Saiyan of Allby GMDChaptersWhat the Buck...Meeting the SaiyanGoku, the Fastest BeingClearing Thing's UpSuper Saiyan of AllThe void of SpaceThanks!Important NewsWhat the Buck...Saiyan of All Written by: GMD Spike groaned as he hopped on Twilight's back. He was hoping he could just have a regular day for once. Once Twilight was outside, everypony was screaming. (Which is highly likely at the predicament.) She ignored the screams and headed off to the smoke cloud above the Everfree Forest. *Unknown* The pod had finally reached it's destination and landed in a forest where it would not be seen. Goku was still asleep, and some of his injuries weren't all severe. At least, not anymore. Because they healed... 'n stuff... The pod eventually opened the small door, revealing a half-injured saiyan, who was still unconscious. *Everfree Forest* Twilight was rushing toward the unidentified meteor, which landed smack-dab in the middle of the Everfree Forest. Great, of all the other places it could of landed, it landed in one of the most dangerous places known to ponykind! "Are we almost there? I feel like we're being watched..." Spike said with a hint of fear in his voice. "Spike, it's the Everfree Forest! Of course we're being watched! But we can't think of that right now. We have to find whatever that explosion wa-" Twilight was so distracted with talking to spike, she didn't notice she fell in a gigantic crater. "Mmfhh, mfh mfh mfffh!" Twilight's head was stuck in the ground, so that's all Spike heard. "Uhh... what was that?" Spike asked the pony who's head was 2 feet below ground. A few seconds later, Twilight got her head out, gasping for air. "I said help me get out!" "Oh, sorry..." Twilight turned her head and saw a strange circular object. "Is this what caused that noise? This, small machine?" Twilight was confused. Only something going faster then Rainbow Dash, and yet be this small could make this crater. "C'mon Spike, we gotta-" Once again, Twilight was interrupted when the pod opened, revealing an injured... Uhh... monkey? "Woah! What is that!?!" Spike was confused, scared, and excited, all at the same time! "It looks like a hairless monkey... We gotta bring it back to Fluttershy, she'll no what it is! Spike, get the.. er... monkey and i'll get the pod." "Ughh... why do I have to get the weird alien monkey?" "Relax Spike, just grab it and i'll teleport us to Fluttershy." The baby dragon did what he was told and used all his might to lift the heavy creature. To say Twilight was excited would be the winner of the Understatement of the Year award. She gets to see an alien-like creature, and this thing will be excellent to study! *Fluttershy's Cottage* "And you say this poor thing just fell from the sky in a strange machine?" Asked a friendly yellow pony, commonly known as Fluttershy. "Yea! Didn't you feel that huge earthquake?" Twilight asked. Fluttershy shook her head, how did she not feel and/or hear that? Fluttershy inspected the strange creature, while at the same time, tried to bandage up all his bruises. "Poor guy, he's so injured... What happened to him?" Fluttershy asked in concern. Spike shrugged. "We just found him like that when this pod opened up!" Twilight informed her, pointing her hoof to the pod outside the cottage. Fluttershy nodded. *Unknown* Alright! It's time for some good ol' Goku first person! Darkness, nothing but pure darkness, was all I saw. Frieza did a number on me before my strange transformation. I hope Gohan's alright, Chi-Chi would kill me if anything happened to him! The darkness began to slowly fade away, now all I see is white. The heck is going on here? Is this some sort of dream or... what? Slowly, the whiteness began to fade away as I opened my eyes. I didn't see much, but I did hear female gasps. Atleast, I THINK they were female. Heh, I just noticed, i'm starving! Anyways, I didn't see anything for quite some time, but my vision came back and began to work perfectly. I noticed I was surrounded by animals, there was a bunny, a bear, and even some animals i've never seen before! Oh, and there was also 2 weird-colored horses staring at me like I was a bowl of noodles. "I-It's awake!" Did... did that purple horse just talk? I slowly got up, where in the world was I? I got off the floor and looked around a bit more. Nothing but a bunch of animals. "W-What is it?" The purple horse said. I looked at it, okay, I think i'm losing it. Did that horse just talk? Well, if i'm not. Might aswell make a first impressions. "Um.. hi! I'm Goku!" "AAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!" They both screamed. I had to cover my ears cause I think it went on for an hour or two. "D-Did it just talk...?" The purple one asked with fear. Looks like they see me as a threat, better clear that part up. "Heh, I was going to ask the same thing to you!" I said scratching the back of my head. Boy, this was embarrassing, and I don't even know why! "G-Goku, was it? W-why are you here? A-Are you going to try to e-eat us or something?" The small dragon asked. I laughed, loud enough to make them think i'm crazy. I finally stopped when they glared at me. I cleared my throat, "Now why would I eat you?" I asked the small dragon. The dragon couldn't answer, guess he was to afraid to ask anything else. "Well, if that's over, I gotta go get something to eat that ISN'T you. Bye!" I waved and flew off. Suddenly, I felt like every part of my body was stone, I looked behind me and saw that purple horse using some weird power to make me stop in my tracks. "Woah woah woah! We're not just gonna let you wander off into Ponyville!" She said. Ponyville? Wait, what? Author's Note Uh oh, what's gonna happen? Pfft, hell if I know! Oh wait, I do. Well, I won't tell t'ill the next chapter! Meeting the SaiyanSaiyan of All Written by: GMD Goku looked at everything around him, everything was purple, and sparkley. 'Yaaaay sparkles!' Goku thought with a smile. "Now, i'm not letting you go until you tell me what the hay you are!" Twilight asked the saiyan. The saiyan giggled, and eventually he laughed a bit louder. "U-Uhm, e-excuse me, b-but why are you l-laughing...?" Fluttershy asked him. He stopped laughing to answer her question. "Well, it's just I can get out of this with ease! Here, watch!" As this was said, Goku stretched both his arms, and let out a small burst of energy, while trying not to destroy anything BUT the magic in the process. "HYAAAAAGHH!!" Both ponies and dragon looked at Goku with awe and fear. Once the blast was done, the small amount of smoke faded, revealing Goku in the process. Goku stood up after the explosion. He looked around him to see if anything was damaged. He looked down and saw some ashes on the bottom. He scratched his head with a weak smile. "Heh heh, sorry, didn't mean to do that." All 3 looked at him once more, they were all silent for about, i'd say 3 seconds until Twilight spoke. "H-How did you... it was just... and I... what!!!" Goku looked at her with a confused face, was there no such thing as KI Energy here? "Well, sorry for that, but like I said, i'm off to go get some food!" Goku said. Twilight knew she couldn't stop him, so she asked him a question. "D-Do you eat, p-ponies...?" She asked with once again, fear. Goku looked at her like he was an idiot. "Umm, can't say I have eaten a horse, so... no." Goku informed her. "We are NOT horses, we're ponies!" The purple one said. Welp, that would explain the town's name is Ponyville. "W-wait, d-do you mean a-any harm to u-us? If n-not, I c-could probably g-get you s-something t-to eat." Fluttershy managed to speak. This wasn't like Fluttershy, usually she would run away from things like this. "Really? Sweet! I haven't eaten in... I'd say about a month. I'm not sure after the battle with Frieza..." Goku said. Both ponies gasped. Frieza? One of the most destructive beings ever!?! "Wait, you battled Frieza, as in, THE Frieza!?!" Spike asked. Goku chuckled. "I'll tell you about it, after I get something to eat, first!" *About 10 minutes later...* Everypony watched as the tall monkey-like figure ate almost everything in Fluttershy's home in under 5 minutes. "H-how can he eat so much with only a stomach! It's like he's a garbage dispenser!" Spike managed to shout out, with Goku to busy chowing down to hear what he said. "Agghhhh, that hit the spot! Thanks!" Goku said with his regular smile. There were plates and dishes everywhere! Just as Goku spoke, there was a knock on the door. Until the door opened, revealing 4 more ponies with a concerned look. "Fluttershy!?! Where are you!!" The rainbow-haired one said. Uh-oh, why are they here now!?! *Ahem, is this thing on? It is? Okay, you are now reading why the others came to Fluttershy's cottage. Have fun with that...* -Nappa from DBZ Abridged Rainbow Dash was snoozing away in her little cloud home, it was still morning and it was the weekend, so Rainbow got to do whatever she wanted. "Zzzzzzz..." Was all that was heard in the house above the skies. Well, atleast until a giant sound woke her up as she fell off her bed. "Yeowch!! Hey, who did that!?!" She spoke, still half asleep. She looked outside, she didn't see anything. What could have caused that noise to wake her up? "Whoever did that, it wasn't funny!" But what if nobody did that? She headed off to Applejack's to see if she heard it too. *Some Apple Farm* Applejack was doing her regular chores. you know, apple bucking, apple bucking, apple bucking, uhhh, apple bucking, and cleaning the windows. "Woooh, nelly, so fahr so good!" Applejack said, it was morning, but she gets up early to do her chores so she can hang out with her friends later. As she was bucking another apple tree, she heard a strange noise coming from the sky. "What in tarnation wahs that!?!" She asked herself. She looked around to farm to make sure that noise didn't fall into any tree or anything. Until a she saw a Rainbow in the sky heading torwards her. Until it crashed into her. And that's how Skittles are made! "Rainbow! Waht the hay ahre you doin'?" Applejack said, pushing Rainbow Dash off her. Rainbow dash let out a weak smile. "Sorry, I just came to ask you something. Earlier today I heard a weird noise, I thought somepony was pulling a prank on me, but I came to see if you heard it too." Rainbow said. Applejack put her hoof on her chin. Or.. bottom mussel? "Ya know, ah heard a strahnge loud noise tooh. We gotta goh get erypony and figure owt waht that noise wahs!" "You said it! Let's go get Twilight and the others." *And that's how it allll happened. I guess.* "Fluttershy!?! Where are you!!" Rainbow shouted out to her friend, as Applejack, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie followed behind her. Now why didn't they just knock and wait for her to answer? As the 4 Elements of Harmony keepers looked around for Fluttershy, they heard a familiar voice scream. It was Fluttershy. (Of course.) "Fluttershah! We're comin'!" Applejack shouted out. "What? It's just KI energy!" Goku told Fluttershy. She screamed t'ill she passed out. Seems Goku tried to show the others about energy. Twilight and Spike both heard hoovesteps. It was none other then the mane 4. (Since Twilight and Fluttershy wasn't with them.) They saw Fluttershy passed out, and looked at Goku. "G-Girls, i-its now what it-" Twilight was interrupted by Rainbow Dash, who was in her offense mode. "HOW DARE YOU HURT OUT FRIEND!?!" Goku looked at her funny, until he knew why she was mad. Strange new lifeform, messed up kitchen cause he ate alot, yep, he's in trouble. "Girls! It's not what it-" Twilight was once again interrupted, but this time by Applejack. "Don't worry Twiliaght! We got thihs!" Twilight facehooved, same with Spike. Well, faceclawed? I dunno. Anyways, back to the story... Applejack locked onto Goku, and brought out her lasso which apparently she has with her. She then threw the lasso, capturing Goku. She tugged Goku forth, but to no avail. "How muhch... do.. ya... weigh!?!" Applejack said, pulling ever so hard on the rope, but Goku still stands in place. "Uhhh, that's personal informa-" Hey look! Another interruption! "That's it! You're goin' down, giant monkey!" Rainbow Dash yelled out. Goku giggle, and stood up. "Fine, but can we at least do this outside? Don't wanna wreck the place." Goku said, making Rainbow smirk. "Sure, have it you're way, cause outside is the last place you'll be!" "Rainbow Dash! Stop! You don't know what you're doing!" Twilight yelled out. Rainbow ignored her as Pinkie, Applejack, and Rarity cheered her on as the Rainbow Dash flew out the cottage and Goku simply walked. Of course, Goku wasn't going to hurt her, just wait t'ill this blows by so he can move on with everything else. *The fight outside.* "Heh, this is gonna be fun. You're going down!" Rainbow Dash said, with a few taunts and her usual smirk. Goku laughed and just stood still. "So, guess i'll make the first move! They don't call me Rainbow Dash for nothin'!" Rainbow Dash readied herself with a few stretches here and there, until she made her attack. She put out one hoof, and began to fly at a very fast speed. Goku watched as the rainbow maned Pegasus charged right at him. She smirked as she saw him stand still. 'This is gonna be easy!' She thought. Finally, she reached Goku's stomach and she smiled. Soon, her smile faded as she saw Goku looking down at her, he gave her a disappointing look. "C'mon, is that all? I expected you to be faster and stronger!" Rainbows frown soon turned to anger. "Wow! The big meany monkey didn't even fall or nothin'! It's like Dashie just punched a brick wall! Well maybe she can break brick walls because she's so fast speaking of fast theres a new ice cream show called Fast Joey's its so delicious it's-" Applejack put a hoof over Pinkie Pie's mouth. "Thahts enough, Pinkie." Rainbow Dash flew straight in the air, until she was high enough to do her fastest attack. "Alright! I don't know how you survived that, but now, you're gonna taste the rainbow!" Goku laughed, 'Hah, Skittles jokes...' he thought. Rainbow Dash now flew straight down until there was a cone surrounding her at her maximum speed. The wind flew all around her as she began to make her finest attack. The cone began to get smaller each passing second, as the Cyan pegasus, ONCE AGAIN, smirked. Goku looked at it with awe and a little disappointment. 'Is this how fast she is? I could go faster then this at age 10!' Goku thought. Now the cone got small enough for it to pierce threw pretty much any amount of steel, the rainbow trail behind her began to sparkle and wave, as her mouth began to flow threw the air. It was time. For the Sonic Rainboom. Goku, the Fastest BeingSaiyan of All Written by: GMD Okay, just a quick message. Thank you all for reading this story, it means a lot to me! And yes, I know I have many errors, but that's what proofreaders are for! Also, just so you know, English was NOT my first language, it was my second. So if you see and errors in spelling, tell me which ones so I can edit them! ~GMD The huge wave of color flowed throughout every inch of the sky's, as the center beheld a certain rainbow pegasus, creating this magnificent move. Goku just stood still, he was once again, disappointed. *Okay, Goku first person is back, baby!* I gotta hand it to her, it wasn't too bad, but it was the speed that made me disappointed. I thought she'd be faster! I turn over to the other ponies and they're all smiling, well, except maybe the purple one, who kept trying to tell everyone that I don't mean any harm. I looked back and saw the rainbow one closing in one me. So I showed her something she may have never seen before, Real speed. Just as her hand... or... is it hoof? I think it's hoof. Anyways, just as her hoof was just about 2 inches away, I went atleast 10% my speed, dodging the attack. She looked around everywhere, it's funny, everyone looked up at me, except the rainbow one who kept looking everywhere, so I ran in front of her. She looked at me with hate, d'awww, is miss ego angry? "Hey! No fair! You can teleport!" She said. I giggled, hah, she thinks I teleported! "If only you knew." I mumbled. Seems she heard me and charged at me with fury. Is that her ONLY attack? Sheesh. Okay, i'm getting bored. I'm gonna end this. As she reached me again, she stopped when I said these words. "I forfeit" She smirked at me. "Hah, I knew you'd come to you're senses that i'm better! But forfeit's not in my book!" She said. I gave her a dull look. "It's not that, it's just you can't beat me. This whole fight is pointless, and if I go any further I might hurt you." "You? Hurt me? You and what strength?" Might as well show some of my strength. I stomped my foot on the ground, causing a giant chunk of rock to rise above me. It was about 100 times my size, I punched it as hard as I could, and, well... it went flying high in the sky. Crumbling from the sudden amount of impact as it went on into the very void of space itself. Everyone looked at me with disbelief. AGAIN! Suddenly, the purple one spoke. "Spike... send a letter to Princess Celestia." She told the small purple dragon. He nodded as he began to write down what she said. Dear Princess Celestia, A strange visitor from space with the body of a hairless ape has crash-landed onto Equestria in a pod. I regret to tell you this all happened one hour ago and I was to busy being, well, amazed at how it came here so quickly! I fear it may be a threat though. Currently Rainbow Dash challenged this thing and failed miserably. It dodged a Sonic Rainboom and every attack Rainbow had without breaking into a sweat! The strange thing is, he didn't even attack her! The part I fear most, is that he forfeit the fight, saying Rainbow Dash wasn't strong enough! When she told him that was false, he stomped his... leg onto the ground causing a giant rock 100 times his size to rise up. He punched this giant monstrosity and sent it flying into space as it crumbled to dust. But, that's not even the worst part! He saids he came back from fighting the evil Frieza! I don't know if he's on our side, or simply wanted to dethrone Frieza. Please reply back. You're faithful student, Twilight Sparkle. The entire time she spoke, everyone stared at me with fear. Though I found this amusing to have them think I was super strong, I gotta tell them. "Now listen, I mean no harm to you or you village. I was sent here in my pod after a fight I had with one of the strongest beings known. I don't know why my pod sent me here, but it just did. So i'm stuck here until I can find a way back home. Any questions?" I said taking a small breather. I saw the pink one about to explode with questions, until I saw the orange one put a hoof on her mouth. "You cahn ahks him one questiohn ahfter we ahsk. Ferst, how cahn we trust ya?" She said. I gave her a "Are you Serious" look. "Well first, did I hurt you're rainbow friend even once? No. Did I forfeit so I didn't hurt her by accident? Yes. Am I attacking you now? No. Di-" I was interrupted by a strange flash of light emitting from behind the cottage. The light got brighter until it began to fade, revealing a much, much much much much taller horse unlike the others i've seen so far. This one was white, had both wings and a very long horn, and her hair looked like if the rainbow horse had a baby with a bunch of cotton candy. She had a very stern look and some small son mark on the side of her butt. I wonder what those mean. She began to speak with the purple one, until they both nodded and looked at me. They both walked up to me, as if I had a bowl of noodles in my hand. Sorry, am I missing something here? I saw the tall white one look me dead in the eye, what is it with people her always looking at me like I got a bug on my eye? "Who, and what are you." The white one spoke. "Well, the name's Goku! And, well, i'm part of a race called the Saiyan's." I said. Her face began to get red fury. And I saw her horn light up. C'mon, more magic? She used this to shoot something at me. I dodged it with ease. "Hey, hey! What they heck was that for?" I said with a much more serious tone. "The saiyans are nothing but evil apes who do nothing but take over planets! I WON'T let you enslave my little ponies!" She yelled. I giggled. "Hah, see, I wasn't raised a saiyan, I was ra-" "ENOUGH OF THIS! YOU MUST LEAVE NOW!" Her horn lit up again, but this time, the attack was larger. My god, why did my race have to be cruel. I ran from this attack, but it seems it was a trap, for now when I turned behind myself I was ingulfed in light. Umm... I dunno where yet... When I woke up, I noticed I was in a strange glittering chamber. There was nothing but sparkling iron, and bars. I turned behind me and found pretty much the exact same thing, but no bars. What happened to me? I got up to investigate where the heck I was, until something hit me right in the head. "YEOWCH!!" I yelped. I looked in front of me to see what just hit me smack-down on the noggin, but found nothing but air. And sparkles. Lots and lots of sparkles. I reached my hand out to see if there was anything invisible and invincible. My hand stopped when I heard a "tap" on the, nothingness, I guess. "Woaah... strange. I wonder if I can break it." I spoke. I turned my hand into a fist, and charged it at the barrier. "OWWW! OWWY OW OW!!" I screeched. Dang, that thing hurts! And it's not even scratched! Atleast, I don't think it is... I don't know for sure since I pretty much see nothing in front. I dunno if going Super Saiyan would work, but it's best I don't cause a commotion. I hear footsteps coming from somewhere away from the barrier. Then another, then another, then... well you get the point! A few seconds later, the footsteps stopped, and a few seconds after that, I saw 2 strange horses with gold plated armor and spears. Their horns lit up and I felt the barrier being dispelled. "Come with us, prisoner. The Princess would like to speak to you." The one on the left said. "Prisoner? Why am I in a prison?" I asked confused. "You may not speak unless we give you permission too, now come." He said, poking me in the stomach with a large spear. "Sheesh, you don't have to be so forceful..." I said. *The end of the castle's hall leading to Princess Celestia and Luna's thrones.* As we were walking, all the, I guess guards gave me ugly looks. One even flipped me off! Well, I think he did, I couldn't tell over the fact that he has no hands.. We began to reach the end of the hall, by then my feet were killing me. I heard a few voice coming from the end, all the of which sounded familiar. Well would ya look at that, we made it to the end! And I thought my legs were gonna collapse or something. As we approached the Princess that made me see nothing but light, (Jerk) every guard stared at me, ready to attack if I were to make any movements. Boy am I in trouble. Author's Note DERP DERP DERP!!! Heh, thanks for reading so far! Or something... Oh, and if you don't like it, Clearing Thing's UpSaiyan of All Written by: GMD "Why have thee cometh to our land, foul saiyan?" The dark tall horse said. It looks like these 2 are different from the species i've met so far. "Well, it wasn't my intention to come here. See, after my fight, my pod sent me here on this planet! i don't know why..." I informed the dark one with a weak smile. Just as she was about to speak, the door behind us opened, revealing the six I met earlier. The dark purple one, who apparently was the only one who trusts me, (kind of) the yellow one, who was very nice to me, the rainbow one, who is filled with a huge Vegeta ego, yet leaves others disappointed, and the other three I never really met. Just as she caught her breathe, the dark magenta one spoke. "Princess! Wait!" She said weakly. She stopped wheezing, and spoke once more. "This one told us he fought a very powerful enemy that has troubled Equestria for generations!" She spoke. Both the princess alicorn's looked at the magenta one with confusion, and shock. "What do you mean, Twilight?" The white (Princess) asked in confusion. "I mean, as we just met this guy, he spoke to us about a few things about how he got here. But then, he said he fought, Frieza! But hasn't told us much about what he ment by it!" She said, just as both the princess' gasped, Goku smiled. "Saiyan, explain this!" The white one said one said. I simply nodded. Ya see, my name's Goku. I am a saiyan raised on Earth. I am nothing like the saiyan's you know of, I learned of their existence after my saiyan brother came to Earth to try to make me join him in his terror. Along the way, I fought many battles just to keep my planet safe, Even the prince of the saiyan's! As more time went on, my friends, Krillin, and Bulma, including my son Gohan, went to collect dragons balls on this planet called Namek. Dragon balls are mystical orbs, all the same color of orange, there is dragon balls from 1 to 7 stars on them. But enough on that, let's get on to Frieza. (I recommend listening to this while reading the next lines.) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a_Am4cHMBKM See, on Namek, Frieza wanted the dragon balls too, so he could have immortality and rule the cosmos and worlds. My friends tried to stop him... but... they almost died... I wasn't with them when it all happened, I was still in a pod, coming to help. But when I got there, they were all beaten by the Ginyu Force. I managed to stop them, but I needed time to heal as my friends fought off Frieza. They were all beaten, even my small son, Gohan. That awakened much fury into me, and I went after Frieza. We were actually toe to toe, but... then I found out, he wasn't going his full strength! When he did, I nearly would'a died if I didn't use the spirit bomb. Which is an ancient attack that has a lot of energy packed into it. When we hit him with it, we thought he had died, but we were wrong. He... he killed my friends, Vegeta, Krillin, and Piccolo. And that's when... it happened. Blinded by fury, my power began to rise... and I became, the legendary Super Saiyan! He blew up Planet Namek, with me and him still on it. He was defeated, but I... wasn't very lucky either. That's all I remember before I was in some cottage. Luckily my son made it, and I hope he's doing okay with Piccolo. (End of song) I looked all around me, all the ponies were crying inside, while others cried on the outside. The one who was crying the most, was the yellow one. And also the pink one. Couldn't tell. Everyone began to quiet down when the white princess raised her hoof and lowered it. She opened her mouth to speak, but nothing came out, she was speechless. But there was one pony who wasn't, and that was the orange one. "Naow, I may be teh element of Honesty, buht i'm not shure if he's tehlin the truth er not. Even if Twilight tohld us he's on ouhr side." She said, as she walked up to me. Her eyes were piercing right in my soul. I didn't know if it was scary, or cute over the fact she looks like a 6 year old cartoon for girls. "Show us it." "Umm, excuse me, what?" I asked. What does she mean by, *It?* "I mean, show us dis, Super Sayin thing!" I nodded. "Sure, but, we can't do it in here, it might blow up the whole castle!" I chuckled. The white one nodded and put that same forcefield around me that was in the cell. "Now do it. You have a huge forcefield that can withstand ANY amount of power." The white one said. I looked around. "Well, i'm not sure if this will help, but I guess I can try." I stretched my arms into the air, got into position, and began the transformation. The way I do this is unique, ya see, I think about all the horrible things Frieza did, my rage takes over, and BOOM,, Super Saiyan! The massive energy flowed all around me, as my hair began to flicker the color of Black and Gold. My KI consumed my visions as some of the interior around the castle began to catch fire. (Don't ask how!) All the ponies and the royalty ponies shielded their eyes with a hoof as the transformation was almost complete. "hy, hyg... HYAAAA!" I grunted. Before you go any closer to the story, go to this>> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FgcB7Lkvp44 That's what I thought in my head when it was done. Smoke, smoke was all I managed to see saw as the transformation was complete. When that smoke faded, they saw shattered forcefield magic with ashes, and a few broken items. And also a guard that passed out right then and there. But what there eyes focused on, was a golden haired saiyan, with the purest heart. I don't mean to brag, but that was me! I opened my eyes, to see 8 baffled ponies, 2 that looked like horses, staring right into my eyes. Why do they do that so much? There was complete silence. Until a pink pony with possible ADHD broke it. "OMYGOSHTHATWASSOOOOCOOLCANYOUDOTHATAGAINBUTWITHBALLOONSOOHTHATISNTBADBALLOONATTACKYEEEEPPEEEEEEE!" Daheck did that pink pony just say? "Uhh... sorry, but I did not understand a WORD you just said." I said with a weak smile. Just as she opened her mouth to speak once more, the orange one put a hoof on it. Is this gonna be a running gag or something? "Dahts enough, Pinkeh." She said. Daja vu much? Sheesh. "My my, you're mane just looks, outstanding!" The white one (who hasn't spoken since I got here) said. "Heh, it's just a lousy mane color change! Nothing too special." Miss Disappointing said. Boy, was she in for a huge surprise! Author's Note Finally! Hey, sorry about the story being taken down. I got it back up now! Yay! Super Saiyan of AllSaiyan of All Written by: GMD *Back at King Kai's planet* "Hyaagh!" Yamcha said, as he raised his fist at Tien. Both of these warriors were training to get stronger, just incase they get wished back. Tien fly's above Yamcha and unleashes one of his many special attacks. "Domination Blast!" Tien yells out. This technique is a special KI attack in which, once activated, fires several continuous KI blasts. Yamcha see's the incoming attacks, and uses a counter technique. Can you guess what it is? Here's a hint: It starts with the letter K! Can't guess? "KA-ME...HA-ME......HAAAA!" Yamcha shouts out at the fighter above, both attackers can be see from a far distance... and heard. Don't believe me? Ask poor King Kai, who's searching for any signs of life from where Namek was. And... well... he found none. "Will you guys keep it down back there!?! I'm trying to see if somehow the space pod survived!" King Kai shouted to both the fighters. They seem to hear him and Tien fly's back down to the ground. "D'aww come on King Kai! I was so close to whooping his butt!" Yamcha said with a smirk on his face. "Pffft, you couldn't beat me if you wanted to." Tien said with courage. "You take that back! I could beat you, anywhere, any place!" "Not even in you're dreams!" "SHUUUTTT UUUUPP!!! I've almost found a life source and you're bickering isn't helping!" King Kai shouted. Both the Z Fighters crossed they're arms and looked at each other with a competitive rage. "Wait, I think I found something!!! WOOOAHHH!!! That power... I think i've felt that from somewhere... wait. GOKU!!!" *Inside the Castle* "W-What... is that?!?" The white tall horse asked me with shock. "I told you already, it's a Super Saiyan! With this power, I was able to defeat Frieza." I said. Everyone stared at me... "Okay, is this staring gonna be a thing you guys do or... what." I said to all the ponies staring at me. I don't know why, but ever since the tournaments, I never liked people staring at me. It make's me think of all the time I got beaten the crap out of. The purple pony remembers hearing this and facehoofs. "Wait, why did you defeat him? Aren't the saiyan's on his side?" The white pony asked me. I shook my head. "He destroyed Planet Vegeta, and every saiyan on it. At least, that's what I heard. Heh heh, as a matter of fact, i was never with them. The saiyans were nothing but a bunch of cruel hearted people, who sold planets to the evil." I said, chuckling a bit. "Wait, so... yer not tryn'a take ar here planet?" The orange small pony asked, walking a little closer to me. "Now why would I do that? I ne-" I was strangely interrupted from an unknown voice. "Goku! Oh thank the gods I found you! We all thought you were dead!" "Oh hey, King Kai! Nahh i'm fine! My pod landed on a strange planet with talking horses! Yay?" They looked at me as if I was crazy, but the taller ones didn't. They stared at me with shock. Again, come on with the staring! "King... Kai You're speaking, with King Kai?" The white one asked me. All the ponies looked at her with confusion, besides the purple one, whom I think's name is Twilight. "King... Kai?!? You've contacted King Kai!?!" Twilight said with a face.... well.... here was her face... "Goku! How did you survive!?! That should of killed you!!!" King Kai said. "Well, the pod seemed to be able to take a lot of damage! Without it, I'd be a goner!" "Listen Goku, you're in a new world now! And I can't seem to contact the beings in it. So you're on yer on this!" "Gee, thanks." "You're welcome. Now if you excuse me, I have to go scream at those guys who keep making SO MUCH NOISE!" That white alicorn keeps looking at me. Why... "Why would... King Kai call on you?!? He only calls on those who are not foes." She pointed out. "Well, like I told you, I'm no foe. And if you heard it, which apparently you did, you have some proof I'm actually on you're side!" "Umm... excuse me princess, but... who's King Kai?" The rainbow of disappointment asked. "How do you not know King Kai? Ruler of The North Galaxy?!?" Twilight said. "Well soooorrry for not being an egghead like you, Twilight." "I am not an egghead!" "Surrrrree you aren't..." *Girls! This is no time to be fighting!" The small white one said. 'What the heck is happening here?' I thought in my mind. As all this strange fighting was happening, I felt a powerful energy coming from above, this energy... it felt similar too... FRIEZA!?!?! I began to run out of this huge castle, with all the ponies trying to catch me You can't catch me, I'm the Son Goku-man! Man this is taking forever, this castle is even huger then I imagined! That power level is closing in on this planet faster now, I feels just like Frieza... but, he died in that explosion! Alright, now I'm getting curious. Just as that rainbow got close to me, I went my full speed, and was out of that huge castle in half a second. A giant pod began to fall from the sky, and I watched as it fell into a small town. Screaming could be heard from all around, until the others showed up. They finally found me! "Took you guys long enough." I said with a smirk. The rainbow one crossed her arms. "Yea, if it wasn't for you teleporting." "Heh, that wasn't teleporting that was my actual speed. Anyways, another pod fell, I gotta go check it out. It feels like Frieza, but... stronger..." Author's Note Hey everyone! Like I said last chapter, I will give credit to everyone who gave me ideas for this! Heres the list! "Butterfield Pancake" For the King Kai idea! "Crespusculo and RDVF123" For a next chapter idea that you won't know until it's out... Also, thanks Goku for being epic! I plan to have the next chapter epicly long. (Longer then any of my chapters i've ever written!) The void of SpaceSaiyan of All Written by: GMD "Give up your evil ways, Frieza, and for you're sake, I hope we never meet again." Said the saiyan raised on earth. Frieza stared at Goku blankly as he flew off to the skies to get in the space pod. The most shocking part of everything that just happened was, Goku actually gave him some energy to fly off. "D-damn... H-How could he make such a fool out of me and just leave me! I, I WON'T ENDURE THIS ANYMORE!" Frieza shouted constantly in his mind. He only had that small amount of power given to him, and like the fool he is, he wastes it in another failed attempt to destroy Goku, the one who made a mockery of him. "God Damn it Frieza!!!" Goku shouted to the beam sent hurdling to him. He turned back into his new found Super Saiyan form and shot back at the small weak beam of energy. Frieza screamed in agony as his body parts turned to dust, while Goku continued to fly off in an attempt to find the ship. "Where is it...!" Goku mumbled, he had looked everywhere, and there was no sign of the pod. Well, at least until he eventually finds it. "There!!" Goku shouted as he headed towards the pod. He ran inside as fast as he could to the control pads. He couldn't understand any of this! Goku became infuriated, as he attempted to push every button. He only had 10 seconds left, if he didn't find it soon he wou- "AAAAGHHH!!!!!" Uhh, never mind. It's too late. King Kai's planet King Kai watched as Planet Namek exploded, with the Saiyan who risked it all to save the others still on it. "Planet Namek... has been destroyed.." King Kai said blankly. Tien, Chaotsu, and Yamchu all cheered. Their friend has actually done it! "Yehaaa! Goku did it! I always knew he could! Right, King Kai? Uhh... King Kai?" Yamcha said. King Kai gave no answer for, i'd say about 10 seconds, until he spoke. "I didn't finish... Planet Namek was destroyed... but with Goku still on it." Pain. Pain was the only word Goku could describe as his entire body was engulfed in the flames. But as if by the magic of luck, his pod soon began to send him to another planet where it knew the inhabitants would help him. See, Saiyan pods are very smart, they know when the are under attack and without order, find a planet to recover the keeper and itself in. The thing is, it was going to the closest planet with, lets say "nice" inhabitants. And it was only 20 days away. I wouldn't believe Goku can withstand 20 days without eating, but he would be unconscious the entire time. Even if he's hungry or thirsty. *Earth, 20 days after the Frieza incident.* Gohan, the son of Goku, was just finishing up his book on the meaning of prevaricate and a dangerous disease called Prion while at the same time using the knowledge to study for the 3000 word test. You know, normal kid stuff. But at the same time, he was worried about his dad. "Dad, where are you..." *Equestria/Ponyville Twilights treehouse library* Twilight, oh Twilight. The only egghead who needs every little thing to be perfect. Right now, she was cleaning up here library since she left to go to the wedding of her brother, Shining Armor, and Princess Cadence, or often called by guards, Mi Amore Cadenza. The changeling's just sabotaged the wedding, and she and her friends stopped them. She was tired, but she had to keep cleaning up if she wanted to keep living on. *About 10 minutes later* Twilight had finally finished cleaning her library, how did it become such a mess in the first place? The changelings attacked Canterlot, not Ponyville! "Phew, all done! Spike, i'm gonna take a nap, it's getting late." Twilight told her little baby dragon assistant known as Spike. (The only dragon in Ponyville.) "Alright, Twilight, I'll be up with you in a minute, just gotta place this last book anndd.." Spike went on, "There!" *THUMP* Spike fell off his latter when all the books came crashing down right on him. Twilight laughed silently, making Spike groan. When Twilight was done giggling, she finally spoke. "You know you're cleaning all this up, right?" "Ugh, yes, I know." Spike mumbled, making Twilight giggle a little more as she trotted upstairs. *The next day* Twilight woke up to see Spike passed out on the floor. Guess he fell asleep trying to put all the books away. She decided not to disturb Spike and trotted to make some tea. She silently sipped her tea as she read a book, 'Rainbow Dash was suppose to come over to hang out, but I guess she got caught up in cloud duty.' Twilight thought. As she was drinking and reading, Spike yawned, stretched his arms, and got off the floor. "Ughh... What happened? Why was I sleeping on the floor?" Spike moaned. Making Twilight giggle... again. "You passed out placing all the books back." Twilight informed Spike. "Oh, yea, no wonder I have a headache, man, for a small tree, this floor is rock solid." As Spike was speaking, both Spike and Twilight (And probably all of Ponyville* heard a large *CRASH!* in the Everfree Forest. Twilight was speechless for a moment, until she finally spoke. "D-Did you hear that..." "Hear that? I FELT that!" Spike shouted. "C'mon Spike, we gotta go see what that noise was!" "B-but, I just woke up!" "Yea, so did I, now come on!" Spike groaned as he hopped on Twilight's back. Author's Note Yayyy!! First chapter! Hope you liked it! Don't worry, i'll be making longer chapters then this, so, yay! Thanks!Thank you so much guys! I gotta say, never thought any of my stories would EVER get half a thousand views! (May not seem like much to all you pro writers out there, but for me it's epic!) So, in honor of this very occasion, I have something to announce. Recently, i've been getting SERIOUS writers block, mainly cause i'm still helping someone else with a story and my ideas all get flushed down the toilet. So, i've got to thinking, (What do fans like in a story?) Well, I never figured it out, but since you MLP and DBZ fans probably do, I got to even MORE thinking. (Why don't I ask the fans what they think will happen in the next story?) So, I finished my thinking pea brain, and I write this to all of you. PM me just what you think might happen, and you're idea may be in the next chapter! And i'll even give credit in the Author's Note to all those ideas I pick! (Only for these two chapter though!) ~GMD Author's Note Just PM you're ideas! Putting it in the comments might make others steal it! Important NewsSorry for the delays, there really are no excuses. Ill take whatever blame anyone might lay on me. Basically. End of story. No more updates. Period. Reason being, as pointed out by wandering brony, it's been a while. This story feels like a stick in the mud to me, i don't like it, and its holding me back. I liked the plot line i originally chose but the direction it took changed it a lot. The story also progressed far to quickly for my own enjoyment. I've wanted to start other stories but i don't like starting new things without finishing whatever came before. This will fix that. I do not know if I will end up writing more pony fics mainly because its restrictive in nature. I would much rather write my own stories in their own universes that i completely control. I hope you all understand. Officially, this story is now abandoned. I will no longer update or post anything new for this story at all. Sorry if you still wanted to see it end, i did too, but i just can't. If someone wants to take up the story and finish it or use the characters or, hell i don't care if you change the entire plot line just to make better in some way. Go ahead, we can talk about any and everything. End of story, it's been fun, but... I just can't keep going. Thank you, for all you're kind feedback. Who knows, I might just bring it back in the next year or so. Once again, thank you all so kindly, ~GMD P.S. The guy who came, well, I may tell you... if I bring this story back.
What the Buck...Saiyan of All Written by: GMD Spike groaned as he hopped on Twilight's back. He was hoping he could just have a regular day for once. Once Twilight was outside, everypony was screaming. (Which is highly likely at the predicament.) She ignored the screams and headed off to the smoke cloud above the Everfree Forest. *Unknown* The pod had finally reached it's destination and landed in a forest where it would not be seen. Goku was still asleep, and some of his injuries weren't all severe. At least, not anymore. Because they healed... 'n stuff... The pod eventually opened the small door, revealing a half-injured saiyan, who was still unconscious. *Everfree Forest* Twilight was rushing toward the unidentified meteor, which landed smack-dab in the middle of the Everfree Forest. Great, of all the other places it could of landed, it landed in one of the most dangerous places known to ponykind! "Are we almost there? I feel like we're being watched..." Spike said with a hint of fear in his voice. "Spike, it's the Everfree Forest! Of course we're being watched! But we can't think of that right now. We have to find whatever that explosion wa-" Twilight was so distracted with talking to spike, she didn't notice she fell in a gigantic crater. "Mmfhh, mfh mfh mfffh!" Twilight's head was stuck in the ground, so that's all Spike heard. "Uhh... what was that?" Spike asked the pony who's head was 2 feet below ground. A few seconds later, Twilight got her head out, gasping for air. "I said help me get out!" "Oh, sorry..." Twilight turned her head and saw a strange circular object. "Is this what caused that noise? This, small machine?" Twilight was confused. Only something going faster then Rainbow Dash, and yet be this small could make this crater. "C'mon Spike, we gotta-" Once again, Twilight was interrupted when the pod opened, revealing an injured... Uhh... monkey? "Woah! What is that!?!" Spike was confused, scared, and excited, all at the same time! "It looks like a hairless monkey... We gotta bring it back to Fluttershy, she'll no what it is! Spike, get the.. er... monkey and i'll get the pod." "Ughh... why do I have to get the weird alien monkey?" "Relax Spike, just grab it and i'll teleport us to Fluttershy." The baby dragon did what he was told and used all his might to lift the heavy creature. To say Twilight was excited would be the winner of the Understatement of the Year award. She gets to see an alien-like creature, and this thing will be excellent to study! *Fluttershy's Cottage* "And you say this poor thing just fell from the sky in a strange machine?" Asked a friendly yellow pony, commonly known as Fluttershy. "Yea! Didn't you feel that huge earthquake?" Twilight asked. Fluttershy shook her head, how did she not feel and/or hear that? Fluttershy inspected the strange creature, while at the same time, tried to bandage up all his bruises. "Poor guy, he's so injured... What happened to him?" Fluttershy asked in concern. Spike shrugged. "We just found him like that when this pod opened up!" Twilight informed her, pointing her hoof to the pod outside the cottage. Fluttershy nodded. *Unknown* Alright! It's time for some good ol' Goku first person! Darkness, nothing but pure darkness, was all I saw. Frieza did a number on me before my strange transformation. I hope Gohan's alright, Chi-Chi would kill me if anything happened to him! The darkness began to slowly fade away, now all I see is white. The heck is going on here? Is this some sort of dream or... what? Slowly, the whiteness began to fade away as I opened my eyes. I didn't see much, but I did hear female gasps. Atleast, I THINK they were female. Heh, I just noticed, i'm starving! Anyways, I didn't see anything for quite some time, but my vision came back and began to work perfectly. I noticed I was surrounded by animals, there was a bunny, a bear, and even some animals i've never seen before! Oh, and there was also 2 weird-colored horses staring at me like I was a bowl of noodles. "I-It's awake!" Did... did that purple horse just talk? I slowly got up, where in the world was I? I got off the floor and looked around a bit more. Nothing but a bunch of animals. "W-What is it?" The purple horse said. I looked at it, okay, I think i'm losing it. Did that horse just talk? Well, if i'm not. Might aswell make a first impressions. "Um.. hi! I'm Goku!" "AAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!" They both screamed. I had to cover my ears cause I think it went on for an hour or two. "D-Did it just talk...?" The purple one asked with fear. Looks like they see me as a threat, better clear that part up. "Heh, I was going to ask the same thing to you!" I said scratching the back of my head. Boy, this was embarrassing, and I don't even know why! "G-Goku, was it? W-why are you here? A-Are you going to try to e-eat us or something?" The small dragon asked. I laughed, loud enough to make them think i'm crazy. I finally stopped when they glared at me. I cleared my throat, "Now why would I eat you?" I asked the small dragon. The dragon couldn't answer, guess he was to afraid to ask anything else. "Well, if that's over, I gotta go get something to eat that ISN'T you. Bye!" I waved and flew off. Suddenly, I felt like every part of my body was stone, I looked behind me and saw that purple horse using some weird power to make me stop in my tracks. "Woah woah woah! We're not just gonna let you wander off into Ponyville!" She said. Ponyville? Wait, what? Author's Note Uh oh, what's gonna happen? Pfft, hell if I know! Oh wait, I do. Well, I won't tell t'ill the next chapter!
Meeting the SaiyanSaiyan of All Written by: GMD Goku looked at everything around him, everything was purple, and sparkley. 'Yaaaay sparkles!' Goku thought with a smile. "Now, i'm not letting you go until you tell me what the hay you are!" Twilight asked the saiyan. The saiyan giggled, and eventually he laughed a bit louder. "U-Uhm, e-excuse me, b-but why are you l-laughing...?" Fluttershy asked him. He stopped laughing to answer her question. "Well, it's just I can get out of this with ease! Here, watch!" As this was said, Goku stretched both his arms, and let out a small burst of energy, while trying not to destroy anything BUT the magic in the process. "HYAAAAAGHH!!" Both ponies and dragon looked at Goku with awe and fear. Once the blast was done, the small amount of smoke faded, revealing Goku in the process. Goku stood up after the explosion. He looked around him to see if anything was damaged. He looked down and saw some ashes on the bottom. He scratched his head with a weak smile. "Heh heh, sorry, didn't mean to do that." All 3 looked at him once more, they were all silent for about, i'd say 3 seconds until Twilight spoke. "H-How did you... it was just... and I... what!!!" Goku looked at her with a confused face, was there no such thing as KI Energy here? "Well, sorry for that, but like I said, i'm off to go get some food!" Goku said. Twilight knew she couldn't stop him, so she asked him a question. "D-Do you eat, p-ponies...?" She asked with once again, fear. Goku looked at her like he was an idiot. "Umm, can't say I have eaten a horse, so... no." Goku informed her. "We are NOT horses, we're ponies!" The purple one said. Welp, that would explain the town's name is Ponyville. "W-wait, d-do you mean a-any harm to u-us? If n-not, I c-could probably g-get you s-something t-to eat." Fluttershy managed to speak. This wasn't like Fluttershy, usually she would run away from things like this. "Really? Sweet! I haven't eaten in... I'd say about a month. I'm not sure after the battle with Frieza..." Goku said. Both ponies gasped. Frieza? One of the most destructive beings ever!?! "Wait, you battled Frieza, as in, THE Frieza!?!" Spike asked. Goku chuckled. "I'll tell you about it, after I get something to eat, first!" *About 10 minutes later...* Everypony watched as the tall monkey-like figure ate almost everything in Fluttershy's home in under 5 minutes. "H-how can he eat so much with only a stomach! It's like he's a garbage dispenser!" Spike managed to shout out, with Goku to busy chowing down to hear what he said. "Agghhhh, that hit the spot! Thanks!" Goku said with his regular smile. There were plates and dishes everywhere! Just as Goku spoke, there was a knock on the door. Until the door opened, revealing 4 more ponies with a concerned look. "Fluttershy!?! Where are you!!" The rainbow-haired one said. Uh-oh, why are they here now!?! *Ahem, is this thing on? It is? Okay, you are now reading why the others came to Fluttershy's cottage. Have fun with that...* -Nappa from DBZ Abridged Rainbow Dash was snoozing away in her little cloud home, it was still morning and it was the weekend, so Rainbow got to do whatever she wanted. "Zzzzzzz..." Was all that was heard in the house above the skies. Well, atleast until a giant sound woke her up as she fell off her bed. "Yeowch!! Hey, who did that!?!" She spoke, still half asleep. She looked outside, she didn't see anything. What could have caused that noise to wake her up? "Whoever did that, it wasn't funny!" But what if nobody did that? She headed off to Applejack's to see if she heard it too. *Some Apple Farm* Applejack was doing her regular chores. you know, apple bucking, apple bucking, apple bucking, uhhh, apple bucking, and cleaning the windows. "Woooh, nelly, so fahr so good!" Applejack said, it was morning, but she gets up early to do her chores so she can hang out with her friends later. As she was bucking another apple tree, she heard a strange noise coming from the sky. "What in tarnation wahs that!?!" She asked herself. She looked around to farm to make sure that noise didn't fall into any tree or anything. Until a she saw a Rainbow in the sky heading torwards her. Until it crashed into her. And that's how Skittles are made! "Rainbow! Waht the hay ahre you doin'?" Applejack said, pushing Rainbow Dash off her. Rainbow dash let out a weak smile. "Sorry, I just came to ask you something. Earlier today I heard a weird noise, I thought somepony was pulling a prank on me, but I came to see if you heard it too." Rainbow said. Applejack put her hoof on her chin. Or.. bottom mussel? "Ya know, ah heard a strahnge loud noise tooh. We gotta goh get erypony and figure owt waht that noise wahs!" "You said it! Let's go get Twilight and the others." *And that's how it allll happened. I guess.* "Fluttershy!?! Where are you!!" Rainbow shouted out to her friend, as Applejack, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie followed behind her. Now why didn't they just knock and wait for her to answer? As the 4 Elements of Harmony keepers looked around for Fluttershy, they heard a familiar voice scream. It was Fluttershy. (Of course.) "Fluttershah! We're comin'!" Applejack shouted out. "What? It's just KI energy!" Goku told Fluttershy. She screamed t'ill she passed out. Seems Goku tried to show the others about energy. Twilight and Spike both heard hoovesteps. It was none other then the mane 4. (Since Twilight and Fluttershy wasn't with them.) They saw Fluttershy passed out, and looked at Goku. "G-Girls, i-its now what it-" Twilight was interrupted by Rainbow Dash, who was in her offense mode. "HOW DARE YOU HURT OUT FRIEND!?!" Goku looked at her funny, until he knew why she was mad. Strange new lifeform, messed up kitchen cause he ate alot, yep, he's in trouble. "Girls! It's not what it-" Twilight was once again interrupted, but this time by Applejack. "Don't worry Twiliaght! We got thihs!" Twilight facehooved, same with Spike. Well, faceclawed? I dunno. Anyways, back to the story... Applejack locked onto Goku, and brought out her lasso which apparently she has with her. She then threw the lasso, capturing Goku. She tugged Goku forth, but to no avail. "How muhch... do.. ya... weigh!?!" Applejack said, pulling ever so hard on the rope, but Goku still stands in place. "Uhhh, that's personal informa-" Hey look! Another interruption! "That's it! You're goin' down, giant monkey!" Rainbow Dash yelled out. Goku giggle, and stood up. "Fine, but can we at least do this outside? Don't wanna wreck the place." Goku said, making Rainbow smirk. "Sure, have it you're way, cause outside is the last place you'll be!" "Rainbow Dash! Stop! You don't know what you're doing!" Twilight yelled out. Rainbow ignored her as Pinkie, Applejack, and Rarity cheered her on as the Rainbow Dash flew out the cottage and Goku simply walked. Of course, Goku wasn't going to hurt her, just wait t'ill this blows by so he can move on with everything else. *The fight outside.* "Heh, this is gonna be fun. You're going down!" Rainbow Dash said, with a few taunts and her usual smirk. Goku laughed and just stood still. "So, guess i'll make the first move! They don't call me Rainbow Dash for nothin'!" Rainbow Dash readied herself with a few stretches here and there, until she made her attack. She put out one hoof, and began to fly at a very fast speed. Goku watched as the rainbow maned Pegasus charged right at him. She smirked as she saw him stand still. 'This is gonna be easy!' She thought. Finally, she reached Goku's stomach and she smiled. Soon, her smile faded as she saw Goku looking down at her, he gave her a disappointing look. "C'mon, is that all? I expected you to be faster and stronger!" Rainbows frown soon turned to anger. "Wow! The big meany monkey didn't even fall or nothin'! It's like Dashie just punched a brick wall! Well maybe she can break brick walls because she's so fast speaking of fast theres a new ice cream show called Fast Joey's its so delicious it's-" Applejack put a hoof over Pinkie Pie's mouth. "Thahts enough, Pinkie." Rainbow Dash flew straight in the air, until she was high enough to do her fastest attack. "Alright! I don't know how you survived that, but now, you're gonna taste the rainbow!" Goku laughed, 'Hah, Skittles jokes...' he thought. Rainbow Dash now flew straight down until there was a cone surrounding her at her maximum speed. The wind flew all around her as she began to make her finest attack. The cone began to get smaller each passing second, as the Cyan pegasus, ONCE AGAIN, smirked. Goku looked at it with awe and a little disappointment. 'Is this how fast she is? I could go faster then this at age 10!' Goku thought. Now the cone got small enough for it to pierce threw pretty much any amount of steel, the rainbow trail behind her began to sparkle and wave, as her mouth began to flow threw the air. It was time. For the Sonic Rainboom.
Goku, the Fastest BeingSaiyan of All Written by: GMD Okay, just a quick message. Thank you all for reading this story, it means a lot to me! And yes, I know I have many errors, but that's what proofreaders are for! Also, just so you know, English was NOT my first language, it was my second. So if you see and errors in spelling, tell me which ones so I can edit them! ~GMD The huge wave of color flowed throughout every inch of the sky's, as the center beheld a certain rainbow pegasus, creating this magnificent move. Goku just stood still, he was once again, disappointed. *Okay, Goku first person is back, baby!* I gotta hand it to her, it wasn't too bad, but it was the speed that made me disappointed. I thought she'd be faster! I turn over to the other ponies and they're all smiling, well, except maybe the purple one, who kept trying to tell everyone that I don't mean any harm. I looked back and saw the rainbow one closing in one me. So I showed her something she may have never seen before, Real speed. Just as her hand... or... is it hoof? I think it's hoof. Anyways, just as her hoof was just about 2 inches away, I went atleast 10% my speed, dodging the attack. She looked around everywhere, it's funny, everyone looked up at me, except the rainbow one who kept looking everywhere, so I ran in front of her. She looked at me with hate, d'awww, is miss ego angry? "Hey! No fair! You can teleport!" She said. I giggled, hah, she thinks I teleported! "If only you knew." I mumbled. Seems she heard me and charged at me with fury. Is that her ONLY attack? Sheesh. Okay, i'm getting bored. I'm gonna end this. As she reached me again, she stopped when I said these words. "I forfeit" She smirked at me. "Hah, I knew you'd come to you're senses that i'm better! But forfeit's not in my book!" She said. I gave her a dull look. "It's not that, it's just you can't beat me. This whole fight is pointless, and if I go any further I might hurt you." "You? Hurt me? You and what strength?" Might as well show some of my strength. I stomped my foot on the ground, causing a giant chunk of rock to rise above me. It was about 100 times my size, I punched it as hard as I could, and, well... it went flying high in the sky. Crumbling from the sudden amount of impact as it went on into the very void of space itself. Everyone looked at me with disbelief. AGAIN! Suddenly, the purple one spoke. "Spike... send a letter to Princess Celestia." She told the small purple dragon. He nodded as he began to write down what she said. Dear Princess Celestia, A strange visitor from space with the body of a hairless ape has crash-landed onto Equestria in a pod. I regret to tell you this all happened one hour ago and I was to busy being, well, amazed at how it came here so quickly! I fear it may be a threat though. Currently Rainbow Dash challenged this thing and failed miserably. It dodged a Sonic Rainboom and every attack Rainbow had without breaking into a sweat! The strange thing is, he didn't even attack her! The part I fear most, is that he forfeit the fight, saying Rainbow Dash wasn't strong enough! When she told him that was false, he stomped his... leg onto the ground causing a giant rock 100 times his size to rise up. He punched this giant monstrosity and sent it flying into space as it crumbled to dust. But, that's not even the worst part! He saids he came back from fighting the evil Frieza! I don't know if he's on our side, or simply wanted to dethrone Frieza. Please reply back. You're faithful student, Twilight Sparkle. The entire time she spoke, everyone stared at me with fear. Though I found this amusing to have them think I was super strong, I gotta tell them. "Now listen, I mean no harm to you or you village. I was sent here in my pod after a fight I had with one of the strongest beings known. I don't know why my pod sent me here, but it just did. So i'm stuck here until I can find a way back home. Any questions?" I said taking a small breather. I saw the pink one about to explode with questions, until I saw the orange one put a hoof on her mouth. "You cahn ahks him one questiohn ahfter we ahsk. Ferst, how cahn we trust ya?" She said. I gave her a "Are you Serious" look. "Well first, did I hurt you're rainbow friend even once? No. Did I forfeit so I didn't hurt her by accident? Yes. Am I attacking you now? No. Di-" I was interrupted by a strange flash of light emitting from behind the cottage. The light got brighter until it began to fade, revealing a much, much much much much taller horse unlike the others i've seen so far. This one was white, had both wings and a very long horn, and her hair looked like if the rainbow horse had a baby with a bunch of cotton candy. She had a very stern look and some small son mark on the side of her butt. I wonder what those mean. She began to speak with the purple one, until they both nodded and looked at me. They both walked up to me, as if I had a bowl of noodles in my hand. Sorry, am I missing something here? I saw the tall white one look me dead in the eye, what is it with people her always looking at me like I got a bug on my eye? "Who, and what are you." The white one spoke. "Well, the name's Goku! And, well, i'm part of a race called the Saiyan's." I said. Her face began to get red fury. And I saw her horn light up. C'mon, more magic? She used this to shoot something at me. I dodged it with ease. "Hey, hey! What they heck was that for?" I said with a much more serious tone. "The saiyans are nothing but evil apes who do nothing but take over planets! I WON'T let you enslave my little ponies!" She yelled. I giggled. "Hah, see, I wasn't raised a saiyan, I was ra-" "ENOUGH OF THIS! YOU MUST LEAVE NOW!" Her horn lit up again, but this time, the attack was larger. My god, why did my race have to be cruel. I ran from this attack, but it seems it was a trap, for now when I turned behind myself I was ingulfed in light. Umm... I dunno where yet... When I woke up, I noticed I was in a strange glittering chamber. There was nothing but sparkling iron, and bars. I turned behind me and found pretty much the exact same thing, but no bars. What happened to me? I got up to investigate where the heck I was, until something hit me right in the head. "YEOWCH!!" I yelped. I looked in front of me to see what just hit me smack-down on the noggin, but found nothing but air. And sparkles. Lots and lots of sparkles. I reached my hand out to see if there was anything invisible and invincible. My hand stopped when I heard a "tap" on the, nothingness, I guess. "Woaah... strange. I wonder if I can break it." I spoke. I turned my hand into a fist, and charged it at the barrier. "OWWW! OWWY OW OW!!" I screeched. Dang, that thing hurts! And it's not even scratched! Atleast, I don't think it is... I don't know for sure since I pretty much see nothing in front. I dunno if going Super Saiyan would work, but it's best I don't cause a commotion. I hear footsteps coming from somewhere away from the barrier. Then another, then another, then... well you get the point! A few seconds later, the footsteps stopped, and a few seconds after that, I saw 2 strange horses with gold plated armor and spears. Their horns lit up and I felt the barrier being dispelled. "Come with us, prisoner. The Princess would like to speak to you." The one on the left said. "Prisoner? Why am I in a prison?" I asked confused. "You may not speak unless we give you permission too, now come." He said, poking me in the stomach with a large spear. "Sheesh, you don't have to be so forceful..." I said. *The end of the castle's hall leading to Princess Celestia and Luna's thrones.* As we were walking, all the, I guess guards gave me ugly looks. One even flipped me off! Well, I think he did, I couldn't tell over the fact that he has no hands.. We began to reach the end of the hall, by then my feet were killing me. I heard a few voice coming from the end, all the of which sounded familiar. Well would ya look at that, we made it to the end! And I thought my legs were gonna collapse or something. As we approached the Princess that made me see nothing but light, (Jerk) every guard stared at me, ready to attack if I were to make any movements. Boy am I in trouble. Author's Note DERP DERP DERP!!! Heh, thanks for reading so far! Or something... Oh, and if you don't like it,
Clearing Thing's UpSaiyan of All Written by: GMD "Why have thee cometh to our land, foul saiyan?" The dark tall horse said. It looks like these 2 are different from the species i've met so far. "Well, it wasn't my intention to come here. See, after my fight, my pod sent me here on this planet! i don't know why..." I informed the dark one with a weak smile. Just as she was about to speak, the door behind us opened, revealing the six I met earlier. The dark purple one, who apparently was the only one who trusts me, (kind of) the yellow one, who was very nice to me, the rainbow one, who is filled with a huge Vegeta ego, yet leaves others disappointed, and the other three I never really met. Just as she caught her breathe, the dark magenta one spoke. "Princess! Wait!" She said weakly. She stopped wheezing, and spoke once more. "This one told us he fought a very powerful enemy that has troubled Equestria for generations!" She spoke. Both the princess alicorn's looked at the magenta one with confusion, and shock. "What do you mean, Twilight?" The white (Princess) asked in confusion. "I mean, as we just met this guy, he spoke to us about a few things about how he got here. But then, he said he fought, Frieza! But hasn't told us much about what he ment by it!" She said, just as both the princess' gasped, Goku smiled. "Saiyan, explain this!" The white one said one said. I simply nodded. Ya see, my name's Goku. I am a saiyan raised on Earth. I am nothing like the saiyan's you know of, I learned of their existence after my saiyan brother came to Earth to try to make me join him in his terror. Along the way, I fought many battles just to keep my planet safe, Even the prince of the saiyan's! As more time went on, my friends, Krillin, and Bulma, including my son Gohan, went to collect dragons balls on this planet called Namek. Dragon balls are mystical orbs, all the same color of orange, there is dragon balls from 1 to 7 stars on them. But enough on that, let's get on to Frieza. (I recommend listening to this while reading the next lines.) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a_Am4cHMBKM See, on Namek, Frieza wanted the dragon balls too, so he could have immortality and rule the cosmos and worlds. My friends tried to stop him... but... they almost died... I wasn't with them when it all happened, I was still in a pod, coming to help. But when I got there, they were all beaten by the Ginyu Force. I managed to stop them, but I needed time to heal as my friends fought off Frieza. They were all beaten, even my small son, Gohan. That awakened much fury into me, and I went after Frieza. We were actually toe to toe, but... then I found out, he wasn't going his full strength! When he did, I nearly would'a died if I didn't use the spirit bomb. Which is an ancient attack that has a lot of energy packed into it. When we hit him with it, we thought he had died, but we were wrong. He... he killed my friends, Vegeta, Krillin, and Piccolo. And that's when... it happened. Blinded by fury, my power began to rise... and I became, the legendary Super Saiyan! He blew up Planet Namek, with me and him still on it. He was defeated, but I... wasn't very lucky either. That's all I remember before I was in some cottage. Luckily my son made it, and I hope he's doing okay with Piccolo. (End of song) I looked all around me, all the ponies were crying inside, while others cried on the outside. The one who was crying the most, was the yellow one. And also the pink one. Couldn't tell. Everyone began to quiet down when the white princess raised her hoof and lowered it. She opened her mouth to speak, but nothing came out, she was speechless. But there was one pony who wasn't, and that was the orange one. "Naow, I may be teh element of Honesty, buht i'm not shure if he's tehlin the truth er not. Even if Twilight tohld us he's on ouhr side." She said, as she walked up to me. Her eyes were piercing right in my soul. I didn't know if it was scary, or cute over the fact she looks like a 6 year old cartoon for girls. "Show us it." "Umm, excuse me, what?" I asked. What does she mean by, *It?* "I mean, show us dis, Super Sayin thing!" I nodded. "Sure, but, we can't do it in here, it might blow up the whole castle!" I chuckled. The white one nodded and put that same forcefield around me that was in the cell. "Now do it. You have a huge forcefield that can withstand ANY amount of power." The white one said. I looked around. "Well, i'm not sure if this will help, but I guess I can try." I stretched my arms into the air, got into position, and began the transformation. The way I do this is unique, ya see, I think about all the horrible things Frieza did, my rage takes over, and BOOM,, Super Saiyan! The massive energy flowed all around me, as my hair began to flicker the color of Black and Gold. My KI consumed my visions as some of the interior around the castle began to catch fire. (Don't ask how!) All the ponies and the royalty ponies shielded their eyes with a hoof as the transformation was almost complete. "hy, hyg... HYAAAA!" I grunted. Before you go any closer to the story, go to this>> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FgcB7Lkvp44 That's what I thought in my head when it was done. Smoke, smoke was all I managed to see saw as the transformation was complete. When that smoke faded, they saw shattered forcefield magic with ashes, and a few broken items. And also a guard that passed out right then and there. But what there eyes focused on, was a golden haired saiyan, with the purest heart. I don't mean to brag, but that was me! I opened my eyes, to see 8 baffled ponies, 2 that looked like horses, staring right into my eyes. Why do they do that so much? There was complete silence. Until a pink pony with possible ADHD broke it. "OMYGOSHTHATWASSOOOOCOOLCANYOUDOTHATAGAINBUTWITHBALLOONSOOHTHATISNTBADBALLOONATTACKYEEEEPPEEEEEEE!" Daheck did that pink pony just say? "Uhh... sorry, but I did not understand a WORD you just said." I said with a weak smile. Just as she opened her mouth to speak once more, the orange one put a hoof on it. Is this gonna be a running gag or something? "Dahts enough, Pinkeh." She said. Daja vu much? Sheesh. "My my, you're mane just looks, outstanding!" The white one (who hasn't spoken since I got here) said. "Heh, it's just a lousy mane color change! Nothing too special." Miss Disappointing said. Boy, was she in for a huge surprise! Author's Note Finally! Hey, sorry about the story being taken down. I got it back up now! Yay!
Super Saiyan of AllSaiyan of All Written by: GMD *Back at King Kai's planet* "Hyaagh!" Yamcha said, as he raised his fist at Tien. Both of these warriors were training to get stronger, just incase they get wished back. Tien fly's above Yamcha and unleashes one of his many special attacks. "Domination Blast!" Tien yells out. This technique is a special KI attack in which, once activated, fires several continuous KI blasts. Yamcha see's the incoming attacks, and uses a counter technique. Can you guess what it is? Here's a hint: It starts with the letter K! Can't guess? "KA-ME...HA-ME......HAAAA!" Yamcha shouts out at the fighter above, both attackers can be see from a far distance... and heard. Don't believe me? Ask poor King Kai, who's searching for any signs of life from where Namek was. And... well... he found none. "Will you guys keep it down back there!?! I'm trying to see if somehow the space pod survived!" King Kai shouted to both the fighters. They seem to hear him and Tien fly's back down to the ground. "D'aww come on King Kai! I was so close to whooping his butt!" Yamcha said with a smirk on his face. "Pffft, you couldn't beat me if you wanted to." Tien said with courage. "You take that back! I could beat you, anywhere, any place!" "Not even in you're dreams!" "SHUUUTTT UUUUPP!!! I've almost found a life source and you're bickering isn't helping!" King Kai shouted. Both the Z Fighters crossed they're arms and looked at each other with a competitive rage. "Wait, I think I found something!!! WOOOAHHH!!! That power... I think i've felt that from somewhere... wait. GOKU!!!" *Inside the Castle* "W-What... is that?!?" The white tall horse asked me with shock. "I told you already, it's a Super Saiyan! With this power, I was able to defeat Frieza." I said. Everyone stared at me... "Okay, is this staring gonna be a thing you guys do or... what." I said to all the ponies staring at me. I don't know why, but ever since the tournaments, I never liked people staring at me. It make's me think of all the time I got beaten the crap out of. The purple pony remembers hearing this and facehoofs. "Wait, why did you defeat him? Aren't the saiyan's on his side?" The white pony asked me. I shook my head. "He destroyed Planet Vegeta, and every saiyan on it. At least, that's what I heard. Heh heh, as a matter of fact, i was never with them. The saiyans were nothing but a bunch of cruel hearted people, who sold planets to the evil." I said, chuckling a bit. "Wait, so... yer not tryn'a take ar here planet?" The orange small pony asked, walking a little closer to me. "Now why would I do that? I ne-" I was strangely interrupted from an unknown voice. "Goku! Oh thank the gods I found you! We all thought you were dead!" "Oh hey, King Kai! Nahh i'm fine! My pod landed on a strange planet with talking horses! Yay?" They looked at me as if I was crazy, but the taller ones didn't. They stared at me with shock. Again, come on with the staring! "King... Kai You're speaking, with King Kai?" The white one asked me. All the ponies looked at her with confusion, besides the purple one, whom I think's name is Twilight. "King... Kai?!? You've contacted King Kai!?!" Twilight said with a face.... well.... here was her face... "Goku! How did you survive!?! That should of killed you!!!" King Kai said. "Well, the pod seemed to be able to take a lot of damage! Without it, I'd be a goner!" "Listen Goku, you're in a new world now! And I can't seem to contact the beings in it. So you're on yer on this!" "Gee, thanks." "You're welcome. Now if you excuse me, I have to go scream at those guys who keep making SO MUCH NOISE!" That white alicorn keeps looking at me. Why... "Why would... King Kai call on you?!? He only calls on those who are not foes." She pointed out. "Well, like I told you, I'm no foe. And if you heard it, which apparently you did, you have some proof I'm actually on you're side!" "Umm... excuse me princess, but... who's King Kai?" The rainbow of disappointment asked. "How do you not know King Kai? Ruler of The North Galaxy?!?" Twilight said. "Well soooorrry for not being an egghead like you, Twilight." "I am not an egghead!" "Surrrrree you aren't..." *Girls! This is no time to be fighting!" The small white one said. 'What the heck is happening here?' I thought in my mind. As all this strange fighting was happening, I felt a powerful energy coming from above, this energy... it felt similar too... FRIEZA!?!?! I began to run out of this huge castle, with all the ponies trying to catch me You can't catch me, I'm the Son Goku-man! Man this is taking forever, this castle is even huger then I imagined! That power level is closing in on this planet faster now, I feels just like Frieza... but, he died in that explosion! Alright, now I'm getting curious. Just as that rainbow got close to me, I went my full speed, and was out of that huge castle in half a second. A giant pod began to fall from the sky, and I watched as it fell into a small town. Screaming could be heard from all around, until the others showed up. They finally found me! "Took you guys long enough." I said with a smirk. The rainbow one crossed her arms. "Yea, if it wasn't for you teleporting." "Heh, that wasn't teleporting that was my actual speed. Anyways, another pod fell, I gotta go check it out. It feels like Frieza, but... stronger..." Author's Note Hey everyone! Like I said last chapter, I will give credit to everyone who gave me ideas for this! Heres the list! "Butterfield Pancake" For the King Kai idea! "Crespusculo and RDVF123" For a next chapter idea that you won't know until it's out... Also, thanks Goku for being epic! I plan to have the next chapter epicly long. (Longer then any of my chapters i've ever written!)
The void of SpaceSaiyan of All Written by: GMD "Give up your evil ways, Frieza, and for you're sake, I hope we never meet again." Said the saiyan raised on earth. Frieza stared at Goku blankly as he flew off to the skies to get in the space pod. The most shocking part of everything that just happened was, Goku actually gave him some energy to fly off. "D-damn... H-How could he make such a fool out of me and just leave me! I, I WON'T ENDURE THIS ANYMORE!" Frieza shouted constantly in his mind. He only had that small amount of power given to him, and like the fool he is, he wastes it in another failed attempt to destroy Goku, the one who made a mockery of him. "God Damn it Frieza!!!" Goku shouted to the beam sent hurdling to him. He turned back into his new found Super Saiyan form and shot back at the small weak beam of energy. Frieza screamed in agony as his body parts turned to dust, while Goku continued to fly off in an attempt to find the ship. "Where is it...!" Goku mumbled, he had looked everywhere, and there was no sign of the pod. Well, at least until he eventually finds it. "There!!" Goku shouted as he headed towards the pod. He ran inside as fast as he could to the control pads. He couldn't understand any of this! Goku became infuriated, as he attempted to push every button. He only had 10 seconds left, if he didn't find it soon he wou- "AAAAGHHH!!!!!" Uhh, never mind. It's too late. King Kai's planet King Kai watched as Planet Namek exploded, with the Saiyan who risked it all to save the others still on it. "Planet Namek... has been destroyed.." King Kai said blankly. Tien, Chaotsu, and Yamchu all cheered. Their friend has actually done it! "Yehaaa! Goku did it! I always knew he could! Right, King Kai? Uhh... King Kai?" Yamcha said. King Kai gave no answer for, i'd say about 10 seconds, until he spoke. "I didn't finish... Planet Namek was destroyed... but with Goku still on it." Pain. Pain was the only word Goku could describe as his entire body was engulfed in the flames. But as if by the magic of luck, his pod soon began to send him to another planet where it knew the inhabitants would help him. See, Saiyan pods are very smart, they know when the are under attack and without order, find a planet to recover the keeper and itself in. The thing is, it was going to the closest planet with, lets say "nice" inhabitants. And it was only 20 days away. I wouldn't believe Goku can withstand 20 days without eating, but he would be unconscious the entire time. Even if he's hungry or thirsty. *Earth, 20 days after the Frieza incident.* Gohan, the son of Goku, was just finishing up his book on the meaning of prevaricate and a dangerous disease called Prion while at the same time using the knowledge to study for the 3000 word test. You know, normal kid stuff. But at the same time, he was worried about his dad. "Dad, where are you..." *Equestria/Ponyville Twilights treehouse library* Twilight, oh Twilight. The only egghead who needs every little thing to be perfect. Right now, she was cleaning up here library since she left to go to the wedding of her brother, Shining Armor, and Princess Cadence, or often called by guards, Mi Amore Cadenza. The changeling's just sabotaged the wedding, and she and her friends stopped them. She was tired, but she had to keep cleaning up if she wanted to keep living on. *About 10 minutes later* Twilight had finally finished cleaning her library, how did it become such a mess in the first place? The changelings attacked Canterlot, not Ponyville! "Phew, all done! Spike, i'm gonna take a nap, it's getting late." Twilight told her little baby dragon assistant known as Spike. (The only dragon in Ponyville.) "Alright, Twilight, I'll be up with you in a minute, just gotta place this last book anndd.." Spike went on, "There!" *THUMP* Spike fell off his latter when all the books came crashing down right on him. Twilight laughed silently, making Spike groan. When Twilight was done giggling, she finally spoke. "You know you're cleaning all this up, right?" "Ugh, yes, I know." Spike mumbled, making Twilight giggle a little more as she trotted upstairs. *The next day* Twilight woke up to see Spike passed out on the floor. Guess he fell asleep trying to put all the books away. She decided not to disturb Spike and trotted to make some tea. She silently sipped her tea as she read a book, 'Rainbow Dash was suppose to come over to hang out, but I guess she got caught up in cloud duty.' Twilight thought. As she was drinking and reading, Spike yawned, stretched his arms, and got off the floor. "Ughh... What happened? Why was I sleeping on the floor?" Spike moaned. Making Twilight giggle... again. "You passed out placing all the books back." Twilight informed Spike. "Oh, yea, no wonder I have a headache, man, for a small tree, this floor is rock solid." As Spike was speaking, both Spike and Twilight (And probably all of Ponyville* heard a large *CRASH!* in the Everfree Forest. Twilight was speechless for a moment, until she finally spoke. "D-Did you hear that..." "Hear that? I FELT that!" Spike shouted. "C'mon Spike, we gotta go see what that noise was!" "B-but, I just woke up!" "Yea, so did I, now come on!" Spike groaned as he hopped on Twilight's back. Author's Note Yayyy!! First chapter! Hope you liked it! Don't worry, i'll be making longer chapters then this, so, yay!
Thanks!Thank you so much guys! I gotta say, never thought any of my stories would EVER get half a thousand views! (May not seem like much to all you pro writers out there, but for me it's epic!) So, in honor of this very occasion, I have something to announce. Recently, i've been getting SERIOUS writers block, mainly cause i'm still helping someone else with a story and my ideas all get flushed down the toilet. So, i've got to thinking, (What do fans like in a story?) Well, I never figured it out, but since you MLP and DBZ fans probably do, I got to even MORE thinking. (Why don't I ask the fans what they think will happen in the next story?) So, I finished my thinking pea brain, and I write this to all of you. PM me just what you think might happen, and you're idea may be in the next chapter! And i'll even give credit in the Author's Note to all those ideas I pick! (Only for these two chapter though!) ~GMD Author's Note Just PM you're ideas! Putting it in the comments might make others steal it!
Important NewsSorry for the delays, there really are no excuses. Ill take whatever blame anyone might lay on me. Basically. End of story. No more updates. Period. Reason being, as pointed out by wandering brony, it's been a while. This story feels like a stick in the mud to me, i don't like it, and its holding me back. I liked the plot line i originally chose but the direction it took changed it a lot. The story also progressed far to quickly for my own enjoyment. I've wanted to start other stories but i don't like starting new things without finishing whatever came before. This will fix that. I do not know if I will end up writing more pony fics mainly because its restrictive in nature. I would much rather write my own stories in their own universes that i completely control. I hope you all understand. Officially, this story is now abandoned. I will no longer update or post anything new for this story at all. Sorry if you still wanted to see it end, i did too, but i just can't. If someone wants to take up the story and finish it or use the characters or, hell i don't care if you change the entire plot line just to make better in some way. Go ahead, we can talk about any and everything. End of story, it's been fun, but... I just can't keep going. Thank you, for all you're kind feedback. Who knows, I might just bring it back in the next year or so. Once again, thank you all so kindly, ~GMD P.S. The guy who came, well, I may tell you... if I bring this story back.
