But of course when her guests are as lovely as you, they should expect the best,” The woman, Fleur, said turning around and smiling at Fluttershy.

Fluttershy turned away, trying futilely to hide her growing blush, but otherwise didn't respond. This earned another giggle from Fleur, who then walked over and said, “You're cute when you blush like that.”

Fluttershy's cheeks became even redder, and she was now so wrapped up in joy and embarrassment from having such a lovely woman compliment her that she couldn't respond even if she wanted to.

Fleur then apparently decided that she had had her fun, and walked over and started rubbing the edge of Fluttershy's wing as she asked, “so, anyway, do you have any questions for me, Fluttershy?”

“Um...did you really mean all those things you just said?”

“Of course. As I said in my advert, I only give praise when it's deserved, and criticism when you're causing me more than a little discomfort.”

Fluttershy blushed again, and Fleur was obviously trying to suppress yet another giggle as she asked, “any other questions?”

“Um...why, um...never mind...”

“No, go on. Don't be shy.”

Fluttershy sighed and asked, “Okay, um...why did you agree to have me as your client?”

“Why not? I mean, it's not every day that you get an offer from a princess, even if for someone else, and the picture of you she sent was so adorable I couldn't say no,” Fleur said, apparently pulling the photo in question out of thin air, a common mage trick.

She passed the photo to Fluttershy, who looked at it and immediately recognized it as the photo Cadance took of her when she and her friends were in the empire for the Equestria Games. She had a big smile on her face, though no makeup, and was wearing a loose fitting yellow tee, white pants, and sneakers, in fact the exact same clothes she was wearing now. She, said “Oh, I see. Thank you,” and passed it back.

Fleur made it disappear again and said, “You're welcome. And since I told you why I accepted your invitation, why don't you tell me why you wanted to spend the week with me in particular? Don't worry, I probably won't be offended.”

“Um...I picked you because you looked so beautiful in your picture and you sounded like such a nice and gentle person in your biography.”

“That's high praise, since that's what I strive to be, a beautiful, gentle lover and friend,” Fleur said, sitting down on the couch and motioning for Fluttershy to join her. “Anyway, how about we spend some time getting to know each other and what you want out of the week before dinner?”

“What do you mean 'get to know each other'?”

“Nothing sexual. Yet,” Fleur said with a wink, “just, you know, chatting for a while.”

Fluttershy sat down next to her and they spent the next few hours chatting about things, with Fleur briefly explaining at one that sex was just one part of her services, and she was willing to do anything with Fluttershy that wasn't illegal or morally reprehensible, aside from anything musical as she was terrible at singing and dancing. Eventually they were called to dinner, ending their conversation, which, for Fluttershy felt far too short.

Dinner was a short affair, mostly due to everyone either wanting to eat quickly or preferring smaller portions, which Cadance chalked up to the desire amongst her guests to have some fun a day early, (not that she objected). After they finished their meals, Fluttershy and Fleur decided to head back to their suite for the night, rather than spend time exploring the castle or schmoozing with their host.

When Fluttershy and Fleur got back to their suite, Fleur gently started rubbing the edge of the angel's wing again, sending a shudder through her body, and asked, “Would you be willing to let me...taste you?”

“T-taste me?”

“Yes. And this time, I do mean it sexually.”

“Uh...right now?” Fluttershy asked, sounding surprised and nervous.

“If you want, or we could wait until later tonight.”

“Well, I guess we could do it right now,” Fluttershy said, more than a hint of nervousness still in her voice, but well aware of the growing heat between her legs.

“As you wish,” Fleur said, turning towards the bedroom. Fluttershy followed, both nervous and curious.

Once inside the bedroom, Fleur kicked off her sandals, and untied her dress, which fell to the floor, revealing that she was wearing nothing underneath. She turned around to face Fluttershy, who quickly averted her eyes.

“You can look, Fluttershy. After all, this naked body will be all over yours soon anyway.”

Fluttershy forced herself to look at the naked Fleur. She noticed that Fleur's pale breasts were small but very perky and Fluttershy couldn't help but want to grab them and squeeze them. Moving downward, she noticed Fleur's stomach was slim and muscular, as if she was an athlete.

She forced herself to look, further down, right to her slit, which was already shiny from her juices leaking out. Supporting this package was a pair of soft, skinny, well toned legs. Fleur, who apparently caught her staring, said, “I assume you like what you see?”

“Y-yes, you have an amazing body,” Fluttershy said, starting to feel even hotter between the legs.

“I'm glad you think so. Anyway, now it's your turn to undress.”

“Undress?”

“Of course. It's a bit challenging to have sex when the receiver is fully clothed, after all,” Fleur said.

“O-okay,” Fluttershy said as she unzipped her shirt from around her wings, and grabbed the bottom if it to take it off. However, she then hesitated, her modesty getting the better of her.

Fleur noticed and said, “Go ahead. I'm not going to make fun of you if you have a less than perfect body.” When Fluttershy still hesitated, she asked, “Would you like me to undress you? Because I can if you want.”

“N-no, that's okay, Fluttershy said as she finally pulled the sweater over her head, revealing her breasts in their full glory. Like most angels, Fluttershy didn't wear a bra because the positioning of her wings made them impractical.

Fleur looked at them, obviously liking what she saw, even though they were perched above a slightly flabby stomach.

Fluttershy then worked on the lower half, taking off her shoes and socks before undoing her pants and slipping them off. The panties soon followed suit, leaving her just as naked as Fleur, who said, “It's always nice to see someone's naked body easily exceeding my expectations. Anyway, when you're ready, just lay back on the bed and relax, and I'll give you a taste of ecstasy.”

After a moment to mentally prepare, Fluttershy did so and said, “Please be gentle.”

“They call me the gentle goddess for a reason, but if at any point you feel uncomfortable, just say so and I'll stop,” Fleur said as she climbed on top of Fluttershy. She pressed her body against Fluttershy's and started kissing her. They were gentle pecks at first, but gradually growing firmer and longer, until she was fully making out with the woman below her, their tongues wrestling for dominance.

Soon, however, (too soon, in Fluttershy's opinion), Fleur was ready to move on, breaking the kiss, and looking down at the shy angel below her. She smiled, and then gently started licking down Fluttershy's body. She started at her lower lip, and slowly worked her way down her chin and neck, sending waves of pure pleasure throughout Fluttershy's body from wherever her tongue touched. She propped her head up to watch where Fleur was going next.

When Fleur reached the top of Fluttershy's breasts, she took a detour to her right nipple, and started suckling on it, an action that caused Fluttershy, now lost in bliss, to moan loudly at this wonderful new sensation.

Once again, it was not to last, however, as Fleur soon broke contact with her nipple, and slowly licked her way down her body, doing a few laps around her belly button, before arriving just above her final destination, where she paused for several agonizing seconds. Fluttershy, desperately wanting to feel Fleur's magic tongue inside her, gave a needy whine. Fleur waited another second before responding, seeming to enjoy teasing her quarry.

Soon, however, she made the final push, sliding her tongue down to Fluttershy's lower lips, then slipping it between them, earning another moan of pleasure from Fluttershy. Almost right away, she felt Fleur's tongue dancing insider her, seeming to know just the right spots to hit to overload her senses with pure orgasmic ecstasy. Not long after that, she felt an unfamiliar, but far from unpleasant sensation building in her loins. It wasn't long after that that she let out a moderately loud (for her) scream and starte bucking against Fleur's face as a powerful orgasm washed over her. Despite the bucking, Fleur was able to keep pleasuring her partner throughout the orgasm.

Eventually, after what seemed like an eternity of bliss but was probably only a minute at most, the orgasm faded, and Fleur sat up, asking, “was that gentle enough for you?”

“That was amazing!” Fluttershy said, breathlessly. “I'm sorry about bucking and squirting your face, though.”

“Don't be. That's how I know I'm doing my job well. And that was just a taste of what I'm capable of. I can do so much more to make your days and nights unforgettable.”

“You can?”

“Of course. I'll tell you more tomorrow. By the way, would you like to taste me?”

“Really?” Fluttershy asked, after shaking her head to clear out some of the post-coital fogginess.

“Of course,” Fleur said, smiling through the sticky cum on her face. She lay beside Fluttershy, her legs spread wide open,

“So, um, what do I do? What you did?”

“Just do what you're comfortable with. If you want to imitate me, then go ahead. All I ask is that you don't use your teeth.”

“Okay.” Fluttershy looked over Fleur's body, focusing first on her face, which was still full of lust, then her perky breasts, and lastly, her soaked pussy, before deciding that, since she was still new at this and not all that confident, never mind her increasing sleepiness, she would keep it simple.

She put her mouth to Fleur's pussy, and gently started licking the outer lips, finding her taste amazing and causing the mage to moan, saying, “oh, that feels good!” Her licks grew harder and harder, until she was inside Fleur, at which point she tried to imitate Fleur's tongue movements, while she gently rubbed her partner's clit with two fingers drawing louder moans from her. She kept this up for a few minutes, until Fleur's moans reached a crescendo and her vaginal walls closed on her tongue. She did her best to ride out Fleur's orgasm, though it was a doomed effort due to how powerful Fleur's bucking was and how weak she was. Eventually all she could do was keep rubbing her clit. When Fleur's orgasm finally faded and she recovered enough to speak, she said, “That was a lot of fun. A good effort for a first timer.”

“Thank you.”

“You're welcome. Now before I fall asleep, I must ask: do you want share the bed with me, or shall I sleep on the couch?” Fleur asked, sounding half asleep already.

“Um...I want to share the bed with you,” Fluttershy said, her post-coital bliss and growing sleepiness bolstering her confidence.

“Okay. Come here. I can tell you're about to fall asleep too.”

Fluttershy did so, bringing a blanket with her, and the two found themselves in each others' soft embrace as sleep took them.

Author's Note

Fluttershy has a moderate understanding of sex, for the record, but her nervousness is masking that somewhat.

Also, the reason I didn't describe anyone else's partners at all is because I don't know who to use or what to do with them. Also, I'm tempted to allow spin-offs of this story where people pick another pony of their choice and create a partner for them.

And as I said, I'm really using this as practice and to get better at writing clopfics, so any roughness in the story can be excused with "I'm still figuring all this out."