fallen kingdom

by manjohn

Rating: everyone
Tags: Adventure, Alternate Universe
Length: 2683

this is my first short story and i want to get advice from anypony who is suportive

when cantorlot has fallen the fate lies in the whooves of one pony

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-10-01 12:44:10 UTC

chapter 3 the forgoten solder

as she looked at the grey alacorn she took a great bit of time looking at his face and mark on his rear when she saw the yellow, black, and white hair and the picture of a solar eclipse happening on his rear. as soon as she noticed who he was she said raising her voice "get him to the medical tent immediately!" the soldiers jumped at first startled but then took the colt to the medical tent. twilight shocked aske  " who was he, do you know him" celestia replied in a tired tone " he was the reason the changelings didn't take over canterlot sooner" "long over 20 years ago we got into a war between the changelings. it seemed like the end of days  we were in canterlot the final battle we were losing badly squadrons were being wiped out left and right i could only stand there. i thought all was lost until then i saw a beam of light go across the battlefield then a large explosion erupted from where it was shot. then i saw a fast figure with a large wingspan fly by the castle window. it went down destroying the changelings army squadron by squadron. the changelings went into a retreat. after the battle i went looking for this mysterious solder. after looking and searching the all of canterlot i found him. but he did not wear the armor that soldiers were regulated to wear. it was silver with the mark of an eclipse on the sides. i called out to him and asked his name, he stopped for a moment and turned around i could see some of his hair but his face was black he looked at me and said his name was eclips. just then his figure froze and got all blocky, then he teleported away with the blocks of his person going into the sky. that then was the last i heard from him. then canterlot was attacked again and i expected for him to come back, but sadly he did not we were over run i told the guards to fall back to the woods with all the weapons armor rations and people they could find. we evacuated canterlot and thus far you know the rest.

chapter 6 training

after camp was made eclipse took celestia to the side and he said " shoot it" "what?" she said confused "shoot it just shoot the tree" he said with enthusiasm "okay" celestia said in a very hesitant matter. she stood there for a moment then started grunting then the only thing to come out of her horn was a tiny magic ball that was no bigger than a golf ball.eclips tried to hold in his laughter then he said " you really need some work done. "what is that supposed to mean" she said offended "one thing princes i'm not going to treat you like your usual citizens, i'm going to treat you like a person i'm going to teach you and there will be no leniency." "plus your magic ability now sucks" he said bluntly. as the days go by everyone got closer, everyone got to be closer friends. after 3 months celestia finally got the stance and the magic down and she could use it well. "YOU DID IT!" eclips said excited "WHAT!?" celestia said "I DID!" "yes now we can go and take back canterlot." eclip had a look of sadness in his face when celestia said that. "i don't believe that i will be able to see you after we fight the queen." eclips said while looking down at the floor. "what do you mean by that?" she said concerned. "i wasn't going to tell you this but i was going to die if i didn't." "i was going to cast a reconstitution spell to reset equestria back to what it was after the changelings are gone.if i use it, it would take up an enormous amount of magical energy and i would probably die after use. so i was going t wait to tell you but i could not wait.there is nothing you can say that would make me change my mind." eclips said about to cry. " but you can't because... because I LOVE YOU!" celestia said breaking into tears running up and hugging eclipse. (eclipse is a little bit taller than celestia sorry for not mentioning earlier) eclipse stood there frozen unable to move he stood there with celestia crying on his shoulder, his mouth was wide open wondering what he should do

chapter 7 the lie

" i wont do it." he said with the blankest face anyone had ever seen. " what?!" she said surprised " i won't do it then." he said inside he knowing he was lying to her. celestia stepped back and wiped away her tears then walked back to camp to tell the others. they then came up with a plan, eclipse and celestia would fight the queen then once they finished they would get rid of the rest of the changelings in the castle. but them not knowing but eclipse was going to use the reconstitution spell to rest equestria back to its former glory. eclipse thought that he could not let celestia be alone but he also thought that she needed her people and that the world needs to be the way it was again.then they started to pack up camp and they went towards canterlot

chapter 1 found

chapter 1 found

in the fallen runes of canterlot lies a lone pony who is trapped under a large beam from a fallen house next to him. as his eyes open he grunts in pain an tries to remove the pillar from his body be he has no strength left in his body. he looks at his surroundings and then looks at his leg, it`s bent in the opposite direction it is supost to be in. " well that is defiantly broken." he said with very little breath. he still struggles to get out from under the beam but it is still no use about to pass out from the pain he looks in the distance and sees two figures approaching him. he squints to try to see what they are "changelings!" he said with fear in his voice. as they approach closer and closer he struggles with a new found strength. the changelings are right over him and he screams at them to go away. then without any warning the changelings go flying into the sky with no warning. the blast was defining and it momentarily blinded the light grey pony under the beam. then a squadron of celestial solders come and approach the pony. the squadron consisted of two unicorns and 3 pegisi. they went to the light grey ponys aid, as the three pegisi took the beam off of him the unicorns picked him up using magic. one of the unicorns a teal colt wearing standard gold armor with the celestial symbol on both sides of his rear. as they all looked at the unconches pony they all gasped. a orange pegusis removed his helmet and spoke in surprise "an alocorn!"  the other unicorn a, sky blue pony said in haste "we have to get him to the princes at base camp now" they all looked at each other and nodded.

chapter 2 salvation

as they ran to base camp they encountered many changeling patrol groups and such. even the mutated rejects have been sent out into the forest. they are a failed project from the changeling queen, Chrysalis. they are now just like zombies except the want to eat flesh the lust to kill. the creatures have a large blood lust way beyond any normal animal or person. the camp had to be deep in the forest so that no one would find it, the trip alone from canterlot to the camp took four days alone. the only people in the amp were soldiers important figures and some people here and there. the camp was moderately large with many shakes as houses large enough to fit a family of 4 to 5. around the camp is a large wooden wall fashioned of sharpened wooden pillars and in the center of the village was a large two story building shaped as a small castle. the squadron had returned with the light grey alacorn he had some minor bandages on but not enough to heal him fully. they came in from a small gate south of the village. there was a small gravel path to the center of the camp. as they walked down the path they got an assortment of looks some of wonder ,some of sorrow ,but some people just looked away. when they got to the center building the security there was very strict the soldiers had to go through many rigorous tests to see if they were changelings or not. once they were cleared they went through the armory, a room full of soldiers, armor , beds, and weaponry that was just the whole first floor. on the far edge of the shack was a staircase leading up to the second floor. as the soldiers walked up the the stairs they intercepted a meeting between princes celestia and a purple pony her name was twilight sparkle. as soon the soldiers got all the way up to the top the princess stopped in mid sentence.

chapter 4 rejection

celestia gave a head notion to twilight to follow her to the medical tent. as they walked down twilight was deep in thought of the story that celestia told her. as they got to the medical tent they looked for the soldiers she sent to get him treated. when she walked in the soldiers waved to her and shouted "he's awake and all right." as she walked over to the table the grey pony sat up on the table and looked at celestia in anger. "i thought my father taught you to fight not just to sit on the side lines" he said from a gradual whisper to a yell. celestias face could not explain the different emotions she was feeling right now." what do you mean" she said sternly with a face  showing that she was insulted. " the only reason your people are like this is because of you, and now all of equestria is ruled by the changelings. please will you help us thats all i ask!" "NO!" he said with a stern voice. twilight interrupted confused "excuse me but did you say your father taught her?" "i see so you were paying attention thank you,yes i am the son of eclipse i also have his name as well. my father died trying to save equestria again after celestia did not learn to fight or her people. he went for the queen herself but he was stopped when the people were evacuating and she got him first. then i saw him dead a couple of days ago while trying to clear out the city but a beam from the house i was next to collapsed on me and i got knocked out. then a few days later i awoke and was found by your soldiers and was brought here and that's, all i know and you know." twilight said with a beging tone in  her voice "but why wont you help us". "because it was celestias job she was supost to help protect her people but she did not learn that she cant religh on other people to do there job for them, and you see his is what happens when you religh to much on people. but i can help but do this i will teach you to fight like i can." "WHAT!?" every one said in suprise. "what do you mean teach?" celestia said confused. "if you let me i will show you how to unlock your full power and use it to your advantage." eclips said.

chapter 5 under attack

celestia nodded her head in agreement and they were about to leave the tent but then a crackling sound, and a loud snapping noise came out of nowhere.then a wooden pillar fell on the medical tent and some other houses around the area. a soldier ran into the last half of the tent " princes are you alright" " i'm fine " she away waving the dust away from her face. " we have to leave now !" said eclips "soon the village will be over run  by those creatures" "wait i need to get my friends!" said twilight " fine everyone 10 minutes and get back here find all the supplies rations you can carry." as they all left eclips grabbed the princess "we have to find a way out of here." ecrips lead the princes to a part of the wall. he asked her to try to use her magic power to cut a hole in the wall. as she struggled she got aggravated "wait, why am i doing this i can't do this." she said in an aggravated voice. "i just wanted to see what you can do so far." then eclips shot a quick beam of light out of his horn and he made a hole in 3 seconds. then they went back to meet twilight and her friends "follow me." eclips said in a hurry. they followed him to the hole he made earlier as he waved them through he noticed some changeling soldiers heading words them. when they all were out eclips then went out eclips went out of the hole. they ran for hours till they thought they were safe. when they got to a safe place two of twilights friends had collapsed from exhaustion eclipse was carrying one of her friends, she was a yellow mair named fluttershy. as another one of her friends was carrying a white mare named rarity. once they stopped and started to set up camp they started to get acquainted and learned eachothers names.

chapter 8 the battle

they got to the destroyed ruins of canterlot and looked for any sign of any one knowing they were there. Eclipse stuck his hoof out" only me and the princess are going she needs to learn to fight for her people," eclipse said in a stern voice.  Celestia noded in agreement. The two alicorns opened their wings and took off. As they were over the ruins eclipse looked for the queen. Just then he spoted her they flew down to where she was. As they settled down she laughed at them as thousands of chanelings sourounded the three just as eclipse put a magic dome over the three. " no help just you and Celestia," the queen laughed and pointed her horn at celestia but then she pointed it at eclipse and shot a magical blast. He jumped over it and flew twords the queen and shot a powerful magical blast at her. She took the hit and went down. He turned around and looked at celestial, "sorry I couldn't do it I just couldn't." He walked up to her and gave her a hug. Just then he shoved her back as she fell to the ground she saw that  chrysalis had impaled hi with her horn he stood there and twisted very fast snaping her horn from her head with the horn poisining him he grabed the queen and a bright bright glow came from it. Then waves of bright magical light went all over equestria, then a large exploshen of light happened, after it went away all the buildings were back to there former glory and all the changlings had turned back into ponys. As celestia stood there with eclipse in her whoves twilight and her friends came running to her. Celestiia sat there wispering to herself "you lied to me, why did you lie to me." Twilight saw eclipses body and rabed it from celestia,"come on" twilight said nudging celestia "we have to get him to the hospital"

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