A Diamond Dog Tale

Hey everypony this is Kmaj27...should change the name to somethin more pony...Any way this is my first story ever being posted so don't get to mad at me. I'm trying my best when it comes to writing in this form of style any hope you enjoy the stroy. Leave me some constructive criticism thanks Everypony

Chapter 1

Exile

*BAM, THWACK, CRACK*

Rover just punched one diamond dog that was held by two of the guard dogs. The dog went by the name Fetch he was bigger than the rest of the diamond dogs, both taller and muscular. He was different from the other dogs, he looked like a mix of a German Sheppard with Rottweiler. He had a scar on his right eye which discolored his eye to gray.

"Speak you lousy excuses of a dog!"

He was being punished for letting some ponies come on their land to dig for diamonds. Fetch was bleeding from the mouth and snout barely able to breathe as Spot kicked him in the stomach.

"I said SPEAK!

Fetch was coughing up blood along with his two back teeth.

"Your mother burns in the depths of hell."

He looked at his blood and raised his head, only for Fido hit him with a strong right punch to the jaw, knocking him out cold.

“What should we do with him boss?” asked one of the Guard dogs

“I don’t care as long as this traitor doesn’t come back I don’t care what you do with him. Now MOVE IT!” Rover screamed at the two Guard dogs making them flinch.

They carried Fetch out of the cave, while on the way the picked up a few more guards…like four more guards. They carried him to the entrance of the Everfree forest, were they beat him to an inch of his life by kicking punching and even breaking his hind legs and they left him there to die slowly.

In a Dark void of Black

"What has become of my life? I've been nothing but good to those wasteful idiots and what do I get. I get punished for something that I had no power over when other dog lets ponies on the grounds they get a slap on the wrist and a scolding while I nearly get beaten to death. *Sigh* I should be mad but I can't really...Its weird I want to bite their necks clean off but I couldn't with all those damn Guard dogs. Sure i can take a good three or five but, never mind I should see if I can find somewhere else to stay."

Back to Reality

An hour has passed and Fetch started to stir. He found himself on the skirts of the Everfree forest and Ponyville hopefully there would be somepony there to help him. He tried to stand up but came to a painful conclusion that both of his legs were broken.

“So those Dumbshits finally figured out to paralyze me huh? Oh well I just have to get into town maybe I could get some help.”

Fetch crawled his way to Ponyville, it was a long and painful trip but he finally made it to the market place.

“Now if I could just find somepony to take me to the…”

“AAAAAAAHHHHHH, DIAMOND DOG!”

A mare screamed before fainting, two mares came rushing to her side to pick her up while everypony was running wild everywhere.

“Wait I’m not here to do anything. I was just…”

“Hold it right th’re partner!”

“What?”

Fetch’s face was met with two orange back hooves to the face making him skid into a cart making it crash on him. He crawled out of the wreckage with a piece of the cart jabbed into his right side.

Fetch grabbed the broken wood and slowly pulled it out and threw it to the side. The wound was starting to drip blood on the

dirt road and formed a small puddle.

“Ah…Look…ow that’s smarts…I’m only here to look for…”

“Look for more hostages to take back to your cave, so they can dig for diamonds.”

Yelled somepony, Fetch looked for the source of the voice only to see a bright rainbow streak come and hit him in the face sending him flying into a building almost killing him in the process, but he was a resilient Diamond Dog.

As he started to crawl away from the building until he heard a sound, a sound of something moving, no something breaking. He turned around to only see what seemed to be part of the roof of the building he hit.

He held his arms in front of his face hoping for the worst, but nothing came he heard the crash but nothing happened to him. He looked around to only find that the roof missed him by a few inches.

Fetch sighed in relief and turned around only to see two crimson hind legs rear back and buck him in the snout breaking it and knocking him out cold. His head snapped back and he fell face first.

“Thanks Big Mac ah appreciates it.”

“No problem Sis.”

Big Macintosh left to go attend the apple stall after that kick, everypony had calmed down and went upon their business like nothing happed. Rainbowdash came back and landed next to Applejack.

“So Applejack what do you think that Diamond Dog wanted.”

“Ah don’t kno’ Rainbow, but ah don’t want ta find out.”

“What do you think we should do with him?”

“Shot we beat tha creature somthin’ fierce, ah say we take’m to the hospital, makin sure we didn’t hurt ’em to bad.”

“Yeah…that doesn’t sound as fun, why don’t we just leave him here, you know let him get what he deserves.”

“He deserves medical attention now. Who knows fer all we know he could...ya know ‘Kick the bucket’.”

“UGH fine but you owe me for helping him.”

“Fine.”

And with that Applejack and Rainbow dash carried Fetch to Ponyville hospital leaving a thin trail of blood along the way.

Three Hours Later

Applejack and Rainbow told their friends what had happened in the town market with the Diamond Dog. Twilight wrote a letter to the Princess on what her friends just told her and that he was being held in Ponyville hospital ER. They all waited outside in the waiting room for the doctor to tell them on the condition of the Dog.

They all had a conversation on why was he here? What did he want? Why was he crawling instead of walking? Everypony was asking question except Fluttershy she just sat there quiet as usual, thinking to herself hoping that he was alright. The doctor came out and seen the mane 6 and spike waiting eager to here on his condition. Twilight was the first to speak.

“So doctor is he okay?”

“Yes. He’s fine he just suffered from a massive puncture wound to his right side, his snout is broken but we were able to fix that, and his hind legs were broken but not to damage to where he unable to walk again. He should be able to walk within the next week. I’m quite surprised actually…anypony that comes in here in critical condition like that would be lucky to get to the hospital at all. He’s in recovery right now you can go see him if you would like.”

“Thanks Doctor we will.”

“Oh? One more thing don’t go too hard on him remember he just survived through all that trauma.”

“Don’t worry Doctor we won’t go hard on him.”

They all walked into the room and seen him sitting in front of the window where he was separated from every other pony in the room. While walking to him they heard the other patients talking about him calling cruel and hurtful things.

“Umm Hello.” Twilight said a little bit scared on what the Dog may retort with. He Only let out a deep sigh and turned his head to her.

“What do you Want?”