A Friendship Broken by Loyalty

by zeldafand

Rating: teen
Tags: Main 6, Princess Luna, Gore, Apple Bloom, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe, Rainbow Dash, Tragedy, Sad
Length: 6009

This is how my Rainbow Factory came to be.

I am Rainbow Dash, and my factory is my greatest work. But how did it happen, how was it built, what corrupted me enough to build such a vile facility, well, this is how it all began.

WARNING: Some Gore!

Published 2014-08-06 22:50:03 UTC
Last updated 2014-08-06 22:50:03 UTC

A Friendship Broken by Loyalty

“Ma’am, just a question, what happened to Scootaloo?” Said a worker to me.

“No need to talk about her.” I said with pain and despair. “Right now, I just want to know how progress is going. SO how is it going?”

“It is going just fine Mrs. Rainbow dash.”

“Good! Keep it that way, I need some fresh air.” I said. After that discussion, I left the factory. Right now, I feel an odd mixture of pride and despair. I know what I did to my little Sister. Sadly, she isn’t here right now. I still remember the first time I built this place. It was supposed to make up for something bad I did at that time, in honor of a friend I lost. I was still normal then, but before I built it, there was that one night. I felt so strange, I was thinking of all the bad things that happened in my life, and there were a lot; some of them too painful to think about. It happened a long time ago.

I was an ordinary Pegasus pony, just really skilled at, like everything. So “ordinary” is an understatement. I still felt slightly underestimated, that I could accomplish more things, more amazing, awful, things. That one day was a wreck. I woke up, and suddenly, everypony was talking smack about me! It started with “Rainbow dash is cool, but she can be cooler.”Then it became “Rainbow dash is lame.” Ever since that one crash, everypony has been insulting me. I was showing off my moves. I even put up a big show for it! I pulled off lots of crazy, amazing tricks. It was in a Wonderbolts arena. I was just being awesome, but I got carried away. In the end I tried to pull of 5 Rainbooms in one boost. But I crashed into a Stone wall… Somehow… and then the ponies started laughing at me after those two bullies said. “Ha, Rainbow Crash failed!” Even my friends, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Twilight Sparkle, Applejack, and Rarity were laughing! IT WAS HUMILIATING!!! So I went home to try and sleep it off.

When I got home, I went to bed, and then I had nightmares of my best friends calling me names. They were also saying really mean things about me. I knew it was a dream, but it kept going on and on! It drove me crazy that night, and I felt mad at my friends. I tried to give them one last chance to show they still cared the next, but then I heard Pinkie Pie cracking jokes about my failure! And my friends laughed at every one! I walked up to them and said, “Is that really what you think about me, A LAUGHABLE FAILURE!?” Twilight tried to calm me down by saying, “Wait Rainbow dash, it isn’t what you think! We were just having a little fun.”

“AT MY EXPENSE!!!” I shouted.

“Now what just a minute RD, we weren’t laughing too much!”

“And so lied the element of HONESTY!?”

“Now Rainbow dash, darling, we didn’t mean any harm. To be honest it WAS Pinkie pie who started it.”

“You are supposed to be GENEROUSLY taking the blame!?”

“But wait Dashie, I was only making them laugh!”

“The element of LAUGHTER, LAUGHING AT SOMEPONY’S FAILURE!?”

“Rainbow dash, how dare you!? That isn’t at all what we meant!”

“And that was supposed to be KIND!?”

“Um… I mean..” Fluttershy stopped and started crying.

“I can’t believe you all; there isn’t anything magical about cracking insulting jokes about your friend behind her back!”

“Now wait now Rainbow Dash! I understand what we said and did was wrong, we are sorry for that!”

“No you’re not! I KNOW you’re going to do it again! I KNOW IT!”

“But Rainbow Dash, darling…”

“SHUT UP RARITY!!! You should be comforting me, telling me my failure wasn’t all that bad, but instead you are all talking about how “Comedic” My faceplant on the stone wall was! Or how “Hilarious” It was when I FELL!!! THAT ISN’T WHAT A FRIEND SHOULD DO!!! You all went back on your elements just to be cruel! How COULD YOU!?”

“Rainbow dash, calm down, this isn’t you!”

“Well, Twilight, apparently it IS!”

“But Dashie?!?”

“Not a WORD PINKIE!!”

“Um… Rainbow dash, please calm down, you’re…”

“Oh I’m sorry, am I scaring you Fluttershy? Or should I say, ‘FlutterCRUEL!?’”

Fluttershy gasped and began to cry loudly. Then I said, “You are SO…” I stopped myself and said, “You know what, what’s done is done. But let bygones be bygones, just don’t do it again.”
“We Won’t!” They all said. Then I replied, “I forgive you.” But I really wanted them dead. That night, I had another bad dream about the same event. But now, I was kept up all night. They put me into a lower level than of my pure awesomeness! How COULD they!? I thought we were friends! Generosity, honesty, laughter, kindness, Magic, and loyalty. “Loyalty, HA!” I thought, “What is the point of loyalty if your friends don’t even care for it. Slowly, my mind descended into a deep darkness, I felt so humiliated, and now my friends fail me too!? Why…Why… Why… “Why” was all I could think of! Throughout the whole night, I had no sleep, and my mind became more and more insane. I was rejected by the only ponies I loved and cared for, now they’re going to PAY! But how could I do that? How could I betray the ones I love? My mind fumbled over this question all night. Eventually, I asked exactly HOW to betray them. They were so mean, so inconsiderate. Why would they ever do that!? WHY!? Again my mind drifted through that question. Why… Just… why…? Then the next day, I tried it again. I went to find them, but when I looked for them, I couldn’t find them. I searched all day; it was tiring for a Pegasus who got no sleep. It was like they were avoiding me! I went literally everywhere in Equestria, but still couldn’t find them. Then I thought to myself, “WHERE THE HAY COULD THEY BE!?” I was gone all day, and when I got home, a worse surprise was to befall me.

I was tired, my wings were exhausted, and my hooves didn’t want to move! But I had to at least get home, and THAT is when another thing happened. I opened my door and Black Paint fell all over me, I wiped it out of my eyes, it burned, but I did it anyway. I looked up, and then I saw Pinkie pie, and she was laughing her mane off! She deliberately covered me in paint and nearly cost me my eyes! So I said, “PINKIE!!!!!!!! WHAT IN EQUESTRIA WAS THAT FOR!!!!!????” Then she replied, “Come on, it’s just a little harmless fun!” But I wasn’t laughing, I was SO infuriated! After all I did, SHE decided to make my day worse! That is where Pinkie Pie was put on my “Hate List”, for “Deliberately upsetting me after a long hard day of searching for everypony, when in reality, she was planning this all along!” And It was a good description too, after I stepped forward, I hit a pressure plate which dropped streamers on me, it WASN’T FUNNY!!! Then I was about to say something to Pinkie when I slipped because of the paint and fell down my stairway! It was ORIGINALLY harmless, but I GOT HARMED!!!! And thanks to Pinkie Pie, I was now badly hurt, my wing was sprained and my neck wouldn’t move! When I moved my neck, I moved it back into place, apparently, she DISLOCATED my NECK! I got back up and Pinkie Tried to apologize, but I wouldn’t accept her apology, she caused me Emotional and now PHYSICAL pain, all I could say was, “Get… Out… NOW!!!!” Then Pinkie pie scurried away like the rat she was! Little did I know there were more “Friendly pranks” in my house!
After Pinkie Pie left, her traps didn’t leave with her. So NOW I had more pain to experience, oh goody. I tried to get back in my house to get to bed, but when I reached the stairway to my room, I Slipped on a whoopee cushion that let out an insulting farting noise as I fell to a possible DOOM! I tumbled down the stairs one step at a time, and it was extremely painful. And When I hit the bottom, I tripped over boneless; who made me fall into my kitchen, I hit a counter and a knife fell right into my Right hoof. “AAAAAAAGHH!!!!!!” I shouted. I was in such excruciating pain, the knife dug deep and my hoof was leaking a lot of blood. When I tried to pull the knife out, a spoon fell on the knife and drowned it deeper into my Hoof. I could hardly bare the pain, but I pulled the knife out, and it was bleeding more than a gutted fish! I tried to reach a phone, but it was all the way upstairs. So, instead, I just got large amounts of paper towels and wrapped it around my now gushing hoof. “Pinkie Pie, if I live through this I will SO KILL YOU!!!!” I shouted. But that wasn’t the last of it! I went upstairs and my phone was missing, which was great, and I couldn’t go all the way to the hospital, it was too far, and I was in pain. So I decided to go to bed.

When I got to my room, in slipped on some soap, obviously left by pinkie pie, and slid into my bed which was covered in maple syrup. “Some friend SHE is!” I thought. I got up from my bed and turned on the lights which triggered another “Surprise”. The light was wired to a net full of pillows, and it fell on me! Luckily, it was just pillows so it didn’t hurt too badly, but after this night, I didn’t want any more “Friendly” Pranks. So it only got me more upset. Now I had to take a shower to wash off the syrup, blood, and feathers from the pillow prank.

Clearly she knew I would fall for the syrup prank, so now, the shower was Booby trapped. GREAT!!! But I didn’t know this, so I turned the handle… and a rubber ball hit me in the head. “DARN IT PINKIE!!” I shouted once more. Then I was finally able to wash myself off… after Pinkie replaced my body wash with oil. Now THAT was all over me too! I found my REAL body wash, but not until after picking it up caused a plastic screen to fall on me. But this actually WASN’T Pinkie Pie’s prank, because she meant to be friendly, this one was cruel. Actually it wasn’t a prank at all; it was just a loose screen on my roof that happened to fall when I picked up my body wash. NOW I could finally take a shower. I let the water wash off most of the stuff that covered me, and scrubbed off the rest with a sponge. After that, I went to bed and said, “Worst… night… EVER!!!” Then I went to sleep, where more pain caused me mental damage in my dreams.

I felt the pain in my hoof, but now it was gushing out more blood. And then I dreamed of Anvils falling on my head, and ruining my head’s shape, physically breaking it open. Now my head was spitting out blood beyond my comprehension, and the worst part was, I COULDN’T WAKE UP!!!! The nightmare trapped me in pain and misery, and the culprit… PINKIE PIE! Then Princess Luna came to help. She saw me and noticed my pain and said, “Rainbow dash, I know you feel upset, but do not let your anger control your actions, it is the only way to keep your friends.” And with that, she waved a magic spell and I woke up.
Turns out, it was past noon, and that nightmare was keeping me occupied. I heard what Luna said, but after the pain and agony Pinkie Pie caused me, (Unintentional as it was) I completely disregarded what she said and set out to seek vengeance. After what she did to me, she NEEDS to be dealt with! So what if she is supposed to be my friend, a friend doesn’t put their friends in near-death experiences! I was going to kill her, but luckily, Applejack needed some “Help” on the farm, so that distracted me and I decided to help her instead of going after Pinkie pie. But I was going to now suffer more pain.

Applejack told me to go into the barn, but instead of giving help, I gained agony. As soon as I walked in, a block of hay fell onto my left wing, and it broke it. I looked up to see where it came from, but all I saw were orange hooves scampering away. Sadly for her, I knew who it was… APPLEJACK! I was so upset, so that I had to ask, “APPLEJACK, WHAT WAS THAT FOR!!!!???” Then she replied, “After your ‘episode’ two days ago, we all figured it’d be best to keep you grounded, cause you ain’t as fast on your hooves as you are in the sky.” This infuriated me, to think that my friends wanted to take away the one thing I love most, FLYING! They take away that, and I am just “Rainbow” Not “Rainbow dash”. They KNOW flight defines my natural talent. Honestly, how low can they go!? Then I was going to walk away when a pitchfork flung up and hit me in the face! The vibration shook my entire body and then I fell unconscious.

When I woke up, I was still at Applejack’s farm, my wing was still broken, and my hoof was still badly injured. Then I went to talk to Applejack, and it was going to be painful. Not physically, but emotionally. I went to her room, and overheard her talking about how she “Needed” to break my wings to “Teach me a Lesson.” NO SHE DIDN’T!!!! That was completely unnecessary! I was so overcome with fury, so I walked up behind her and started to strangle her. Applejack tried to break free, but no matter what she tried, I wouldn’t let go. She deserved to be punished. I heard her choking, and pleading for mercy, but I wouldn’t show it. Instead, I hung on harder and harder until she stopped moving. Her last words were, "Rainbow... Dash... Wh-wh-why!?" and then Applejack had breathed her last.

I couldn’t believe what I did; I got so mad that I killed my best friend! It was horrible! At first I felt satisfied, but then, I felt despair at the loss of my friend. Turns out, Applebloom was watching the whole time, and I saw her shake her head and run away in tears. “WAIT, IT ISN’T WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE!!!” I shouted. Who am I kidding? Of COURSE it was what it looked like, I KILLED Applejack! Me, Rainbow dash, the element of Loyalty, betrayed and killed my friend in cold blood! “Oh no, I’m a monster!” I whispered. My friends played pranks and broke my wings of course, but NONE of them deliberately tried to kill me! But I DID! I heard Applebloom tell Big mac and Ganny Smith what happened, so I ran away before they could catch me. And I ran home, hoping that they wouldn’t come looking for me, but even if they did, they can’t walk on clouds, so I am MOSTLY safe.
It was night yet again, and now, instead of nightmares of my friends treating me like dirt, I dreamed about me killing all of my friends! I couldn’t believe it, but after killing Applejack, I was unsure. Now I drifted deeper into insanity. What was originally a nightmare turned into a thought, a reality, and now, I had to stay secluded. I was trapped in an insane asylum where my mind was completely lost, I was groaning and wheezing, and saying consistently, “I will kill them, I will kill them, I will kill them!” Then I screamed and then woke up.

It was still night, but I couldn’t sleep, so I went downstairs and fixed myself a midnight snack. I made an apple pie which brought me to tears as it reminded me of Applejack, the friend I killed. As I ate the pie, I felt nothing but regret; regret that I ever killed my friend. My mane was all over the place, it was messier than anything I have ever seen. Turns out, I had blood in my mane, and it was a horrible sight. Apparently, applejack’s blood was actually spilled when I strangled her to death. And now, I went out again to get some fresh air. The insanity I suffered was luckily just temporary at THAT time. So I went to visit Rarity. Just to let out steam. But it was nowhere near letting out steam.
I walked into her boutique and said, “Hey Rarity, how are you?” Thankfully, she hadn’t heard about Applejack, so she said. “I am just fine darling; I was just making a dress for Applejack.”

“What?” I asked.

“I am making a dress for Applejack's big appearance at the Appaloosa state fair. Doesn’t it just scream ‘Southern’?”

“Uh, yeah, of course.”

“Is something on your mind darling?”

“What NO, No, um… No I’m fine.”

“Well, at least you’re okay.”

Um…”

“Anyway, this dress is sure to give her a great charm at the fair, it’ll be…” A knock on the door cuts her off. Rarity went to open the door to reveal a weeping Twilight. Rarity said, “Twilight, what brings you here darling? I was just making a dress for Applejack.” She noticed Twilight’s tears and asked, “What is it Darling?” Then Twilight replied with a trembling voice, “Applejack is dead!” And at that moment, Silence hit the room for about five minutes, and then Rarity started to cry, “Whatever do you mean darling, she isn’t really dead is she?” Then Twilight said, “She is…” She sniffed, “Her funeral is at Sweet Apple Acres at 4:00 pm.” I could do nothing but stay silent, while obviously struggling to keep myself from saying that I killed her. The tears were unbearable, I could see just how depressed Twilight and Rarity were, their tears were flowing from their eyes like a waterfall, quickly hitting the lowest possible point it could hit, practically flooding the room with salty water from the eyes of the two friends I majorly disappointed. It just happened to be 3:55 pm, so the funeral began in 5 minutes.

When the funeral started, everypony was saying kind words about how much of a good friend Applejack was. Pinkie Pie talked about how she always baked with her at the farm, Fluttershy didn’t even get on stage to say anything, Twilight talked about pretty much everything we loved about Applejack, and Rarity just had a dramatic breakdown after mentioning that she had a dress planned for Applejack's honorable trip to Appaloosa. And then she asked, “Rainbow dash; have you anything to say about our good friend? Come up and say…” Her sentence was cut off by her breathing deeply and then she continued, “A few kind words about our dearest partner.” When she said this, I felt so overwhelmed with guilt, I ran away from the funeral, with nothing to say but, “I’M SORRY!” Then I disappeared from their sight.

I was now at home again, where Twilight Sparkle just happened to visit me. She asked me, “Rainbow dash, do you know what happened to… Applejack?” Then Twilight breathed in deeply. I was now overcome with my conscience and I admitted, “I Killed her!” Then I covered my face with m hooves. Twilight said, “What!?” She was now welling up in tears, “You killed her?”

“Yes, I did.”

“But, but…. But WHY!? Why would you do this!?”

“She said I deserved what happened to my wing because of her, that I ‘Needed’ To be ‘Grounded’ for my ‘Behavior’, but I didn’t! She had NO RIGHT to just BREAK MY WING like that!”

“Well apparently, she did. Why don’t you just take the body and get rid of it? You’ve already taken away our friendship, how is taking Applejack’s body any different!?” Then she stomped away. I knew at this point that I needed some way to atone for my sin of murder, so I decided to build a facility that would take Applejack’s dead body, and make it great. I didn’t know how to do that though, but then I realized that there was a major shortage in Rainbows, so I thought of a way to make them, artificially. And with that thought, a great Factory was to be made. I had to think of the design, the blueprints for the exterior and the floor plan for the interior. I was going to make the best factory there ever was. I hired a few spare Pegasi to help me build it, but I was going to make it a surprise, so all who knew of the factory were sworn to secrecy lest death take them.

I was up every day and every night, just trying to build a fantastic facility, which was going to be able to make Rainbows artificially. The design was perfect! The idea was Amazing, and the whole plan was just the right thing to do. I designed the factory to shoot out the colors of the Rainbow using the blood of Applejack to create the liquid which became the Rainbow that was launched out. I was building for Days, months, YEARS even, just trying to make sure that everything was PERFECT! I kept working and working with the help of others to design a factory so devious that it couldn’t possibly be flawed.

But the factory took forever to build, the days became months, months became years, and years became Decades. And after YEARS of hard work and determination, I finally finished it, The Rainbow Factory! It was a beautiful, yet HUMONGOUS building that had more machines than any other you’ve ever known! The building was in the sky right below the Weather Factory, in fact, it was PART of the weather Factory. It was over 20,000 Feet high with Exhaust pipes that were sticking out of the roof, and they were eventually going to be letting out steam and smoke that would otherwise cause the place to overheat. The building was also 40,000 feet in width and yet had a dark and fearsome atmosphere. It was amazing; this factory was going to be working for eons to come. It was entirely made out of steel that was nearly impossible to break, and ladders were not available, for the factory was made for Pegasi.

I was overcome with joy and excitement, I was filled with such pride and confidence, I could hardly keep it in. This was the most Awesome design in the history of factories, it still fills me with pride today. And NOW it was time for the final touch. I went to the graveyard where applejack’s body was buried. I found her grave which read “Applejack, the most incredible and honest pony in all of Equestria, and loving granddaughter of Granny Smith and amazing sister of Applebloom and Big Macintosh.” Here, I stared at the grave, for hours, weeping, and crying about how I lost… no… killed her. Then I said, “You know AJ, you were really somepony weren’t you, a great friend, honest, dependable, and more loyal than I’ll ever be again. I killed you for no real reason, but now, hehe, now you’re gone, but I am going to take your dead body, and I will make a rainbow in your honor! I promise you, it will be the most vivid Rainbow ever seen!!” And with that, I dug down to her coffin and opened it. But what I saw shocked me. Her Color was COMPLETELY gone! I was horrified and despaired at the fact that I could now no longer make that rainbow in her honor. “NOOOOOOO!!!!!” I shouted. “Darn IT!” How could I forget about Spectrum!

I buried the coffin but took the body to Twilight’s now rebuilt library. I found a book about how a ponies color is there. It said, “Spectrum, the colorful liquid in a ponies pumping and beating blood flow as they are alive, to spread their color throughout their bodies thereby giving a colorful glow to that pony. Unicorn, Earth pony, Pegasus, or Alicorn, they all have Spectrum in their living blood.” “Ugh, IDIOT! Of COURSE!!! A pony’s spectrum only flows when they are alive. Now that applejack was dead for 13 years, her Spectrum no longer exists in her body! I’m SO STUPID!!!!” I shouted to myself. I knew about this, but it slipped my mind, and now it is too late. That is when I came to an evil realization. “It has to be LIVE ponies, not dead ones. IT HAS TO BE LIVING PONIES! Then live ponies I shall get!” And with that, my conscience left me, and I was corrupted; focused on only 2 things, Teaching Scootaloo how to fly so she won’t come here, and using live ponies’ blood to make artificial Rainbows. And so the bloodshed began.

I went on a hunt, for living ponies. I decided that I would get as many as possible to make the rainbows, so now, my workers went out and got some, and then I went to get my own. First of all, I wanted to get back at Pinkie for all of those cruel pranks. So I went to Sugar cube corner. I didn’t even bother to knock, I didn’t care if the door was locked, I kicked it right off of its hinges. I heard Pinkie pie screaming when she knew of my intentions, she attempted to run, but I caught her and dragged her off. So I hooked her to a machine, a masterpiece of my own invention, the “Pegasus Device’ which I had recently installed after the whole “Spectrum” Enlightenment. Pinkie was crying and weeping and said, “What are you doing Dashie!? I thought we were friends!” Then I said, “Friends, what kind of friend plays pranks that nearly KILLS SOMEPONY you care about!? No Friend would just leave their friend to die, so we aren’t friends anymore Pinkie, our friendship is over!” Then I started up the machine which brought a gargantuan knife towards Pinkie Pie, I pulled a lever bringing it closer and close, then I pushed the lever in the opposite direction, causing the knife to Stab right into Pinkie’s chest. The knife pierced through her body and came out of her back, causing blood to shoot right out, and the blood splattered all over my body, covering me in a crimson coat of red blood. "Rainbow dash... Why!?" Then the knife reversed itself, revealing a syringe the stabbed into the same spot and sucked all of Pinkie pie’s Spectrum out of her body, after revealing a SCREAM of pain and agony, Pinkie pie screamed her last and her colorless, motionless body was dropped into a shredder to get whatever remained of her Color and convert it into liquid spectrum of the finest flow.

The blood was carried through the machine where it separated her spectrum from her blood and made the colors of a rainbow. The Red parts were especially vibrant, to where the color was sent to a mixing barrel which made the colors more like a light where it was heated and melted into a beautiful red. I went out to see the factory shoot out the colors, and a rainbow was made. It shot out like a fountain, but became light reflected by the sun making it shine even brighter! And I knew, this was my destiny, this was why my cutie mark had the primary colors, to show me that I was the primary source of creating the greatest rainbows EVER MADE! What happened next was even more fantastic. My workers spread out, stealing ponies of all kinds from all over ponyville, and it was perfect! The ponies were melted, crushed, burned, Sucked life from, and even more, shredded and ground up into beautiful rainbows. THIS… Was my DESTINY!!! I was BORN to do this! I was born to make rainbows through any means possible, especially violent ones. I continued to steal ponies away from their homes, and Applejack’s body was shredded only making a small bit of orange spectrum.

I am MADE FOR THIS!!!! I shall kill everypony I don’t think are necessary for Ponyville’s population. And then I decided to do the vilest thing possible, “I shall kill all of my friends, oh what amazing colors THEY’LL make!” So that is what I set out to do. I already used Applejack and Pinkie, so now I just needed to kill Twilight, Rarity, and Fluttershy. The colors they’ll make will be astounding! I went to Rarity’s boutique, and I broke in, she got up to see what was happening, and there I Grabbed her by the hooves and flew her to the factory where I hooked her to the Pegasus device. Rarity said “Rainbow dash!? What in Equestria is this, what is going on!?” I simply replied bluntly, “I am going to end your life. Your blood will make a vibrant blue, or purple, but It will be amazing!” So instead of her dying from the knife idea, I put her on a treadmill where her body was moved to a crusher, which crushed out all of her blood and flowed it through to the conversion chamber. The sights, the dark gloomy atmosphere, the blood on the floor, walls, and ceiling, The sounds, the screams of Pain and agony, the horror of it all, the ferocious deaths! And I enjoyed every second of it. Rarity was no more, and her blood made a vibrant blue shoot from the sky, and the rest of the rainbow was dull in comparison.

Next was Fluttershy, the sweet and innocent Pegasus pony who was mean enough to laugh at jokes about my failure. She was to be punished severely in the most painful way possible, I broke into her cottage, her animals tried to protect her, but I tore them apart limb from limb, Fluttershy was screaming and crying as she saw all of her critter friends being ferociously ripped into pieces by my bare teeth and hooves. There was blood all over her cottage as a result, all the critters were in pieces, there vital organs on the ceiling and walls, and there broken bodies lying limp on the floor. It was amazing, I tasted the blood and it satiated my thirst, then Fluttershy was crying all alone.

“Rainbow dash, Please stop, why are you doing this; This isn’t you!”

“It’s the new me Fluttershy, I was born for this, this is my destiny!”

“But how is being a cruel and vicious murderer your destiny, you were supposed to be loyal!” She cried. Her tears were flooding her cottage for a long time. Then I dragged her away from her home. “I have a new loyalty now Fluttershy,” I said, “A loyalty to my finest work ever, my amazing achievement, too bad all who hear of it will never live to tell the tale.” And I took her to the factory.

Now it was time to kill my dear friend Fluttershy. I hooked her to my device and pulled the lever. Then Fluttershy tried to renew my goodness once more by pleading, “Rainbow dash, please stop this, you’ll never get anywhere with killing.” She cried loudly, “And I Don’t deserve to die! All my life I have been completely innocent, why now, do you choose to end me?” Then I looked at Fluttershy, stared her deeply into her eyes and said, “Because, you are not as kind as you claim to be, the element of kindness, so sweet and innocent, UGH! It makes me SICK! Your very existence haunts my mind, and now I am going to FINISH that existence, and end your life now.” I pulled the trigger and, SLICE! Fluttershy was pierced. Her last words were, “You have become a monster Rainbow dash. What happened to you? Why… did you…” And her life was taken. The syringe descended once more to claim the blood of yet another victim of my dastardly evil. Now it was time to take out Princess Twilight Sparkle.

I went to her house, and knocked, I figured that betrayal was the best way to take her life, so that is what I was going to do. She opened the door and said, “Rainbow dash! Oh, thank goodness you’re okay! After you ran away, I thought you were gone for good, I haven’t seen or heard of you, and now some random Pegasi in uniforms are taking ponies away to who KNOWS where!? Thank goodness you weren’t taken!” But I just stared at her, silently glaring with an evil look in my now crimson eyes, at that instance she knew and said, “You? Why, what did we ever do to you!?” Then, Squish, I plunged a knife right through her heart, her blood was now spilling relentlessly and her last words. “Why, Rainbow dash, I thought our friendship meant something to you! You really… are a failure, because you failed to keep… your anger… and hatred under tabs, and…” She gasped loudly for a last breath of air to say, “That is the biggest… fai…lure… of…” *Breaths loudly* “of them all…” And she dropped limp and motionless onto her castle floor. Her blood was now covering the crystal flooring with a crimson light. Her blood was now a pool that you could practically swim in! And I took her now motionless body to my factory, her blood was now mostly gone, but I crushed what was left, and then, the colors of all of my friends shot up into the sky where all of the colors were very bright and vibrant. Then I said, “Who needs friendship!? In the Rainbow factory, there is no friendship, just death, and fears in the future shall come true, and not a single soul ever gets through.”

At this time, I went back into the factory and saw too many unicorns and earth ponies, so I said, “STOP! There is a new law now, every Filly who passes their flight tests gets to live, where the fillies who don’t, are sent here to make rainbows either with THEIR blood… Or OTHERS. IN THE RAINBOW FACTORY…”

“WHERE YOUR FEARS AND HORRORS COME TRUE!”

“IN THE RAINBOW FACTORY…”

“WHERE NOT A SINGLE SOUL GETS THROUGH!!”

And then, we moved the factory higher into the sky and kept it in a secret place in Cloudsdale. It was to be a final field trip for all fillies who failed their flight test. All who worked here were sworn to secrecy, abandoning all life in the outside world. Many ponies went missing from Equestria, and none were ever found. My only hope was that I would never have to see Scootaloo’s face ever again, not after what I did. I hope now that she never has to come here, to find out what I have become. I hope, that she will never see me ever again; not even at death. And I will never leave this factory until Scootaloo is dead.

Author's Note

Here is a story of how Rainbow Dash made the Rainbow factory, why she did it, and how the Flight test law came to be. Easily the longest hing I have ever written. Please comment!