Payment on Assertiveness

Author's Notes/Morale

Well for one, there is no morale. Unless really you want to be creative with this. When I was writing this story, I think I was tripping balls. Kind of a weird and comedic tone to it. I hatched this idea from what other people might of thought. I know for sure someone was thinking this before me. I kind of speed wrote this so I could be the first one to do it. Also I wanted to see the reaction on people's faces.

Hands down, yes when I sped through it my grammar is horrible. Yeah the pacing may be strange and chaotic, but no one else wrote a story like this. For those people who think they can write a better story, they could always enlighten me on their own, but I can still say, "I did it first." And to those people who are generally offended by rape, I reject your reality and substitute my own.

Rape, almost everyone in the world doesn't want to get rape. Most people also don't want their friends or love ones to get raped. I wrote a story about a shy pony getting "raped", but scientifically it's not rape if she likes it. Now your probably thinking, "Man this guy is a sick bastard", but I can prove that there are worst stories then this out there.

But for those people who believe rape is a horrible thing, your pretty much ignoring the fact that 250,000 cases of male-female rape or attempted rape happen in America alone. Are you doing anything to stop it? Do stories like these effect people who actually get raped? Let me tell you something, I had a friend who actually got raped. I was in Vietnam and Father's family's neighbor was missing. The missing person was a 15 year old child, the next day she was found laying near a stream, pregnant. Did anyone stop her from being rape? Instead of a volitional argument on here, I think you should be focusing on your reality.

And for those who actually took that seriously that was 1 minute spent worth of fluff! It's just like the derpy incident. The comedic tone for these stories is ment for a good ol dark humor. You may dislike this, but that 9/11 pony seems to be better off than me -.-