Advanced magic academy

by SosukeRyou

Rating: teen
Tags: Romance, Shining Armor, Twilight Sparkle, Princess Celestia, Original Character, Trixie, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Comedy
Length: 3516

2nd person story starring "you" and Twilight Sparkle.

so you've just been accepted at the Advanced magic academy, on your first day you meet Twilight Sparkle and immediately hit it off, you become closer as the story continues, but will her growing jealousy of your magic power and talent prove the end for your growing bond? well let's read and find out!

rated teen because of more adult themes later in.

**IMPORTANT NOTE** this will not contain clop clop! we will see some "more adult action" but no sex.

Published 2012-04-23 02:54:02 UTC
Last updated 2012-06-17 02:24:02 UTC

The meeting

Summer has just started in Equestria, you walk down the streets of Canterlot, like you would any other day, but this day is different, you feel exited about your first day at the advanced magic academy.

“I wonder how it will be, being taught by princess Celestia herself, I heard those tier 5 classes are really hard, I hope I'm up for it” you think to yourself.

“what will she be like? Will she be a strict teacher? And what about the rest of my class? I hope I get along with them, maybe even find my special somepony?” you think to yourself with a smirk on your face

you where so lost in your excitement and thoughts that you didn't pay any attention to what happened while you where walking, barely missing some carts that almost hit you, even though the ponies who pulled the carts yelled at you, you walked along as if nothing happened, suddenly you feel a bump.

“ouch” you heard a female voice say.

You fall down to the street

“are you okay?” she asked with a concerned look in her eyes.

“yeah I'm good, sorry I wasn't paying much attention” you say

“oh that's ok she says, I was so lost in this book that I couldn’t see where I was going”

you glance at the book.

“advanced teleportation and shield spells, that's a tier 4 spell book”

“you must be a student at the advanced magic academy” you say with excitement.

“That's right, I'm Twilight Sparkle, top student of class 11-4.” she says bashfully.

“come to think if it I didn't catch your name yet”

“oh sorry about that” you introduce yourself.

“so, are you a student at the academy too?” she asks

“yup, second year transfer student” you say bashfully.

“so you're a second year too? That's great which classes do you take?

“Astronomy, early equestrian history and tier 5 magic class”

“well looks like we have the same interests” she says smiling

“wait TIER 5? isn't that like the super advanced stuff that's taught by princess Celestia herself?”

“well yeah...” you say with a blush.

“I kinda have a special talent for magic” you say

“well still, I thought I was talented with magic, but I can't even comprehend the tier 5 stuff” she says kinda disappointed.

“well it's easier then it looks, if you want I could like, help you, sometime, if you'd like” you say blushing.

Her face was covered by a huge smile.

“Really? You'd do that? Oh thank you thank you thank you thank you” she says bouncing up and down”

“uh oh” she says

“we only have 3 minutes left”

“and first period is magic class”

“then we'd better run” you say

“I have a better idea”

suddenly you are completely surrounded by a purple aura, one moment you see the clock tower in central Canterlot, and the next you are standing in front of the academy

“phew thank goodness it worked” she says relieved

“what do you mean?”

“well I've kinda, never really done this before” she says with a blush

for a moment you don't know what to say, until the bell rings.

“see you next period” she yells while running off to class.
"yeah... see you later"

time slowly passes as you sit in class half listening to Celestia's lecture over safety procedures.
"you must be very careful, magic is a dangerous thing, if not used properly it could destroy you, so make sure you always practice a spell in a secure location AND with supervision until you graduate"

“alright then class let's practice basic defense shield spells” she says
The class is filled with idle chit chat after she divided the class into groups.

You are pared with a colt named Anton Ponykov, he is an exchange student from Staliongrad.

“geez, she may have 1000 years time to learn magic but we sure don't, I mean, seriously, we weren't selected for tier 5 magic because we would make a nice class picture you know” you say while staring out the window

“Hahahaha well maybe, but she has a point, magic can be a dangerous thing, when it goes out of control it could easily destroy Canterlot” Anton says.

1 hour later Celestia dismisses the class.

You walk down the hallway, thinking about what Anton said.
“maybe it's not such a good idea to teach Twilight the advanced stuff” you think to yourself

“Nah she'll be fine, she nailed a teleportation spell on the very first try”

“second period, I get to see Twilight again” you think, feeling refreshed at the thought.

The bell already rang, you run to the astronomy tower, bursting in just in time.

“how nice of you to join us” the teacher says with clear sarcasm in his voice

“why don't you take a seat right.... there, next to Twilight” he said pointing his hoof to the vacant spot next to Twilight.

“so we meet again” you say as you take your seat.

she laughs quietly at your comment.

You grab your saddle bags and rustle through them and then drop them with a shocked look on your face.

“don't tell me you forgot your book” Twilight says

you smile wryly, “fine then I won't tell you”

she rolls her eyes, comes closer to you and opens her book.

“you can borrow mine, but tomorrow you bring your own” she says with a stern voice.

“thanks”

about 20 minutes into the lecture Twilight passes you a note that says, “so where you serious when you said you'd help me with tier 5 spells?”

you take the note and scribble something underneath her question.

“of course I will, I never break a promise, but I must warn you, tier 5 magic is dangerous stuff, if it goes haywire it could destroy the entire city”

“Then meet me in front of the academy girls dorm at 8 tonight” she whispers.

Later that evening.

“Well it's already 10 minutes past 8, she told me to wait here right?” you think to yourself.
"if she's not here in 5 minutes I'm going home."

Suddenly you feel someone grab your head from behind

“guess who?”
"...Twilight?" you say with slight sarcasm in your voice
"guess again" the mysterious voice says.

Chapter 2

chapter 2.

“Well gee let me guess, I was supposed to meet someone here, but who in Celestia's name could that be? Hmm”

“Alright alright, sarcasm doesn't become you”

“so, you ready to learn some of the GOOD stuff?”

“yeah on second thought, let's postpone learning that tier 5 stuff, let's just have some fun tonight”

“Miss Sparkle are you asking me out on a date?” you ask with a horrible British accent.

She immediately blushes

“A date? No no no not at all, I mean, just go out as friends, yeah friends”

“Right... friends” you say with a big smile on your face

“come on, I know this GREAT donuts shop not too far from here.”

as you walk on the streets of Canterlot, chit chatting away with each other, you notice that Twilight looks exceptionally good tonight, at first you feel a little embarrassed, but that embarrassed feeling quickly changes to happiness.

“So here we are, Joe's Donut shop.”

the two of you order some food and sit down at a table near the window.

“sooo... when do you wanna start with your lessons?” you ask her after a full minute of awkward silence

“yeah about that, I have a small request”

“what is it?”

“can a classmate of mine come too? She's a really good friend and I'm sure she won't disappoint.”

“I don't know... do you think she's up for tier 5 magic? It's all really advanced stuff, I have faith that you can do it but...”

“She can! She's really talented and almost ranked tier 5 in the entrance exams, the only reason she didn't get in was because... well... she kinda boasts a lot, and kinda screwed up this one spell and... well... it kinda turned the examiners to stone.”

you facehoof yourself

“fine, but if she screws up it's your responsibility”

“Alright young love, we're closing for the night”

“what but it's only... crap” you say as you look at the clock

“it's nearly midnight, we're gonna get in SO much trouble when we're caught past curfew” Twilight says in panic

“don't worry, we'll make it in time” but we gotta run NOW”

you quickly pay for the food you barely even touched and ran like crazy to the academy dorms

“phew, just in time, 1 minute to spare”

the two of you pant heavily as you enter your room.

“well I gotta go now too before the academy...”

before she could finish her sentence a loud bang could be heard.

“...auto lock systems activate”

“you know you could stay here... for the night... if you want” you say with a face as red as a tomato.

“are you asking me on a sleepover” Twilight asks with a horrible British accent.

“well you know, I'm just saying, it's past curfew, everything is already locked down, and if you're caught you could be expelled, and I wouldn’t want that on my conscience”

“point taken, sooo.... I'll take the couch then” she asks

“nope, you take the bed, I take the couch”

“no YOU take the bed and I take the couch” she counter argues.

“look you're the lady so you get the bed”

“and it's YOUR bed so YOU get to sleep in it”

“really I insist!” you say

suddenly Twilight blushes like crazy

“you know we... could BOTH get the bed....”

your jaw nearly hits the ground as she uttered the magic words.

“just kidding” she says

you look a little disappointed but you kinda expected it.

“not funny” you say

“by the way, tell me a little more about this Trixie”

“well she's been my friend ever since magic kindergarten, but... she always boasts so much whenever she learns something new, don't get me wrong, she has amazing talents and power it's just... she brags SO much and has so much self confidence that she sometimes screws up”

“and you think it's wise to let someone like that practice tier 5 magic? Magic that could wipe Canterlot from the face of Equestria?

“look I think she can do it, but it's your call”

“well... I guess if you think she can do it... then I'll believe your judgment”

“really? Oh thank you thank you thank you thank you” she says while bouncing up and down

“shhh quiet! Someone might hear us”

“whoops, sorry”

“by the way...” you say

“what?”

“you're gonna take the bed” you say quickly and jump on the couch

“what? But.. I..”

“but you what? Weren't joking about the sharing bed comment?” you say with a large grin on your face

“no I wasn't...” she mumbled

“what was that?”

“NOTHING! Fine I'll take the bed! Enjoy your uncomfortable night on the couch!”

but none of those words reach you as you're already asleep

the next day

“come on! Get up! We're gonna be late!”

“wha? Twilight? What are you doing here?.... oh that's right”

“just hurry it's almost time for 1st period”
“...right” you say as you quickly get up, brush your teeth and comb your mane”

not 3 minutes later you're ready

“ok let's go” you say

“no time to run anymore, I'll just teleport us there” twilight says

“what are you talking about we've got plenty of....”

your sentence was cut off by a blinding flash of light, and just a moment later you're standing in front of the academy gates”

“...time” you say

“thanks for always paying so much attention to what I say, I can already tell your lessons will go wonderful”

“I already said, sarcasm doesn't become you”

The bell rang and you ran to your respective classrooms, just before you part ways you yell “meet me at the astronomy tower after class, and bring that Prixie along”

“it's Trixie” Twilight yells back

“whatever”

chapter 3

Chapter 3.

as you sit in class, seconds seem to pass like ages in one of Celestia's boring safety speeches, even the ever vigilant Anton fell asleep some time ago.

“so...boring...can't...control... sleepiness...”

on that note you shake Anton awake.

“dude... she's been on on this for 2 hours, how much more do we have to take?”

“just 15 more minutes” you hear a stern female voice say from across the classroom.

Celestia gives you a stern look and everyone in the classroom laughed

“Very well then, how about you come up here and show the classroom a basic tier 5 defensive spell”

you facehoof yourself and walk up to the front of the classroom, you begin casting your spell and Celestia prepares to throw a fruit at you, but in your nearly asleep stage you can't focus very well and as soon as Celestia throws the fruit, it passed straight through your barrier and splashed in your face. The classroom bursts out in even harder laughter then before.

“and that is why you should always focus class” Celestia says with a smirk on her face

on that note you are saved by the bell.

As you walk out of the classroom and head to your locker, you hear some grunts coming from the small storage room, you walk up there and just as you are about to enter the door slams open, you spot a blue unicorn with a very light blue mane

“and don't you ever humiliate Trixie again!” she yells back at the significantly smaller mare lying there in tears.
Trixie turns to walk away and bumps into you, she falls to the ground with a light thud, not surprising since she's such a light mare.

“watch where you're going you... you... good looking, handsome...”

Trixie became lost for words for a few moments, gawking at you with lusty eyes before snapping back to reality

“Trixie is.. sorry you had to see that...”

“so you're Trixie...” you say with controlled anger in your voice

“correct! I am the great! And powerfull! TRIXIE!!”

“I know who you are, Twilight wants me to her and you tier 5 magic”

“oh horseapples” she says with a desperate voice

“could we not.. perhaps... forget what just happened here?” she asks

“well gee, just let me think for a moment here.... NO!”

“Sarcasm...”

“yeah yeah, unbecoming of me I know”

“not at all, Trixie likes sarcasm, how about I give you something to forget all about what you just saw” she says with lusty eyes and licking her lips

“not interested” you say.. though hesitantly

“Trixie can see in her eyes that you want her... who can blame you... I am after all the mare that covers this months playpony”

“so, slutty and a bully... yeah I'm not gonna teach you crap”
“my body may want you, but my mind is set on Sparkle”
“Sparkle? HA! That nerd doesn't know the first thing about pleasuring a true colt like yourself”
“ENOUGH!!” you yell, so loud that all the students in the hallway, both first years and seniors stop their idle conversation and stare at the two of you.

“Fine, you wanna play it like that? Let's play it like that” she says as she walks away in anger muttering something you can't quite hear.

Shortly after a teacher walks up
“what happened here? Why is there a first year mare lying there... crying? Oh dear sweetie, let's get you to the infirmary”

not 5 seconds after that Anton walks up and asks “what did you do?”

“Nothing! I... I did nothing...” you say with disappointment in your voice.

All the students stare at you with eyes that can't quite be described, yet it hurts. They all walk away shortly after

“mark my words Trixie... there will be a reckoning..”

Chapter 4

Chapter 4

you walk towards the rooftop with your lunch floating magically beside you.

“strange, usually there's a lot more crowd here, especially during lunch break”

you think to yourself

“not that I mind the peace and quiet though”

you sit on a bench and start eating your lunch, when suddenly you hear some bushes rustle behind you.

“Hello? Anyone there?” you ask

...no answer...

“must have been a bird or something” you think as you continue eating

*rustle rustle*

“there it is again”

“this stopped being funny from the first second, come out”

not soon after Trixie steps out of the bushes

“you!” you say with anger in your voice

“you have a lot of explaining to do!”

“uuhm... Trixie... would like to.. a..a...a..apologize”

“apologize? You?”

“is that a problem? She asks with her old snobby voice

“no.. no.. not at all, you just didn't look like the apologizing type”

“Trixie is really sorry about what happened in the hallway, I already explained to the teacher that you had nothing to do with it”

“well, that earned my forgiveness, but you should really apologize to the first year that's in the nurses office”

Trixie suddenly looks very surprised

“The nurses office? But Trixie didn't even touch her, she fell down herself as soon as I cornered her”

“yeah about that, why did you do that in the first place?”

then Trixie's surprised look turned into one of somepony who just stepped in poop or something

“she! She threw a slice of pizza from the garbage against Trixie's flank.. wich was stuck for Celestia knows how long! I tried everything to get that disgusting thing off, I showered 4 times, until finaly Twilight was able to pull it off!”

“also..uuhmm.. about those other things you said in the hallway...”

suddenly Trixie's blushes
“NO!! I didn't mean a thing I said! I was nervous alright! I'd never do such things!”

“uuhh.. I was talking about Twilight..”

“oh.. right... that....” she says as she blushes even harder
“I guess... I was a little.. jealous”
“Sparkle always gets attention from everypony, if we go shopping, colts check out Twilight but not Trixie”

“so you blant out things out of pure jealousy. well isn't that a good trait?” you say with that farmiliar sarcasm.

“again with the sarcasm”

“Anyway, I said what I wanted to say, I'll be taking my leave then” she said as she stormed down the staircase”

“she's a strange one alright” you think to yourself.

After that you make your way to Equestrian history class, and again, you're too late.

“Why are you late this time?” asks the teacher.

“Because the bell rang before I got here”

“CONGRATULATIONS!” the teacher yelled while clapping his hooves together
“you just won the award for the most clever answer I ever got, your price is 4 hours of detention”

The entire class bursts out in laughter.

“Now take your seat and be quiet unless asked a question”

you take your seat next to Twilight

“You know it's not a good idea to be a smart ass with professor Whooves” Twilight whispered

“O really? Gosh I had no idea” you whispered back.

“Do I need to make it 2 days of detention?” the teacher says.

“NO SIR!” you yell and sit up straight.
“You really are an idiot” Anton whispers from behind you

“Shut up”

The rest of the day went by pretty quickly, as soon as you heard that sweet sound of the last bell you rush towards the school gate

“JUST A MINUTE THERE!”

you turn around and saw professor Whooves standing there with a stern look on his face

“Forgot about detention have we?”

“uuhh...”

“No, he's late for practice” you heard coach Armor say

“Aren't you?” He said and winked

“R-right”

Professor Whooves let out a sigh of annoyance

“Very well... proceed...”

“Thanks coach Armor, if there's anything I can do to repay you, let me know”

“Well...” he started

“We DO need a new player for blast-ball, do you know how to play?”

“Well I get the basic principle yes.. The one team tosses balls at you and you have to destroy, or block them without having them touch the floor, walls, ceiling or your body right?”
“And halfway through the positions change, the attackers become defenders”

“Exactly” coach Armor says
“So... You in?” He asks

“Yes sir” you answer

“Great, now that was your tier level again?

“5 sir”

“LEVEL 5?” his jaw almost hits the ground
“ON YOUR AGE? That's it, you're going straight to the front line, we have a match against the Manehattan Bashers next month, you think you're up for it?”

“YES SIR!” you answer with much enthusiasm in your voice

“Great, practice starts tomorrow morning and we'll be busy the entire day, so I'll get you out of class”
“Sweet”

“Don't be so sure, the training is hard and rigorous, Don't expect me to go easy on you just because you're close friends with my sister”

“Your sister?” you ask
“Who's your sister?”

“Twilight” he answers

“YOU'RE TWILIGHTS BROTHER??”

“She didn't mention me during your little date and sleepover?” he asks

“Oh Celestia... He knows..”