7 years

by BigRatNipples666

Rating: everyone
Tags: Romance, Slice of Life, Sad
Length: 701

Some story I wrote that's really bad looking... Anyways it about ThunderStrike (my old oc) walking about to fluttershys door. He finds that fluttershy nor angel or her friends open the door.

Some story I wrote that's really bad looking… Anyways it about ThunderStrike (my old oc) walking about to fluttershys door. He finds that fluttershy nor angel or her friends open the door.

I know it looks bad. I can't write stories that good.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-09-02 00:14:29 UTC

Did you forget?

"Maybe she forgot." ThunderStrike said.

When he got home, he looked at pictures of him and fluttershy.

"High School Memories..." Was wrote above the pictures. ThuderStrike took down the pictures and burned them.

At PonyBucks.

ThuderStrike got him self a coffee to clam down. It worked, but it went away when he saw fluttershy and big macintosh sitting in the next table, so he left.

"I never toke fluttershy to starbucks..." ThuderStrike thought.

He saw fluttershy and big macintosh at the park,movies,cafe,mall etc.

"I think I know why fluttershy does not love me anymore."

"I never toke her places!"

"Dumbass me..."

ThunderStrike wished he toke fluttershy to places.

I wanna know!

"I should call to see what's going on..." ThuderStruck said.thuderstruck was curious, he wants to know what's going on.

He called fluttershy and figured out that she been dating macintosh in middle school, fluttershy didn't tell thuderstruck that she was taken.

"It's all my fault..." ThuderStruck said.

Thuderstruck got mad. Fluttershy was cheating on him in high school.

"Ugh... Could my day get any worse?

Big macintosh called him and said that he should stay away from fluttershy.

"She is my old girlfriend!" Yelled thuderstruck.

ThunderStruck was angry.

ThunderStruck was so angry he got the crying spells, then killed himself, his last words where... "Fluttershy, if you told me 7 years ago... That you where taken... This wouldn't have happened..."

Fluttershy just figured out that ThuderStruck killed himself and said it was her fault. It wasn't, it was love, love was powerful to ThuderStruck, he loved fluttershy and wanted everything to go right, that didn't happen, that's why he killed himself, if things went right he would be alive. He would be with fluttershy.

I lied.

"It's all my fault..." Fluttershy cried

"No it's not." Big macintosh said while hugging fluttershy. "There might be another reason why he killed himself."

"Really?"

"Eeyup!"

"Well he died 2 years ago" should I really be worrying?

Fluttershy was worried still.

Fluttershy had dreams about her being the reason thunderstruck killed himself.

"I hope this won't happen to my daughter..." Fluttershy hoped.

The next day.

"Sweetie can you come here?"

"Yes mommy?"

"In high school, if someone asks you to date and your taken what would you say?"

"I'm taken..."

"Why mommy?"

"It will leave to drama and maybe even death, I know this cause this happened to me."

"Really?"

"Yes."

"It's all my fault..." "I don't want your life to suck."

"But you got daddy, and me."

"I know sweetheart."

"Mommy remember this, love is all you need."

7... Years...

Thunderstruck walked up to fluttershys door.

He checked his saddle bag.

Butterfly Pin: Check!

1000$ Dimond bow: Check!

Teddy bear: Check!

Thunderstruck knocked on fluttershys door and a filly answered

who is this filly? Fluttershy must be babysitting

But fluttershy wasn't babysitting...

" can I see fluttershy?" asked   Thunderstruck "my mom?" the filly answered. "She isn't here but daddy's here"

daddy?...

Fluttershy married?

To who?

Okay I'll see your daddy.

"DADDY"

"coming"

what your name Thunderstruck asked.

Big macintosh

your married to fluttershy?

Yup fur 7 years

I dated her in high school

cool

I'm angry

why?

Hi Thunderstruck Fluttershy said

hi honey! Gimme a kiss. Thunderstruck answered

I'm not in the mood...

okay.

Fluttershy kissed big macintosh.

I thought you said you weren't in the mood.

yeah! Not in the mood for kissing you!

I'm gonna make dinner, chat with  Thunderstruck flutterbaby.

Big macintosh whispered in Thunderstruck ear " she's loves me not you"

big Mac went inside.

" do you know that I got presents for you?"

no...

That's because I was gonna marry you. But your with macintosh now.

I know that I'm not an idiot.

i...spent...1000000...

Dinners ready!

bye..

Thunderstruck walked angry.

Stupid macintosh, stupid filly, lovely fluttershy...

I guess this goes off to a other mare...

He was so angry... He was so excited. He really wanted to have foals. But the was all macintoshs.

I missed you. Ever since 7 years ago. Really want to kiss you. So bad... But now your with somebody else.

It's my fault... If I didn't leave you for seven years... Maybe we would be together...