A detective story in Los Pegasus ( a story inspired by L.A Noire)

by TheSouthernBrony

Rating: teen
Tags: Adventure, Dark, Alternate Universe, Romance
Length: 261

in the year 946 A.B.N.M, after a famous fashion star is murdered, a detective is sent to solve the case. All in all, just another day in the L.P.P.D, right?

Justice Wing is one of the most trusted detectives in a crime-ridden Los Pegasus. The year is 946 A.B.N.M, a time of soft jazz music and a post war Equestria. When a famous fashion star is murdered, Justice is sent to solve the case, but it proves to be much more than what he expected.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-09-28 05:23:57 UTC

The murder

It was a dark and stormy night in mid-April, and fashion star Rarity Belle was at her home in Los Pegasus.

At the age of 27, Rarity was very popular in the fashion world, as her designs were loved by many ponies for their elegance and fashionably.

Rarity was also called by some as the most beautiful mare in all of Equestria, which she didn't deny nor affirm.

As she was sitting on her favorite couch, listening to music, she heard a knocking on her door.

" hello, who is it", she asked.

Suddenly, the door flew opened and Rarity screamed, trying to escape the dark and opposing attacker, knocking over many expensive objects in her living arm in her frantic attempt to escape him.

The mysterious pony reached her and kicked her hard in her abdomen.

Crying out in pain, Rarity doubled over and rolled over onto her back.

" p-please, don't kill me, PLEASE", Rarity cried, her voice breaking,

The attacker proceeded to show her no mercy.

After raping her and causing wounds all over her face, Rarity cried out, " please, just stop! Why are you doing this"?!

The attacker pulled out his gun, a semi-auto pistol and, saying nothing, shot Rarity four times, with the fourth shot hitting her head, killing her.

The killer than walked out of the apartment and strutted to his carriage, where a rider, a earth pony stallion, was waiting for him.

The murderer then rode off into the night, disappearing into the shadows like a ghost from Gryphon mythology.