My little pony : the Adventure of Phantom star

by PhantomStar

Rating: teen
Tags: Romance, Comedy, Adventure, Tragedy
Length: 2043

This is a story about a stallion named Phantom star and his journey though the pony life

HAY there my name is Phantom Star get it, got it, remember it k i'm a Earth pony my coat is dark blue, my hair is red and black, I'm a blacksmiths things so my cutie mark is a Sword and axe I also use to live in cantorlot but now I live in Ponyville well I just wanted to say is give this author a break k
{Ok then well that was wired well I hope you like the story also comment on ideas that would be pretty neat}
WARNING: No lesbian or Gays, little bit of clop and lot of other stuff also this is my take on the Friendship is magic show so a lot of lines are going to different.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-10-02 03:27:20 UTC

Prologue

"YAWN well today is going to be good day" I said while getting up from bed "what's so good about today" said my mom while standing by my door.  Today is show and tell at school so I'm bring my Dad's Medallion still haven't figure what its or where my dad got it from well that's what mom said. After eating breakfast, I was ready for school "alright mom see you after school LOVE YOU" I said while walking out the door "see you {cough} later son {cough} Love you too" my mom said while going up stairs, I'm sure she's fine I hope so. While walking to school I saw the Princess making her daily rounds until I saw the most beautiful pony of all she was lavender unicorn I couldn't take my off her until "HAY WATCH WHERE YOUR GOING O its you Phantom star I thought it was some pony else who is tough" said the most meanest coat ever Diamond Shield "Sorry I didn't see you there diamond shield" I said back to him "what ever see you in class". Finally got to school now to head to the classroom "Alright every pony settle down said Mrs. Comet after every pony got settle down Mrs. Comet said "alright I'm sure that every pony knows what today is Show and tell so lets start with....."

after all the other classmates went though their stuff and good luck charms and muffin oddly enough it was finally my turn "alright I can do this" I muffled to myself "this my father's medallion its star shape sapphire gem my mother never told me where he got it from but she said its our family's prize possession well beside me of coarse {laughter} well any way I plan on keeping this until I get my married and pass it on to my son and...." "sorry to interrupt but is this where phantom star is" said what look like a doctor but I couldn't tell,

"yes but may I ask what's the problem" said Mrs. comet "its his mother she's in the hospital and she told to got him from school" not thinking straight I head to the hospital passing all the teachers I didn't care about school or anything just getting to the hospital "ha.. I forgot tell them that I didn't know my father all well" I said to my self. I got to the hospital asking every nurse and doctor where she was finally gotten answer "she's in room 117" "thank you" I said while running to her room, reaching the room I see my mother laying there she notice me and said "my little phantom is growing up its he looking like he's father that's my boy" "mom is everything alright" "why of coarse it is its just...." "JUST WHAT MOM TELL ME PLEASE" I scream at her "I just want to know what's wrong" I said almost the verge of tears, "its just that I'm finally going to meet your dad" she said "what" "phantom mommy is going so where k but don't worry one day we all be together" "please mommy don't go I need you" "don't worry son me and your father will always be there for you and son" "yea mom" "daddy said to be strong" {beep} "MOM WAKE UP MOM" "its ok my little pony like she said she will always be there for you" it was the Princess " know come along and..." I just ran I didn't care where I was going just some where "wait come back..

Ten years later

"Hi mom how are you and dad doing I'm doing ok still haven't found a job but I guess I should go in to blacksmithing since my cutie mark is a sword and an axe" I said to the one tombstone "well the house kind of got repossessed so I'm moving to a little town called Ponyville sorry to leave but I will come visit when I get the money so my train is about to get here so good bye and I love you mom."ALL ABROAD" yell the conductor "next stop ponyville" getting on train taking my seat near the window looking at my past while sitting at the present waiting on my future I then caught a glimpse of two pones one a mare and the other a stallion waving at me but its just probably just some pony else there waving to but that's when I heard the Stallion  say "chin up son you got adventure a head for self" "dad but that impossible your dead" I said to late to check the train already moving to my destination "ha must been something heard all well" I said while drifting to sleep holding on to my dad's medallion. "Are you sure he's ready Mr. and Mrs. star said Princess Celestia "he's been ready just like his old man" said a ghostly blazing star "I agree" said a ghostly sweet star "well I had my student twilight sparkle go check on ponyville for the summer sun celebration I will let her know he's coming speak of the celebration I have to get ready" "thank you princess I'm sure our son will do nice thing there" said sweet star "yea and thank for letting saying our goodbyes to" said blazing star "your welcome" said the Princess "goodbye" said the stars and then they disappear

"goodbye" said the Princess.

The friendly introduction

After hour and half finally reaching ponyvile "YAWN" I yelled while stretching "time to get off this train" as I walk off the train I looked around to see what ponyville looked like seeing pones of all kind ever where getting something ready like a celebration a some kind then I remember "Oh yay the summer sun celebration is happening but any way I need to meet up with some mare named twilight sparkle so that's fun" while I was walking I notice a lavender unicorn and dragon and a pink earth pony, "come on twilight make some friends" said the dragon while walking up to the pink earth pony "well there's my tour guide" said to my self "hi my name is twilight sparkle and...... "SIGH" yelled the pink earth pony and ran "hay what the" but I was to notice me being pinned downed by the pink mare "ohmygoshohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh are your new here to that's awesome two new pony in one day that's amazing and..."

"HAY that's not nice'" said the little dragon and twilight sparkle "get off him" said twilight "yay" said the dragon "oh I'm so sorry but I got to fun bye" said pink mare "no wait...dang it I was two late". I got on my feet while I was dusting off the little dragon said "look twilight another visitor second times a charmer", ok take it easy just started will something simple " hi my names is..." we both said at the same time "oh sorry you can go first..." "Nonono you first..." "well ok... "haha" we both started giggling "well my name is twilight sparkle and this is my number one assistant spike" "hello Mr." "Star Phantom star" while doing an awesome pose "well nice to meet you

phantom star what are you doing here in ponyville" said twilight "oh I'm moving here and the Princess told me to meet you here and...." "YOU KNOW THE PRINCESS!" yelled twilight  "YES she help me when my...I was having trouble in the past so yay" "oh sorry well want to walk with me I'm getting the celebration ready we are heading to check on the food" said twilight "sure"

I reply. "Sweet apple acres" said spike "looks nice" I said "well check on the food and get going" said twilight "hay spike what's wrong with her" I said "oh she just worried about nightmare moon" he reply "oh" I said "YEEHA" yelled a tan earth pony while kicking a tree then posing when the apples fell "hello my is twilight sparkle" "well houdy there twilight the names is applejack" she said while shaking twilight hood  "ha I'll show you a good introduction" I said to my self "well wahts your name partner...." she then froze up when I kiss her on hoof and then said in my clam voice "the names is phantom star my dear how can I be a assistant on this beautiful day" I said while winking to her wwweell you cccan enjoy some apples that my fix up for celebration" I can she was hiding her blush with her hat "why didn't he introduce him self like that when I meet" said twilight to her self. Then all of sudden we were surround by earth pony of all colors with some type of apple food "tag out" I said while taping twilight's shoulder "wait what" she said before getting a apple pie shove down her mouth "ha" I said before getting a apple pie shove down my mouth "mmmm this really good who made this" " I did" said a little blond filly with a bow around her head "awe well I'm truly sorry we must be going" said twilight " but your not staying for bunch" said the little filly while giving a sad face "come on twilight you can't say no to that cute face" I said out loud "UGG fine" she said "YAY" yelled every pony else "WOHO" I said while throwing a hoof up. After eating every thing that had apple in and out we started heading out "come back soon k there" said applejack "we sure will" I yelled back  "come what's next I said  meanwhile

I'm sure hoping to meet you again some day" said applejack while staring at phantom star " as long as your still single" she said. " Alright what's next spike" said a full stomich twilight "weather check up" "ha seems easy enough..." I said right before getting tackled

"Oh sorry dude didn't see there" said cyan Pegasus " its ok its not the first time I've been tackled today so what's your name" I said while getting "ok time for the best introduction every again" I said under my breath "oh the names rainbow dash the fastest flyer in Equestria and future wonderbolt leader" rainbow dash said "oh my names is" as I was getting ready to do my intro twilight interrupt in the middle of it "hi my twilight sparkle and this spike" she said " what's up" said spike" ok now's my chance while twilight and rainbow were getting to shave I did what she did to me interrupt her "my name is star phantom star your are most beautiful mare I have ever seen no wonder your in charger of the weather you make beautiful just like yourself poof not noticing it I just got slapped by pair of wings in to pool of mud "ouch"  I said "HAHAHAHAHA" Rainbow dash, Spike and twilight bursting out laughing "oh haha no pony help at once" " sorry here let me help with" said rainbow dash while  getting a cloud "no wait.." I was to late all I can see was mud and water "cough very funny now as I was saying..." again being to late now being spun around like tornado "again I was saying my name is phantom star" I said "oh got all that" she said back "well any way aren't you suppose to be fixing the weather for the Princess arrival" said twilight "yay yay do it in a sec let me take a break" said rainbow dash laying on a cloud "bet you can't fix it in a minuet" I said "oh yay I can to it in ten seconds flat" she quickly reply back "oh yay prove it" I said while staring straight at her "fine I will" said while taking off I was like a dash of rainbows flew by "see ten seconds" she said me and twilight mouths wide open "well I can see you have everything handle we will be on our way" said twilight "yay haha see you around" I said while waving a hoof to rainbow dash "spike what's next" said twilight meanwhile "yay me to" said rainbow dash before drifting off to sleep.