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Those Eyes...

by Button Combo
After a series of murders, the authorities only have one lead...

A series of murders in Equestria. To be expected in any city. But this murderer has been at large for nearly 30 years. And he still hasn't been caught yet. He's even one step ahead of Princess Celestia. But the authorities have one lead; something that has been the same to be said for the few ponies that have managed escaped this maniac. The eyes…

EDIT: Story on hiatus to overcome a bad case of writer's block.

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Thank you SO MUCH Zealous Shift for the editing. You helped me so much. Please go to his user page and favorite both of his stories.

This idea came to me a few weeks before it's publication. I had always thought of this character this way, so why not put it in pony form! Be polite when considering liking or favoriting this story. I don't want 3000 people to dislike the story because of reasons like: "yd u kill her shes best poony" or "da titl sux", I want people to dislike because they didn't like the story, or expected more from it. If you are the former, please, at the very least, just dont like, dislike or favorite. If you are the latter, please comment constructive critisism, and I will fix it soon after. Thank you for reading this, and I hope you enjoy the story!

Teen
On Hiatus
Comedy
Tragedy
Crossover
Slice of Life
Dark
 

1184 words: Estimated 6 minutes to read

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