fedaul equestria book 1: foal mountain war

by ebinheart

Rating: everyone
Tags: Random, Slice of Life, Alternate Universe, Sad, Romance, Tragedy
Length: 1679

1560 .b.c fuedal equestria l warlords strive to control the land. rivial warriors must band together to stop a srtain pony warlord none as king sombra and the evil reign is soon be realize unless these warriors band together and stop him.

1560 B.C. fedual equestria is at war with its selfs many rivial pony warlords strive to contral equestria. the young ruler twilight to power in his territory of ponyville. but a few rivial warlords stand in her way from protecting her home.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-08-21 17:56:30 UTC

chapter 1 confertation at white tail woods

scene 1

(early dawn in ponyville lord twilight sparkle was walking around her fair city unaware that her whole land is in danger from an attack form faol mountain.)

Scout-LORD TWILIGHT LORD TWILIGHT!

Twilight-what is it. report.

Scout-huff...we are under attack my lady. huff

Twilight-by who? surely not trixies forces? me and her had sighned a treaty.

Scout-no my lady there are the warriors of foal mountain are attacking us! they will be here by nightfall!

Rarity-what! those disgusting brutes are coming here to attack us

Rainbow dash-who cares they attack us. so we fight back nothing else. right twilight?

twilight-right now i don't know. but for now gather all the troops you can muster.

scout\rainbw dash-yes ma'ma

(the scout & rainbow dash fly off.)

twilight-come on girls we need to rally all are troops quickly.

all but twiight- right!

(they all scatter in all directions)

twilight- i have a bad feeling about this.

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SCENE 2 (THE WARROIRS of foal mountain stand out of formation but stand ready to charge.  but twilights army stand in there way. so battle was unaviodable twilights walks out into the frront of her army. to ry to sway them to not fightl.)

twilight-warriors of foal mountin withdraw your forces nw so we can aviod this point blood shed.

stone tooth-huh listen to her the fool she is. i do not wish to fight but ll that gold lord trixie had offered us. oh

it will be sweet.(twilight speaking in the back ground.)

snicker back- my lord don't forget the extra gold and mares we get once we beatan them remember.

stone tooth-ahh thats right sincker. so much flank to go around it be grand i say.

(stone tooth & sincker back walk out of the war tent and to the front of there army)

stone tooth-quite your selfs pathetic mare your land will be ravaged & pludder of its gold & you and your fellow mares while your men die!

(blows a war horn to start the battle.)

twilight- so be it. unicorn fire!!!!!

unicorn bergardde-yes ma'ma.

(fire magic is fired & raine down.)

enemy warriors- ahhh keep going!

(they keep chageing een though they gettng killed left and right)

rainbow dash- all units charge!!!!!!

(both forces clash in bloody battle)

twilight- get your unit for an air raid over there main unit.

rainbow dash- right

(soon rainbows unit lauch an air raid picking off enemy warriors left & right but even they were being shot down by stone tooths archers.)

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Scene 3 (the main camp of stone tooth his general walks into the tent with bad news.)

stone tooth-snicker report.

sincker back-my lord were being pushed back & are losses are far above we antisapted as well to some of are officers have defected to the enemys side.

stone tooth- is that all then send them all to tartarus if the fates decree. but not now blow the horn for retreat... now!

snicker back- yes my lord.

(runs out f the tent)

Stone tooth-damn you twight damn you

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scene 4(twilights army giving a victory cry for there victory. twilight and her officers walk forward to give a vicory speech)

twilight-my brave warriors and are new allys it thanks to your will as well as your might that are nation will still stand!

rainbow dash-thats right boys way to go!

rarity-that was quite fantastic if i do say so my self.

pinkie pie-come on lets party back the camp!

(bouncing around a bit)

A second pony theory

Scene 4(faol mountain fortress stone tooth paced back and forth with a concernd look on his face)

stone tooth-(thoughts) not good not good if trixie finds out i was  beatan by twilight. all that gold will be lost and i will lost those warriors for nothing.

(the door is quickly opened by a messanger.)

messanger-my lord lord trixe is at are here. ma lord.

stone tooth- see her in lets get this over with. oh could you send my guards in on your way out.

messanger-yes my lord

(closes thedoor quickly.)

stone tooth-i will not let take that gold that is rightly mine.

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Scene 5 (at the gate trixie and her small band of guards wait impaoinatly.)

trixie-uhhh!...they cant keep me waiting like this.

messanger- sorry for the wait ma lady lease come with i will take you to lord stone tooth.

trixie-finnally somone gets here.

(waves her hoof to single her guards to move forword.)

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Scene 6(late at night twilighs army are celabrating there current victory over the faol moutain army.)

rainbow dash-yaho. hic who one of you hic can beat me in a hic drinking contest hic.

apple jack-now that ennough rainbow. i think you had a tad to much.

rainbow dash-no hic i'm fine hic (falls oer out cold)

rarity-i thinl apple jack is right hic.

apple jack-great now everyponys is onna have a hangover in the morning.

rarity-what in equestria you talking about dear hic were just fine apple jack.

(falls over drunk from to much wine.)

apple jack-like i said ya'll had a tad to much

(twilights is eating some hay & potatoes with zacora

zacora-what troubles you my humble friend

twilight-just a bad feeling thats all.

zacora-tell me so that imay help you find a answer to this unkown problem.

twilight-well ever since we finished the battle i had have been thinking its been 5 since the faol mountains tribeshas ever shown any hostility in concerns me a bit. also i think theres a second pony in this attack.

zacora-what you say is true they havent been active in a long while. but a second pony is involed that may take some time.

twilight-i know but its really bothhering me.

(zacora stopped her from talking.)

zacora- you need to not think of this problem. right now just enjoy your self.

twilight-maybe your right .

flutter shy-hey hic twilight hic having fun hic have a drink hic why don't ja.

everyone-hahahahahahahaha

(flutter shy falls to the ground drunk)

apple jack-aww grate.

headaches after battles

early morning over ponyville lord twilight and many of her officers had woken up with a suffer hang over and they knew this would be a long day espicaly if   they were under attack.

twilight-aghhh. my head hurts (blagh)

(vomits on her floor)

twilight-never party like that again.

(doors opens slowly)

flash sentry-my lady

twilights-not so loud flash

(puting her hoof to her head)

flash sentry-sorry my lady but you have a visitor.

twilight-send them to throne room

flash sentry-yes my lady.

(in the throne room.)

soldier-presenting lord of appleloosa big macintosh.

big macintosh-eyup.

twilight-welome lord macintosh. what to I have this pleasure of this matter.

big macintosh-thank you i here for a request for support of you forces. my people hae been attack by a unknown force for weeks now my forces have been damage badly i'd like your support please.

twilights-(mouth drop) umm i'll send your sister apple jack and rarity and there forces

(still surprise on how big macintosh said she met him before but never heard say much.)

big macitosh-thank you

(he leaves the room)

twilight-finnally i can go back to my quite room.

(putting her hoof towards her head)

(the barracks with apple jack & rarity)

apple jack-listen up troops. we are being to appleloosa to aid in mactoshs forces.

rarity-apple jack  be a darling and not speak so loud please

apple jack-ok ill try and talk quitely

rarity-thank you

apple jack- AS I WAS SAYING WE ARE MOVING THIS FORCE TO APPLELOOSA AND IT MAYBE TAKE 3 OR 4 DAYS DEPENDING HOW FAST WE MOVE!

(she was yellin)

rarity-@#$% you apple jack

messanger-letter for apple jack

apple jack- its from twilight. its says apple jack shut up

rarity-hmm.

apple jack-oh be quite. alright we leave at noon.

1 prologe\the land divided

1560 the land that is equestria was divied by rivial warlords. current lord of cantrlot lord wise eyes.

other lords of the divied equestria. these are the current lords

1.lord of ponyville-twilight sparkle

2.lord of fillydelphia-octavia melady

3.lord of hoofingon-trixie lualmoonn

4.lord of trottingham-sunset shimer

5.lord of clouds dale-derpy whooves

6.lord of manehattan-filthy rich.

twilight is the daughter of the sparkle family. and the wise benevlent ruler of ponyville her commanders\friends help her lead her land so that it is peaceful for aslong as it can remain but war is coming.

octavia the magestic queen of fillydelphia she retains the acient tradtions of melady family she is not a curle ruler of course but some still suffer do to lack of farming and food but since there allince with twilight her people have shipment every so often.

the almighty trixie of hoofington assumes she has the most the power than any other lord of equestria the ownly rules a starving land. but ith filthy rich at her back sh able to feed her fellow pony.

ths ever ambitinish sunset shimmer ruler trottingham with her ally trixie & filthy rich she has the forces and the resources she can setou to fullfile her desier to rule.

the joyful queen derpy whooves ruler of the mostly untochable clouds dale she always had such a joyful ponys all across the clouds her conrtol of the mighty clouds dale is hard to lose only pegise as well as unicorn magic then you can reach cloudes dale but none have ever successfuly concored coulds dale (cause no one bothered to try)

filthy rich the merchant lord of manehattan his rule is over trade deals and sales wich makes him the richest lord in all of equestria plus manehattan is center of trade in equestria so his resources are aboundant.

these are lords will battle it out and only one will win. they will strive for power for equestria but will come at a price that is not worth it to some they are willing to pay for it no matter what the cost. lets see there how they unfold. at the confrontation at white tail woods. twilight verses raiders of foal mountain.