Feel The Steel

by Hodelino

Rating: mature
Tags: Sex, Random, Crossover, Twilight Sparkle, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Comedy
Length: 1171

Twilight gets a visit by Coldsteel and he isn't one of the nice guys

Twilight enjoys a quite evening at her library but this all changes when a certain badass hedgehog visits her. Coldsteel forcefully rapes Twilight in this story.

WARNING: This is a Coldsteel X Twilight Crossover Rape Fic! if you don't like Twilight, Rape, Coldsteel, some violence or ponies in general I recommend you to leave.

P.S This fanfic isn't suppose to be taken seriously by any means.

Published 2014-08-30 19:40:06 UTC
Last updated 2014-08-30 19:40:06 UTC

Feel The Steel

Feel the Steel

Twilight’s sitting alone at her desk, reading a book of Equestrian History. A candle ist he only thing that illuminates her surroundings.

Suddenly she hears a mighty knocks coming from underneath.

Hmm who cold this be at this time? She asks herself

Slowly the purple alicorn got up from her chair and walked downstairs. As she was arriving at the door, another knock made it clear that somebody was on the other side.

Carefully she opens the door slowly as her gaze fell on a purple creature. It looks somehow like a pipedal hedgehog with metal parts attached to it.

“Umm…hi what do you want Mister?“, she stammered, not too sure what to make of this awkward situation.

Without saying a single word, the hedgedog walks past Twilight, right into the kitchen.

“Hey that’s my house“ she yelled at him but he shows no attention to her at all.

“Who are you and what do you want?“ she said angry.

The purple hedgehog, who now was drinking some milk he just found in Twilight's fridge, turns his head towards the pony and answered: “My name is Coldsteel. I was born with special powers and I was stronger than all my classmates in the Sonic Academy. I served in the Sonic Military and I killed Sonic because I’m stronger than him and because I have special powers which helped to defeat him.“

Twilight was starring at him dumbfounded, being to confused to reply. “So…um what do you want exactly here? I don’t think you‘ve answered my whole question.“

Without any motion in his face he saided: “I want to fuck ponies because I heard thats what cool kids do these days and I want to become even cooler. And I want to show khaoskid663 that I’m the best and prove him that he’s a fucking Pokemon scammer fagot.“

The purple alicorn's jaw dropped as he finished his sentence. She was now starting to realize the situation she’s in and a wave of panic washed over her.

Coldsteel started to walking slowy in her direction, his eyes were lifeless as always. With a single motion the alicorn casts a magic spell and shoots it right into Coldsteel's chest. He didn’t even flinch and continued walking.

“NOOO! HOW DID THIS SPELL NOT WORK?“ Twilight screamed.

“I’m too kewl and evil and really really too bad too be hurt by an purple alicorn in a kids show for little girls.“ Coldsteel replied in what he thought was a cool voice.

“Dude you need to work on your grammar. Seriously“, Twilight said while smirking before she teleports herself to the old castle in the everfree forest.

As she appeared there, she trotted straight to the ancient library.

“Hmm…there should be a book somewhere in here about this creature, it’s really strange and I don’t think It’s…“

“Hey gurl you missed me?“ A voice suddenly interrupted her train of thought.

Quickly she turned around, just to see Coldsteel's eyes a few inches away from her own. She tried to cast another spell as fast as possible but Coldsteel put his right hand on her horn and stopped her from doing so. He then lift her upwards, turns her upside down and delivered the purple alicorn a Tombstone Piledriver.

“Kaboom get rekt“ he then said.

Like a wonder, Twilight still was conscouisnes, thanks to her alicorn body but she was too weak to stand up.

“H-How did you do this? Why w-were you here so fast?“ She spoke in between gasps.

The Hedgedog looks down to her and said: “My name is Coldsteel. I was born with special powers and I was stronger than all my…“

“Urrgghh You already said this! Get to the point!“ the alicorn growned.

“Shut up Pony slut!“ Coldsteel screamed at her.

He then grabs her waist and slung her around so she laid on her back.

Twilight shudders in fear as cold sweat was dripping down her forehead.

Suddenly Coldsteel moved his head right next to hers. He moved his mouth near to her ear and he whispered in a monotone voice “Pssshht nothing personnel kid!“

Suddenly Twilight felt something hard like steel ripping through her body. A scream emerged from her mouth as Coldsteel starts to pound into her purple plot.

“Wow that’s how a Pony pussy feels! Wait…that’s how a pussy feels at first“ the hedgedog spoke as his cock was fully engulfed by Twilight’s Vagina. He then yelled at her “Look at my earrings, do you think they’re gurly?“

Twilight didn’t look at them and so Coldsteel backhand slapped her face. “LOOK AT THEM!“ he yelled.

“Y-Yes“ Twilight said with a quivering as she looked behind her.

“Do you think they are gurly?“ The Hedgedog asked again.

“No, T-They’re really cool“ she replied scared.

“Good Pony. Also I think this old castle is very cool. It’s dark and badass and stuff. I hate things like niciness and happiness.“

He continued thrusting into Twilight's nether regions.

She felt his steel hard member stretching her inner walls. It hurts so much but at the same time it felt so good. At least he‘s not some sort of ugly neckbeard she thought.

Suddenly Coldsteel begins to slapping her ass with his left hand and Twilight gives off a small whimper.

“This is for you Lewis! Fuck you“ he screamed as he slapped her ass one more time, more furious then before.

“And this is for you Kevin. Stop showing everyone my deviantart page ass gay faggot“ as he continued to spank the alicorn.

“Also this is for you dad. I hate you so much. You are gay and shouldn’t be alive. And hated it everytime you wanted to go to some football matches with me. Fuck you dad.“

All this spanking and shit talking really turned Twilight on and she felt a familiar sensation coming up.

Coldsteel starts to pick up his speed and starts thrusting faster and faster

At this moment Twilight couldn’t handle it anymore. She didn’t wanna cum but Coldsteel was too awesome to resist so she came all over his steel hard cock. This amused Coldsteel as well and he screamed “FUCK YOU KHAOSKID 663 MEGA ASS FAGGOT“ as he blows his hot semen into Twilight's pussy.

He then stood up and looked down at the exhausted Twilight, who was still laying on the ground.

“Get rekt son“, he said as he climbed on his badass motorcycle which had a very scary skull headlight.

“I’m gonna buy some awesome jingo jeans“ and with those last words he ascended into the sky.

Finally Twilight got up, her whole body still hurt from this torture.

“Awww everything hurts but at least it’s finally over“ she said as she started to make her way out of the castle.

“It’s never ogre“, another voice appearing behind her suddenly, as a big green hand stopped her in her tracks.

Author's Note

Also a big thank you to Tripl3M who took the torture of pre-reading this.