Fall to Equestria

I was doing my ordinary 2:00 spiritual walk to forget the chaos of the world. I was so concentrated on my music of my ipod that I forgot to look where I was going. I felt my right foot step into nothing. By the instability I fell and by reflex I tried to transfer the impact of the fall on my hands but I was unable to do so. I saw that I was falling in a deep black hole surrounded by a pink glow.

Falling in that dark hole felt more like floating I didn’t felt the impact of the air hitting my face. I suddenly saw a light under me and seeing it coming closer made me realise that I was falling very fast. Wen I past the light I was blind by the sudden change of luminosity that I didn’t see the ground and by the impact knock me out cold.

Wen I woke up my head felt like a watermelon about to explode so I assumed that I took the fall head first. Slightly in daze I analysed my surrounding. It seems that I was in the middle of a forest and it was night time. I search around me trying to find out where I was. I saw a piece of paper on the ground. I grab and look at it, there were a blue pony on it and above her writing (The great and powerful Trixie). I put the piece of paper in my pocket and started walking in the forest. I walked for a couple hours and i didn’t find anything. Suddenly I heard a roar behind me. I turned around and saw a big lion with bat wing and a scorpion tail. Freaking out, I told myself that this was just a dream but my headache told me otherwise. I manage to dodge his first attack picking up dirt as his paw hit the ground. The dirt filled air blinded me while the creature strikes again. Striking me in the back leaving three big diagonal wounds. I fell, chest first, on the ground faking my death hopping that the lion (thing) would go away. The creature should above me for a while thump me some times.

After a couple minutes the (lion bat thing) lost the interest in me and walk away. Happy that I was alive, I managed to get up (painfully) with the help of a stick that was close to my face. I walk a couple minutes hoping to find civilisation, thinking what that creature that attack me was. Still hoping that this was all a very realistic dream even if my back (gorging with blood) was telling me otherwise. I suddenly realised that I lost my headache was gone; maybe it disappeared with all the blood that I lost. All of a sudden the stick that was holding my wounded body snapped and with me missing of stability, I fell face first. With me losing all my blood and energy, I closed my eyes saying that this has my last moments. Then I herd a voice (This isn’t fare). Still feeling the pain in my back I knew that I was still alive. I slightly open my eyes and a saw four yellow hooves. I moved my arms and moaned to tell them that I was still alive. (Oh my...) I heard before the animal before me ran in the opposed direction of me. I closed my eyes once more still thinking that this was my last hour, I fell in a deep sleep

Has I woke up; I rubbed my head still with an annoying headache. Has my senses came back I look around me and I saw that I was in a little bed about the size of a 13 year old kid. There where also birds nest everywhere. I realized that my shirt was gone but i still had my pant. I got out of the little bed rubbed my back. Feeling something strange I walk towards a mirror to see my back. I saw three large diagonal scars on it “how long was I out” I told myself. I slowly walk to the nearest window. I saw a basic land with a small river going thru it and there were a lot of little creatures. I really mean a lot!

I suddenly felt a cold breeze on my back. I turned around and I saw a little yellow pony with long light pink mane. “Am so happy that your alright!” it exclaimed. By the simple fact that the pony talks, I fell on my butt and pointed at her with surprise. “You... you talk” I finally said. “S...So do you?” she responded.

This was very weird “where am I” I ask to the pony while getting up “you mean you... don’t know?” she question back.

I sight “Look I just woke up after being attack by a monster, my head feels like it’s going to blow up and my what the fuck-o meter went of the charts. So please tell me any information that could be useful.”

“I...I think twilight would be best to answer your question.” She responded.

“Fine, lest go see twilight.”I said annoyed. “Can you just answer me one question? How long was I asleep?” I ask while turning back to the mirror the see once again my scares. “A full day” she answered. “IMPOSIBLE” I yelled. I turned around and look at her straight in her eyes. “Don’t lie to me I am not in the mood for jokes” I angrily said to the yellow pony. “I...its...I don’t understands?” she said while falling on her back by my sudden bust of anger.

Has I look at her eyes I say fear. I suddenly closed my own eyes and took deep breaths. Knowing that if I act like this I will not get my answers. When I open my eyes the pink haired pony was sitting on her rump looking at me with worried eyes. ”Are... are you ok?” she ask. I sight and sat down on the ground to be at her eye level. “I’m...I’m so sorry that I yelled at you. It’s just... I’m so confused right now and...Can we just start this all over again?” she nodded. “I am Louis-R Martin. What your name? I said with a friendly smile. “I’m fluttershy.” She whispered. As I got up “Maybe we should go see twilight maybe she help me with my confusion?” she nodded.

This is my first fimfictional story please tell me if you like it and yes I know that there are errors in the text becomes I’m French Canadian not English Canadian