USS Babylon
Chaos
Previous Chapter**AUTHOR'S NOTE**
I fucked up so much shit in this story. It's like I was high or something.
But I looked at the harshly worded constructive criticism and realized, with the help of extreme reader anger, that I could redo the entire chapter.
So if you don't like the second wind, then fuck you! :D
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Kevin lay in dust and bits of wood. The horse leader, Celestia, fired on them.
He looked around in his prone position. Mayer was alive and sitting behind a fallen pillar. The entirety of team one was dead. He couldn't see the other stealth teams.
Kevin saw a rifle ahead of him and grabbed it. Pushing himself to his feet, he sprinted to Mayer's position.
"Situation!?" He screamed, firing on Celestia's guards. The princess herself was sitting on an overlook in the castle, poised for another shot.
"Everyone is dead!" Mayer yelled. "I'm waiting on the other teams to hear the fucking rifle fire!"
Kevin dodged a spear and put down two horses. "Cover me!" He said.
"What are you doing!?" Mayer yelled.
Kevin sprinted towards a shop missing most of the roof. "Getting a map!"
Kevin barreled into the door and knocked it down. He jumped back up, rifle aimed, and searched the building. There were dressers lining the walls, and Kevin started to tear through the drawers.
Mayer jumped over the pillar and advanced. A horse sprinted toward him with a sword in its mouth, ready to stab him. Mayer hit it in the face with the rifle and shot three more. He slid into a wall and took cover from the primitive spears.
Kevin finished tearing through the first dresser and pulled out a drawer. Several maps were inside. He pulled them out one by one and observed them.
"No, no, NO! NO!" He said, discarding maps that weren't of the ocean.
Suddenly, a yellow laser cut through the house, narrowly missing Kevin. "FUCK!" He shouted.
Then he pulled it out. A map of the ocean. He crumpled it up and jammed it into his pocket, then threw the drawer on the floor. Sprinting outside, he saw team two fighting alongside Mayer.
"Where's team three!?" He asked the team leader.
"All dead sir." He said. "It's just us."
Kevin fired into a crowd of horses. "What about the camp?"
"The fuckers burned it." He told him. "We dragged the rafts to the shore, but the whole camp was burnt. Everyone there is dead."
"Fuck..." Kevin said. "Okay!" He screamed. "Retreat! Head for the shore!"
Kevin ran and led the group away. He sprinted for the tree line.
"Finish them!" Celestia screamed "Strike them down! Punish them for their insolence!"
Princess Luna swooped down onto Celestia's balcony. "This ends now." She said.
"Under whose authority?" Celestia laughed. "Yours?"
"While my moon glows, I control Equestria." Luna said. "Your tyrannical raid on both species' is over."
Celestia swung her hoof at Luna, but she caught it with her foreleg. Glaring into Celestia's eyes, she said: "I'm not the little filly you used to push around anymore."
Luna pushed Celestia onto the ground and struck her in the face. Watching the humans retreat, she said: "Run. My moon won't be lit forever."
