Cheddar Cheese and a red dress

by ErraticOverlord
Rarity never liked Cheddar Cheese, and today was no exception. To everypony else, he seemed perfectly normal; he looked and acted just exactly like everypony else. But for Rarity, he was not like everypony else, and she couldn't grasp why.

To Rarity, something seemed incredibly off about Cheddar Cheese. He was a perfectly nice pony and nopony had anything bad to say about him. But Rarity felt something from him that she had no idea what to make of. One week ago Cheddar Cheese came into Rarity's boutique to buy a red dress for his fillyfriend.

I wonder what she'll say.

Narration of the story given by Derpy Hooves.
(Contest submission for The Inked Sword)

Teen
Complete
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
 
DR

1352 words: Estimated 7 minutes to read

1 Chapter:

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