Eye of the Hunter

by XxXImmortalFoXxX

Rating: teen
Tags: Princess Celestia, Main 6, Princess Luna, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Adventure
Length: 4102

An ageless fox starts having weird dreams after some odd happenings in the town he resided beside, telling him to track down one known as "Twilight Sparkle".

An ageless fox, residing in the forest next to a town dubbed "Ponyville" by its inhabitants, has an odd dream, telling him to seek out a resident of the town called "Twilight Sparkle". He had no plans of doing so. But life had other plans for him.

Published 2014-08-10 22:10:04 UTC
Last updated 2014-09-04 07:36:54 UTC

Chapter 1

I crouched down in the snow, staring at a moving animal across the stream. It was the middle of the winter, and I was starting to get hungry again. I started slowly moving across the clearing, towards the snow covered bridge. I could have gone across the stream, but slippery surfaces were hard to launch off of. I stayed to the side of the bridge, occasionally peeking over the edge to see if the rabbit was still there.

I peaked around the corner, preparing to dash at the rabbit, who was none the wiser. I heard the door to the cottage creak open, and the yellow pegasus stepped out, calling for Angel, her rabbit. I glanced at the rabbit I had been preying on,who was now dashing towards the door. I turned around and skulked off.

Once in the safety of the woods, I made a promise.

“I swear on the sun, moon, and stars above that thou shalt pay for tricking me again, rabbit!” I yelled to nobody in particular as my form shifted, allowing me easier access to my tree living area.

I curled up on my platform of sticks, wrapping my tail around my face as I drifted to sleep.

“Thou art an interesting specimen.” I heard a voice say as my eyes shot open

I blinked a few times, looking around at the blackness that surrounded me. I spotted the speaker, a dark blue alicorn.

“Who in Tartarus art thou?” I said, locking my gaze with the one in front of me.

“Us? We are no one important, not to thou, at least. Not yet.” She said, “Seek out the one they call ‘Twilight Sparkle’, she will help you.” She said, turning and walking away.

“What reason do I have to trust thee?” I said, sitting down.

“Thou has no reason to. But we presume your curiosity will win this battle.” She said as she vanished into the blackness. My sight faded.

I awoke to the feeling of wetness throughout my fur, along with a cold weight on my body. This led me to believe it had snowed. I cracked my eyes open, a thin layer of snow dropping away from my eyes. I inhaled through my nose, catching the scent of a squirrel, really close. I shifted my head to my side, where a rabbit was curled up against my stomach.

“How… odd.” I said, “Rabbits can’t climb trees.”

I shook my head, the snow falling off and onto the rabbit, which suddenly awoke. It shook the snow off of itself, looking around, just as confused as I was as to how it got up here. Slowly it turned around, catching the scent of its predator. It whipped back around and hopped as far away from me as it could, which led it to the end of the platform I had created from twigs, which was bending under the weight of me, the snow, and the rabbit. My face adopted a sly grin as I stood up, shaking the snow from my fur. One of the chunks of snow flew from my fur and hit the rabbit, knocking it over the edge. I listened in silence, hearing the rabbit squeal loudly.

I peered over the edge of the platform, I spotted the rabbit on the ground, a red spot surrounding it. I turned away and made my way down the bough, into the crook of the tree I had come to call home. I hopped down, my form shifting again as I hit the ground. I could see several green lights in the distance.

“Unfortunate.. No time for ritual.” I said as I bounded towards my late dinner. Stopping over it, I realized it was still breathing, but just barely. I leaned placed a paw on it’s side before leaning down and and clamping my jaw on its throat, applying just enough pressure to hold onto it, and yanking. The rabbit let out a squeal as I gulped down the pieces of its throat and jugular. I glanced up, noting the green lights were quite a bit closer. I picked up the rabbit in my mouth, turning to scramble up the tree, I noticed more green lights. I felt my form shift again as I jumped up onto the crook of the tree, following the bough back onto my platform.

“I thank the sun, moon, and stars for this meal, however late.” I said, looking up past the overhanging trees to the moon. I quickly ate my meal, finishing as the green lights gathered around my home. I risked a glance over the edge of the platform, jumping back as I noted that there was at least seven of them gathered around my home. I was not going to lose another home to these… things. I had a run in with them before, and my house wasn’t the only thing I had lost then. Now that they had me cornered, I had a feeling that my house was the least of my problems.

One of the… things lunged up and onto the crook of the tree, the entrance and exit to my home. For me, at least. I looked around for different ways I could get down. I could jump down, but I would risk injury, like the rabbit. I turned back towards the thing that was making its way up the bough, which was bending under the weight. I heard a crack, and the bough dropped slightly lower.

“Nay, this is not how I shall go out.” I said, backing up before leaping over the thing, landing on the bough behind it as it broke. I tried to backpedal as I continued sliding down the bough, before going over the edge. Two more things were on the other side, blocking any retreat into the forest. The only way out of here was towards the cottage. Maybe the yellow pegasus would let me in. She was always taking care of the other animals. And I was no different. I bolted through the gap, charging towards the cottage door.

I ran across the bridge and up the path. Reaching the door, I risked a glance across the stream, only to find the things had remained across the bridge, and were no longer advancing. I was about to start scratching at the door, before I remembered the last time I saw the things and the ponies.

“Guys, come on! I know a shortcut!” The leading colt said to the other two following him.

The filly and the colt that were following shared an uncertain glance.

“I don’t know, Cheerilee said that we’re never supposed to come in here, even as adults it’s dangerous.” The filly said, stopping.

“Come on! We’ll be in here for 5 minutes, tops. Let’s go!” He said, charging off into the forest.

I watched as the filly and the colt charged after him, and out of curiosity, I decided to follow.

“Come o--Augh!” The leading colt yelled, falling.

“What happened?!” The other two said as they caught up.

“I just stepped on a sharp rock, I’ll be fine” He said, standing up and running off again, albeit a tad slower this time. I chuckled lightly, kid’s got determination, I’ll give him that.

The colt turned to the filly, leaning in and whispering before they heard a blood curdling scream. They both charged off towards the source of the noise, with me in tow. The two of them burst into the clearing, where their friend was being cornered by two of the… Things. I hid in the brush as the two things moved in on their friend, who was hitting them with magical bolts, which were bouncing off.

“HEY!” The filly yelled at the things as they moved closer to her friend. “YOU LEAVE HIM ALONE, YOU BIG MEANIE!” She yelled.

The thing seemed to cower for a moment before turning back to the colt, slashing up his side. The colt in question screamed in pain as the two things toyed with him.

The colt and the filly picked up stones and started throwing them at the things surrounding their friend. One of the things grew tired of this, and turned away as the other one latched onto the dying colts neck and shook him around, the body flying away as the skin and throat separated from the rest of his body.

“STAR!” They both screamed as they watched their friends lifeless body crumple against a tree.

They turned to the more immediate threat, the thing that was advancing on them. They backed themselves up against a tree, before remembering they were pegasi. That would have been funny if it weren’t so sad. The yellow pegasus turned and took flight, the brown one just behind her. As he took off, the thing jumped and slapped its paw against the back of the pegasus, crushing his spine and back legs.

Something in my mind snapped as I leapt out from the brush, running up and slashing the thing, distracting it. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw the yellow pegasus trying to lift her friend, who was flapping his wings weakly. Eventually they got a bit of height, and flew off back out the way they came, quite fast for such small beings.

I took that as my cue to leave, turning and hightailing it out through the brush I had entered.

I turned to the door, weighing my choices. The door made my decision for me as it creaked open, and the yellow pegasus stood there with a burning stick held in her wing. I instinctively flinched away from the fire. The pegasus walked past me, waving the flaming stick towards the things. They instinctively flinched away from the flame, similar to myself. She continued moving forward, going to light some open lanterns at the end of the bridge. The things decided I wasn’t worth it, and ran back into the forest.

The yellow pegasus extinguished the flame on a bit of unfrozen water before walking back towards the door. About halfway up the pathway she noticed me, in the corner of her pathway.

“Awww, were those big mean timberwolves after you?” She said in a tone you would talk to a dog with.

“Uh… yes, I suppose they were.” I said, absently sliding my tail side to side on the ground.

She looked taken aback. “You… You can talk!” She said as she shuffled me into the cottage with her wing.

Once inside, I took in the mass amounts of small animals that were in the house. Everything from birds to rabbits and everything in between. I could eat like a king.

“Honey, can you come down here?” I heard the yellow pegasus say. I heard a thump, and another, before somebody’s front hooves appeared on the stairwell. Another thump, the hooves descended a step. There was wheels connected to his back legs, causing the thumps.

“What is it, dear?” He said as he reached the bottom of the stairwell.

“I found a fox.” She said, obviously cheery.

“Yes, you find animals nearly everyday. What’s so special about it?” He said, looking at me.

Meanwhile, I was sitting there, frozen.

‘Tis them! The-The two that were in the forest! This is nigh impossible! This is not...! How did I not realize this mare was her! Stupid! Dummkopf! Nay, maybe the sun, the moon, and the stars have made this to be.

“It can talk!” She said, glancing down at me. “Go on, it’s alright. He’s a friend.”

“I… You can talk to animals, dear, remember?” He said, getting frustrated.

“Yes, I know that. But… He can talk. I promise.” She said.

They stood there in silence for a few moments, before it was broken by the stallion.

“Well, I’m going to bed. I think you should follow suit.” He said, turning around and slowly working his way back up the stairs.

“Dost either of you know a Star?”

Author's Note

Well, here goes. This marks the beginning. Oh boy. Currently, this takes place at the beginning of season one. Name the animals that were chasing our character! Also, name the two ponies that our character is residing with... for now. If anyone has a solution to the italics glitch, I would appreciate it.

Chapter 2

“Star? Like, Star Streak?” The stallion said, stopping on the stairs.

“The one who was attacked by the things that were outside.” I said, glancing back towards the door.

“The Timberwolves? Yes, we know of a… You’re him. You’re that fox.” He turned to the yellow pegasus, “I told you that fox wasn’t normal!” He said.

“Well, this has certainly been an… enlightening experience.” I said, my form shifting yet again. A quick look at my paws revealed them to be a reddish orange.

The couple had apparently been arguing about whether or not I was the fox from that fateful day. The stallion turned to address me before realizing I was no longer fully white, but instead the same as he would remember from the day his friend… lost his life.

“SEE!?” He said, pointing a hoof at me. The mare turned around to find that I was indeed the same one from her memory.

“Oh… Oh my.” She said, her ears flattening against her head.

“Perhaps I could add a name to thy faces?”

“Oh, how rude of us. I am Fluttershy.” Said the mare.

“And I’m Stellar Eclipse. And you are?” The stallion said.

“While I would love to tell thee my name, I must decline, for I have no name.” I said.

“Wait.” Fluttershy said, walking over to a bookshelf before browsing for a few moments.

“Ah-ha!” She said lightly as she pulled a book down and sat down on a fabric mass.

“No, no, no, no, n-yes!” She exclaimed, reading over the page. “It says here that most foxes live for about two to four years, with some living as long as ten. That... incident happened over thirteen years ago.” She said, choking up at incident. “You shouldn’t be alive.” She said, closing the book.

“Well, as thou can see, I am not a normal fox.” I said, shifting between my different forms between each word.

“Red, Tibetan, Kit, Arctic, Bengal, Blanford, Cape, Corsac, Pale, Ruppells, Swift, and Fennec. He can change into all the true fox species! This is groundbreaking!” Fluttershy said, soaring upwards while doing a little spin.

“Nevertheless, I suppose I am an ageless being. I’ve been around for over seventy moons.” I said, lying down on the hardwood floor.

Stellar closed his eyes, although I could still see his eyes moving under his eyelids as he did some calculations.

“So… You’ve been around for… eight-hundred and forty years, give or take? That’s not possible.” Stellar said.

“Yet here I stand.”

“You were around two hundred years after Princess Luna’s banishment! We have to tell the princesses!” Fluttershy exclaimed, albeit quite quietly.

“Yes, yes dear. Tomorrow we can take him down to Golden Oaks Library. Twilight will get a response much faster than we would.” He said.

My eyes widened, “Twilight, as in the one known as Twilight Sparkle?” I said, remembering a certain blue alicorns words.

“Yes. Why?” Fluttershy said.

“I have no reason for inquiring. I heard some fillies talking about the one dubbed Twilight Sparkle earlier today.” I said a bit too quickly.

“Okay…” She said, turning to walk up the stairs, “We’re going to bed. There’s a bed in the corner all ready for sleeping.” She said, pointing to a bed in the corner beside the fire.

“Thank you, Fluttershy, I appreciate thy hospitality.”

“Think nothing of it!” She said, disappearing up the stairs behind Stellar Eclipse.

I walked over to the bed, curling up and wrapping my tail around my face. Sleep came easily, as per usual.

“I see thou hast met the Element of Kindness.” The voice from earlier said.

“Thee should know that these word hold no meaning to me, a mere fox.” I said, looking at my surroundings. I was in Fluttershy’s house, except everything was void of colour.

“Ah, thou hast a fair point. Fluttershy is the Element of Kindness, the title she gained when she defeated our… Less charitable side.” She said.

“Who art thou?” I said.

“We are not the sun, but instead the moon and the stars, as thee calls them.”

“Thee still has not answered my question.” I said, wrapping my tail around my legs.

“If thou must know, I am Princess Luna, co-ruler of this land.”

“And why hast thee taken interest in I?”

“Well, thou hast been granted a higher intellect than thy kin, and thou hast been around for many, many moons longer than thy kin as well.” She said, “We wish to learn more about thee, and the easiest way to do so would be through the one they call Twilight Sparkle, Element of Magic.”

“So I am to be your testing dummy?”

“Nay, thee would be more like… an associate.” She said.

“What benefits would come of being thy associate rather than my life in the woods?”

“Thee would not have to worry of the creatures known as timberwolves, and thee would have access to food, so thee would need not go hungry another night.” Princess Luna said.

“Maybe I prefer the thrill of the hunt?” I said in rebuttal.

“‘Tis understandable. If we released thy food into the gardens, giving thee the opportunity to hunt your prey before thee eats it, will thee be happy?”

“‘Twould be much better than being fed.” I said, my eyes suddenly feeling heavy.

“Our time is coming to a close, fox. We will see thou soon.” She said as my vision faded.

I blinked a couple times as I heard hooves and thumping coming down the stairs. Every couple of seconds, there was another thump. I looked up to see Stellar Eclipse making his way down the stairs, quite slowly.

“Good morning, Stellar Eclipse.” I said, sitting on the bed.

“Mornin’.” He said, yawning.

“I trust you slept well?” I said, flicking my tail.

“Well enough. Yourself?” He said, stepping off the final step.

“It was an odd sleep. More comfortable than twigs, though.”

“Yeah, beds are generally more comfortable than twigs.” He said, walking off towards a room with a whole bunch of strange… things in it.

“You drink coffee?” He said as he stopped in front of one of the things.

“Coffee? I’ve never heard of that. Granted, I lived in the woods.” I said, walking into the room Stellar was in.

“You’ve never had coffee? How do you survive in the mornings?” He said, grabbing a spoon with his wing and stirring a black liquid.

“I generally survive by going on the hunt for a rabbit or two in the mornings.”

“Wait, wha-- He squinted down at me --Oh, that’s right. You’re that fox thing.” He said, wheeling his way out of the room to sit down in the room I had previously slept in.

I looked around the room, noticing all the animals waking. Around the same time, there was a rapid thumping on the next floor, followed by several light thumps, only noticeable to the attentive. The rapid thumping as the light thumps traveled across the upper floor onto the stairs, where a yellow hoof appeared on the first step.

"Good morning, honey." Stellar Eclipse said as he sipped from his drink.

"Oh! Good morning!" she said, fluttering down the last few steps. "I had the most amazing dream. There was this fox that could talk and turn into the other species of foxes."

"Really? Sounds interesting." Stellar Eclipse said as she walked past into the room that he had just been in.

"It was amazing! He talked like Princess Luna, and he was being chased by Timberwolves.” She said, walking back out with a steaming cup wrapped in her wing.

“Does that not burn?” I said.

She yelped and dropped the cup, which shattered on impact, scattering shards across the floor.

“Oh! Now I have to get a new mug.” She said quietly, a frown appearing on her face.
“I am presuming that means yes.” I said, examining one of the shards that had landed in front of me.

“Was that you, dear?” She said, looking at Stellar Eclipse, who shrugged and pointed towards me.

“Hello. Thou had a dream of me? I’m flattered.” I said, my fur turning white.

“I-It wasn’t a dream?”

“I’m afraid not, Fluttershy.” I said.

“We have to tell Twilight!” She said, running over to the door and using her wings to place various things on her body before putting something on her hooves and opening the door.

“What about breakfast?” Stellar Eclipse said, slurping his coffee.

“Oh, right! I have to feed the animals!” She exclaimed before turning to squint at me.

“Do you have the same diet as a normal fox?”

“‘Tis depends, does a “normal” fox eat fish, small animals, and invertebrates?”

“I believe so. Would you like some salmon?” She said, walking off into the room they had procured the “coffee” from.

“Oh, no. I do not want to impose. I will just go hunting in the forest.”

“The same forest you got attacked in?” Stellar Eclipse pointed out.

“Oh… right. In that case I think I will have some salmon, if it is not too much trouble.” I said, wrapping my tail around my paws.

“Oh it’s no worries at all. The bears and the foxes are the only ones who eat the fish, and all the bears are hibernating. We have an abundance in the deep-freeze.” She said, pushing the top of a large box up and grabbing a fish from the inside. Once the top slammed shut, she place the fish down on a flat disc and put it in another machine, which beeped several times before making a constant hum. While the machine was doing its thing, she rushed over to the fridge and pulled out a bowl full of leaves and placed it on the floor, where several rabbits ran up and began eating from it. She continued to go through her feeding of the animals, only stopping when the machine beeped several times consecutively. She ran over to the beeping machine and removed the fish from inside, significantly more defrosted than before.

“Sorry, Mr. Fox, you’re going to have to eat outside. The other animals have problems with meat eating.” She said, walking towards the door.

“That’s absolutely fine by me, Ms. Fluttershy.” I said, following about a metre behind her.

She placed the flat disc just outside the door, making a small clink on the ground.

“Thank you, Ms. Fluttershy.” I said, my tail whipping back and forth at the thought of my favourite food.

“It was no problem! Enjoy your meal.” She said, walking through the door.

“Oh, you can just call me Fluttershy.” She said quickly, closing the door to the point where it didn’t latch but still kept most of the cold out.

I dug into my meal, which was slightly warm, causing a slight trail of steam to rise from it due to the cold weather.

Quickly finishing my fish, I walked down into the snow to clean my muzzle. I dug my nose in the snow and involuntarily shivered. I did my best to clean up and make myself presentable before walking back up the slope and pushing the door lightly to open it. Inside the two ponies were sitting at the table eating their food. I lightly headbutt the door closed before lying down on the bed that I had used previously.

“Enjoy your meal?” Fluttershy said as she finished her meal.

“Yes, it was much better than the salmon I’ve had in the past moon.” I said, laughing slightly.

“Oh, I would imagine, considering you can’t even get fish these days, since the ice is so thick.” She said.

Stellar finished soon after Fluttershy did, grabbing their flat discs and taking them back into the other room. Fluttershy stood from her seat and moved towards the door, beginning the process of preparing for the outside, Stellar Eclipse following suit soon after.

“And… I do believe… We are ready… to go!” Stellar Eclipse said as he worked on a thing on the front of this fabric thing.

Fluttershy pulled the door open and we stared into the forest. There was no movement except for the branches waving in the wind.

“Let’s roll!” Stellar exclaimed, wheeling his way out of the doorway.