Does Freedom Exist?

by CandyflossAJ

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Sad, Adventure, Tragedy
Length: 1131

Life in the dreaded factory, is amazing for the lost ones, but the few who kept their sanity aren't coping so well, they will make a change to the plans.

Life in the dreaded factory is amazing for the lost ones, but the few who kept their sanity aren't coping so well, they will make a change to the plans.

There is only one chapter because this is just an introduction. Its a chapter you don't really need to read, to understand the rest of the story that will be published eventually

PUNCTUATION IS BAD I KNOW, OKAY?
I claim all the dislikes cause i'm rubbish at writing and rubbish at life ;)
Blood is included a bit, but not guts and disgusting stuff you know.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-08-07 20:10:03 UTC

Does Freedom Exist?

Does Freedom Exist?

Walking around the factory kills me, literally.

Every day I get a knife to the chest, it hurts but it does not bleed. Not one drop.

I simply take away the pain from others, so that they die a more peaceful death.

I can’t believe some ponies love the insanity.

OTHER PONIES ARE DYING HERE EVERYDAY!

I can’t do anything about it, none of us can.

We keep are sanity by training ourselves, it could be called play fighting because we’re never angry at each other therefore proper fighting doesn’t take place… At least not between the sane ones.

You ask why we are training. We train to fight against those insane ponies who don’t care for no pony but themselves. We will destroy this plan.

The deranged alicorn who came here won’t succeed with their plan.

She was neither Luna nor Celestia. That Alicorn pony was insane, asking of such a thing.

CRUEL!

If I had such power to kill that pony, they would not exist anymore, but I’m here I have no such power anymore.

I remember when the Alicorn came and told us that Celestia was weak, and that we were ready. All of us stared at her.

We were not ready. Clearly we never would because we chose to defend Celestia under any costs.

I knew my chance. I could possibly break the machine. Every single worker was down here…

It was a life threatening decision but I was prepared for it.

I dashed for the door and made it before the guard reacted, I took my hammer out (which everypony carries around) and I started to smash the controls of the deadly machine.

The alarm went off.

I had a list of things going around my head. Next step was getting into the air vents, unfortunately I was unable to because I was tackled to the floor by a guard.

Then I fell unconscious.

I awoke seconds after but in clouds. Am I dreaming?

Princess Celestia is sitting across from me, with her back turned.

“Hello?” I did not know what else to say.

Silence.

Then she spoke… “Shine Blast, I have awaited to enter your head, so I can talk to you. You may already know but you are special. You contain a strong magic but you cannot control it because you don’t have a horn. But… you have wings which are also a way of controlling your magic, only you’re magic though. Your cutie mark is hidden underneath a tattoo. Underneath the tattoo are two pink, white and purple sonic blasts, one of them represents a special move in which you fly up wards and get an air cone around you but before it breaks you spin around and break the air cone flying downwards. The other however is the bigger of the two and is more important to Equestria-“

“To Equestria? What do you mean Equestria?” She looked at me and simply continued.

“When performing this move you fly straight up and prepare to break the air cone, when you do so all memories of death and nightmares from other ponies come into your head and the owners lose it from their own, this is beneficial to Equestria. You have to perform the move.”

“But how I’m stuck in this damned factory and this move can’t simply just get rid of it.”

“It will get rid of the ‘damned factory’ Shine Blast because the factory is made up of death and nightmares”

“So I can be free of this torture and everypony else to. No more death.”

“Shine Blast you are waking up now you will be in pain but I leave you with the task of completing the move, goodbye. Good Luck.”

Damn, that move was life threatening, I can’t see properly…

No… please…

They could not have removed it.

But they did, why?

It was always something I was scared of, being blind was one but being colour-blind is even worse because you can see everything but darkness always consumes your sanity.

It’s like the cut around my eyes because I can feel blood dripping down my face like tears, but instead of being tears that help you get rid of pain.

It was blood, it was stinging my face.

I promised myself and a lot of ponies I would never give up, I feel like I already have…

*BANG*

Why is the door making noise? I should check it.

*BANG*

All that training was worth it because I was able to dodge the oncoming flying door heading my way.

“Come on Shiny, we can get out an entire wall was broken.”

As soon as Emerald said we could get out, I blasted off not waiting for her behind me. But not needing to because I knew she could match my speed.

We used a special tactic to go around all the corners using our wing sensors to know when needing to turn and shifting our bodies so we made either a hard left or a hard right.

“All that training pays off, Eh Shiny?”

“Yeah Em, it really does.”

We finally got to the blown off wall, and sped out of it as quickly as possible.

We continued to fly not knowing where we were going, but knowing that at least we were going away from the factory.

I saw a huge city, with a castle at the top of it. I couldn't say what colours it was at the time because I simply could not see any colours.

We flew towards it hoping to accomplish our dream, hoping that it still existed.

Suddenly we both had to stop, because Princess Celestia was in our way glaring at me.

I can’t believe I forgot what I was trusted with.

“There’s still time, Hurry up. Before it is too late!” Princess Celestia basically screamed it to me

I took a deep breath and fired for the clouds, going as fast as I could.

I could see the air cone forming around me, I knew this was something I was going to do no matter what would try to stop me, nothing would get in my way.

As the air cone broke I fired straight into the upper cloud layer and then everything was rushing through my brain and colour started to return to my eyes but as this was happening I was falling back towards the ground.

My body went cold and my wings closed. I’d fall to my death if I did not take control of the situation.

I opened up my wings, spun myself around and started flapping my wings really fast I ended up stopping face to face with Princess Celestia.

“Shine Blast, Emerald… Freedom does exist”

-To Be Continued -