In the Mind of Pinkie Pie

by iloveyouderpy

Chapter 3

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Pinkie Pie woke up. Her vision was blurry but after about thirty seconds everything was clear again. The ground, it was pink and smelled sweet. Pinkie Pie kept her head facing the ground as she lightly stuck her tongue to taste the pink ground. Pinkie Pie jumped up suddenly from the ground with sheer delight.

"Cotton candy." She squealed and began eating at the cotton candy ground. She let the fluffy sweetness melt in her mouth, savoring every last bit of its tasty goodness. And before she could take another bite of the ground she saw, not far from where she stood, a chocolate milk water fall. The water fall fell down the side of a mountain and into a long river which seemed to stretch on forever. Past the river there candy canes and lollipops the size of trees all spread apart from each other.

Pinkie Pie let out a very loud joyful squeal and then dashed over to the chocolate river. She jumped right in. She swam through it taking in giant gulps of its chocolaty liquids. After a while she stopped and took a moment to just float there. She gazed upon the scenery before her. The sky was perfectly blue, the mountain which contained the waterfall stood very tall, the cotton candy field just on the other side of the chocolate milk river from the candy cane and lollipop forest. The rocks were made of gumdrops and the air smelled of candy.

Where am I? She thought to herself. How did I get here?

But these thoughts were soon interrupted when something scaly brushed against Pinkie Pie's legs. She shrieked in horror and quickly swam over to the shore, quickly getting herself out of the chocolate milk river. She turned around and watched as the creature emerged from the chocolate milk river.

It was an alligator. An alligator that looked like gummy.

"Gummy?" Pinkie Pie said with confusion and just then a dozen more Gummy-like alligators emerged from river. They all had no teeth and also gave blank, emotionless stares. Pinkie Pie was starting to believe she was either dreaming or going insane, but whatever was happening she liked it. It was like some kind of Pinkie paradise.One of the Gummies let out a loud croaking sound.

For the rest of the day Pinkie Pie played with all the Gummies in the chocolate milk river. The sun eventually set and the moon finally rose. Apparently day and night was included in this fantasy land, yet Pinkie Pie didn't feel tired at all. She still had the energy to play some more. But all the Gummies left the scene and disappeared into the chocolate milk. The moon was bright enough for Pinkie to see very clearly through the night. She looked up into the night sky and looked upon millions of twinkling stars. Shooting stars constantly zoomed through the starry night and in the near center of the sky was giant spiral galaxy made up of purple and white and blue. What a site it was.

For the first moment in Pinkie's life she felt like lying down. Not to sleep, but to look at the galaxy rotate slowly above her and the shooting starts zip on by it. She breathed. Pinkie Pie never knew what it felt like to be relaxed. Maybe it was the night or something putting her under some kind of spell. No one knows. But Pinkie enjoyed every last second of it.


Twilight was pacing back and forth in the waiting room of the Ponyville Hospital. She had been here for nearly an hour and grew worried about Pinkie Pie. Every once in a while Twilight would stop and look over at the clock on the other side of the room and then would go back to pacing. It was the only thing she could do.

There was a voice which said Twilight's name. Twilight turned around to see the hospital's lead doctor wearing a white coat and a stethoscope around his neck.

"Oh doctor," Twilight said in a worried voice, "How is she? Is she alright?"

"It's hard to say, her blood sugar has sky rocketed, most likely from eating all those desserts you said she ate, slipping her into a coma."

"A coma?" Twilight asked to make sure she was hearing this right. She was so shocked and frightened by this sudden news.

"I'm afraid so." The doctor said. "We currently have her stabilized and should be just fine."

Twilight was relieved to hear those words. "So, how long will she be in the coma?" She asked the doctor.

"We can't tell, only time can tell." The doctor began explaining. "It could be a couple of days or maybe a couple years. I'm sorry for giving you such news but if it's any contribution she's going to be fine."

"Thank you doctor." Twilight said and then left the hospital to go tell the rest of the group about what happened to Pinkie Pie.

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