My new pony life

by Shadow9302

Rating: mature
Tags: Adventure, Romance
Length: 915

A romance Action/adventure first Fanfiction sorry if bad please help me as I go along i'll update about every week or 2

Blaze Hartline had a horrible life and died because of it, will he have a better one as a pony? What conflicts will happen during his time here in this new world and in a new body? Please review and give me advice as i make the chapter's. Rated M for blood and gore. OCxLuna

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-08-09 21:58:09 UTC

The Day I Died

A/N: Hello everybody let's get right down to it my name is Cristin (yes I'm a dude) and this is my first fanfiction. Hope everyone likes it. I am going to start updating my chapters every week or two from now on.

My New Pony Life

Chapter 1: The Day I Died

   I grew up on earth in a disgusting part of town in North America I was born into a poor family with an older brother who constantly beat me, my dad ran out on the family before I was born and my mother was dying while my brother took care of her. We had enough money to get me an education. my school was very ghetto. There were two types of groups, kids were ruthless and unkind and only a small number that were nice. But I didn't belong to either of them, I would constantly try to be funny and join the group but they would just brush me off.

Even though my life was horrible i still tried to make the best of it, then i decided to grow up and realized how foolish I was to try and see the good side of life. The only way to be happy was if you had power and to have power you needed money. Being born into this family left me with no money which meant no power.

   I dropped out of high school my senior year, all that time I was in school I was trying to fit in no one was there for me I was alone. I secluded myself from everyone and got an apartment, getting a new job every week because i would get fired for stealing to get by. I thought to myself if I could.... just get a do over into a different life, I wouldn’t care what’s going on I would. I was about 5 ft 6 had long black hair with red tips and always wore a fake long tail which was also black with red tips. I had a white T-shirt with some dirty cut jeans that were somewhat baggy around the bottom of my legs. My name is Blaze Hartline and this is how I died and was given life that changed me forever.

   I was walking around town with a beer in hand looking for a job to get some money to pay the rent, I had recently rented a new apartment but did not have enough. While roaming the dirty streets a young man that wore a black hood walked up to me and said "Hey kid you looking for a job. Wanna make easy money" I nodded he said "Come with me and you'll be paid like a king." I quickly jumped at the chance. It was the middle of the night and he brought me to a bank he said "I need a partner to help me with a job."

I replied "Ok i'll help for half pay." he looked at me with, i couldn't see his face but I could see a crooked smile and said "Don't worry I’ve been planning this for a while we won't be bothered for the next five minutes." He walked up to a wall and pulled a bomb out of his duffle bag it was about three feet in length and placed it to the wall and back up around the corner. It blew and, after a few moments we ran around the corner to see behind the wall was a huge amount of money stacked up in huge piles.

   He told me to put as much as I can in a dufflebag and run like hell which we did, we ran to a broken down shack and placed down the money on the floor, as we looked through I said panting "We are gonna be rich" he looked at me and said "No I'm going to be rich" he stood up and pulled a gun up to my forehead and shot.

I felt nothing all I saw was the ceiling as I fell back, I heard an awful coughing of a laugh as I faded into darkness. There was nothing I was a bodiless being floating I nothingness, It felt like an eternity for how long i was there I was gone in this void. I was starting to go crazy everything was nothing. Just darkness, it messes with you, you know?

I started screaming into the darkness of the void until I saw a bright light.  I woke up and saw a creepy looking forest around me. I was so happy i was alive but again confused and I said "I should be dead where am I?"

A voice said "You are in the Everfree forest."

I looked around and saw nothing but a dark blue coated pony with a light blue mane and tail and I said "Who said that?"

Suddenly the pony started talking and said "I did and you are not like most ponies are you?"

"AHHHHH A TALKING PONY, WAIT DID YOU JUST CALL ME A PONY?" I stood in fear and astonishment.

"Calm down what's your name."

"Blaze Hartline." calming down

"Oh so you’re Human."

"Wait who are you, where am I, and how did I get here, and I'm pretty sure I died!"

"You are in equestria, the land of ponies."

My jaw dropped and I screamed "WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTT!"

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