Rage

by Mac the gunnman

Rating: teen
Tags: Original Character, Comedy, Tragedy, Gore, Slice of Life, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe, Other
Length: 1086

Follow along his footsteps to see what caused Rage to become The Phoenix king

My name is Rage. Some of you might of heard of me but for the rest and a few others, I had a bad past. My memory is kinda still on the fritz so some things might be blurry.

(Category tags and character tags will change as the story progresses)

Published 2014-08-17 08:50:05 UTC
Last updated 2014-08-18 01:52:35 UTC

Chapter 1:The begining

It's a new day in Ponyvile and the rest of equestia, Celestia's beutiful sun rising frum the east. At this time, all ponies wake from their sleep. One unicorn foal, however, continued to rest.for no one he used to know was there to wake him. His mane and tail was of the same pattern as fire, his body grey as ash,and his eyes ,still closed, hid ruby red eyes.

He was at peace still under the lone tree that protected him frum the sun. About 30 minutes later is when this little one wakes up. He slowly opened his eyes, revealing his ruby red eyes to the beutiful morning.he got up to a sitting pose and was waiting for his freind, Hazy Gust. Hazy gust was a pegasus foal with a light blue body, light blue and dark blue mane and tail. Unlike most pegasi, he had larger wings. He was the one between the two who got his cutie mark, a light post in a dark fog.

The fire unicorn began to see a blue figure fly towards him like a lone rain drop.The young one waved at the pegasus, shouting,"Morning Hazy Gust!" the pegasus landed near the firy one replying with,

"Mornin' Rage. I got breakfast leftovers for ya." He pulled out three pancakes out from a plastic bag that was in his bag and gave them to the firy unicorn that is called Rage. In which Rage ate the pancakes with delight, the freshness of the baked goods still intact within."You know, if you have a problem with being by yourself, you're free to join my family. Mom and dad wouldn't mind another child." Hazy gust reminded Rage,

"Nah. I'm alright being alone. Thanks for the invitation though," Rage replied after finishing the last pancake.

They both got up and began to make their way to the shopping district."Well my father gave me a few bits to spend at the shoping district here. Only problem is, I don't know what to pick. This might help get your cutie mark," Hazy gust chuckled a bit, Rage looking at Hazy Gust with a grumpy look. Rage slugged Hazy to let him know that was not funny to him.

"Ow okay, I'll not do that anymore," Hazy Gust rubbing his right front hoof where Rage struck.

They made it to the first shop that sold clothing."Um... can't we just skip this one Gust?" Rage asked his freind.

"No... as much as you and me hate clothe shoping, I'd like to see if you got an eye for clothing," Hazy Gust replied with confidence. they entered the shop to see a filly with a kept purple mane and tail, a white as snow body, and purple eyes. Her cutie mark being three diamonds... Whatever that's suppost to represent...

"I'd make a comment right now, but I don't want to make more enamies than I already have," Rage wispered to his freind.Hazy Gust just chuckled.

"Welcome. Is there anything I can help you with?" The little filly ask the two,

"Nothing right now. I'll let you know if we do need anything," Hazy Gust replied to the filly. The two past by some dresses, suits, shirts, clothing trimmed with gems, cloth of many colers, ect. Rage found nothing that caught his eye.Hazy Gust didn't find anything either.

"Exuse me miss." Hazy Gust called to the filly.

"Rarity is my name," The filly called Rarity called back,

"Well than, Rarity, do you see anything that might catch our eye?" Hazy Gust asked,

"Well that's a good question. Let me see..." Rarity started thinking while looking at shelf after shelf of clothing and cloth. She found something and lifted it up with her magic, in which covered the item with a purple aura. When she placed it down, she calmly told the two foals,"This might be to your likeing dears."

"Dears? We were anything but dears" Rage said in his head.

The two looked down the box to see some king's clothing. one looking like it's on fire, the other one being relavent to the sea. The two looked for a little bit longer before one's neck started to feel unconfortable."Well? what do you two think?"Rarity asked the two. The two looked up and noded."Well than that would be 25 bits each," Rarity told them pulling out two bags. Hazy Gust pulls out 50 bits from his bag and placed them on the counter. She took the money, put it away, packed the clothing into the bags, and gave the bags to the two little customers.

"Thank you Rarity. Oh and by the way, my names Hazy Gust and this is my freind,Rage."Hazy Gust called out to Rarity as the left.

"Come back soon dears,"Rarity called out to the two as the door was closing.

When out, Rage finally spoke,"Why was she calling us dears?" Hazy Gust looked over to Rage and replied with,

"I don't know. Might be a thing for her." Rage rolled his eyes than chuckled a bit,"Shouldn't mary keep an eye on her little lamb?" Rage asked Hazy Gust. At first, he didn't get it, but after a second he got what he ment and chuckled.

"Realy dude?" Hazy Gust asked Rage after laughing,

"Eeyup." Rage replies with with a straight face. A few seconds they burst into laughter,

"Well where should we go next?" Rage asked,

"That was all the money I got. pass that at least we can be like kings with these on. Heh who knows, maybe you'll be a king Rage.Hint hint." Hazy Gust replied with.

"Oh please, like Celestia would find anything royal about me." Rage tells his freind. they continue their walk till they reach Hazy Gust's home.Hazy Gust takes his "Royal" clothing and aproches his door,

"Well I'll go put this in my room and grab some lunch. Don't worry, I'll bring you a sandwich." Rage just nods and walks bac to his tree where he'll relax till Hazy gust comes back out.

He was just laying down when his eyelids began to close and he began to sleep... and dream.

Author's Note

Hello and thanks for reading the first chapter of my first story. In case you'll ask, this takes place in the past when the mane six got their cutie marks, and yes, Rage is an orphan. If you find any typos, something that's not right, let me know and I'll work on that as soon as I have free time.:pinkiehappy:

Chapter 1.5:The nightmare

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