my little divergent

My mother stood behind me cutting my mane and tail. I looked in the mirror. I can`t look in the mirror for the Abnegation rules. I saw my reflection. I had big blue eyes, and my skin was light gray, almost a purple. My mother closed the mirror up. I walked out the door, I saw my brother, Caleb. We walked out the door, with our gray backpacks. We walked onto the train.

We got to school, and walked in. I looked out the side of the glass building, seeing the Dauntless jump off a train. They walked past a statue with Celestia, one of them jumped on it. He climbed to the top ,then  jumped to a nearby roof. I squinted, seeing that the Pegasus who jumped of that statue was a she. Her mane was blue, and her body was as white as snow. Nopony calls Celestia any Luna princess.

Time came for the faction test, and it was my turn. I walked into the room, seeing that a pony with a purple mane was putting something in a shot tube. I saw that there was a hawk tattoo on her neck.

"I`m Tori" she said.

She gave me a shot and I had a vision.

"Choose!" she said.

There was a bow and arrow and cheese. I didn't choose. I was in the same room. A dog came up to me and growled. I backed up. It growled louder. I pretended to get hurt and fell too the ground. The dog came up to me and licked me near my muzzle. I woke up

"Tris, your divergent." Tori said sternly.