WHY IS EVERYONE THUMBS DOWNING IT!!!???? DDDD:

yeah its got some grammar errors and bad editing since i cant edit worth crap. but could you at least tell me what I'm doing wrong so that i may appease you guys D:

The probabilities of a universe rubbing against another, our universe is in innumerable but it happens. When a normal guy like Gabriel is warped out of his home world on this unlikely chance, and odd amount of luck is involved.

Ps- yes Fluttershy 'ALMOST' key word here people gets raped, and I do mention she will be fine and intact just rustled up a little. And trust me the rapists gets whats coming to them, so ignore the trolls Who thumbed down and read it.

I swear people... I love Fluttershy.