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Revelations BOOK 1: A Night To Remember - Pipsqueak

by VGI
Pipsqueak spends time with his favorite princess in a high-society event dedicated to Equestria's gryphon friends.

Pipsqueak and his Mum attend a high-society event hosted by Equestria and dedicated to the kingdom's gryphon friends. Other pony nations, like Maretonia, are also invited.

Foreign delegates and dignitaries. Nobles and royalty. Ponies from outside the kingdom. It will definitely be a fancy event.

But Pipsqueak and his Mum are just common folk...it just so happens that Pipsqueak knows the Princess of the Night.

A special night, with his favorite princess...what could possibly go wrong?


UPDATE: (Dec.17,2014) This is my first fic. Other fics are being written. Some are actually done (BOOK 2, Lu-). But I can't publish until I learn as much as I can from this first fic. I appreciate short, sweet comments. Sometimes they are feedback enough. But, if you can, please give details about the things you liked and disliked. I've had some give such comments, and I very much appreciate them. Such comments can give me lessons and ideas that I can apply to unpublished fics and fics in progress.

Just wanting to improve, so that I could write stories you guys would enjoy.

Teen
Complete
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
 
PTPCO

20851 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read