Fall of Harmony

by ssjlunadash

Rating: everyone
Tags: Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Other, Romance, Princess Luna, Comedy, Adventure, Shining Armor, Princess Celestia
Length: 2315

Its been long since the Void been released and its up to Twilight and her friends to save Equestria.

Long ago Equestria been in a terrible war with its counterpart the "Void" and now a terrible a earthquake released the Void.Now its up to the mane 6 and the Princesses with a couple of new characters to save Equestria from its doom.

Little romance and maybe comedy with action.

Please be nice its our (My brony friends and I) first fic and it would be helpful if you gave us some helpful advice
Chapters may take long due to school.

Published 2012-04-18 21:14:05 UTC
Last updated 2012-06-06 07:51:25 UTC

Chapter 1: A unexpected Doom

The Fall of Harmony

Chapter 1
Long time ago, before Nightmare Moon and the imprisonment of Discord, there was the Void. The Void was the alternate side of Equestria, bringing nothing but chaos and destruction in its path. Through the years of war, the Princesses knew that Equestria won't last long if the war goes on, so with the help of the Heroes of Equestria they banish the Void into an orb known as the orb of containment but with a grave cost. Since then, the Void was locked up somewhere in Equestria.....waiting.

“Wow, I didn't knew about this ShadowSky” said Twilight Sparkle as she uses her magic to give the book back to her friend.
“Well, you can find books like this in the royal archives” ShadowSky said as the book floated back in his pouch and they walk together to Twilight's house.
ShadowSky is a unicorn stallion with black coat with black and blue mane.

It was midnight everyone is quiet. As the clouds distance each other to show the moon princess work she looks above the sky to the lunar moon instead of smiling she instead frown with worry in her face
“I’m worried that the orb might break during the summer sun celebration Tia.” said Princess Luna said with worry in her voice.
“Don't fret Luna, it been imprison for a long time.” Celestia said. “Now, lets see our dear faithful students and Captains” as the two princesses walk to their chariots off to Ponyville.

“All right were here, what book you need ShadowSky?” Twilight Sparkle said.
Twilight opens the door to see her friends in her home being decorated with party supplies from Pinkie Pie
“Hey Twilight and ShadowSky is here” Pinkie Pie said while hopping around near Twilight.
“Yeah, its her coltfriend” Rarity added with a sly smile.
“Rarity!, he's not my coltfriend, were just friends” Twilight said trying to remove the blush from her face also ShadowSky.
The door swings open revealing a Pegasus with navy blue coat and dark brown mane and with Rainbow Dash. “Good race Thunderstorm.” Rainbow Dash said through her breath and walk to greet her friends and Thunderstorm walks to ShadowSky to talk.
As the party goes on,Twilight suspected something wrong. “Wait, there's something wrong, wheres Fluttershy?” Twilight questioned. “She told me that she was seeing a friend” Rainbow Dash answered. “But she will come.”

Its was the perfect night for a nice date. FlutterShy and a gray Pegasus with black mane walks together to one of the best restaurant in Ponyville.
“HurricaneWing, your too kind” Fluttershy said. “But this is the most expensive restaurant in all of PonyVille”
“Its okay, Fluttershy” HurricaneWing said “I know someone here who works at the restaurant, table for two please.”
“Well, okay.” Fluttershy said as she sits down starts to order.

The moon princesses looks upon the moon. I know something bad will happen, I can feel it.She tries to stop thinking about it and looks on the view above Ponyville
The two carriages lands near Twilight's house. The two princesses walks to the house.
“Princess Celestia and Princess Luna, please come in” Twilight Sparkle said welcoming the two princesses in her house. The sun princess looks around then frown. “Thunderstorm” Celestia called out. The Pegasus quickly flies in front of the sun princess. “Yes, Princess?” Thunderstorm said with a salute.
“Where is Captain HurricaneWing?, Captain?” Celestia ask.
“I have no clue Princess Celestia” Thunderstorm replied.

(insert stupid joke here) HurricaneWing said as he and Fluttershy walk down the road to Twilight's house.s
Fluttershy giggle knowing the (insert the same stupid joke here) was hilarious but nervous to laugh out.
“Thank you for the dinner HurricaneWing”
“Its nothing really” HurricaneWing replied hoping for a kiss ever since they been dating for almost a month now.
As the two pegasi arrive at Twlight's house. Fluttershy gave HurricaneWing soft kiss in the cheek.

Celestia quietly peer at the window seeing Fluttershy and HurricaneWing “There they are” said and open the door. “Ahh, Captian HurricaneWing and Fluttershy, what took you so long?”
HurricaneWing rub the back of his head and nervously chuckles “Umm.. Fluttershy-”
“Don't worry, you secrets safe with me” Celestia said quietly.

Fluttershy and HurricaneWing step inside the house where all their friends are partying.
“There y'all are” Applejack said “Come inside come Pinkie pie has the weirdest story ever” As Fluttershy walk with Applejack, ShadowSky grabs HurricaneWing to the table to where Thunderstorm is “So, how was it?” ShadowSky ask as he offered a chair for HurricaneWing.
“WHAT!?” HurricaneWing quietly scream. “I’m just kidding” ShadowSky and Thunderstorm chuckled “My friend have some applecider” Thunderstorm said.

As the party goes on, suddenly a rumble filled Equestira.
“Earthquake!” everyone screamed and went down.
The earth shaken, building crash down. Quickly, Princess Celestia used a shield spell summoned a huge sky blue bubble surrounding the house, sadly she couldn't saving the rest of Ponyville and she hope the earthquake never cause any damage to the neighboring cities.
“Is everyone all right?” Princess Celestia said.
“Yeah” the ponies replied.

Twilight looks around, buildings tore, ground is tore that its showing lights from the molten core. She quickly looked around to see if everypony was alright and above she saw groups of medical Pegasus flying down to help citizens of Ponyville.
“Everypony lend a hand” Rainbow Dash said and she helps the ponies that are injured from the earthquake.
As the five memebers of mane 6 help out the medical Pegasus, Twilight goes over to ShadowSky and a dark red unicorn with orange red mane with the moon princess.
“Lava Flame, help out the medical pegasus” Princess Luna command
“All right then” Lava Flame and went out to lift the tore building up.
While the moon princess goes around Ponyville, Twilight runs to ShadowSky before he went to Canterlot with Thunderstorm and HurricaneWing. “Your going to Canterlot?” Twilight ask
“Yes, because the earthquake tore Equestria in half apperently” ShadowSky replied with a quiet chuckle
Before Twilight said anything to ShadowSky a gigantic cloud of darkness hovers in gloomy sky across the other half Equestria in pursuit of Royal Guards.
To Be Continued...

Chapter 2:The End Starts

THE FALL OF HARMONY
Chapter 2

ShadowSky and Twilight's eyes followed the cloud of darkness until it reach the other side of Equestria.
“Ummmmm.........what was that” Twilight ask then look at ShadowSky who is still speechless from what happen.

“Umm... maybe Princess Celestia might know and bring your friends” ShadowSky said “ThunderStorm and HurricaneWing, stay here and send some Guards now”then ShadowSky went on his carriage and flew to Canterlot being trailed by purple smoke by the end of his carriage.

Thunderstorm sigh then said “This commanding work is too much, I wish Shining Armor is back.” then went back to pinpointing location in Equestria for Guards to defend.

“Don't be like Lava Flame, complaining like a filly, you should be happy and glad he chose you while his on his honeymoon.” HurricaneWing said, “Anyway I have to go back to Canterlot to order the Sky Archons” then flew to Canterlot.

Before Thunderstorm stop HurricaneWing it was too late. “DON'T LEAVE ME DAMNIT!!!!” Thunderstorm screamed out then put his head down. Come on Thuderstorm your better than this tough up and be a stallion! He think, then went back to work.

The mane 6 step out of the train and quickly to the Royal palace. As they go to the Royal palace the whole place, every corner is being fortified and guarded like the Royal Wedding of Shining Armor and Princess Cadence.
“Wow, that cloud can cause all this” AppleJack said while looking around seeing guards everywhere she sees feeling overprotective.
“Well I heard its Thunderstorm's idea” Rarity continued.
“Hey! It's his first time commanding the royal guards they don't like him.” RainbowDash said “Plus its precaution, you'll never know”
“Yeah! Maybe a Ursa Major, like 10 of them may attack” Pinkie Pie added.
Rarity, Applejack and Rainbowdash look at each other and laugh then Pinkie Pie laugh.
As the Mane 6 arrived at the Royal Palace, Princess Celestia, Princess Luna and ShadowSky waited for them at the entrance.

“Its time for the full detail of the truth now” Celestia said as they march to a door, similar to the one that’s keeping the Elements of Harmony. Celestia unlocks the door revealing stain glass showing the war against the void.
“Long ago, Equestia was in war against the Void a counterpart of Equestria. The Void was created through hatred and destruction. Equestria was losing the war but hope was still there, the Heroes of Equestria.” Celestia said as she guide the mane 6 and ShadowSky and the moon princess through the stain glasses while telling the story.
“The Heroes of Equestria with the Elements of the moon and the Harmony of Magic and Luna and I defeated the Void but the Heroes of Equestria Souls were used to imprison them. The council of Equestria found out the Void was created by the past war and with my power I merged the Elements and Harmony into the Elements of Harmony, and that created the Treaty of Peace and the Elements of Harmony proved its Treaty and without there will be war.” Celestia continued.
“So, our quest is to retrieve the Elements of the Moon and Harmony of Magic” Luna said and walk to the Window viewing Equestria “We leave by nightfall, prepare yourselfs.”

“Alright, first division defend the northern parts for any incoming danger, second division defend southern parts then the third will defend with me” Thunderstorm said “Scouts report that this thing will strike a full on attack in the middle” Thunderstorm reads on the scroll sent by the scout. Thunderstorm walks up the highest point of the hill and oversees the defense, royal guards setting up walls, getting into their position and first division flying up north and south division flying down south.
Thunderstorm turns and see an army of Sky Archons, Equestria elite soldiers, lead by HurricaneWing, Captian of the Sky Archons.

HurricaneWing lands down to Thunderstorm “Well I said I would come back.” The two pegasus look and see as the Sky Archons divide into two groups and one group go up north while and other down south. “Oh, yeah the Lunar Guards will be arriving too” HurricaneWing said with a sigh.
“Great!” Thunderstorm said.
“Well your commanding them since your the captain of them.” HurricaneWing grumbled.
“Yeah, well we better get back to commanding” HurricaneWing said and the two pegasus continue back to work.

The Sun Princess used her magic to lowered the sun, as the sun slowly Princess Luna walks to the Sun Princess and whisper “The void is spreading.” The Sun Princess looks out the window and see dark clouds surrounding the half of Equestria, Celestia couldn't look more for it is her responsibility to watch over Equestria.
“We must leave now” Celestia said and the two Alicorns leave for their carriages.

The mane 6's hot air balloon lands softly near the Walls surrounding the half of Equestria thats under the ponies control.
“Come on girls we must meet the Princesses” Twilight said. As the mane 6 walks to the highest hill Fluttershy sees HurricaneWing.
“You girls go ahead I need to look for something” Fluttershy said. “Okay, just meet up with us quickly” Twilight said and walks off with the rest of mane 6.
Fluttershy sneak behind HurricaneWing and gave him a gentle tap. “Gotcha ” Fluttershy said.

“Hey” HurricaneWing replied. Fluttershy gave last hug HurricaneWing fearing that this maybe the last hug yet. HurricaneWing knows her feelings and gave her a hug.

“Fluttershy come here” Twilight said and quickly walks to Princess Celestia.
“Ready to go?” the sun princess said. “Not yet, Fluttershy is not here yet” Twilight said and walks to ShadowSky who is reading the map of Equestria, “Where are we going?” Twilight ask.
“You guys and Princess Celestia will be going to the Forest of Harmony, and Princess Luna and I will be going Mt. Equestria, the highest mountain of Equestria.” ShadowSky answered. “Then what is your friends doing?” Twilight said trying to stop the awkward silence.
“HurricaneWing and Thunderstorm will try to defend Equestria from the void until we get back with the Elements of Harmony.” ShadowSky explaining.

“Well only both halves of it” Twilight said and ShadowSky and her laugh to (stupid, unreliable and bad timing joke).

“Hey Thunder” Rainbow Dash said “what is it Rainbow Dash” Thunderstorm asked “Break a hoof” Rainbow Dash said and gave him a brohoof. “I'll break plenty” Thunderstorm said and Rainbow Dash laugh and gave him a hug. RainbowDash dash to the rest of the mane 6.

“Ready to go girls?” Twilight Sparkle said.
“Ready!” the rest of the mane 6 said. The princesses nodded and split up in two groups, Princess Luna, ShadowSky and the Sun princess and the mane 6 off to to find the halves of the Elements of Harmony.

“Ready ponies, ready to defend your homeland, your princesses, your family, your---” HurricaneWing saying his speech but got cut off as he and the soldiers looked up into the sky to see black smoke descending from the sky transforming into void forming into soldiers of ancient Equestria.
“So much for a last awesome speech.” Thunderstorm said with a smile “Get into positions.”.
The soldiers gets into positions ready to fight the void. As they get positions they stop and stare to four void alicorn dopplegangers and hundreds of more dopplegangers of soldiers.
“Mother of Celestia.” Thuderstorm said as he takes his helmet off.
“Any last words?” HurricaneWing said
“Fight to the end brothers to the end!” Thunderstorm shouted as he take out his lightning spear and lead the army to the Void.

To Be Continued...