Author's Note

The story is technically done, but I am to lazy to edit, and it is a pain to edit. So if you want to read the full thing, it's here.

Alt ending for the story

For all those that want the full story... so I don't have to edit it, is here http://pastebin.com/8BB4kmgm

And here is an alternate ending from a different writer. It is a bit happier http://pastebin.com/GYvTRzWB