Cutiemark Challengers

by Angel Halo

Rating: everyone
Tags: Slice of Life, Babs Seed, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Romance, Original Character, Comedy, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Rarity, Dinky Hooves
Length: 925

the cutiemark crusaders all have some relatives coming for a visit and all of them are blank flanks but instead of joining them they challenge them at their own game

all of the cmc have cousins coming to visit and they all have 1 thing in common they are all blank flanks but instead of joining them they decide to challenge them to see who get their cutiemarks faster

Published 2014-09-18 09:40:07 UTC
Last updated 2014-09-18 09:40:07 UTC

chapter 1 "Rise of The Challengers"

It was a cool afternoon in pony Ville meanwhile in the CMC clubhouse there were only sounds of arguing. "What about rock climbing cutie marks?"asked Scootaloo frustrated

"We already tried that Stupid!!"Apple bloom yelled at Scootaloo angrily.

"How about confectionary cutie marks?"Said Sweetie belle

"TRIED IT!!"Scootaloo and Apple bloom both yelled at Sweetie belle.

"Hey Scoots guess what my little cousins are coming over and I was hoping you three could hang out for a while; while I help AJ out with some work; later today is when they're coming to town. Oh and yeah, they're both blank flanks like you guys". Rainbow said coolly "There names are Icy Cloud and Golden Rod" Rainbow said.

" Cool Rainbow Dash I'm soo excited to meet them." Scootaloo said excitedly.

"Apple bloom don't forget Babs seed is coming over with her younger brother Orange Sorbet also Babs got her cutie mark but Orange doesn't have his yet so he can even join yer little club, sis." Applejack said.

"Neat" Apple bloom said happily.

"Three new club members wow! " said Scootaloo.

"Sweetie belle Oh Sweetie belle?!"Rarity yelled looking for her sister.

"Yeah! up Here Sis!!" Sweetie called out for her sister.

"Oh Sweetie I simply forgot to tell you that our cousin Hidden Gem is coming over for the week and you to she get along famously because you both don't have your cutie marks." Rarity said delightedly;

"Cool now that's four new members maybe we could get our cutie marks in helping ponies!" Sweetie belle said Ecstatically.

[The Next day at the clubhouse]

"I got my cutie mark when a bully was picking on a little kid and I stood up to him."Babs said with a grin.

"Sweet, Babs; and by the way Orange, do you wanna join the cutiemark crusaders?"Applebloom asked the pale orange earth pony colt with a bright orange and pale red hair (similar to Pokey Peirce's style).

"I'll think about it" said Sorbet thoughtfully.

"THINK ABOUT IT!?!?!" Applebloom said shocked. "Well maybe you need to meet the whole team before you really decide" said Applebloom more calmly.

"WE'RE HERE!!!!!" Yelled Sweetiebelle coming up the ladder with an unknown unicorn with a pale pink coat and a blonde and light blue streaked mane(in a style similar to Rarity's). Orange Sorbet's jaw dropped at the sight of her and when she looked up and saw him a light blush creased her face and she shyly smiled at him.

"Hi" Gem said shyly in her Trottish accent

"Hi" Sorbet said the same way back.

"Hey guys " Scootaloo said fluttering slightly off the ground

"Hii!!" the twins said in sync. The white Pegasus filly with golden hair in a flat flowing style doing loop de loops in the sky was Golden Rod and the more calm looking Pegasus filly with spiky down pointing cyan and white hair similar to Cloud Kicker's (or Flitter's) floating on a cloud was near her twin sister was Icy Cloud. Icy flew off the cloud into the clubhouse

"Hi I'm Icy Cloud" said the calm filly

"And I'm Golden Rod " said the more excited filly.

"Nice to meetcha " Applebloom said happily welcoming them
"Now that everyone's here let's do some introductions. We are the cutie mark crusaders Applebloom is my name this is Scootaloo(She pointed at the orange Pegasus) Sweetie Belle(she pointed at the white unicorn) and this is Babs Seed our former member whom already has her cutiemark but now we welcome you to join us." Apple bloom said business like.

"But what if we don't wanna join you?" Golden Rod said with a grin.

"What do you mean?" Sweetie Belle asked confusedly.

"Well I'm assuming what she means to say darlings is that maybe we can try things on our own first?" Said Gem

"Yeah and since you all don't have your cutiemarks still that must mean you've all failed at it, a lot." Said Orange Sorbet

"And maybe we could even start our own club." Said Icy lightening up.

"Is that a challenge?!?!" Said Scootaloo fluttering angrily.

"Yeah and we'll even call ourselves the Cutiemark Challengers!!" Said Golden Rod with a sly grin. "Whoever gets all their teams members their cutiemarks first wins and gets bragging rights!! And whoever loses has to give the winning team 10 bits and has to quit trying with their team, but they can try by themselves if they want to." Said Golden Rod Triumphantly

"It's a deal!!! yelled Scoots even more Angrily.

"Oh boy" said Applebloom and Sweetiebelle tiredly.

"I'll even see if we can meet up at Rarity's boutique while you guys can still meet in your clubhouse." said Gem nicely

"OH IT'S ON!!!" Sweetie said Furiously.

"Well this turned bad quickly" Applebloom said.

"Yeah" said Sorbet confusedly.

"And I will give my assistance to whoever needs it" Rarity said reassuringly.

"I'll help too if ya wanna try yer hoof at farming" Applejack said positively. "

In fact we'll try that first since YOUR going with Rarity" Sweetiebelle said possessively.

"We could try sugarcube corner since they need more help since Pinkie went traveling with Cheese Sandwich for a few months. But apples are always nice." Applebloom said unsurely.

"Wait a minute don't we out number you guys" said Icy;

"You're right, we need another Crusader on our side!" said Scootaloo.

"But who?" asked Sweetiebelle thoughtfully.

Author's Note

MY First STORY I'm officially awesome it was going to be a Cheese Pie but CMC vs. CMC (Clever huh?)