Those Nights

by lunasroyalguard4life3

Rating: teen
Tags: Original Character, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Main 6, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark
Length: 5672

The story is about a regular stallion who slowly goes insane and loses his mental stabillity

The story is about a stallion who after a tragic moment happens and he explains his slow decent into madness and going to his insane state of mind
Story includes
Gore
Insanity
4th wall breaking

Published 2014-08-19 03:30:04 UTC
Last updated 2014-09-21 01:31:01 UTC

The Begings

Dear Journal

So you are going to be my story teller you little, red, and worn out book, well I can only see people in my predicament to read this but oh well maybe when I give this to the guard they will send it to some stupid, high budget mainstream company that will do anything for some bits. Well I got a week to tell you my glorious, dark, and twisted story I guess well begin when this all started, on that one fateful night.

It was two weeks ago when me, my wife, and my son moved from Manehatten to Ponyville we were moving our beds, tables, and some furniture into our new house when some kids came by and said hello they called themselves the Cutiemak Crusaders or something of that nature. My son asked if he could go and play with them I saw no harm in the matter so I agreed. We were done with most of the unpacking, we got our beds set up and the table it was around 3 oclock in the afternoon and my son was still out playing with those 3 other fillies I was just happy he made some friends hopefully, we left Manehatten because he was getting picked on by other kids to the point were I caught him with a razor about to cut his front leg, I stopped him, got him into a hug, and told him to never do that again we cried there together for awhile. So now every night I talk to him like a guys night out but in his room talking, and playing with his toys. So I sat down in my chair with my wife sitting next to me, we talked about what color we should paint the house and the same with the walls and stuff like that when out of the blue I heard a knock on our door, I look to my wife and asked who could that be? So me and my wife get up and go over to the door I dont know why but I felt an urge not to open the door but my curiosity got the better of me so I opened the door and saw a pink little pony, with frazzled hot pink hair, and blue eyes that they seemed to be popping out of her head with pure joy and happiness like nothing in the world was wrong. Hello my name is Pinkie Pie and Iam here to greet you to Ponyville said the bouncing Pinkie Pie, me and my wife smiled friendly and greeted the pony back, she came in our new house and we talked she wanted to throw some welcome to Ponyville party, but we said no we didt want to take up her time she agreed but after what felt like an eternity of other party ideas she had like a already married party, or a you had a boy party. Then she left around 4:30 left me and my wife to relax and so my son came home, we ate dinner and he talked about how they tried to find their cutiemarks in stuff like potion making, mountain climbing, and other out of this world things, and it was a normal dinner so we all went to Sugarcube conner and got some cupcakes for a snack my son got a normal chocolate cupcake, with white frosting, and rainbow jimmies. My wife got a strew berry cupcake, with chocolate frosting.I let the Cakes I think they were called surprise me and they did they gave me a chocolate and vanilla cupcake, with rainbow frosting, and chocolate jimmies.

We got back home around 8 oclock and decided it was time for bed I went to my sons room and we talked he kept going on and on about his day with his new friends and others he met like a boy named Button Mash, or a girl that he thought looked cute named Archer, and so many others that I forgot their names and he seemed to be having a live kids his age should have. So I gave him a hug, told him I love him, and I tucked him in and said good night. Me and my wife sat at the dinner table talking about how when we finish unpacking tomorrow, and shell go to that dress store we saw and ask for a dress the name was something fancy the butice carisel or something like that, we must have talked for at least two hours when we heard another knock on the door we got up, and I had that weird urge again not to open it but I put those urges away and opened it. What happened next was something that started my downfall as a sane, and decent pony.

I saw a wooden baseball bat get swung at my head and I collapsed instantly and I blacked out a couple of times but when I came to realize what was happening, I tried to tell my wife to get out but it was to late she was on the ground tied up, and on the ground then I see something I hopped I wouldt see at that point in time my son was in the middle of the hall way standing there seeing his mother tied up on the ground and me his father on the ground next to her with some blood coming out of my head leaking down my face I could only tell by the warm sensation of a liquid, warm, substance crawling down my face. I looked at him and saw the look of pure terror on his face, one of the stallions looked up and saw him he decided to do what was needed. The other stallion with the baseball bat hit me again and I blacked out, and when I woke up a couple hours later I saw my house was a wreck everything that was worth money was gone and then I saw my wife she was on the ground she looked okay I shook her a couple of times to see if she was okay, and if they hurt her but she didt respond I shook her again no response I turned her over and thats when I saw the dry, crimson blood on the floor, in her coat, everywhere the dry blood came from her neck. After seeing that I looked for my son and couldt find him anywhere then I saw something outside once I saw I broke down everything in my body stopped functioning except my eyes I could`t do anything but stare at the lifeless body that hung from a tree just outside our house. there was a sign nailed to my sons dead body WELCOME TO PONYVILLE.

Just to think little journal this is how it all starts and you get to read it dont think I see you, yes you the person in front of their computer screen reading the story. You maybe reading about me but Im always watching you and theres nothing you can do to stop me from watching you I hope you enjoy the rest of this dark and crappy story because I know deep down you want to do those things the stallions did to my family deep down thats what you want to do you want to hurt, rape, and kill but you are afraid of how society will see you, and how your family will well thats why your reading this to try and live that dream through the eyes of someone else. So tell me whos the real crazy one here tell me in those things you call comments that are really vents to let out your frustration or joy so you wont let them out on people you know or would find your conversation boring.

Author's Note

Okay guys this is my first crappy story if you want to find out what happens next tell me in the comments or if I should end it here just tell me thanks for reading. I might take them inconsideration I normally do whatever I want and don`t care what people think but who knows

Quote the Raven

Dear Journal

So now that you, yes you do you still think I cant see you I say you must think Iam insane, mad, or even twisted and you would be right I cant say I blame you but whatever. Now where was I... oh yes after my family was murdered, some people call it a slaughter- others a massacre, I call it a awakening but cant explain why Ill just jump in and continue where I left off.

After starring at it for about a half hour or maybe an hour I couldt tell I came to my senses and charger through the door and went out to my son. When I got to him I tried lifting his body of the tree but it didt work then I bucked the tree, I kept bucking I started feeling blood gently run over my coat I kept going though hoping to knock him down, hoping he was still alive. I was so focused on the tree and my son I didt realize the crowd forming around me wondering what was going on only watching no one was helping just muttering to the others around them asking what was going on. Then I looked up to see my son being lifted from the branch his noose was tied to by two pegusi one was a pale yellow coated pony, with pk hair, and three butterflies for a cutiemark. The other was a cyan pony, with a rainbow colored mane, and a lightning bolt for a cutiemark. I rushed to my son hugging him and seeing if he was okay I saw the slashes on his wrist with the dried blood all around them, the rope mark around his neck, and then I saw the one thing I thought I wouldt see dried blood around his hind legs. It hit me all at once with enough force to knock Celestia down I realized that the men didt only kill my family the raped my son at the same point, I looked to the cyan pony and asked w.. whe..wheres th.... wheres the hospital, she looked at me and said hes gone sir theres nothing that nurse Redheart or anyone could do, I asked again this time mostly begging for her to show me where the hospital is please just show me I need to know he could still live just please tell me, she starred at me and just flew away the other pony that was with her I heard her sobbing I was going to ask her but she flew away to quickly and I sat there alone I cant remember when I started to cry but I was I took my sons body put him on my back and started walking down the dirt road I felt the dirt start sticking to my bloody hoofs but I did`t care at that point, as I was walking down the road I started to tell my son everything was going to be okay and I was going to make everything better.

A couple days later I had to barrier both my son and wife, I started gong to bars more frequently, I was at bars more frequently getting drunk and making sure my problems get shoved down by the cider, but it never works I always have that feeling that I let them down. One night after going to the bar I walked around town and stumbled into the Everfree Forest, I was a little drunk but not enough to forget what happened, I was walking when I heard a noise it was two ponies I remembered them by their voices they were the two who murdered my family, I sat there staring at them for awhile and thought of something I wonder how they sound when they scream.

I sneaked over to where they were and planned what to do I grabbed my knife that I had on me, I started carrying a knife after that night I took it and once I was sure I was behind one of them I jumped out of the bush I was hiding in and jabbed the knife right into is face and then, after that was done I quickly went after the other one and hit him in the head with a rock I found, I did`t kill this man because I want to have some fun with him.

So know you got to see how I got my revenge, well a little of it anyway but I did`t want to spoil it for you I want to see how many of you decide to leave and abandon this story or how many of you continue to read it I just want to know who is crazy at this point because I still believe that some of you can do what I do, that some of you can wake up and smell the stench of dried blood all over you, to feel the drive and excitment after and before the kill, and to see the hope, will, and dreams you crush after you do it.

Dont You love the Smell of Burning Flesh

Dear Journal

I know what everyone is asking themselves or atleast one user named val what were the tortures my wife endured, well why dont you ask her she's standing right next to you. Go on ask her, ask her..... I SAID ASK HER BEFORE I RIP OUT YOUR SPINE AND SHOVE IT UP YOUR BEEP! What was that beep can I not say any swears here lets try, BEEP, what the BEEP who the BEEP keeps BEEP doing that. Whatever I guess I should CONTINUE WITH THIS BEEP STORY!

I woke up in this weird building it was very dark and when I tried to move I couldn't. Thats when I remembered Jack being stabed in the face what atacked him I can't remember. After laying there for awhile I felt like I was chained to the table which after looking aroung I saw that all 4 of my hooves were tied to different metal poles and no matter what I did I could't brake free. You can't get out its the type of knot you need 2 hooves to untie and in your predicament you are screwed, I looked around who are you and why am I here, I didn't hear anything for what felt like hours even though it was only about 4 mins before I heard something but it was'nt a voice it was a hisssssssss I couldn't figure out what it was untill the smell the god awful smell of propane.

Thats how he explained his part of the story but don't worry, theres going to be more but from my side the author is just trying to ramble on so there are more words. Ain't that right you mother BEEP are you BEEP serious you are still doing that beep BEEP, you BEEP I will tear you BEEP limb from limb do you understand. I willThis is the author Im stopping this mid thing and going back to the story.

As I saw the man on the table I set him up on he was begging for forgivness for what ever he did well that sucks for you then, w... w... why.. d..d..do you s..say that I thought about my anwser to this very carefully and said because the only way Im forgiving you, at that same time the weilders torch I was trying to light fianaly came on and then I continued to say is when I tortured you to the point of insanty.

So I prosseded with the torch and decided I was going to see what happens when you burn a cutie mark to the point were fur was no longer there, as I did this not only did he screammed he decided to spill everything includeing the fact that it wasen't his plan it was Jacks and Jack killed my wife and son. I looked at him and asked how did my wife die I know how my son did but what about my wife. I stopped heating his cutie mark which was now gone and he said his story after I hit you with the bat and knocked you out Jack after dealing with your son took the bat from me and, he paused I turned the torch back on and he continued he... he... he put the handle in your wife um... how do I put this sensitive spot and when he was finished he took the bat and hit your wife's legs, back, and then smashed her head in. I stared at no putickuler spot watching it and then I spoke and did you try and stop him he looked at me and said I was collecting the stuff to sell later he had already smashed her head in when I got there thats why we were in the woods I was going to give all that stuff back and he already sold it Im so sorry for what he did. I looked at him and then I did something I never thought I could do I took a scalple I was going to use to cut him open and instead I..... I...... I stabed him in the chest were the heart was and was slashing in every direction possible and I could feel the blood on my hoove and the warm irony substance felt great I started licking it and it tasted even better. Thats when I thought I need to do this again.

yep that was my first kill now excuse my while a slauter this fucking moron of a author

The Truth of Insanity

Dear Journal

I know you are all sad that the original author is dead because of me and some of you care others dont I enjoyed it and I know some of you did to but dont worry you wont die I need you to finish reading this story. What is this a comment saying the author is not dead wear could he be then maybe if I check around anyway Ill look around later first I`ll tell the story.

After draining all the blood from the poor pony I had murdered to drink it later, after doing that I decided to burn the body I only wanted his blood.I sat there thinking of how great that was the thrill of the person begging for you to let them go, the smell of blood or flesh being cut of is fantastic. I needed to do it again but I needed to think who, who could I kill that will satisfy my hunger for blood, flesh, and the scream of pain. I thought and thought then it hit me who were that mare who greeted us to ponyville.......... Pinkie Pie that was it and the two pegusis that came by that wanted to see if they could help but didt. One was Rainbow Dash I know that because a bunch of the guys at the bar talk about her, and the other I dont know her name but Ill find out. Which one should I go after well one lives in the sky that was Rainbow, Pinkie lives at sugarcube conner, and Ill figure out were the other pegusis lives later.

I was going to give you guys a vote but I realized that would take to long so I just decided. Oh and I found the author I let him chose so I could kill him after you can thank him for the death of Rainbow Dash but I`am going to kill him so you can vote for how he dies anyway you can think go ahead and do that.

It was around 11:00 pm and I was scouting Rainbows house seeing any weak points so I could enter without anyone noticing luckily I knew a cloud walking spell and I had a hot air balloon don`t ask how I got it its a long story that deals with some stuff I found weird. But anyway I found a way in and I went for it, I got to the door and opened it all the lights were out which meant that she was either asleep or she was out, I looked around and saw pictures of her with e-her friends and family I went upstairs and opened the one door that was up there and saw a bed with a pony with a Rainbow mane and cyan wings. I took some cloth and put some chemical I bought that would knock her out for a day or two, so has I poured the chemical onto the cloth and brought it over to her and shoved it in front of her muzzle she struggled for a couple of minuets and slowly fell asleep. Now to get that the party pony.

I took Rainbow to the Everfree before I went after Pinkie,I put her the same place I killed my first victum I tied her up and put a bag over her head and mace sure she was not getting out. Now I had to make a plan for the party pony I have heard that she has a Pinkie sense so I had to make this plan full proof. I realized that I could sneak through the window and do the same thing with Rainbow. I get up to the window and I see Pinkie standing there bug eyed starring at me, Hello I saw you outside and decided that I would throw a welcome to my room party and go through my window party I realized she was talking to me and said hi um......... do you want to breath into this for 2 minuets please she gave a questioning glance and then said sure she did and was knocked out in 3 minuets I just stood there thinking wow that was easy I grabbed her and took her back to the place in the Everfree were she and Rainbow will have the best time of there.

So we are nearing the end of the story i know you guys will be sad and like Oh no theres going to be no more chapters in Those Nights or you will be like Thank Celestia this is over in like two more chapters yes. But if you are really god and ask nicely I might do more Im not sure but who knows.

Breaking Point

Dear Journal

Its so sad right now guys and do you know why because its almost the end of the book I know some of you can`t wait to get rid of me like the author lunasroyalguard4life3 who had an accident last night and sadly died, or that person val who wants me to help her take over the world, the list continues but you get the picture hopefully. But dont cry youll see me soon it will be the last thing you see but you wont get rid of me forever. So lets finish this story so I can mentally break you and rip your organs out and make you eat them while you slowly die.

Well today is bucking great first I wake up not being able to see anything, second I cant move my arms or feet , and finally I have had to listen to Pinkie ramble about this being a surprise party for the both of us this is great. After about a half hour more of listening to Pinkie I heard a metal door creep open and realized that this was not one of our friends houses or any were in ponyville, I started to scream and thrash trying my best to break free and figure out who our captor was but it was no use I screamed to the pony to let us go, and that I would hurt him if he laid one hoof on me or Pinkie. I stopped screaming and didt hear anything for awhile thats when the bag was removed from my head and I saw our captor he was a unicorn, with a navy blue coat, I didt see any pupils in his eyes, and I looked at his flank to see if he had a cutie mark but he didt he was a blank flank I remembered him though this was the man who had his family slaughtered he looked at me with those life less eyes peering into my soul he spoke how are you feeling miss Dash and how about you miss Pie. Pinkie was the first to answer she said that she was fine and that she would like the party they wee about to have I looked at her and then at the man and said Iam doing ok I would like to know if I could have a cup of water Iam kind of thirsty, ok miss Dash I shall get you your water and miss Pie what would you like for this party, she thought for awhile and said how about some streamers, and cupcakes, and cake, and um a drum set. I looked at her with questioning on my face the man came up and gave me some water he had to pour it because I was still tied up, he then turned to Pinkie and said ok miss Pie I will get that but first we have to play a game he then proceed over to a table and was going through some stuff he then walked up to me and I felt a sharp pain in my leg and looked down it was a knife deep in my hoof I looked at him his expression changed he had blood red pupils and a menacing grin on his face and I screamed out in pain and then he pulled the knife out and did the same to Pinkie she didt scream but I saw her hair deflate and a single tear rundown her cheek. He continued like nothing had happened so here are the rules you will pick something for me to do that deals with this knife and one of you like for example say miss Dash said to cut miss Pies arm so thats what I do and continued to cut her arm, now say miss Pie said to touch miss Dash inappropriately while cutting her leg he did that and it felt so bad I felt so violated and then I felt the pain on my leg as he cut into it. But if you dont say anything then I kill the opposite player and have you as a torture doll ok, he turned faced Pinkie and continued ok miss Pie your turn.

I had to think I dont wont Dashie to die come on Pinkie think, think, I got it I looked up at him and said I won`t you to cut Dashie mane he walked over and started to slowly cut her hair I could see the pain in her face but it was the best I could do for that time now I need to get ready for what come. What was going to happen though what was Dashie going to do. She locked eyes with me this was not the party I wanted this wasn't how Dashies birthday was supose to, then I heard her say something c...cu...cut.... her tail off and Pinkie after he does that just tell him to kill me. At that tears started to well up in my eyes Dashie can't die she just can' I looked at her and screamed NO I WON'T DO IT! I...I....I can't do that, I started to cry when I realized the sick, pathetic exuse for a pony was standing there with a smile on his face Dashie called out to me and said Pinkie I don't won't to die when this guy says its ok for me to die if I die its knowing I saved one of my friends. I looked at her and she wanted me to say it so I did I won't you to k.....k.....ki...kil.... I WON'T YOU TO KILL DASHIE YOU SICK FUCK!!! He stood there for a minute and started to laugh Dashie was the first to speak whats so funny he stared at her still laughing and said she never specified how long I could take or what I could do so I'am going to enjoy this.

He did everything to make her suffer he did it right in front of me he....... he raped her, slowly cut off her skin, and burned both of her eyes but the worst part was he put he her flesh on me like it was some Nightmare night costume then...... then he stapled it on to me I can't take it off. When he finished that he had clopped to me tied there not being able to move he touched me I....I...............I could't do anythig about it. He then proceded to cut my back legs off I could't stand he then put a bag on my head and left me in the middle of nowhere I was able to crawl myself out of the Everfree forest and into ponyville I need help I.....I....... I started laughing getting what he said when he left me in the forest, you said you wanted to make everypony smile. I started to see a crowd form around me but I did't care I just started singing
Come on...e..ev..ever........every p....po...po....pony....SMILE.

Yep I did all this all because I felt the rush of killing someone last chapter on the way.

Just a Quick Talk

Hi guys its me the author/main character I know most of you most likely liked the ending but I just couldt think of anything else to do. But since most people are doing stuff with the elements of discord or chaos bucking other authors, but anyway Iam going to do my own twist on the elements. What are we going to do that is different author tell me so I can rip you apart and make you eat your own flesh, ok thought I got rid of you with those doctors I saw but what ever. I dont want to give to much away but Im going to try a apocolyps type thing, I have no clue what your getting at author but I think I like it but what about my new friends are we going to be able to kill you and the other authors, well yes Iam going to do stories leading up to a climax while I do some side stuff. But author what will me Insanity be doing in that time, oh dont worry Iam sure Pinkie wants her revenge so if she finds out me and you are the same person we are completely bucked. Well guys that its this is the end of my first story thank you everyone who took the time to read it and I know most fans want to kill me for the ending (that means you val, rich, and my father) but hopefully you wont be upset with how the rest of the series is.

Now that the author is done talking I have one thing to tell you yes I may be insane and like things that you dont like but dont worry............................................................................................................................... I will k...k..ki...kill you.

The End I Think?

Dear Journal

Yep this is were I end my tail no pun intended but yep soon some guards willcome and take me away and one of them will try to make profit off it, it makes me sad to call this the end we had so much fun togther like the user val who I apoligies to for not being able to take over the world. Why do I feel like going to the castle of the two sisters why am I walking there, I don' t know I might meet my doom or something........ WAIT! when did I get to the Everfree forest I was at my house one minute ago whats going on maybe this as something to do with Discord missing all they foung were these weird stones and a note that is being kept from everyone except princess Twilight and her friends. OH SHIT THOSE 2 PONIES I TOURCHERED ARE HER FRIENDS! Realzing this I was instently pulled into the castle, which I had no clue was in front of me until I was pulled in I felt something clamp my lips shut but it was'ent a hoof like I was expecting it was a claw a griffons claw I locked eyes with the griffon she looked at me with cruelty in her eyes and then they softnd once she saw me, then she spoke about time you shoed up Chaos has been waiting fot awhile and you know how she gets impacient and don't get me started on how much Greed missed having you around she saw my blank stare and asked if I was ok she called me something no one but a voice in my head called once a name only given for my talent Insanity.

Author's Note

I know crappy ending but I felt I had more use for this character then this one story so ...... I'am going to try my hoof at a elements of Chaos series explaining each one and then build it to a climax were they all get together and try to kill the harmony and all that so yeah thats the end for know and if you want put a Chaos element you would like to sees origins next voting closes 9/30 Ill give you that long so bye