The Hunter - The Beginning Of A Story

by XAgentHunter

Rating: teen
Tags: Human, Adventure
Length: 3669

A human is transported to equestria and is identified as a threat and is captured until the human offers a deal... (This is not based on me. This is one of my characters)

A Teenage Soldier who is ready to go home from Afghanistan was attacked and transported to Equestria. Confused and frightened. He wanders the streets of Equestria. Celestia then detects him and thinks him as a threat and is captured and taken to the castle for interrogation. The soldier then makes a deal.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-11-12 03:18:56 UTC

Different World, Different Species, same language...

"Do you think it's okay?"

"I don't know but look at it's muzzle and mane...it's weird."

"Should we find The Canterlot Guards?" "I guess"

Hunter's hearing was starting to become normal and his vision became clearer a bit.

"Hey miss a little help?" Asked Hunter.

"Aah! It's alive!!" Hunter was knocked out by a kick in the head.

(A few minutes later)

"After that it suddenly moved and talked I think. I was frightened so I bucked it."

"It's fine ma'am you were frightened now go home and we'll investigate this..."

"Okay."

Hunter's vision and hearing became clearer again...

"Okay it's not one of us obviously but it's got blood on it."

"This creature has blood?"

"I guess...or hit some fruit stand."

Hunter then opened its eyes a little and sees a Pony looking at him. The pony turns around and then Hunter looked at his hands and saw they were bloody. He sees his M4 but then it levitates as he sees the Pony's horn glowing.

"What is this?"

"Looks like some kind of magic machine or something."

"I see a trigger and that thing on top looks like a telescope."

"Hey...little help." Says Hunter.

"It's awake! Whoa!" Says the pony.

Hunter quickly gets up and the 2 ponies. Hold their spears.

"Don't move you alien!" Said the ponies

"What are you doing with that? Give me that that's dangerous!" Says Hunter,

"Who are you and what are you?!" Asked the Ponies.

"By US army. We don't negotiate with aliens, terrorists or some type of talking horse!" Hunter answers, He then runs towards them and slides by and grabs the M4 and runs as fast as he could.

"It's on the move!!!" Said the ponies,

Hunter runs through streets and everywhere he goes there were ponies who were frightened and scared. Hunter just only ran and didn't stop until he was safe.

The 2 Ponies then blocked him off and this time there were 10 of them all wearing armor. One threw his spear and it hit Hunter's Arm causing it too bleed fast.

"Ah!! Damn it! Just leave me alone!!" Said Hunter.

He ran again and this time he was climbing buildings and jumping from roof to roof he then jumped to the ground and hid in an alley. The ponies lost him.

"Phew...okay now to find out where I am." Said Hunter.

He then turns around and sees a Frying Pan and is whacked with it. Knocking out Hunter again.

Hunter was being dragged by someone and a shadow appeared who was carrying Hunter.

The shadow showed a unicorn with a hat that looked like a kind of hat a witch would wear.

Being Friendly?

     Hunter was out cold and then someone splashed cold water on him.

"Hey...wake up.."

"Uhn...Coronal isn't it a day off today...?" said Hunter

"Hey I'm not a Coronal! I am a Pony who is trying because The Great and Powerful Trixie likes Reckless People! Especially if you're gonna resist arrest from Equestrian Guards..."

"Huh? WHAT?!" said Hunter.

His eyes immediately opened and he stood up and took out his pistol and pointed it at the Pony who was talking.

"If you think you can scare me with that you are truly mistaking." Said the pony.

She uses her horn and she swipes the gun from Hunter's Hands and then pointed it at Hunter.

"You know a pistol bullet can't really hurt." said Hunter.

Then The Pony Picked up his M4 with her Magic.

"Son of a bitch..." said Hunter.

"Trixie asks to watch your mouth human." she said,

"Wha--you know what species I am?!"

"Trixie knows every species." She said.

The Pony then puts the guns down.

"I Like you. You are reckless, swift, and skillful and I never thought I would say that to Somepony..." said The Pony.

"Everypony? What the..what?" said Hunter.

"It's what we say, so how did you get here?" Asked the Pony.

"I died and some voice said I have a 2nd chance but somewhere else." said Hunter,

"I assume that place is here...Welcome to Equestria...you are the only human here congrats." said the pony.

Hunter was shocked and then he sat down,

"What the hell am I doing here?!" said Hunter,

"Don't ask me...ask the voice..." said the pony.

"What?" said Hunter,

"Hey just being friendly..." said the pony.

"What's your name?" asked Hunter,

"Well now that you asked. I am The Great And Powerful Trixie!!!!" she said.

"Trixie huh? Well Trixie I guess we part ways here. I should turn myself in so I can get information about this World." said Hunter. 'Ah...you are reckless...well then...Trixie wishes you Good Luck." She said.

"Thanks...goodbye, Great and Powerful Trixie." said Hunter.

He then walked away.

"That's the first time someone called me by my stage name." said Trixie.

Hunter ran to the Guards and he stopped.

"Alien stop where you are!!!" said the Guard.

"I am..." said Hunter.

The Guard whack him in the stomach.

"Aah!"

"Restrain It!" said the Guard

"Take me to your Leader...oh and be careful with those if you mess around they could seriously hurt you." said Hunter

"What are those weapons?" asked the Guard

"...Yeah...Don't destroy them though..." said Hunter.

"Okay let's go..." said The Guard

No Easy Way Out...No Way Out At All

Apperently these ponies take precaution. They took my Vest, Weapons, and things that aren't harmful. At least they didn't take my clothes...or this notebook...well it's was in my back pocket and they didn't check I should show them how to search a guy...anyway end of log.

Hunter closes his notebook and sighs as he is exhausted.

He was chased, shot at, stabbed, and he's all bloody. He's still alive though but is weak a little.

Hunter then opened his notebook looking at his old logs,

Day 1 of being in the U.S Army I follow orders from drill sergeants and others I started making some friends. If I had my guitar I could show them my skills and vocal skills...But not now...I'm part of the army and I have to starting making skills in Guns...end of log.

Hunter closed the notebook again and he started tapping, making a rhythm,

We're not indestructible.

Baby, better get that straight, I think it's unbelievable.

How you give into the hands of fate.

Some things are worth fighting for. Some feelings never die.

I'm not asking for another chance. I just wanna know why...

There's no easy way out...

There's no shortcut home...

There's no easy way out...

Givin' in can't be wrong.

I don't wanna pacify you,

I don't wanna drag you down,

But I'm feeling like a prisoner,

Like a stranger in a no named down.

I see all the angry faces,

Afraid that could be you and me,

Talkin' about what might have been,

I'm thinkin' about what it used to be...

There's no easy way out...

There's no shortcut home...

There's no easy way out...

Givin' in can't be wrong.

Hunter started hearing musical sounds in his head as he's singing to himself.

Baby, baby, we can shed this skin,

We can know how we feel inside,

Instead of goin' down an endless road,

Not knowin' if we're dead or alive...

Some things are worth fightin' for...

Some feelings never die...

I'm not askin' for another chance...

I just wanna know why...

There's no easy way out...

there's no shortcut home...

there's no easy way out...

Givin' in, given' in can't be wrong...

There's no easy way out...no easy way out...

There's no shortcut home...no shortcut home.

There's no easy way out...There's no easy, no easy, no easy way out.

There's no easy way out...no easy way out...

There's no shortcut home...no shortcut home...

There's no easy way out...There's no easy, no easy, no easy way out.

There's no easy way out.

There's no shortcut home.

There's no easy way out.

A small teardrop showed from Hunter's eyes...he then sighed..."Damn it..."

Interrogated...by a Horse...

*sigh*......*breathing loudly*

"...what are you?" A sound of a punch is heard.

"You WILL ANSWER ME!!!!"

"Screw off..."

Another punch is heard.

"That's enough!!! I'll handle this okay?"

"Yes your majesty."

25 minutes earlier...

     *sigh* T

he sound of tapping was heard. A tapping rhythm.

"Hey you! Stop that tapping!" A guard shouted.

The tapping stopped and the one who was tapping was staring at the guard with his red eyes.

"You got a visitor." Said the guard.

The cell gate opened and a Blue pony with a Witch-like hat on walked in.

"Trixie..." The shadowy figure said.

"Hunter." She said.

"What do you want?"

"Trixie wanted to just see how you were doing and how the dungeons are." Said Trixie

"Well...it's something...at least it's not worse than a prison I've seen. This is like medieval a little." Said Hunter,

"Well, I heard you're going to be questioned?" Asked Trixie,

"Yeah." Said Hunter.

"Time's up." Said the Guard.

"Prisoner c'mon time for your interrogation."

"Fine." Said Hunter.

"Good luck Sam. You're going to need it because the captain of the royal guard can be aggressive." Said Trixie.

Hunter stood up and was escorted by the guard into a room and was seated in a wooden chair that looks like from earth.

"The captain will meet you in a minute," said The Guard,

He shut the door.

Hunter looked at his watch that was cracked. It had a unknown time which said X:XX the time then started changing it was being coded.

It was saying:

HI:4,

5:OU,

K:IA,

& DE:AD,

"What the fuck?" Said Hunter.

He strapped it off and threw it on the ground and stomped on it.

The door opened and another horse walked in.

"All I see is horses.." Said Hunter

"We're ponies so get it straight." the pony said.

The pony had a male voice, had white skin, A horn on his head, and his hair and tail were Striped Blue & Light Blue. There was a mark behind him and had a pink star and a dark blue shield.

"Nice hair." The pony said,

"You too" said Hunter

"Now look I don't want to be aggressive and all but if you answer my questions and such we'll get along okay? Name's Shining Armor" The pony said.

He raised his hoof expecting a shake.

"Name's Hunter."

He replied as he put his hand out and shook.

After shaking, Shining noticed his broken utility watch was on the ground.

"What is that?" He asked

"A watch" Hunter answered.

"Ok. Now answer this. Are you from this planet? Or are you just not from Equestria?" Asked Shining

"What planet is this called?" Asked Hunter,

"Equis." Shining said.

"Then...no I'm not." He answered.

"Oh..well welcome to Equis." Said Shining.

"What planet are you from?"

"A planet...called Earth." Said Hunter,

"Earth?" Asked Shining,

"Yeah..E-A-R-T-H." Said Hunter with an attitude.

"No reason to be rude." Said Shining.

"I am a Human." Said Hunter

"Never heard of them. They don't sound real." Said Shining.

Hunter then stood up

"You will not make fun of my race." Said Hunter "Your's doesn't look real either. Talking horse? C'mon that's child stuff...Look at me I'm in a fantasy world. How the hell do you guys exist when My race is so dangerous we could end life." Said Hunter.

Shining then got up and bucked Hunter in the face making him sit back in the chair.

"I thought we could be nice but now we're not friends anymore." Said Shining,

"I said something simple. I am human a race that is threatening," said Hunter.

"What are you?" Shining asked.

He got bucked again as he started dripping blood

"You WILL ANSWER ME!!!" Said Shining,

"That's enough!!!" Someone screamed.

The door opened and a tall pony walked in.

It had white skin with a Green, Purple, & Pink Flowing hair with a tall horn and also had wings and the mark on her had the sun. It was also wearing a crown and collar.

"Shining Armor. Go. Your sister needs to talk to you." The Pony said.

Shining walked out the door after that.

"My apologies. Are you okay?" Asked the Pony

"I'm fine...I've taken worse hits." Said Hunter.

"I've been listening. I know what your kind is. Your race has a dark history don't they?" Asked the Pony

"Yes...They do...I have a dark past is not much of a difference." Said Hunter

"I am Princess Celestia, ruler over Equestria. Hunter, correct?" She said,

"Yeah...princess? There's no royalty in our land besides Britain but I'm from America." Said Hunter.

"I have hear about your world and yes they are dangerous." Said Celestia.

"Can you send me home?" Asked Hunter.

Celestia then used her horn and looked at Hunter seeing a tombstone at earth saying Hunter "I'm afraid you have been killed. You no longer exist there..." Said Celestia,

"What? I didn't--" Hunter then stopped and remembered being hit by an RPG.  "I remember...I was killed." Said Hunter,

"I'm sorry. Did you have family?" Asked Celestia,

"Just some Grandparents." Said Hunter.

"Well At least you're still alive in this world. But none of them are your species." Said Celestia,

"I was part of the U.S. Army. I was going to be promoted." Said Hunter. "Could you help me?"

"I don't know. You almost killed some ponies and you had your earth weapon which I know about. It can kill in seconds or less." Said Celestia.

"But I can help you!" Said Hunter

"I threatened to shoot cause I was scared and One of your guard stabbed me with their spear." Said Hunter. "I want to help. I can protect you from danger and anything else. if I don't have a purpose on earth anymore, then I can make a new one here. I can start my life over." Said Hunter.

"I will take my time to think okay?" Said Celestia "In the meantime I'm afraid you'll be in the dungeon." Said Celestia.

A guard then walked in exhausted. "You're...majesty." Said the guard

"Yes? What's wrong?" Asked Celestia,

"They're at it again but worse." Said The Guard.

"That Pony Gang again?!" Said Celestia.

"Yes...your majest--..."

The Guard then collapsed revealing his back showing his armor was ripped and there was blood dripping and something sharp was sticking in him.

Celestia gasped in horror.

"They...have gone too far this time!" Said Celestia.

"I know you don't trust me but...where are my weapons?" Asked Hunter

The Gang of Canterlot

     "They have gone too far!"

     "Look I know you don't trust me yet but...where are my weapons?"

     "W..what?"

     "My weapons. What. I just heard is something I HATE hearing! Justice must be served..."

     "....follow me..."

-Outside the Castle Gardens-

     "Stop! For killing a Royal Guard, you are under arrest!!!"

     "Oh...I am? Well My friends here disagree with you guys."

     "What do you want?"

     "We want bits. Enough to make us powerful and rich."

     "You will not have any bits for your crimes!"

     "You forgot who you're dealing with. Klan Noble. Wanted for Arson, robbery, and murder and I have never been stopped or arrested."

Klan then lit up a torch.

     "You don't give us what we want. We'll burn this pretty castle to the ground." Klan said

The torch then went out and Celestia was furious as she walked to them.

     "Well hello you majesty." Said Klan

     "You have gone too far!!! You will leave this place now!!" Said Celestia.

     "You can't tell me what to do I have things that could end you." Said Klan.

     "She said it once!!!! Leave..."

     "Who's there?" Said Klan.

Hunter then walked out with his M4 and gear.

     "Look it's the alien....he's helping us?"

Klan had a confused look as well as the Guards did. "Who the hell is that?"

Hunter walked over to the dead Guard and closed his eyes and put his hand on him, "Rest in peace." Hunter then stood back up and yelled, "Who the hell did this?! Who? Show yourself now coward! You think you're fucking cool?! Killing someone is okay?! Oh hell no! You're now gonna deal with me!!!"

     "I did freak."

Hunter then looked down and saw Klan and his crew. "The fuck you thinking huh? You think you can just walk down here and kill? Because you FUCKING FEEL LIKE IT?!" Hunter yelled.

Klan and his crew laughed as Hunter just stood there with an enraged face. "Yeah. We do. I don't know what the hell you are but you are a freak and you don't belong here you threaten our species so I must say goodbye." Said Klan

     Klan took out his knife and was about to stab Hunter...but he stopped. Klans hoof was stopped by Hunter's hand.

     "Wha...what?"

Hunter took the knife out of Klan's hoof and he stabbed his arm.

     "AHH!"

Hunter put up his M4 and shot the 5 gang members in the legs. He then picked up Klan and looked at him directly in the eye.

     "Now...Justice."

Hunter took out his Pistol and cocked it ready to shoot Klan in the head.

     "STOP!"

A voice was heard from the crowd as all looked.

     A purple pony was walking through the crowd with a bag and was levitating a book.

     "Twilight..." Said Celestia

     "Who's Twilight?" Asked Hunter

The pony walked up to Hunter and talked to him. "Look I know what you are and what you can do." She said

"Everypony listen! He is not an alien! He is called a Human! They lived for centuries and had history. They have armies like the Royal guards.

He is a soldier who is loyal to his people and will protect. They are a peaceful race. But had a dark history. Tragic history." Said Twilight.

"How do you know what I am?" Hunter said as he dropped Klan

"I am Princess Celestia's Personal Student and I have never failed to help her out with things like this. My name is Twilight Sparkle." She said.

"Wow." Hunter said. He put his pistol back in his pocket.

Klan was on the floor and he was in pain. He sucked it up and he put his hoof on his knife and he pulled it out of his arm. After that he was readying to stab Hunter in the foot. A random voice came in from the crowd.

"Alien look out!!!" Said somepony

Hunter looked down and saw Klan about to stab him. He did.

"Ah! Damn it you little fucker!!!" Said Hunter.

Hunter pulled out his pistol and started pulling the trigger.

Twilight' s horn started glowing and then Hunter gun flew out of his hand

"Damn it. You and Trixie!" Said Hunter.

Twilight hit Klan in the face with the gun knocking him out.

"Not worth it." Said Twilight. She gave Hunter back his Gun.

"You're right. I'm sorry." Said Hunter as he took back his gun.

Hunter started coughing and there was blood coming out.

The crowd gasped

"Just ignore that." Said Hunter

He then got down on his knees and was breathing heavily

"Hunter where were you before transported here?" Asked Celestia.

"Afghanistan. About to go back to America until we were attacked. I think I was killed by an RPG explosion."  Said Hunter as he was still coughing.

"If you were killed how are you still alive here?" Asked Twilight.

"Some voice said giving me...a second chance." Hunter passed out.

"Second chance?" Said Celestia.

Wait till the final chapter

It started out like this... (Prologue)

Day 567 - June 16, 2014: My duty in Afghanistan is done. I'm finally going back to see my grandparents. I'm also being promoted to Sergeant finally. I'm maybe one of the only teens to be Promoted to Sergeant. Anyway I'll write more later.

"Hey Hunter. The ceremony is starting don't be late."

"Shit you're right. Thanks."

"No problem Hunter." Hunter ran so he wouldn't be late.

(30 minutes later) "Private James Santez I promote you Corporal you earned it." Said the Major. The audience applauded. "Corporal Sam Hunter." Said the Major, Hunter walked up to the Podium and stood tall

"Sir." said Hunter,

"I promote you Sergeant. For bravery and honor. You saved many lives that day congratulations." Said the Major as he saluted and Hunter saluted back.

(12 minutes later) Hunter and others were at base just chatting "Damn can't wait to see my wife again..hey Hunter do you have a special someone?"

"No. Just 2 grandparents I need to take care of." Said Hunter.

"Ah I see...well someday bro." Hunter walked backed into his tent and took off his vest and his jacket and showing only a tank top on him. He then felt a tremor. He ignored it then another came in way stronger.

"What the f..?" Said Hunter. He but his ammo vest back on ignoring his jacket he grabbed an M4 with some attachments and his Father's Desert Eagle. He walked out the tent to see the base under attack by Terrorists

"Oh come on! Really?!" Said Hunter. As he fires and then gets shot at. He gets to cover and then a stray bullet hits his arm.

"Ah! Fuck!!!" Said Hunter. U.S Choppers went to attack head on. Until they fired an RPG. The Chopper was hit and it was heading towards Hunter.

"Oh shit!!!!!!" The chopper lands at him and explodes.

     "AH CRAP!!!" Screamed Hunter as he wakes up in a white room.

"Am I dead?" Said Hunter

"No...well...yes...um...yes and no."

"Who the hell are you?" Said Hunter

"I'm just a new friend of yours. What such Chaos happened at your home."

"That was my Base..." Said Hunter

"Well your um...base...is gone...I like you which Is why I'm going to give you a second chance but somewhere else..."

"What?" Said Hunter, he then fell asleep.

     "Uhnn..." "What is that creature?"

"Beats me...maybe The Princess knows."