Silent Equestria

by EtherRD

Rating: teen
Tags: Adventure, Dark
Length: 441

When two colts and three fillies enter an abandoned mining town you know something bad is going too happen

When thunderstruck, ember, crackles, pop and blaze have a sleepover it may just be their last night together, after an intense game of truth or dare somebody decides to force everybody to visit the abandoned mining town just round the corner, but once the silence falls it will never rise again…

Please leave constructive critisism about how I can improve, I've never really write a story like this before

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-10-02 20:57:58 UTC

An innocent invite

Thunderstruck was bored, as he normally was, for once though his UBox just didn't entertain him, instead he was on his MePod chatting to his friend ember, Ember was without a doubt his best friend ever they'd been through a lot together. Ember, feeling sorry for his friend invited him around to his house for a sleepover with a few of his friends, "yes" thunder muttered to himself in delight looking forward to meeting his best friend, it'd been almost three weeks since the end of school and he was bored to death, this was exactly what he needed.

Thunder trotted up to his friends house with a big smile on his face, he knocked his hood on the door and when it opened he was expecting his fried to greet him but instead was a filly, a bit taller than he was with a splash of freckles across her face, she looked at the confused colt with wide brown eyes, "so your ember's friend" she asked leaning on the door frame "ummm...uhhh" Thunder struggled to answer, he was not used to talking to girls being a very house-bound person and going to an all boys school he didn't really come into contact with many girls. "Hey thunder" a familiar voice called from up the stairs, "be down in a second" ember came rushing down the stairs with a wide grin on his face, " I see you've already met my couz Blaze" he said laughing at the confused expression on his friends face "does fire run in the family?" We're the only words he could manage, with that Blaze shrugged and steppd to the side and invited thunderstruck into the house, as he walked in he turned to hear footsteps coming from the street, and two fillies trotted up the path to the door, "hey blaze hey ember, not seen you in a while" they said in unison in a way that only twins could do, thunderstruck shivered at what he thought he be a bit creepy "damn twinstinct" he muttered to himself so nobody could hear him "so ember any other surprises in store?" With that Thunder marched up the stairs and parked his flank on the floor in embers bedroom. "So any other guests?" Thunder asked with a slightly angry look on his face. "Well download was supposed to be here right now but we've not heard from him, guess he can't make it" but ember wasn't so sure, itight have just been his imagination but he got the feeling this sleepover will be one they will remember for the rest of their lives.