Author's Note

In this section there is a timeline that roughly outlines the events of the story, even going past the stories end, a few deleted scenes, and explaining some things that I changed in the story itself. EDIT 5/16/2017- After three years, and becoming more proficient in writing stories, I decided that the timeline is utterly useless as it implies a sequel but offers nothing else of value. So, I removed it.

Deleted/Changed Scenes (Spoilers, obviously)

Pinkie Pie Special Morning Party
I felt a sucking feeling on my penis when I woke up, only to see Pinkie. “Oh…come on…Oh sweet Celestia what in the hay are you doing?! I just woke up for crying out loud!” I didn’t bother to cover myself, but still felt a little violated that Pinkie decided to do this while I was asleep. “Eck…Oh…My…CELESTIA!” I said when I noticed the room. It was covered in cum. “How…How many times?” I inquired of Pinkie. She whispered ten times, and I suddenly felt very queasy.

Violence is Friendship
A hoof to the face, and as I staggered in pain I saw him abduct Sweetie Belle and Spike. “No!” I yelled, cantering after them. I deftly dodged obstructions and pony’s, and dove to him. I just about had him-

When three burly ponies stopped my advance. I slammed against another hoof, feeling blood coming out of my nose. I saw the four gallop off into the distance, and there was nothing I could do. I felt my horn spark as my anger grew. I fired off a bolt at the closest one and it blew his leg clean off.

Changed Scenes

Originally, in chapter eleven, the mural showed the Mane Six defeating Nightmare Moon.

Originally, in the re-written script for chapter ten, Discord was to have had sex with Celestia. Considering the fact that Earth has sex with her the next day, I decided to omit it.

In the original script for Chapter Ten, Discord was to have turned Earth into a Mare and then have sex with “her”, as can be seen implied above.

Earth was to have referenced the fact MLP was a show during the Everfree Forest chapter, to which Fluttershy remembers for the rest of the story. I found it hard on how to implement the fact Fluttershy now knew the truth about all the ponies’ life, so I omitted it.

Twilight’s chapter was originally to have been more heavily influenced by the game’s storyline, but was changed slightly to have a more original storyline. Spike wanting to escape Twilight was pulled from the game, as well as working at the Apple Family’s barn.

Originally, a terrorist group was to have caused planet Earth’s destruction

The three “Horror” chapters were to have been their own, special chapters, but I decided to tie them all up together to bring the story to its true conclusion.

Originally, Spike had sex with Sweetie Belle, but due to the obvious problem of underage material, the scene was changed. Spike used the map as a condom, which was changed to instead Earth burning it foolishly in the campfire.