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Inexcusable

by cleverpun
Princess Nightmare Moon had tried to keep it secret. She had feigned ignorance, but the charade could not last. She nocked the arrow. Tirek was a large target; he would fall easily. Then the true challenge would come: explaining herself to Celestia.

Princess Nightmare Moon had tried to keep it secret. She had suppressed her power, feigned ignorance, played the outdated fool at every opportunity. She should have known that something like this would happen. A threat that would reveal her, whether she played dumb or not.

If she had to reveal herself, then at least she could protect Equestria in the process. She nocked the arrow. The bow felt so flimsy, but she could not risk him absorbing a spell. She laced magic across the arrow and the string and the air, enough to make it fly faster and aim smoother. She sighted him easily; Tirek was a large target. Now he only had to turn around. An arrow to the spine would kill him simply and instantly, no matter how much magic he had absorbed.

Once he was dead, the hard part would come: explaining herself to Celestia.


Prereading thanks; Meta Four, Blank!, Yami Vizzini, and especially Craine

Russian translation by Doof
Chinese Translation by Dreams Set Free

Comments contain spoilers.

Teen
Complete
Violence
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Death
Alternate Universe
Sad
Drama
 
PDNPP

6277 words: Estimated 31 minutes to read

7 Chapters:

  1. 1. Inexcusable 2015-04-21 08:11:55 UTC
    624
  2. 2. Incongruous 2015-04-21 08:11:57 UTC
    1549
  3. 3. Irrational 2015-04-21 08:11:59 UTC
    882
  4. 4. Iniquity 2015-04-21 08:12:01 UTC
    968
  5. 5. Implications 2015-04-21 08:12:03 UTC
    1216
  6. 6. Intent 2015-04-21 08:12:05 UTC
    452
  7. 7. Insincerity 2015-04-21 08:12:07 UTC
    586