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Place Canterlot TIME 4:30 DATE 8/31/14
EVERYBODY PLEASE LEAVE THE AREA OR YOU WILL GET HURT. WE are live here in Canterlot were a suspect Bio-Terrorists Twilight Sparkle has attacked the royal sisters castle. The royal guards have set up a blocked to keep out media. We will keep you up to date on BOOM. IT look like a part of the castle has blown up a figure is emerging out of the rubble. Halt our we will us force. Haha you think you can stop me. Fire starts to come out of no where. Twilight stop this now. Why should I Rainbow the way they treat us. This isn't like you Twilight you have to stop this. I'm sorry Rainbow but I not going to stop now after what I been thought these past two weeks. If your not going to stop then I'll stop you my shelf. I like to see you try. Pause hi that's me out there. My name is twilight sparkle. Now you may be thinking why am I fighting one of my best friends. It's because they betray me all of them did when I get my powers. I guess it would be better if I showed you how this all started. end of prologue
Hi stronglynx here but just call me lynx I would like to thank you for reading the first chapter of my first story. Please tell me how I did below and give me some tips to help me get better.
Place Ponyville Time 10:00am Date 8/14/14
Twilight wake up now or we be late to met the others. Ok spike I get up but you have to make breakfast. I'm going to take a shower
Twenty minutes later. Ahhh that felt good. Hey spike is breakfast down. spike spike can you hear me. Why isn't he answering me. sniff sniff Is that smoke. oh shit is that fire fuck. I see the fire has blocked my path. How did this happen?Then I see another pony out of the corner of my eye. Who are you and what did you do to spike? You mean the dragon? If so he's outside and now you going to help me right escaped. What do you mean escaped? I just got out of that damn prison were they keep us conduits. Now if you don't move I have a way to make you. His hoofs light up with fire. Show me the way out of here. There isn't a back door. Your lying because if your not your not your dead. I not lying to you there is no other way out. Well that's too bad for you he then charge at here. Noooooooooo was all she could say before she passed out.. Five minutes later Oh what happen. Wait I'm alive I looked down and see my hooves are on fire. No I can't be a conduit. Twilight are you okay in there I here aj yell. Yay I'm fine I lied I think I can get out of here through the front door. Ok but be carful twilight. I get up and take step back and charge through the fire and out the door. Yes I did it I made it out. Twilight you hoofs are on fire. oh carp I forgot about that. Twilight a counduit. No I can't be this all a dream. This has to be a dream. Everything just went black. end of chapther one
