After the after party

by Muffin-Man7

Rating: teen
Tags: Octavia, Comedy, Slice of Life, DJ P0N-3, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 1193

Vinyl comes home from a party not much happens but it's kind of cute. Oh and a fight with a door, that's a thing.

Do I need to write more, who even reads this.
Vinyl makes her way home from a party, talks a bit, has fight with a door and talks with Octavia for a bit.
There's a small amount of romance-ish stuff. NO SEX but some adult kind of stuff.
It's kind of funny, I guess.
If you do read this comment the word apple so I can laugh at how much of a nerd you are. JK it's cool if you read this but for real comment apple. It can be like a club of some kind.
For some real information this took me about an hour to do, I'm not a good writer and I'd love to get some HELPFUL criticism.

Published 2014-09-29 19:10:02 UTC
Last updated 2014-09-29 19:10:02 UTC

Home

As Vinyl got inside there was a fire raging in the fireplace, half a glass of wine and a violin on the table.

“I see some other pony was getting drunk to.” Vinyl giggled to Octavia.

“Nothing of the sort.” Octavia replied in her normally calm voice.

“I was working on a new piece and well wine can help with the creative flow but I am certainly not drunk.” Vinyls head turned to the violin.

“Well let’s hear it then.” Octavia looked at Vinyl.

“There would be no point in such an action.” Vinyls face dropped from its happy expression to a very confused face.

“Say what?”

“Uhh.” Octavia grunted.

“It’s pointless for me to play it because you would not remember by tomorrow, understand.”

“Well that’s all you needed to say, there’s no need for fancy words.” Vinyls face went back to her happy look.

“Now I think somepony should be getting to bed.” Octavia made a gesture towards the bedroom.

“I like your thinking.” Vinyl said with a smirk on her face.

“Uhh.” Octavia grunted again.

“Not like that you horny fool.

“That’s racist!” Vinyl accused, pointing a hoof at Octavia.

“What are you talking about?” Octavia questioned.

“You won't fuck me because I've got a horn.” Vinyl said tapping her horn. Octavia looked at Vinyl.

“Oh sweet Celestia, you are too drunk to be dealing with in any kind of serious manner.” Most of the happy tone leaving her voice.

“well maybe you should lighten up, you know not everything has to be serious.” Vinyl said with a slight chuckle.

“It is just part of the way I am.” Octavia replied.

“And besides you normally say that it is cute.”

“Well it is, but you don’t have to be like it all the time.” Vinyl said sounding a little annoyed.

“Now come on, no more arguing it’s time for bed.” Octavia put her hoof out for Vinyl to hold.

“Fine.” Grabbing Octavias hoof Vinyl got up.

The bedroom

As the two ponys made it made it up stairs Octavia helped Vinyl to her bedroom. As they got into Vinyls room she fell down on her bed.

“So are you going to be ok or do you want me to get you something.” Octavia asked with a sweet looking smile.

“Uhh just a sec there Tavi.” Vinyl squirmed to a more comfortable position as a slight glow could be seen from her horn. With that the door closed, the lighting dropped to a more seductive level and music started playing.

“Well I would like it if you got that nice butt over here.” Vinyl said with a smile as her horn lost its glow. Octavias smile remained as she sat on the edge of the bed.

“Vinyl you are drunk.”

“No shit.” Vinyl replied before Octavia could continue.

“Because of this there will be nothing of the sort.” Octavia said, getting up and starting to walk out.

“But Tavi I… I love you.” Vinyl said with a tear forming in her eye.

“I know, I know I love you to.” Octavia made her way back to the bed. Sitting next to Vinyl, Octavia looked into her eyes.

“But right now you are drunk so it is meaningless.” Octavia continued her smile. She then kissed Vinyl, the kiss lasting a couple of seconds. Getting up she said.

“Maybe tomorrow, we can go on a nice data and well you know the rest.” Vinyls face broke into a big smile.

“That sounds awesome.” Vinyl said laying down getting ready to sleep. At the door Octavia said.

“Goodnight Vinyl.”

“Night Tavi, I love you.” she said rolling over.

“I love you to.” Octavia replied as she close the door.

“Oh Celestia, her breath tasted like somepony was sick in her mouth.” Octavia stated quietly to herself making her way to the bathroom.

The start

Dubstep burst from the newly opened doors as a white unicorn with a stumble in her step came out. As she walked out she could still feel the bass from the music making her want to dance more. “That was amazing!” she stated to no pony in particular.

“I've got to…” she paused for a moment, in thought and in movement as she was unable to think and keep walking.

“Not DJ or whatever.” Finishing her thought she was able to get back on track.

“Now which way was home.” she stated allowed.

“Where’s Tavi when you need her, she always knows the way home.” Mentioning the earth ponys name changed Vinyls tone of voice from a drunken stammer to a pathetic attempt at a higher class voice. She always tried her best to impersonate Octavias voice, especially when drunk.

The door

After some time, a lot of stumbling and some wrong doors Vinyl finally made it home, however there was a new obstacle in her way. The door. Vinyl couldn't work out how it worked, she pushed, she pulled but nothing the door would not budge. So she sat in front of the door, staring at it. She kept her eyes locked on the door. After about a minute of this she jumped to her feet and shouted.

“OPEN!” Nothing happened. She sat back down looking defeated.

“Oh Celestia, what do I do now.” She started to sound upset.

“Why wont you listen to me?” she questioned the door. Then in a spark of genius Vinyl remembered something very important about doors.

“A key!” she said feeling very pleased with herself for working it out. After a quick self pat down she realized that she had no key.

“Well shit, what now.” she sat back down feeling like she had lost this battle. But then in a second spark of genius she had an idea.

“Tavi!” she remembered.

“I have a roommate, she can let me in.” Vinyl face hoofed.

“Stupid Vinyl.” She proceeded to smack on the door calling out for Octavia.
Soon after there was a slight click sound of the door unlocking, the handle twisted and the door pulled back. A less than impressed looking earth pony on the other side. Before Vinyl could say anything Octavia started.

“And what time do you call this?” Vinyl could instantly see the annoyance in her friends voice. Vinyl struggled to come up with an answer and proceed to latch on to Octavia repeating the word sorry.

“I didn't want to wake you up but I got home and didn't have a key and I don’t know where it is and I think I lost it and…” Vinyl stopped because she was running out of breath but mainly because Octavia raised a hoof with a key in it.

“Is this the key you are referring to, I saw it on the table as I was getting ready for bed and decided to stay up and wait for you.” a small smile broke on Octavias face.

“You stayed up for me?” an even bigger smile on Vinyls face.

“Of course did you truly think I would let you get stuck outside for the night, now come on get in here you must be positively freezing.