Chapter 1 - Why did I wish for this adventure
One Way Ticket to Equestria
EdgarDoesEverything
“The sun was high in the sky, the air visible by the scorching hot waves of the sun. The summer made it unbearable to be outside as the heat burnt anyone who dared to step out alive.”
"Over exaggerating much, Jason?" An old, wise voice was heard inside the mind of a seventeen year old teenager. He currently sat in a school bus bored, patiently waiting to be dropped off home. He paid little to no attention to the other teenagers in the bus and sat in the back of the vehicle to admire the nostalgia topaz blue skies while the blazing ball of fire hung in the air.
"All I want to do is get home and open the time capsule I buried ten years ago.". He looked down at his right wrist to see a machine attached to his arm. The machine's name was Body Machinery Mark 5000; but most leave out Mark 5000. They instead use the nickname BM. The BM was capable of extraordinary feats. How it is attached is rather much more safe and simple than the gruesome procedures in the Body Machinery Mark 1000. The BM can be attached to the person as early as ten years old by an IV and four small drills that painlessly burrow to the bone at the bottom of the BM. When aging occurs the BM recalculates the measurements and proceed to inject a dose of morphine for the operation. The BM has the ability to display one's skills such as repairman, scientist, soldier, etc. It can also display the S.P.E.C.I.A.L's of one being known as Strength, Perception, Endurance, Charisma, Intelligence, Agility and Luck. The person's well being is also included such as a calculated health, signs of any radiation exposures and if the person has any drugs effects. It also has the ability to self contact Law Enforcement to Paramedics without the user's help. It can also be used as a modern cellphone such as calls, messaging, games, etc.
"Once again my young chap, congratulations on turning seventeen, I admire you for wanting to join the military just like your father did in the great war but what are your true intentions of joining old chap?" The BM said with curiosity.
"Wadsworth." Jason said inhaling a large breath and releasing it.
"In this world, there are the strong. Most of the time the weak are protected by the strong. People who are willing to sacrifice themself for the better of others. I want to protect people, the feeling of knowing you helped someone and the gratitude they give you is something I enjoy. I want to travel around the world, the discipline in the armed forces, the guns, man do I love guns, something about that lifestyle is intriguing." Jason finished with a smirk on his face.
"Don't forgot having to kill other humans, the chance of being disabled and traumatized forever or watching close ones and comrades be killed before your eyes. You humans are so interesting." Wadsworth said in a somewhat cheery voice.
"It's not like I haven't been through some of those already." He mood darken as he wearily looked outside the window. Wadsworth changed the subject.
"Well old sport, do you remember what you put inside of the time capsule"
"No not really. If i remember correctly I shoved a bunch of shit inside for shits and giggles as I was to excited to get it buried.". He said chuckling at the thought. The bus came to a stop as it slowly hovered to a halt. Four teens stood and begun their disembark. Jason stood and began walking down and met with the bus driver.
“Have a good day, sir.” He said to the man operating the bus.
“Y'all take care now and happy birthday Jason!” He thanked the man and with that, the door to the bus closed. Its engine started up again and the large vehicle slowly rose and took off into the air. Jason stood watching the bus ascend and fly away into the distance. One of the teen that had gotten off poked Jason at his head; he turned around to see all of them standing..
“Happy Birthday to you!” The four sang, immediately causing Jason to blush. “Oh stop it, guys.” He said looking down. The four continued to sing as he stood there awkwardly.
“Happy birthday to Jason!” Said a girl’s voice. “Happy birthday you little shit!” A teen who excitedly yelled causing the group to laugh. They began walking down the street and began small talk.
“So why did you sit by yourself today Jason?” Asked the girl who wore a black skirt that reached her knees along with a long sleeved blazer that was the same color as the skirt over a white inner T. To finish it all off she also had on a red tie with black dress shoes. The uniform was similar to the males.
“Ehh just felt like sitting alone today.” He scratched his head.
“Well that’s odd of you, usually you talk to lots of people on the bus, we wondered why you were alone, guess they were too busy looking at my handsome face.” A teen whose ego was clearly bigger than his head with an average build and dark brown hair said.
“Yeah, like Arin said with the expection of him being handsome-"
"-Batch I'm fabulous." He defended.
"-We just assumed you wanted to be left alone. We were wondering if something had happened.” A tall, intimidating senior said in a soft yet kind voice.
“I’m fine Trevor, I just wanted to sit alone.” Jason repeated to the giant.
“Well either way, we’re glad nothing serious happen and you were just being anti social today.” A guy with brown hair sighed with his remark, jabbing Jason in the ribs with a smirk.
“Oh gee, thanks for at least trying to sound considerate, Con.” Jason jabbed back.
“Well just remember, if you ever need someone to talk to we will always be there for you.” The only girl in the sausage fest said.
Jason could barely give a smile to her as the little jabs he had with Con turned into a full on war.
“Thanks Brianna, I’ll keep that in- *oof*”
The group made small talk on their way to Jason’s house, Arin and Travis having previous arrangements and needing to be somewhere else and couldn’t go inside. Con and Brianna on the other hand were free followed Jason inside.
“Ahh, I sure do enjoy chatting with the other BM5s, Jason. It always tickles my funny bone for amusement! Ah, I see Con is here, how are you young lad? My goodness, Brianna is here as well! Veronica sure did tell me quite a tale about your love interests.” Wadsworth chuckled quietly while Brianna blushed and stood awkwardly.
“I-I don’t know what you’re talking about…” Brianna said looking up in the sky. “What did I say telling other people who I like, Veronica!” Brianna whispered to her BM which she replied to, “Hey It’s not my fault that you like-” Brianna quickly muted her BM5, giving a nervous grin when the boys looked at her.
‘Well are we going to stand here and sweat balls or what?” Con said, sweaty from the summer's heat.
“Yeah yeah, just let me get the door.” Jason stood in front of his door, the peep hole opening up and scanned Jason’s body. A few seconds later and some gears were heard spinning with the door opening. A cool breeze hit them all, causing Jason and his friends to let out a sigh as they walk inside. Con immediately went for the couch and sat down; Brianna following Jason into the kitchen.
“Yo Con, you want some water?” Jason asked.
“Yeah man, that’ll be great! And make it cold!” He replied.
Jason turned to Brianna, “You want some too, right?” She nodded.
“Hey Wadsworth, grab us three glasses of cold water, please?” Jason said to his left arm.
“Of course, Sir.” Wadsworth sent the command to the house wirelessly and soon miniature mechanical arms came out of the ceiling. The arms went into a cabinet and took out three glass cups and began filling them with cool H2O. He then proceeded to give one to everyone. “Thanks Wadsworth!” The three said. He merely chuckled and returned to idly listening to the group chat.
“I’ll be right back guys, I’m going to go change into something more comfortable. Bathroom’s down the hall if you need-” Con cutted Jason.
“-Yeah, yeah we know, you don’t have to say that every time we come over. Go change and hurry up.” Jason smiled and entered a cylinder tube as the floor sunk a bit and then lifted, raising him up until he was out of sight. Brianna went and sat next to con and began talking about the school day. The elevator came to a stop at the second floor of Jason’s house. He stepped out and began walking down a hall; at the end of the hall, there was a door to the left which led to his room. The door slid up and then back down when he entered. He then heard a ringing and looked down at his arm to see that the caller ID was labeled as “DAD”. Jason quickly touched the answer symbol and live footage of a handsome man showed up.
“Hey dad, how’s it going?” Jason asked.
“Ahh it’s going good son, I’m here with ya mother doing some boring old groceries. How was school today?”
“It was fine, learned some history when they invented HoverCrafts, pretty cool that we had cars that ran on gasoline.”
“Yup! It’s good the old eggheads figured out to use water to fuel our engines! Back then my Papa had to pay eight freaking dollars for one gallon of gasoline! You be grateful that you don’t live in those times son.”
“Yeah, I know. Don’t have to tell me twice, anyways. When’re you coming back?”
“We'll be back in an hour. I got to go, your mother is making a big deal about baby cupcakes-”
“-Is that my baby on the phone?!”
“Got to go son! I’ll see you soon!” The call ended with that, Jason quietly chuckled and went to change into a more comfortable set of cloths. Jason had put on a grey plain shirt with tan jeans along with some worn down grey running shoes. He exited his room and went down the hall. As he was going down the hall he looked to the right to see his parent’s bedroom. He then slowly turn left to see a room that has been collecting dust for a while. Jason stood there, looking at the room as memories about it began to come up. He shook his head and continued down the hall and entered the cylinder tube again to begin his descent down. Jason stepped out to see Brianna and Con in a heated argument.
“No that’s stupid, why would a zombie ever run? That defies everything that makes sense, a decomposing corpse running!? That’s nonsense!” Con said, flinging his arms in the air.
“OH! So a zombie isn’t silly at all? The fact it’s even walking is stupid!”
“No! Because the virus takes hold of the host’s brain when it’s freshly killed, bringing it back with one purpose. To feed. To feast upon human flesh until they are brought to near extinction, and thats all! No running zombies because that’s a load of bull! It shouldn’t be able to run! Walking or even crawling is understandable for a corpse.”
“You got admit Brianna,” Jason said coming out of the elevator hotly. “Running zombies would fuck everything up. I mean, a bunch of people don’t know how to shoot a gun let alone shoot accurately. Can you imagine trying to get one in the head while its running left to right and charging towards you at a ridiculous pace?”
“Hmp.” Brianna sat defeated. “Thank you my lordship.” Con snickered “But really, screw running zombies.”
“Yeah I guess.” Brianna muttered. Con stood up. “Well, are we going to dig up that capsule or what?” He smiled and Jason responded with a nod. He led the way to his backyard which was lush green that had a shed in the very back. They stepped outside to find the sun had relaxed and the air became a soft, warm breeze. Jason whispered ‘perfect’ under his breath and began walking towards the shed that was at the other side of the yard. Con and Brianna stood around the back door, waiting for Jason to come out with the shovel. He grabbed a nice sturdy iron shovel with a nice oak wood handle.
He walked around the yard for a while, trying to remember where he had buried the lost treasure. Jason rubbed his foot on a patch of dirt and his eyes opened wide in recognition. He then proceeded to swing the shovel in the air and shove it into the ground and began lifting dirt out of the ground to set it aside. His friends watched him and stood quietly, they knew this was a special moment for him. After the third load of dirt and rocks a worn down metal box was revealed. Jason tossed the shovel to the side and began dusting off the dirt on the box. He slowly opened the lid until memories old started surfacing. He opened the box to see multiple items of his childhood. Jason walked over to his friends with the box who were already sitting down on the grass; he joined them.
“Wow, look at all that stuff.” Brianna said admiring one of the object that seemed to be in mint condition.
“What’s with the rag?” Con pointed to a small piece of raggy, fluffy cloth.
“It was a part of my older brother’s blanket.” Jason said in a soft voice. Brianna’s and Con’s expressions began to sadden. They watched Jason look into it deeply. He gripped it hard and then put it in his back pocket. He went digging around more and saw a plastic toy soldier giving a thumbs up while holding a large rifle in his other hand. Jason smiled and picked it up.
“What’s that?” Asked Con.
“My Grandfather gave it to my Dad when he left for the war, after his deployment, he gave it to me.” He tucked it inside his other pocket and continued rummaging around. Jason took out a couple of old action figures and comic books which had little meaning to him and set them to the side. He then found a old piece of folded paper, opening it to see a badly drawn picture of a family. His friends looked at it smiling. It was a simple stickman picture but it was obvious who was who. There was a Dad, a Mom and two kids, one slightly taller than the other one. A tear fell from Jason’s eye and fell into the paper making a small *pit* noise. Brianna looked up to see him smiling. He folded the paper again and pocketed it as well.
“You okay bro?” Con said, resting a hand on Jason’s shoulder.
“Yeah, I’m fine, I’m fine...” He said going back to the box but had a confused look on his face. Brianna and Con soon shared the face when Jason took out a corked up flask that had a green emerald colored liquid in it.
“What is it?” Brianna asked.
“I- I don’t know, I don’t remember this at all.” Jason said scratching his chin.
“Is it drinkable?” Con asked gesturing towards the bottle.
“No Idea, Wadsworth, analyze.”
“Of course, Sir.” In front of Jason’s BM 5000, a small hole in front of the machine opened, and a small mechanical eye came out with a long neck of metal. The eye moved around the bottle, it squinted and then wide eyed it. A large red beam then came of it’s pupil and began scanning the liquid. After scanning it for ten seconds, the eye retracted.
“The liquid is safe to drink, what it’s made of though unknown... I couldn’t recognize the properties.”
“Well at least it’s safe, maybe I made this when I was little and added too much earwax to it.” Jason chuckled and began swirling the bottle around to make the liquid swoosh around inside the bottle.
“Drink it.” Con said with a dead face.
“What!? I’m not drinking this!” He said looking down at the flask.
“Drink it Jason.” A small whisper came from Brianna’s lips as she stared at the flask.
“Drink it… Drink it! Drink it!” The two were now chanting for Jason to drink his destiny. Jason slowly looked down dramatically at the drink, he then looked at the skies, the beautiful blue skies. While his friends cheered him on he began thinking.
“Yes… This is my destiny.” He chuckled in his head, “I shall drink this-!... Er. Drink? I don’t know, Wadsworth, find me a another word for drink.”
“Beverage?”
“Yes! I shall drink this beverage!”
“You’re not the brightest chap I know, Jason.” Wadsworth said chuckling. Jason ignored Wadsworth’s comment and continued his act, his tone becoming a commanding one.
“YES! I WILL DRINK THIS BEVERAGE!” He stood up, bringing the flask to the sun. Brianna and Con began cheering even louding, even throwing out little comments,
“Yes! Yes Jason, we believe in you!” Con said sarcastically.
“Jason! You’re an inspiration to us all!” Brianna snickered.
Jason stood up straight and tall, uncorking it in one swift motion and allowing a sweet aroma spread through the air.
“It!” Jason stuttered. “It smells good” He dipped a finger in the liquid and gave it a hesitating taste. His eyes opened widely and he froze in his place. Brianna and Con awaited his judgement.
“Guys…” His friends waited the answer, making the whole silly play dramatic as hell.
“IT’S DELICIOUS!” Jason announced. Immediately, Brianna and Con stood up and fiercely began cheering again. They started to chant.
“CHUG! CHUG! CHUG!” Jason lifted the drink to his mouth, and began slowly drinking the smooth, slush, liquid. He began to think while he chugged the flask
“Life… Life is beautiful, and cruel. From the very moment I was born, I lived in a beautiful and dangerous world. If not taught well, one won’t be able to survive the harsh world we call reality. Without other humans, one will go mad. So that human makes friends, close friends and family. I’m grateful for my life despite what I’ve been through. My friends, my family, my amazing companion Wadsworth-”
“Oh stop it, Jason.” Wadsworth virtually blushed.
“-It’s all what I enjoy. But I always wished for some sort of adventure. An adventure of the century.” Jason swallowed the last bit of the liquid. He dropped his head back in pleasure of the delicious liquid he just had. He looked at Brianna and Con to see that they were smiling.
“Alright everyone, we’re good! Take five for now.” Jason said gesturing them to get out. They all chuckled.
“Should’ve saved some for us you asshole.” Con said playfully punching Jason’s arm.
“Well I didn’t knew you guys wanted som-” A bright white flash consumed Jason in a blink of a eye and exploded. Blood smearing everywhere in the yard turning it into a crimson red. Brianna and Con stood frozen up, covered in blood with their jaws hanging and eyes wide open. They stood speechless.
“Wha- What...” Brianna managed to breathe out some words.
“I- uh- what the fff.” Con stood shaking.
As the two stood in shock. The blood began to drip down from the walls. The house stood silently. As if the world had stopped for a couple seconds, Cameras and satellites all recorded this incident. Recorded every last bit of it…
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Jason poofed into the air. His face immediately tensed up from a gruesome pain in his right leg. He tried to look down past the tears welling up in his face as he free falled from an incredible height. He swore that his heart stopped for a moment when, free falling next to him, was his right leg, just feet away from his face. Jason screamed as he glanced down when he noticed that he was several hundred feet in the air. The pain alone was almost too much for him and he was on the verge of passing out. Bright, crimson red streaked past him as he fell which he could guess was his own blood, making the moment that much more horrifying.
"WADSWORTH!" He shouted but a glance at his sore arm told him that his BM5 wouldn’t be much help. The machine sparked every now and then but no response came from his call, the BM5 dented in several places and stray, frayed, wires stuck out here and there, burning his arm, causing him to only cry out even more..
"WADSWORTH!?!" Jason sobbed as he hugged his BM 5000 tightly despite the pain.
He then looked down again.
"What am I'm going to do!? What am I going to do!? Fucking shit!" He swore. He tried calming himself down, he was now only a few stories from the ground. His breathing began to become ragged as his heart felt like it was about to explode out of his chest.
"Okay, okay! Put you remaining leg down! Bend your goddamn knee slightly and relax Jason!" He mumbled to himself and tried to straighten himself out in his free fall, only to find his body staying rigid..
"Fucking come on Jason! Relaxed for gods sake!" He tried to calm down and felt himself unwind a little but he was VERY close to the ground now. He closed his eyes and waited for the impact which would surely be his doom. He whispered under his breath.
"Why did I wish for the adventure?"
He slammed into the ground, his bent knee taking most of the force. A gruesome rip of muscle was heard and he felt himself bounce into the air. He tried to cover his head with his arm but by now he was half conscious. With a loud thud landed on his back despite trying to turn to the side and heard what must’ve been his ribs breaking. With a cough he felt blood spew out of his mouth and his head began to ring from the impact. He groggily became aware of his leg falling after him somewhere nearby followed shortly by his blood began to rain down around him. Jason stared in shock up at the clear blue sky, aware of the fact that his life was quickly seeping out of him, though he was mildly surprised by the cool sensation of grass beneath him. He slowly turned his head to the right to see a haunting dark green forest. Everything was a deathly green, trees were rotting away, flowers were a sickly green color as the grass was bogged down and muddy. Jason's vision began to darken, his body too broken to even register the pain anymore.
But, in the corner of his eye he saw a small blue light that began to grow bigger. Suddenly, midnight colored hoofs were in his vision and when he tried to reach out to grasp them he blacked out.
*One Week Later*
Twilight Sparkle was busy.
Very busy.
She moved frantically around her home, scattering around large tomes and books about every subject imaginable. Once in a while she’d come by one from a shelf and instead of casting it aside would place into a suitcase stuffed to the brim with books. She paced back and forth as she searched, though despite her already having what she needed she needed to be sure and made a fourth pass in the library, going through it all over again. Hoofsteps could be heard from upstairs as Spike made his way down, his expression showing that he was dreading the thought that he might have to put everything back in alphabetical order by author and sub-categorize it all by page length again…
"Jeez Twilight, what's the rush with all these books?" He asked, hoping for an explanation.
"I Just received a letter from Princess Celestia!" Twilight exclaimed with a panicked expression.
"What? I don't remember burping out a letter..." Spike asked as he walked towards Twilight.
"Yes! I know, and that’s the problem! She didn't sent it by a spell but by her pet Phoenix Philomena! That must mean something big has happened and if she didn't send it by spell then she was afraid that the message could have been intercepted by someone else so she sent it in the most unusual and unsuspecting way!"
"Whoa there, calm down Twilight, I don't think it's a big deal. It could’ve been that she was too lazy to use the spell or... I don't know, maybe she wanted to give Philomena some exercise?"
"Does this look like its not serious, Spike!?" Twilight handed the letter to Spike which he proceeded to read aloud.
"My dear faithful student... It has come to my attention that Equestria is in dire need of the elements of harmony. Something very important has come up and we have tried many attempts at fixing the issue but have come up with no results. I'm sorry for bringing you into this but I have nopony else to turn to and am out of options. My faithful student, a carriage will pick you up at six in the morning. Be sure to be ready along with you friends. Your teacher, Princess Celestia." Spike looked at Twilight his eyes now having some worry in them.
"See!? Does that not look important!? I’m almost finished packing and I already contacted the rest of the girls to get ready and meet up at six A.M sharp at my place." Spike stood there awkwardly for moment.
"Well do you want help then?" He asked. Twilight gave him a soft smile and nodded. The two began packing for tomorrow's big day. Two hours later and it was almost nine thirty. Twilight and Spike yawned as they finally sat down, surrounded by what seemed like a dozen large packed suitcases. Spike spoke up.
"You should get some sleep Twilight, If you have to wake up at six then you at least have to sleep at ten to get those full eight hours..." He spoke groggily.
"Yeah, you're right. I should be off to bed, and thank you spike for helping me today, I really appreciate it." She gave him a sleepy smile.
"Aww shuck, it was nothing." He waved her off.
"Well now, you should be getting to bed too. Come on, lets get some sleep." Twilight went to leave but turned to see that Spike had already fell asleep. She shook her head while chuckling in amusement. She levitated him to her side as she walked up stairs and put him in his bead. Twilight pulled the blanket over him and then proceeded to get to bed as well. She laid down, tossing the blankets over herself and closed her eyes.
"Okay" She spoke to herself. "Just go to sleep... To sleep I say... Good old sleep." Twilight tossed and turned until she eventually opened her eyes to glance at the clock, only to frown at seeing that a whole hour has passed.
"Gah! At this rate, I'm not going to get any sleep! Just go to sleep!" She grabbed the pillow and put it over her head pleading to catch some sleep. After a while she slowly drifted off into a fitful slumber. Over her tree, the blue midnight sky slowly moved. Stars blanketed the night's sky.
Off in the distance, Discord stood alone on a hill.
"Oh dear me, Someone drank the potion."
Note
So what an interesting part on Jason. What!? You didn't like him!? or the story!? WELL THEN! Take that comment, write it down on a piece of paper and throw it into the trash!...
I'm kidding, no really, I'm open to criticism because I want to know what I did right and wrong as I'm always trying to improve my writing. If it's bad, write it down, I want to hear it. If its good, write it down, I want to hear it. Any feedback, comment, whatever is welcomed . Took a whole week to write, which is funny because I never been really motivated to write stories when I was 15, as you can tell from my other stories, some lack grammar or just don't make sense, especially when I was 14 *Looks down embarrassingly* Any way, I had 8 chapters of this done already but I decided to rewrite everything because I thought it was bad and now that I'm more matured and my vocabulary kinda grew, I'm ready to write stories again...
And to my followers, I am so sorry...
Author's Note
FOR being inactive, just needed to find my touch again ya know? until next time...
My Little Pony is owned by Hasbro and all character used expect for OC's are the property of Hasbro. If any Legal situations arises then I'll fully corporate with Hasbro so I don't get my ass sued. I'm only a 16 year old teen that doesn't mean ANY harm to the company. I write these stories for amusement for me and the others on this site and nothing more. I'm not getting payed for this but I do gain writing experience, I hope y'all have a good day.
Chapter 2 - Magical Talking Ponies
One Way Ticket to Equestria
EdgarDoesEverything
Celestia paced around her room. She circled around and around a desk. The desk had a
folder labeling, ‘EYES ONLY -TIER 4-’. She sat down in a cushion and looked down at the yellow plastic folder. She casted a spell and lifted it open; pictures of a biped creature laid on a hospital bed. A large amount of tubes and medical equipment were attached to it. Celestia looked deeply into the picture. She turned to the next one. It was labeled, ‘Found in the Everfree Forest’. Celestia turned green a bit. The picture showed a creature whose leg was dismembered and a pool of blood around him; he stared into space. She flipped to the next photo, it showed his arm with a strange machine attached to him. The photo labeled ‘DAY 1’, The machine was completely destroyed. On the bottom of the picture had a comment written in black pen saying,
“We tried taking it off but it seemed attached to its limb, Further investigation will be needed.”
Celestia turned to the next picture, she saw it was the same subject that was labeled, ‘DAY 2’. The machine wasn't completely broken this time and seemed more fixed than before. There was a comment reading,
“The machine seems to be fixing itself. We also discovered the machinery is called a BM5000 and seemes to be connected to the alien, and I meant Surgically connected. Fascinating.”
Celestia skipped a few photos and stopped at one that read, ‘DAY 7”. She examined the picture, the BM5000 had completely restored itself and its screen displayed bright red words saying,
“Master is comatosed, awaiting masters return.”
Celestia slammed her hoof against the desk, a little harder than she intended too. Obviously showing her frustration. She took a deep breath and exhaled. She was glad she had this privacy to loosen up, running a country can take its toll. She tiredly casted a spell, picked up the folder and viewed them again before she sat them down at the desk again. She opened a drawer, laid them down inside and closed it. Celestia then casted a spell on the drawer that only ponies with permission are allowed to enter its files. She casted a spell to turn off the lamp that sat on the desk and walked her self out of the room. The darkness consumed the room, and the silence grew. Walking was then heard inside. A chain was fiddled with and the room grew bright.
“Oh Celestia, do you not know ruling a country is bad for you?. I would had taken a vacation by now.” Discord sat down and looked at the drawer. He casted a spell and broke Celestia spell with ease. He opened it and grabbed the folder. Discord sat the folder down on the desk and opened it slowly. He then met the gruesome photo of the creature. His face sadden.
“I meant no one to get hurt, if only fluttershy didn’t catched me trying to pull a prank then this mess would had never happened.” He flipped through the photos.
“Ah well, what’s done is done. I’ll have to tell fluttershy how this happened. I must.” Discord closed the folder and put everything back in the drawer. He casted the same spell Celestia used and turned off the lights. He teleported out of the room.
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Twilight stood in front of her home. She waited outside with four luggages around her. She looked weary. she raised her head up at the cloudy sky and let the sun warm up her body. She stood in silence. She then heard somepony walking towards her. She lowered her head to see Applejack bright awake carrying just one luggage. Twilight smiled and Applejack returned the expression. She sat her luggage nexts to Twilight.
“Well howdy, Twilight. You don look to good this mornin.” Applejack said looking at Twilights messy mane.
“Morning Applejack, I just couldn’t sleep at night because I was too excited about todays events.” Twilight blewed her hair out of her view. “What about you? Did you get some good sleep?”
“Ah sure did! Tha hard work I do everyday guarantees that ah be sleeping earlier than most ponies.”
Rarity was then seen walking from the bridge towards the two. Rarity had almost a dozen luggages with a nice stylish getup she wore professionally.
“That’s Rarity for ya.” Applejack chuckled. She sat her luggages around herself.
“Oh my dear Twilight, look at your mane, it’s all… Messy!” Rarity opened one of her luggages and took out a brush and raised it to her mane. “No worries.” Rarity began brushing Twilight's mane until it was her usually style.
“There you go darling, all good and pretty.”
“Thank you Rarity, how did you sleep-”
They all heard a loud groaning. They looked down the town to see Rainbow Dash slowly walking towards them. She slowly approached them, while groaning loudly. The three ponies waited for Rainbow Dash as she walked towards them, head up in the air, groaning as loudly as she can. She was somewhere 10 yards away from them and continued groaning until she reached them. The ordeal lasted a whole minute.
“So tell me again.” She said tiredly. “Why do we have to wake up at six in the morning?!” She yelled a bit.
“Because Dash, Princess Celestia need us for today and maybe for the next couple of weeks, did you even pack anything?” Rainbow Dash looked at all the stuff the other ponies brought. She plopped down a little bag of personal essentials.
“That is it?” Twilight asked.
“Yup. I don’t need much, I got my shampoo that’s smells just as awesome as me. I got my toothbrush that cleans just as awesome as me. I got my-”
“Okay, okay we get it.” Rarity chuckled.
“Just letting you know I’m awesome.” Dash said sitting down. They made small talk and waited for Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie. The two were seen walking together.
“Hi girls! I went and brought Fluttershy with me!” Pinkie muffled as she bounced towards them carrying a suitcase in her mouth.
“Hi girls, a beautiful morning this is, isn’t?” Fluttershy said looking towards the sky.
“Sure is, the sun is just perfect today. It’s so warm…” Twilight said raising her head up. The six stood and basked in the sunlight while listening to the quiet dawn, a silent peaceful town as most ponies sleep soundly. Munching then was heard. The five looked at Pinkie to be eating cupcakes.
“Whaa?” She spat out some crumbs. She swallowed the sweet treat. “Do you girls want some?” She offered showing them her suitcase full of treats.
“Yeah, yeah I do in fact.” Rainbow Dash grabbed a cupcake.
“Am quite hungry n fact, oh wha the hay.” And soon the others grabbed one as well. None of them really didn’t eat breakfast. While the girls enjoyed their treats, they saw something in the sky. It was a chariot, and behind it was another, and another and another…
The chariots stopped in front of Twilight’s home. Many ERUs were guarding the chariots, ERU for Elite Recon Unit, one of Celestia highest special forces. The girls were surprised, they thought one or two chariots with royal guards will come to escort them but a small army came. A Stallion bigger than the rest of them began barking orders at his men. Twilight was the first to speak.
“S-Sir?! Why has Celestia sent in special forces to escort us?” Twilight said looking at the army assembling before her eyes. The Stallion barked his last order and looked at the small purple unicorn. He smiled.
“Why?” He said grinning. “To escort you Ma’am.” He said plainly as his men got into formation. Twilight spoke up again.
“Are-, is somepony going to try to hurt us?” She worried. The commander saw Twilight shaking a bit.
“You have nothing to worry about any danger Ms. Sparkle. If any danger does arises then me and my men will quickly dispatch the enemy.” The commander said in a serious tone.
“No, you are not getting what I mean. Why did she sent you so heavily armed? Are we expecting to get attacked? Is the problem that Celestia and Luna discovered so dangerous that she sent special ops to pick up the elements of harmony?” Twilight began getting extremely concerned as well of the other five girl that were listening. Their hearts began beating as they patiently waited to hear the Commanders response.
“Ma’am.” He said clearing his throat. “I afraid even Celestia herself did not tell me the reason why we needed to arrange a small military force to escort the Elements of Harmony. Also the fact I can’t tell you what has been discovered because I’m sure she’ll like to tell you in person. But if I were to guess, its just your majesty being overly protective of her most faithful student and her wonderful friends.” Twilight lighten up a bit and exhale the breath she was holding.
“But what will the other countries think when they see ERUs in the area?” She continued
“They’ll probably think it’s just a field exercise.” He said looking bored. “Don’t you worry Ms. Sparkle, we are the best of the best. Trained for these type of situations. I highly doubt we’ll be attack by anyone, I mean just look at us.” He said chuckling
“If anypony did attack us then I praise them for being stupidly brave.” The Commander said reassuring Twilight.
“Th-thank you Commander. I really appreciate the talk, but one more question.”
“Hm?”
“Why is their a dozen chariots?” She asked pointed toward the Armored Chariots.
“Well, if we do get attack, which I highly doubt.” He whispered the last part trying to hold in his laughter.
“The chariot taking the lead will most likely be attacked. The very back as well has a large chance to be attacked as well. So you and your friends will be sitting in the middle where it is heavily guarded by yours truly.” He said grinning.
“So where are your men going to sit?”
“My men will not be around us. They will be constantly scouting the area as we go. Above, below, left, right, every direction our chariot goes. If danger is near, then they’ll shoot a red flare if a threat has been spotted, The chariots will steered away from that area. They’ll shoot a green flare if the threat has been dispatched, and they’ll shoot a purple flare if the unit has sustained heavy casualties, we’ll send reinforcements. I’ll be commanding the chariot you ride so if the enemy does get to you, they’ll have to deal with me first.”
Twilight nodded. She looked to the girls to see that they were just as frightened as herself. Rainbow Dash tried to hide it by trying to look bored. Pinkie Pie furiously ate cupcakes to take her mind off of it. Twilight gestured them to come and meet the Commander.
“So this is them eh? I remember when I was young and pretty.” He smirked as he walked away which brought a chuckle to the girls.
“ALRIGHT MEN! MISSION START!” He barked. The commander looked back into the girls.
“This way ladies, my men will grab your luggages.” He noticed Applejack with her luggage in her mouth.
“Uh, ma’am?”
“It’s alright, I got this maself.” Applejack said trying to get through the commander. He blocked her path. Applejack bumped into his green coat, that was covered in armor of course.
“Ma’am, I said my men got your luggage.” He said confused.
“And I said I got tis maself!” Applejack yelled a bit.
“Oh?” He said looking amused.
“Applejack just let him do his job, you can show how tough you are later, I’m sure the commander already seen enough.” Rarity pleaded. She didn’t listen and continue to bicker with him.
“Don’t worry, Commander! I’m a mare that can take care of herself.”
“Really? Well then.” He gave a glare to Applejack. The two were in a dead stare for almost a ten seconds.
“I like you. How bout we go to dinner sometime?” Applejack blushed and gasped with the sudden request which lead her to drop her luggage. The Commander quickly snatched it away.
“I win. Now lets go.” He muffled, walking toward the chariot. Applejack realized what had just happened. .
“That clever stallion.” Rainbow Dash said flying by.
“And I was serious about the date!” The Commander yelled.
“Sh-shut up!” Applejack yelled back which made the girls laugh heartly. They walked over the chariot.
“I’ll give you credit though.” He said smiling at Applejack. “You have a lot of guts to yell at me. Alright lets get in the chariot.”
“Wait, I need to say bye to spike.” Twilight turned around to see Spike standing at the
door with all the pets they owned. He chuckled.
“Have a great trip Twilight, and don’t worry about us. I’m sure as capable to taking care of these awesome guys.” He said high fiving Angel as he proceeded to munch on a carrot. Twilight went and hugged him.
“I’ll write to you as song as I can. I love you spike.” Spike returned the hug. She released him and began back to the girls. The mane six began into the Chariot. Pinkie offered the Commander a cupcake.
“Man, I haven’t had a cupcake in years.” He gracefully accepted it. Pinkie happily bounced into the vehicle. The men began taking off around them until the chariot holding the mane six lifted. In the air they proceeded to the castle.
Rainbow Dash looked behind to see a small amount of guards around them. She looked down to noticed a bunch of them scouting the area, ensuring their safety. She was impressed, they moved very fast and kept with speed with their chariot. The girls tried making small talk but it’s kinda hard when you know you can get attack at any moment notice. The girls were all expecting it until it happened. A red flare flew up in the sky northwest of their position. The commander simply looked at it and steered the chariot away from that direction. The mane six all eye the flare. They knew down their, Ponies were fighting, and that crushed any relaxation they had left. They continued onwards until a green flare was shot from that same location. The girls all released the breath they had inside. A scout came out of the woods and flew to the commander.
“What happened?” He asked.
“Nothing really, a couple of bandits tried attacking us. Four kills confirmed, no casualties.”
“Good, I’ll like to keep it that way. See girls, nothing us ERUs can’t handle.”
The chariots began closing in to Canterlot. The commander shot a blue flare up in the sky.
“What’s the blue flare for?” Asked Twilight.
“The blue flare mean the mission was a success and that my men are order to regroup with the main force.” He replied. ERUs began coming out of no where and started to form a protective circle around the chariots. They flew over Canterlots walls and began making a landing. They stopped in front of barracks and the mane six disembarked. The Commander approached them.
“Alright ladies, I know our date was short and boring but here we are.” He smiled bringing the girls to a chuckle.
“Celestia will be up in the throne room along with Luna. Just go pass the gate and into the corridors where you’ll be lead into a couple of stairs that lead into there.”
“Thank you Commander for escorting us here, even if it was terrifying.” Twilight smirked.
“Anytime Ms. Sparkle. Uh, if you want, I can send some men along to help you find you
way.”
“That won’t be necessary. We know the way around the castle, I mean, I’ve been here
almost my entire life.” She chuckled
“Well that’s great. Maybe we’ll see each other sometime again kid. Nice meeting all of ya.” He bowed and began his departure along with his men. He didn’t even give them time to say goodbye as they flew at incredible speeds. They mane six stood there silently.
“I like him, he is almost as fast as me.” Rainbow Dash bragged.
“Yeah, he was nice, even if he was you know,” Rarity was trying to find a word in her tongue.
“Light hearted about the situation?” Twilight responded where Rarity nodded.
“I like how he acts, but I can tell if there was real danger. Then he wouldn’t be so cheery about it.”
“Hes a nice fellow. Would had like to get his name.” Applejack said rubbing the back of her mane.
“I’m just glad none of the ERUs were killed or injured. That would had sucked.” Rainbow said looking down at the dirt.
“Well, lets not keep Celestia and Luna waiting. I’m sure they don’t have all the time in the world. Come on girls, lets get going.” The mane six began into the gate and entered the castle.
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Celestia sat on a cushion sipping tea with his sister. She sat there waiting patiently. Luna kept looking out the window at the forest, admiring the tall green trees. She sipped her tea and sat it down at a small coffee table. The door leading to them was then slowly opened. It was the Commander of the ERUs.
“The mission was a success your highness.” He bowed
“Did everything go smoothly?” Celestia ask setting down her tea.
“Yes, my unit is awaiting further orders and the Elements of Harmony are on there way here, your majesty.”
“Excellent, thank you Commander Haze.”
“All in a days work, any other orders?
“No, that’ll be all for todays expedition, Haze go enjoy yourself for today along with your unit.” Luna said gesturing with a hoof.
“Are you sure? Nothing else is needed today? Don’t be afraid to ask anything your majesty, I rather do something then wander around Canterlot.”
“Do I have to order you to enjoy yourself Commander?” Luna said frowning.
“Yes.” He said flatly. Luna sighed.
“Commander Aerial Haze, I order you to take the day off and enjoy yourself along with your unit.” She ordered
“Weepee.” He said boredly. He began outside the door when he turned around and stared at Luna. “Umm. I know it’s unlikely but do you think you might want to get a drink later?”
“I would love too if I wasn’t so busy Commander.” Luna smiled. He merely chuckled and headed out. Celestia let out a small giggle.
“What?” Luna said confused
“I think somepony likes you.” Celestia smiled.
“What? Nah, Aerial and I are drinking buddies, he was just asking if I can drink tonight but ya know. The creature and stuff.” Luna softly laughed.
“Ahh, you sure do like your wine don’t you?”
“Sure do, red wine is my favorite, any other color just tastes weird.” Luna sipped her tea. The door opened once more to reveal it was the Twilight poking her head out. She catches Celestia’s eye and begins forward along with her friends.
“Princess Celestia.” Twilight bowed as the rest did the same.
“No need to be so formal. Please take a seat girls.” Celestia gestured towards the six cushions in front of the alicorns. They took their seats and waited for Celestia to speak.
“Well, before we began. I need to cast a spell on all of you so you cannot share any of this information I’m about to tell you.” The mane six were taken back. Celestia may had been to forward with her request but she didn’t have all the time in the world.
“Why do ya need to cast ah spell n us Celestia?” Applejack asked.
“Is it because you don’t trust us?” Fluttershy said hiding behind her mane.
“I hoped that not what you had thought, believe me, I trust you with all with my life but this information is too sensitive to the point where it can cause a panic to our subject or neighboring countries to the point of War.” She said with soft eyes
“This spell is on everybody that know this exciting but terrifying secret, the only reason of the spell is because what if someone accidentally spat it out? Or were captured and tortured to the point of releasing the information.” Luna said softly. The girls froze in terror. Tortured!? They thought... They were starting to think this was more serious than they thought.
“If you girls refuse.” Continued Celestia. “Then it’ll be no hard feelings. We understand as it’s a lot to take in. You’ll be able to stay as long as you want and roam around Canterlot as you wish and when you want to be taken home, the ERUs will escort you back.” Celestia finished.
The girls looked at each other until they all gave each other serious looks and nodded. They looked toward Celestia.
“We trust your judgement Celestia, Luna.” They said sitting up proudly which brought a smile to the alicorn princesses.
“We knew we can count on you girls. Alright then. Luna the spell?”
“Ahh yes, now no worries. There is no pain of such. Just a bit of… Discomfort.” Luna’s horn glowed and the room flashed, blinding the mane six. They rubbed their eyes and to see nothing has changed. They looked around at each other and back at the princesses.
“Did it work-” Twilight wheezed and her throat tightened and then opened up again. She took a breath in and looked to noticed that it had happened the the other girls who were also wheezing. Applejack began laughing.
“Well there was no warnin’ for that.” Applejack chuckled
“Geez, It felt like someone choked me and released me!” Rainbow Dash said rubbing her throat.
“It kinda tickled!” Pinkie said jumping up.
“It seems everything tickles you Pinkie.” Rarity said giggling.
“It felt like I was eating too fast and I needed to swallow a big chunk of food.” Fluttershy smiled.
“Sorry for not telling you all about that. We thought it’ll be better if we didn’t tell you so you wouldn’t get scared. But it’ll happen if you try to share the info we are about to tell you. So please, take a seat.” Celestia motioned them to take their seats again. They sat down and waited as Celestia took a sip of her tea. She sat it down and looked at the mane six.
“Okay girls. I’m not going to work around it so I’m just going to tell you straight. We found an alien from another dimension.” The girls jaw dropped, they hanged freely as they tried to take in what they just heard.
“A-an alien!?” Fluttershy was the first to speak.
“But from another dimension? How?!” Twilight asked wondering what the answer will be about this scientific endeavor.
“We aren’t sure. One casual night, Luna felt something has suddenly appeared in our universe, But not in another planet or far away in the galaxies. It was in the everfree forest. Unfortunately, when we got there, he was injured to gruesome levels. What we got from observations, he must have had fallen from a great height.”
“We immediately took him to the underground laboratory under our castle to began treating him. It was even a miracle he survived With the huge loss of blood and a dismembered limb I say he’s lucky to be breathing right now.” Luna continued.
“It’s been a whole week now that we had fully treated him but then thing is he just won’t wake up. He is in a coma or has brain damage from the fall he took. We hope it isn’t the latter.”
The room grew silent.
“What does it eat?” Asked pinkie.
“We aren’t sure, but what we do know it is an omnivore.”
“So it eats meat?” Rainbow asked. Celestia looked up and then down until she gave them a look of honesty.
“Yes.” The girl gasped. There first thought was that the alien was just another mindless flesh eating monster.
“Does it eat ponies?” Fluttershy said coming out of her mane.
“We aren’t sure…” Luna said pondering the thought. The girls all began imaging the alien with gigantic teeth with blood smeared all of it face.
“But the alien seems to be highly intelligent, it also eat plants so hopefully we can convince him not to eat anyone. But we can never be so sure so we will take high caution around him.”
“Him?” Applejack asked
“Yup, for what we know from observations, its a he, but the age is unknown. He does have some facial hair so maybe he is quite older but for all we know, this can be a baby.” Celestia finished.
“So why do you need us?” Twilight spoke, collecting her jaw from the ground.
“We think using the Elements of Harmony will restore him from his unconscious state. So should we get moving then?” Celestia said standing up.
The girls nodded with a mixed of excitement and nervousness. Celestia began leading them downstairs where they met a long hallway. At the end of the hallway was a dead end with two holes on the right and left side of the walls. The two alicorn princesses entered their horns and casted a spell. They took them out and awaited. The floor began shaking a bit and the wall they faced began opening up. As the wall slowly opened. There was no one in sight until the air looked like it was moving. The Elite Royal Protection Unit suddenly appeared from thin air. They were guarding another door which had two more horns. The ERPU objective was to protect key locations as well as the rulers of Equestria. The ERPUs and ERUs will always bicker at each others throat to see who was the better Special Ops. Even though they fought all the time, they heavily respected each other. Six large stallions that appeared from thin air bowed down at the princesses. Then a mare that was in the middle appeared.
“Your highness.” She bowed
“Commander Silent Mist, how are you?” Celestia smiled. The mare stood up.
“Everything is all good here you majesty!” She said in a soft but firm voice.
“Has any of the ERU came around today?” Celestia’s eyes filling with amusement. Silent’s eyes immediately were filled with hatred.
“Yes, Commander Haze came here and flirted with me! I told him to buck off, but still.” She said standing awkwardly.
“It’ll be nice if he wasn’t such an ass about.” She sighed.
“I’m sure he’ll ask you for dinner one day.” Celestia teased
“Haha. I reckon you all came to check on the you know what?” She said with an eyebrow up.
“Yes, we will be on our way now. We cannot waste anymore time. It was nice chatting Commander Silent.”
“Yes indeed.” She bowed along with her unit. The Princesses inserted their horns and once again a large white door opened but this time in a large room with many ponies running back and forth with stacked papers. There was loud chatting in the room as doctors and scientist discussed on whatever they were discussing about. Celestia and Luna began walking down and the mane six follow. They entered an elevator which had as many as fifty floors. Celestia clicked floor twenty one. They descended the floors, in the elevator there was a small window showing tons of scientific procedures and some were terrifying.
*BING*
They filled out of the elevator and began down a hall. They passed through some double doors which had some ERPUs guarding the area. Once again they met another hallway. At the end of the hallway was a corridor which they took right which lead to a small post. After Celestia granted permission for the mane six, they all walked down a hall which lead to the double doors that were at the end of the post.
“Ready girls?” Luna said hiding her excitement. They too were excited but were terrified as well. They nodded their heads and entered the room. The first thing they saw was a wall with a window with it. The girls quickly walked to it to see an strange bi-pid creature sleeping on a bed, or it seemed it was. They awed at the sight of the beast.
“Come on girl.” Celestia said smiling as she was gesturing them towards another room. They followed quickly inside a room which had tubes sticking out of the wall. The door behind them slide close and the tubes began spraying a misty white spray at them. It tasted like cough medicine but smells like nothing. The tubes stopped spraying and the doors opened. They entered the room the lead to the alien. He slept soundly as a bundle of wires and tubes stuck from his entire being. He was mostly bandaged up as well and some needed to be replaced. Celestia check the IV attached to him while Luna went to a drawer and took out some new bandages.
“Wow…” Rainbow Dash said flying over the bed. getting a good look. They surrounded the bed and stared at him. Pinkie slowly reached to touch his skin. She felt his soft but firm skin. Soon the other girls began rubbing his right arm as it was part of the 25% the wasn’t bandaged up.
“So how bad were his injuries?”
“Well, we guess he fell really high from the sky. Maybe twenty stories up. His right leg was detached, his left leg knee cap exploded and sent fragments of bone everywhere to his leg; also his Iliotibial Tract muscle was completely shredded. He had third degree burns on his left hand and arm, broke 18 ribs, punctured his left lung, stomach and his skull cracked a bit.” Luna explained.
“He is lucky to be alive. Very, very lucky indeed.” Celestia said. The eyes of the mane six sadden. For a creature having to endure that much pain and suffering and having the possibilities of mentally ill was saddening to think about.
“How do you know he’s a he?’ Rarity asked turning to the princesses.
“Well, the alien is very fascinating indeed. He doesn’t seem to be much different from our anatomy with the exception of him being a biped creature. If he was any different he would have surely died. When it came to the large wounds, we were able to heal him with magic such as his broken ribs and detached leg. But when it was small cuts and bruises it hurt him more if we tried to help him. It seems the body is able to heal itself but only its small wounds. Just like us if we didn’t use any healing spells to helps us get better. While we were fixing him we notice he had a special male part that regular stallions have.” Celestia explained which cause Rarity to blush and let out a small “Oh…” They stood around him, looking at the alien. His chest slowly rose and then fell.
“What's all of tis stuff?” Applejack said looking at a small metal box which had a couple of strange items.
“That is all what the alien was carrying with him when we found him. Seems like its just a bunch of personal objects but who knows. Luna and I already examined the items maybe seven times now.”
The girls went over to the box. Twilight picked up a small dry up bloody rag that was soft to the touch. she passed along to Rarity as she was confused on what she was looking at.
“I could make a nice small scarf with this, if there wasn’t any blood on it.” She said quietly as she passed it around. Twilight then picked up a green plastic biped creature holding what seemed like a weapon. It was a long machine looking object with a spear at the end of the tube. He hold it down while doing a gesture that was unknown to them. The figure had his right hand on his forehead which was straight and his face showed a sign of respect. She passed it to Rainbow Dash. She then pick up a small torn up piece of paper. It had a drawing on it, it was unrecognizable as it was too dirty with dry blood to know what it was now. She then looked down to see clothing. She lifted a grey bloody shirt along with tan pants that were also stained with blood. The eyes of the girls seeing the large amount of blood were horrified. It like someone dumb to buckets of red paint on everything.
“We tried cleaning it over and over. But it soaked up too much to the point it change the color of the fabric. It’s clean but just…” Celestia ended with that as she went and to tend the wounds of alien that was on the bed. The girls had enough of looking at the items and went over to the bed again to see Luna finishing with replacing the bandages.
“Done.” She said smiling. They went around the bed again and stared at the biped creature.
“Ready?” Celestia asked seriously.
“Yes. Yes we are.” Just as Twilight said that, the door to the room opened to reveal it was Silent Mist with a box containing the Elements of Harmony.
“Well here ya are your majesty.” Silent said hovering the box to the princess. Celestia gestured it towards the girls. She used her magic to bring it front of Twilight. The box opened where she casted a spell and brought one to each of her friends. She equipped hers, the mane six got into formation with Celestia and Luna.
“I’ll just watch outside.” Said Silent leaving the room.
"Before we start girls, If he wakes up from the magic then he has some of the elements of harmony within himself, meaning he can be kind, or honest, or more than two, if the rainbow that comes out of Twilight’s tiara turns black when it touches the alien means he was killed with the magic and it must have meant he was evil or not able to handle it " She paused a bit to see the girls faces anticipated to hear what coming at them next.
"Well are you girls ready then?" Celestia said. The girls nodded. She and the girls stood beside each other while Celestia and Luna stood tall in the other corner of the room. The girls concentrated, mending the elements together when suddenly Twilight’s eyes became bright white and a rainbow came from the tiara. The rainbow went for the alien and when it came upon contact, the rainbow turned black. The rainbow bent and twisted. A flash came from the alien whose eyes open filled with white blinding lights. His body twitched and spazzed. The princesses watched only with worry. The girls struggled to continue using the elements. Suddenly a loud high pitch noise was heard, all looked up to see the alien levitating, his mouth was open, like a flashlight, light was coming out of his eyes and mouth. The lights from his eyes showed memories being sped in a ridiculous pace. The Elements couldn't hold the intense magic and collapsed. The alien fell to the bed in an odd position.
"You check the alien I'll go check on the girls" Celestia said, Luna rushed to the alien as well did Celestia did to the girls.
"Girls are you alright?" Celestia said worried while the girls had spinning eyes who struggled to get up.
"Yeah, I'm fine" Applejack said
"What 'bout the rest of y’all?" She continued.
"That. Was. AMAZING! It felt so! SO GREAT!!" Pinkie yelled. The girls looked at her confused and one by one said they were fine. Suddenly a constant loud high pitch *beep* was heard.
"He's dead"
*NOTE*
A whole month has passed and CHAPTUHHH 2 IS OUT! My editor is going to be mad at me. He was supposed to revise all of this so basically you guys a reading the draft. I mean i looked over it twice but that's not good enough. I just couldn't hold my temptation of reaction and people reading my stories I'M SORRY BLUE SPARK!
Anyways, yes there is going to be more, just doesn't end with. "Nurr he ah dead hur hur." It keeps going. Anyways what did you guys think? You guys liked the commanders? Special forces? Interaction? I hope you guys enjoyed this, I did half of this in school and my jackass but cool computer teachers said this out loud one day.
"Man edgar, this is one, very graphic version of MY LITTLE PONY.. I almost needed to explain myself to the whole class until a good buddy of mine quickly changed the subject by shouting,
"Mr. Bio, i used the have this horrifying wart on my ass check" The whole class laughed like hell, saved my skin. Bought him a pizza that day.
Author's Note
So I hope you guys understand the "RISK" I'm taking XD. Well you beautiful sexy beasts have a good one, and i'll catch ya later.
My Little Pony is owned by Hasbro and all character used expect for OC's are the property of Hasbro. If any Legal situations arises then I'll fully corporate with Hasbro so I don't get my ass sued. I'm only a 16 year old teen that doesn't mean ANY harm to the company. I write these stories for amusement for me and the others on this site and nothing more. I'm not getting payed for this but I do gain writing experience, I hope y'all have a good day.
