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The Darkest Storm

by TheReaderAndWriter
A new pony from far away finds Ponyville and himself in deep trouble when catastrophe strikes.

Ivanhoe Mane finds himself waking up on the train as it stops at his destination: Ponyville. With only his bag to his name and a mysterious note advising him to come to this seemingly pleasant little town, he is unsure whether there is a deeper mystery here, or if it's just an excuse for a vacation. Soon, however, terrible things are starting to happen to Ponyville and its inhabitants. Ivanhoe finds himself and some of the kind locals in the middle of an adventure where he is constantly drawn towards finding the only things that can stop this calamity not only threatening Ponyville, but the entire world.

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The first, and by far worst story I've written for the public. Be warned! Even without taking into account my flawed writing style, the poorly handled OCs, Out-of-character moments and general clichés should be enough to make you want to avoid it. Still, it's always fun to write, and I'm not going to just remove old stuff because I'm trying to grow away from it. It has some neat ideas, though, some of which would have been better suited for a story unrelated to FIM.

Teen
Complete
Dark
Sad
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Comedy
Adventure
 
PMPOS

48736 words: Estimated about 4 hours to read

13 Chapters:

  1. Arrival 2012-12-05 23:47:10 UTC
    4060
  2. Night 2012-12-05 23:48:35 UTC
    3638
  3. Odd 2012-12-05 23:50:21 UTC
    2507
  4. Thunderstorm 2012-12-05 23:50:58 UTC
    3773
  5. Harmful 2012-12-07 21:30:06 UTC
    4056
  6. Effort 2012-12-09 01:12:55 UTC
    3423
  7. Restless 2012-12-07 21:30:30 UTC
    2717
  8. Determination 2012-12-07 21:30:33 UTC
    3939
  9. Ice 2012-12-07 21:30:45 UTC
    3507
  10. Sins 2012-12-07 21:30:47 UTC
    3563
  11. Catastrophe 2012-12-07 21:30:50 UTC
    3921
  12. Objection and Resolution 2012-12-07 21:30:52 UTC
    5003
  13. Departure 2012-12-07 21:30:56 UTC
    4629